Okay! Here's a nice little thank you and a poll for my Fic! I'm stuck on
what to do after that big Zel moment, Give me some help!
Just review and give me some ideas as to what might happen to the crew of L- Sama. I'm desperate, people!
And thanks goes to () who reviewed and asked me to write more. For you, (), I will! Now, as to pairings in my fic......None, I don't think. This is mostly an action/humor fic soooooo.......buuuut...If I get enough votes for a pairing I like (i.e. Lina/Zel or Sylphiel/Gourry) I might be persuaded to deepen these mostly platonic relationships. Or perhaps, you want something concerning Raven, Mur or Kiyone? Mehbeh.
And as a side note, Mur is a real person, and was found floating off the coast of Africa. And, no, she's not quite sane, but you never know when nutty people are going to tell you something extremely useful.....
SO! REVIEW, REVIEW, REVIEW!!! Please? With a sugar coated Zel on top? o ( me.
And as added incentive....
Zel sighed as he looked over the water. He shouldn't have blown his top at the young girl, he knew that...but....when she had call him Mister Zelgadiss.....That had just set him off. What worried him most was that his threat hadn't been hollow. 'I really would have keelhauled, maimed, and tortured her. It's been so long since anyone set me off that bad....
"Hey...? Zel? You alright" Lina asked, coming up behind the white- haired pirate. "You look....worried. Is everything alright?"
"No, Lina, everything is not alright...I haven't let go like that in....so very long....I....I promised her, Lina....I promised her I would never hurt another Human...."
"But, you didn't, that's what matters....you didn't make good on your threats...."
"No, Lina, that's not it.." Zel turned away from the rail. "Even though I didn't hurt her physically...I still hurt her....I hurt her, Lina, and innocent girl....."
"Hey, Zel, it's alright, a girl like that needs a tongue lashing once in a while – " She was cut off by Zel leaning against her. The red-headed pirate noticed his shoulders shaking... "Hmmm? Zel...You're...crying?"
Just review and give me some ideas as to what might happen to the crew of L- Sama. I'm desperate, people!
And thanks goes to () who reviewed and asked me to write more. For you, (), I will! Now, as to pairings in my fic......None, I don't think. This is mostly an action/humor fic soooooo.......buuuut...If I get enough votes for a pairing I like (i.e. Lina/Zel or Sylphiel/Gourry) I might be persuaded to deepen these mostly platonic relationships. Or perhaps, you want something concerning Raven, Mur or Kiyone? Mehbeh.
And as a side note, Mur is a real person, and was found floating off the coast of Africa. And, no, she's not quite sane, but you never know when nutty people are going to tell you something extremely useful.....
SO! REVIEW, REVIEW, REVIEW!!! Please? With a sugar coated Zel on top? o ( me.
And as added incentive....
Zel sighed as he looked over the water. He shouldn't have blown his top at the young girl, he knew that...but....when she had call him Mister Zelgadiss.....That had just set him off. What worried him most was that his threat hadn't been hollow. 'I really would have keelhauled, maimed, and tortured her. It's been so long since anyone set me off that bad....
"Hey...? Zel? You alright" Lina asked, coming up behind the white- haired pirate. "You look....worried. Is everything alright?"
"No, Lina, everything is not alright...I haven't let go like that in....so very long....I....I promised her, Lina....I promised her I would never hurt another Human...."
"But, you didn't, that's what matters....you didn't make good on your threats...."
"No, Lina, that's not it.." Zel turned away from the rail. "Even though I didn't hurt her physically...I still hurt her....I hurt her, Lina, and innocent girl....."
"Hey, Zel, it's alright, a girl like that needs a tongue lashing once in a while – " She was cut off by Zel leaning against her. The red-headed pirate noticed his shoulders shaking... "Hmmm? Zel...You're...crying?"