I Send this part to someone who can beta read for me, but he still didn't
give it back. So I decided that I forget about that and update the story.
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The Return
Chapter 4
Naruto groaned as he started to wake up, and sat up. Then he senses something different. Looking around he notice he was in a living room, on couch to be exact, and blanket on him.
"Where are I?" grumbled Naruto as he wondered where he is. That until he remembered he was back in Konoha, ' oh that right I back home', Naruto thought. Home, He always wondered what is home is. At first, he thought that home is where you are born. But after that he thought that home where you are welcomed and have a place. But that was it either. After spending almost 10 years, he knew then what or where home is. It was where you willing to share life with and love enough to protect them.
'Hinata' Naruto thought of her and last night. Right after they got out from the Hyuuga house. The call it a day. Hinata not wanting for Naruto to go, asked him to stay with her. Naruto was about to decline when she used the look on him. He ended up sleeping in the living, while slept in her bedroom. Naruto thought of himself was a fool for not noticing Hinata. He now knew he was in love with her without knowing it.
' I am sorry for making you wait, Hinata. I promise you that I will be there for you and protect you from anything.' Thought Naruto as he glanced at the Hinata's door. He glanced at his watch and saw 4:50 in the morning.
"Well I better go to my usual mornings. The Tournament is only two weeks away, and I have to keep in top form"
4 hours later...
Naruto returned to Hinata's apartment socked in sweat. He opened the door when he suddenly felt like someone pushed him to the ground. He looked down and saw Hinata hugging him tight.
"Hinata-chan, what's wro..." He was intruded when Hinata kissed him. After finished the kiss, Hinata was deep red from head to toe. Naruto started in shock, then he smiled.
"Hinata-chan, how about we talk after I take a shower." Naruto asked.
Hinata nodded and help him to get up from the ground.
After the shower, Naruto walked out wearing muscle shirt and sport pants, he saw Hinata sitting on couch look at the floor. Naruto smiled as he sat next to her. Hinata noticed him, blushed and looked away. Naruto chuckled.
"Let me guess, you were worried that I left this morning with out telling you? I am sorry about that." Naruto apologized. "That and I hope that you weren't a dream."
Naruto looked at her and he nodded to himself. It is now or never.
"Hinata," Hinata looked at him, "I as sorry for I done in the past, and sorry for the pain I caused to you. I am a big idiot back then for not noticing. It took me 10 years to notice you." Hinata looked at him confused "What do you mean, Naruto-kun?" "I mean that I love you Hinata. Will you ever forgive me?" Naruto closed his eyes waiting for a reply. After a moment of silence before Naruto opened his eyes to a crying Hinata smiling at him. He was about to say some thing when she launches herself at him, kissing him and saying love to him. Naruto return the embrace and was crying. Finally having someone whom he can share his life with.
"Hey, Hinata-chan. Let go to see Tsunade if we can find a better to live, ne?" Hinata nodded.
When they reached the Hokage's office, they found Tsunade signing some paper. Tsunade looked up to see who it is and smiled when saw Naruto. She smiled more when she noticed how close Hinata to Naruto. She decided to tease them.
"So, how the new love birds doing today? You both actually are glowing! How sweet!" Naruto blinked on what she said and the shouted "WE DIDN"T DO IT......yet" the last one he said it in whisper, but both Tsunade and Hinata notice it. Tsunade was laughing and Hinata was blushing.
"Oh, Naruto. You know I just teasing. So why did you two come to see me for?"
"Well, I was wondering if you can find us an apartment for both me and Hinata."
"What do you have I mind?"
"Well I was think of house outside the village, but not to far. I wonder if there are water springs near it, a clear space, and a forest of bamboo."
Both of them were looking at Naruto. Tsunade sigh, before she getting up and revealed a secret compartment in the wall behind her. She took a scroll and throws it to Naruto, who caught it. Naruto looked at the scroll then at Tsunade.
"That's is the house that your father had kept for you"
Naruto was shocked at the last piece of information.
"Everything you described is in there and more. Oh and here is his will"
Stunted for few seconds, Naruto recovered his wits.
"Thank you, old hag" Naruto gave his famous fox grin. Of course, Tsunade didn't find this amusing.
"Naruto, how many times do I have to tell you?!" Tsunade screamed at Naruto, who is still grinning.
"Well, it's true"
"Anyway, Naruto. You didn't tell us what happened to you after the nice people?"
Naruto looked at her as if she had two heads, then he burst laughing. Both Hinata and Tsunade were worried at Naruto.
"Naruto-kun?" asked the worried Hinata.
