Hi, I'm Earthbrat and this is the revised version of my first story, so
please go easy on me. In this story, Wufei's late wife never existed. It's
also slightly OOC on Wufei's part. Please send me feed back. I'll even
accept flames (although not as graciously).
Disclaimer: I do not own Gundam Wing. I wish I did but I don't. I'm just a
broke high school student, so don't sue. I do own my original character
(but not the name).
"..."= Speaking
'....'= Thoughts
....= Author's notes
Nataku Phoenix
By
Earthbrat
"Hello?" Wufei called, a nervous feeling arising in his stomach, "Where am I?" "Wufei," a child's voice called. "Who's there?" He asked timidly. I know you're thinking 'Wufei, timid' but hey, it's my story "Wufei, where are you?" it asked again. Wufei could hear the panic arising in it's voice. All the sudden, there was an explosion, but he couldn't feel it. It was almost like watching it on TV, he could see it and hear it, but it wasn't happening to him. "Wufei," the voice screamed. He could see the outline of a girl trying to get out of the fire, but not succeeding. "Wufei, help me," she screamed. She let out a piercing scream filled with pain and terror. Wufei couldn't take it anymore; he turned and ran as fast as he could. He heard her as he ran too, only this time in anger. "You can't run from your past or your future Wufei." He kept running until the floor gave out from under him. He fell screaming. The ground was 20 miles under him now, 15, 10, 5, 1 mile. Wufei braced himself to hit the ground when... Wufei sat up in bed panting and sweating. He looked around his room, a safe feeling slowly coming back to him. 'It was all a dream, but why did that girl seem so familiar?' As he debated with himself, a sudden noise from the downstairs hanger made him jump. He glanced out the window to see his own car, but no one else's. The other pilots weren't here, which could only mean one thing, "Someone's in this house!" I revised the story and am adding new chapters soon. Please tell me what you thought, I love getting e-mail. ; ) -Earthbrat
Nataku Phoenix
By
Earthbrat
"Hello?" Wufei called, a nervous feeling arising in his stomach, "Where am I?" "Wufei," a child's voice called. "Who's there?" He asked timidly. I know you're thinking 'Wufei, timid' but hey, it's my story "Wufei, where are you?" it asked again. Wufei could hear the panic arising in it's voice. All the sudden, there was an explosion, but he couldn't feel it. It was almost like watching it on TV, he could see it and hear it, but it wasn't happening to him. "Wufei," the voice screamed. He could see the outline of a girl trying to get out of the fire, but not succeeding. "Wufei, help me," she screamed. She let out a piercing scream filled with pain and terror. Wufei couldn't take it anymore; he turned and ran as fast as he could. He heard her as he ran too, only this time in anger. "You can't run from your past or your future Wufei." He kept running until the floor gave out from under him. He fell screaming. The ground was 20 miles under him now, 15, 10, 5, 1 mile. Wufei braced himself to hit the ground when... Wufei sat up in bed panting and sweating. He looked around his room, a safe feeling slowly coming back to him. 'It was all a dream, but why did that girl seem so familiar?' As he debated with himself, a sudden noise from the downstairs hanger made him jump. He glanced out the window to see his own car, but no one else's. The other pilots weren't here, which could only mean one thing, "Someone's in this house!" I revised the story and am adding new chapters soon. Please tell me what you thought, I love getting e-mail. ; ) -Earthbrat