"I am fine Hinata-chan" said Naruto after calming down. He looked at Tsunade and fell down laughing again.
"NARUTO" shouted Tsunade.
"Ok ok ok ok, I am sorry"
"What do you think is so funny?!"
"Oh nothing, It just how you said 'those nice people'."
"what? They aren't nice?!"
"Oh no, They are the most nicest people you ever know. But living with is unbearable!"
Hinata was confused of what he said.
"What do you mean, Naruto-ken?"
"Well, to but it simply they were very strict, especially Master Wong's wife, Kasumi. If I did something wrong, she would punish me!"
"What did she do? Spank you?" Tsunade said with sly smile on her face.
"I wish!"
Both of them were wondering what he meant be that. Naruto seeing them confused, he began to explain.
"As a punishment, she gets me to a carrot while she eat her very delicious Ramen. OH THE HORROR!"
Few moments had passed before both females fall on the ground laughing, even Hinata couldn't resist.
After few moments, they calm down and saw Naruto with a gentel smile on his face.
"During my stay with Master Wong and his wife, I learned many thing from them. From Master Wong, he trained in martial art, which I custom my own, and the concept of life and energy, while Mrs. Kasumi taught in manners and other thing like studying."
"Naruto, what is different between here and the other world?" Tsunade was very interested of the other world, which will prove that there are other worlds.
"Well, the buildings are very tall, taller than your slug. The streets are organized and the road all made of black rocks. Oh, and yeah people can travel to far places in a bird made steel"
"Wait, Bird made of Steel?!"
"Yeah, they called airplanes and I did fly in one of those. Anyway, by the time I ten, Master Wong took me in 'training' trip. Since Master didn't have any son, he chose me as his heir. In the next 8 years, I already faced many opponents in different fighting styles. Through those 8 years, I also trained in Ninjatsu and I even created few jutsu of my own"
After few moment of staring shock, Tsunade recovered.
"Wow, Naruto. You have grown so much, but what about the Bike that you came with yesterday."
"Come on out side" Naruto stood up and walked outside with Hinata and Tsunade. Once outside, Naruto told them to step back. Naruto, with quick move, took a scroll and flipped it into the air. Biting his thump and swapped a trail of blood on the opened the scroll very fast and slammed on the ground.
"Kuchiyose no Jutsu"
After the smoke cleared, a black motorcycle appeared where the scroll is. Naruto hopped on and started the engine.
"Naruto-kun, where did you get this?" asked Hinata as she stared in a awe at it.
"Well, The bike itself was actually a present from Master Wong and his wife. Come on, Hinata. Hop on" Hinata nodded, hopped on and put her arms around Naruto's waist. She blushed as she can feel Naruto's hard back.
"Naruto, How did you able to do that?" Naruto looked at her and smiled
"Kyuubi" and was gone. Tsunade looked at where Naruto was, he was gone in less than a second on his bike.
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Hinata was having the time of her life. She never knew the speeding was so much fun. Eventually they arrived at Naruto's new house. By the end of the day, they finished moving Hinata's stuff in a room across Naruto's room. Naruto asked Hinata for a date after finishing training, which she accepted.
Hours later, Naruto finished his shower and in his favourite clothe. He heard a knock and knew it was Hinata. Finishing his last touch, he went, opened the door,...and just stared. Hinata was wearing a tight navy dress showing her figure all the way down and cut on the left side showing her leg. Naruto just stood there, his mouth opening and closing like a fish out of water. Seeing that he want to say something, Hinata neared her ear to hear him.
"Beautiful"
Hinata blushed, and then grinned. She approached him, put her arms around his neck, and kissed him. Another round of shock has passed before he started returning the kiss. After 5 minutes they broke the kiss, which left them breathless.
"Wow" the only word that they can say
"C'mon Hinata-chan, Let go"
2 Hours later, Naruto and Hinata were just got out from an expensive restaurant. Hinata was holding Naruto's arm as they walked. As they walked, Naruto saw Sasuke sitting with Sakura in one café.
"Hey look, Hinata-chan. It Sakura and Sasuke, Let say hi"
"Ok, Naruto-kun"
They gone inside and walked toward where Sakura and Sasuke is.
"Hey Sakura, Hey Sasuke!"
Sakura heard someone calling her, looked and saw Naruto with Hinata holding his arm. She grinned as how much she going to tease them.
"Oh, Hi Naruto. Hi Hinata. What are you two doing?"
"Oh, nothing. We just finishing our date and we were walking back home. Mind if we sit?"
"Sure you can. So you went to date with Hinata, hmm? (looks at Hinata) So, how is he? Is he a good kiss?"
Hinata just blushed while she holds Naruto arm tighter. Naruto looks at Sasuke whose said nothing yet. Sasuke seems to be in a deep concentration. Naruto saw that Sasuke holding Sakura's hand.
"So when did you two started dating, hmm?" Asked Naruto Sakura as he puts his arm around Hinata, who blushed but rested her head on his shoulder.
"It after you disappeared. Sasuke was cold to everybody when he thought he knew that you're dead. Eventually, we started dating I guess he doesn't want to feel alone."
Naruto looks at Sasuke who kept looking at the table in deep concentration.
"So how is the gang since I was away?" Wondered Naruto.
"Well you can say that everyone has bested in their clan, Shikamaru is now known as the smartest shinobi in the village. Lee is the fastest shinobi in the world now, even Sasuke Sharingan can't keep up with his speed. Sasuke already mastered Mange-Sharingan."
"But I still couldn't beat Itachi" Said Sasuke the first time since naruto came. "Every time I fight him, he somehow has something to back him up. I already lost to him three times. What makes me angry that every time he beats me, he leaves me alive"
There was moment of silence, before Naruto said something,
"You know that he will come to the tournament, right?"
Sasuke didn't say anything, but nodded.
"So all you have to do is train for the tournament, But if you don't face me during the tournament. I will beat the crap out of you!"
Sasuke nodded.
Naruto yawned, stretched, and stood up.
"C'mon Hinata-chan, lets call it a night."
Later at Naruto House, Naruto was going to bed wearing a tank top and boxers when he heard someone knocking at his door. He knew it was Hinata, but wondered what she knocking for at this time of night. He walked, opened the door, and before he can say anything he started and almost got a nose bleed. Hinata was wearing a t-shirt that reached her knees, her hands were behind her back, and she deep red blush on her face. Recovering his composer, and tried not to faint.
"Can I help you with, Hinata-chan?" although he looks calm inside he was shaking nervous.
"Can I sleep with you tonight?" He couldn't stop blushing. Just before he could say anything, Hinata beat it to him.
"I just want to know that you are still there" Naruto look at her eyes and can only see one thing, love. He nodded as he closed the door after she entered. Both of them climbed the bed and covered themselves. The kissed a good night kiss and hugged each other as they went into a peaceful rest. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ---------------------------
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The Return
Chapter 4
Naruto groaned as he started to wake up, and sat up. Then he senses something different. Looking around he notice he was in a living room, on couch to be exact, and blanket on him.
"Where are I?" grumbled Naruto as he wondered where he is. That until he remembered he was back in Konoha, ' oh that right I back home', Naruto thought. Home, He always wondered what is home is. At first, he thought that home is where you are born. But after that he thought that home where you are welcomed and have a place. But that was it either. After spending almost 10 years, he knew then what or where home is. It was where you willing to share life with and love enough to protect them.
'Hinata' Naruto thought of her and last night. Right after they got out from the Hyuuga house. The call it a day. Hinata not wanting for Naruto to go, asked him to stay with her. Naruto was about to decline when she used the look on him. He ended up sleeping in the living, while slept in her bedroom. Naruto thought of himself was a fool for not noticing Hinata. He now knew he was in love with her without knowing it.
' I am sorry for making you wait, Hinata. I promise you that I will be there for you and protect you from anything.' Thought Naruto as he glanced at the Hinata's door. He glanced at his watch and saw 4:50 in the morning.
"Well I better go to my usual mornings. The Tournament is only two weeks away, and I have to keep in top form"
4 hours later...
Naruto returned to Hinata's apartment socked in sweat. He opened the door when he suddenly felt like someone pushed him to the ground. He looked down and saw Hinata hugging him tight.
"Hinata-chan, what's wro..." He was intruded when Hinata kissed him. After finished the kiss, Hinata was deep red from head to toe. Naruto started in shock, then he smiled.
"Hinata-chan, how about we talk after I take a shower." Naruto asked.
Hinata nodded and help him to get up from the ground.
After the shower, Naruto walked out wearing muscle shirt and sport pants, he saw Hinata sitting on couch look at the floor. Naruto smiled as he sat next to her. Hinata noticed him, blushed and looked away. Naruto chuckled.
"Let me guess, you were worried that I left this morning with out telling you? I am sorry about that." Naruto apologized. "That and I hope that you weren't a dream."
Naruto looked at her and he nodded to himself. It is now or never.
"Hinata," Hinata looked at him, "I as sorry for I done in the past, and sorry for the pain I caused to you. I am a big idiot back then for not noticing. It took me 10 years to notice you." Hinata looked at him confused "What do you mean, Naruto-kun?" "I mean that I love you Hinata. Will you ever forgive me?" Naruto closed his eyes waiting for a reply. After a moment of silence before Naruto opened his eyes to a crying Hinata smiling at him. He was about to say some thing when she launches herself at him, kissing him and saying love to him. Naruto return the embrace and was crying. Finally having someone whom he can share his life with.
"Hey, Hinata-chan. Let go to see Tsunade if we can find a better to live, ne?" Hinata nodded.
When they reached the Hokage's office, they found Tsunade signing some paper. Tsunade looked up to see who it is and smiled when saw Naruto. She smiled more when she noticed how close Hinata to Naruto. She decided to tease them.
"So, how the new love birds doing today? You both actually are glowing! How sweet!" Naruto blinked on what she said and the shouted "WE DIDN"T DO IT......yet" the last one he said it in whisper, but both Tsunade and Hinata notice it. Tsunade was laughing and Hinata was blushing.
"Oh, Naruto. You know I just teasing. So why did you two come to see me for?"
"Well, I was wondering if you can find us an apartment for both me and Hinata."
"What do you have I mind?"
"Well I was think of house outside the village, but not to far. I wonder if there are water springs near it, a clear space, and a forest of bamboo."
Both of them were looking at Naruto. Tsunade sigh, before she getting up and revealed a secret compartment in the wall behind her. She took a scroll and throws it to Naruto, who caught it. Naruto looked at the scroll then at Tsunade.
"That's is the house that your father had kept for you"
Naruto was shocked at the last piece of information.
"Everything you described is in there and more. Oh and here is his will"
Stunted for few seconds, Naruto recovered his wits.
"Thank you, old hag" Naruto gave his famous fox grin. Of course, Tsunade didn't find this amusing.
"Naruto, how many times do I have to tell you?!" Tsunade screamed at Naruto, who is still grinning.
"Well, it's true"
"Anyway, Naruto. You didn't tell us what happened to you after the nice people?"
Naruto looked at her as if she had two heads, then he burst laughing. Both Hinata and Tsunade were worried at Naruto.
"Naruto-kun?" asked the worried Hinata.
"I am fine Hinata-chan" said Naruto after calming down. He looked at Tsunade and fell down laughing again.
"NARUTO" shouted Tsunade.
"Ok ok ok ok, I am sorry"
"What do you think is so funny?!"
"Oh nothing, It just how you said 'those nice people'."
"what? They aren't nice?!"
"Oh no, They are the most nicest people you ever know. But living with is unbearable!"
Hinata was confused of what he said.
"What do you mean, Naruto-ken?"
"Well, to but it simply they were very strict, especially Master Wong's wife, Kasumi. If I did something wrong, she would punish me!"
"What did she do? Spank you?" Tsunade said with sly smile on her face.
"I wish!"
Both of them were wondering what he meant be that. Naruto seeing them confused, he began to explain.
"As a punishment, she gets me to a carrot while she eat her very delicious Ramen. OH THE HORROR!"
Few moments had passed before both females fall on the ground laughing, even Hinata couldn't resist.
After few moments, they calm down and saw Naruto with a gentel smile on his face.
"During my stay with Master Wong and his wife, I learned many thing from them. From Master Wong, he trained in martial art, which I custom my own, and the concept of life and energy, while Mrs. Kasumi taught in manners and other thing like studying."
"Naruto, what is different between here and the other world?" Tsunade was very interested of the other world, which will prove that there are other worlds.
"Well, the buildings are very tall, taller than your slug. The streets are organized and the road all made of black rocks. Oh, and yeah people can travel to far places in a bird made steel"
"Wait, Bird made of Steel?!"
"Yeah, they called airplanes and I did fly in one of those. Anyway, by the time I ten, Master Wong took me in 'training' trip. Since Master didn't have any son, he chose me as his heir. In the next 8 years, I already faced many opponents in different fighting styles. Through those 8 years, I also trained in Ninjatsu and I even created few jutsu of my own"
After few moment of staring shock, Tsunade recovered.
"Wow, Naruto. You have grown so much, but what about the Bike that you came with yesterday."
"Come on out side" Naruto stood up and walked outside with Hinata and Tsunade. Once outside, Naruto told them to step back. Naruto, with quick move, took a scroll and flipped it into the air. Biting his thump and swapped a trail of blood on the opened the scroll very fast and slammed on the ground.
"Kuchiyose no Jutsu"
After the smoke cleared, a black motorcycle appeared where the scroll is. Naruto hopped on and started the engine.
"Naruto-kun, where did you get this?" asked Hinata as she stared in a awe at it.
"Well, The bike itself was actually a present from Master Wong and his wife. Come on, Hinata. Hop on" Hinata nodded, hopped on and put her arms around Naruto's waist. She blushed as she can feel Naruto's hard back.
"Naruto, How did you able to do that?" Naruto looked at her and smiled
"Kyuubi" and was gone. Tsunade looked at where Naruto was, he was gone in less than a second on his bike.
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Hinata was having the time of her life. She never knew the speeding was so much fun. Eventually they arrived at Naruto's new house. By the end of the day, they finished moving Hinata's stuff in a room across Naruto's room. Naruto asked Hinata for a date after finishing training, which she accepted.
Hours later, Naruto finished his shower and in his favourite clothe. He heard a knock and knew it was Hinata. Finishing his last touch, he went, opened the door,...and just stared. Hinata was wearing a tight navy dress showing her figure all the way down and cut on the left side showing her leg. Naruto just stood there, his mouth opening and closing like a fish out of water. Seeing that he want to say something, Hinata neared her ear to hear him.
"Beautiful"
Hinata blushed, and then grinned. She approached him, put her arms around his neck, and kissed him. Another round of shock has passed before he started returning the kiss. After 5 minutes they broke the kiss, which left them breathless.
"Wow" the only word that they can say
"C'mon Hinata-chan, Let go"
2 Hours later, Naruto and Hinata were just got out from an expensive restaurant. Hinata was holding Naruto's arm as they walked. As they walked, Naruto saw Sasuke sitting with Sakura in one café.
"Hey look, Hinata-chan. It Sakura and Sasuke, Let say hi"
"Ok, Naruto-kun"
They gone inside and walked toward where Sakura and Sasuke is.
"Hey Sakura, Hey Sasuke!"
Sakura heard someone calling her, looked and saw Naruto with Hinata holding his arm. She grinned as how much she going to tease them.
"Oh, Hi Naruto. Hi Hinata. What are you two doing?"
"Oh, nothing. We just finishing our date and we were walking back home. Mind if we sit?"
"Sure you can. So you went to date with Hinata, hmm? (looks at Hinata) So, how is he? Is he a good kiss?"
Hinata just blushed while she holds Naruto arm tighter. Naruto looks at Sasuke whose said nothing yet. Sasuke seems to be in a deep concentration. Naruto saw that Sasuke holding Sakura's hand.
"So when did you two started dating, hmm?" Asked Naruto Sakura as he puts his arm around Hinata, who blushed but rested her head on his shoulder.
"It after you disappeared. Sasuke was cold to everybody when he thought he knew that you're dead. Eventually, we started dating I guess he doesn't want to feel alone."
Naruto looks at Sasuke who kept looking at the table in deep concentration.
"So how is the gang since I was away?" Wondered Naruto.
"Well you can say that everyone has bested in their clan, Shikamaru is now known as the smartest shinobi in the village. Lee is the fastest shinobi in the world now, even Sasuke Sharingan can't keep up with his speed. Sasuke already mastered Mange-Sharingan."
"But I still couldn't beat Itachi" Said Sasuke the first time since naruto came. "Every time I fight him, he somehow has something to back him up. I already lost to him three times. What makes me angry that every time he beats me, he leaves me alive"
There was moment of silence, before Naruto said something,
"You know that he will come to the tournament, right?"
Sasuke didn't say anything, but nodded.
"So all you have to do is train for the tournament, But if you don't face me during the tournament. I will beat the crap out of you!"
Sasuke nodded.
Naruto yawned, stretched, and stood up.
"C'mon Hinata-chan, lets call it a night."
Later at Naruto House, Naruto was going to bed wearing a tank top and boxers when he heard someone knocking at his door. He knew it was Hinata, but wondered what she knocking for at this time of night. He walked, opened the door, and before he can say anything he started and almost got a nose bleed. Hinata was wearing a t-shirt that reached her knees, her hands were behind her back, and she deep red blush on her face. Recovering his composer, and tried not to faint.
"Can I help you with, Hinata-chan?" although he looks calm inside he was shaking nervous.
"Can I sleep with you tonight?" He couldn't stop blushing. Just before he could say anything, Hinata beat it to him.
"I just want to know that you are still there" Naruto look at her eyes and can only see one thing, love. He nodded as he closed the door after she entered. Both of them climbed the bed and covered themselves. The kissed a good night kiss and hugged each other as they went into a peaceful rest. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ---------------------------
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