[E/N: This story takes place after chapter 8 of Lil-Riter's Blue Eyes. I haven't read the story, but as far as I can see, there's no stuff that is obcene, just weird. Disclaimer: Zat Bloke does not own Yugioh or Takara. Takara's MINE!] [ps: there will be no annoying editor's notes, or a/n's, kay?]

Zat Blokes Version

Takara was tired of hiding for the past few days. She hadn't seen sunlight for days. Takara walked out the door to get a nice breather, but that was a sure mistake. [E/N: okay, to make this clear, they are in a cabin in the woods.](A/N: stop getting in my story!) Out jumped Marik and his gang. They bound her tight in rope and gagged her. Then the gang left for Marik to talk to her, "You thought that you could hide from me, did you?!?" Takara shook feriously. "WelL nOw yoU kNoW tHaT yOu CaN'T!!!" screamed Marik, his voice breaking. Suddenly Marik transformed into evil Marik. "FOOL, no one escapes me..." he took out a gun and aimed at Takara's forehead. Takara squirmed around in the rope, but couldnt get the tight rope off. "HAR HAR HAR!" laughed Marik, pulling the trigger. [E/N:watch. he misses.]

"NO!" screamed Kaiba, as he lunged at Marik. The evil dude spun around, with a harrassed look on his face having not been able to shoot Takara. [E/N: didn't he already pull the trigger?!] He shot round after round at Kaiba and dropped his empty gun and pulled out another. Kaiba ran forward not even wincing. The rest of Marik's gang ran out because of the racket. They found Kaiba attempting to expire their leader; they pulled out poles and other stuff to attack the attacker. Kaiba leapt up onto a picnic table and propelled himself forward into the mob forming around him. He knocked down a couple guys and kicked at them. He ran forward and kicked out with his legs to the approaching gangies and knocked them to the ground.

Takara ,rolling on the ground, found a sharp rock and sawed at the rope. Kaiba ran arund just knocking them over. He picked up a wooden pole and swung at them. He knocked a few in the stomach and in the end, they were all down. It was just him and Marik. They circled around each other and spun their poles menacingly. Then they charged at each other and swung. Kaiba blocked a few but got many resounding blows. Kaiba never had a chance to hit Marik. He spun his pull around as Marik laughed, "Did you really think that you could beat me Seto Kaiba?" He swung at the rich boy and knocked himto the ground. Marik kicked out Kaiba's pole, "HAR HAR you were absolutely wrong." He fell forward onto the ground, out cold. "No you're wrong," said Takara with her stone in hand .

Kaiba took Takara into his car and they drove away like a big happy family....heck to make it more interesting.... THey leapt into Kaiba's new convertible. Mokuba switched the car into reverse and drove out of the forest. The radio said:" Evil ninja's approaching Domino High...."

Lil-Riter: Okay, so THIS one is good. I remember you saying you were getting the plot...?

Zat Bloke: Duh.

Lil-Riter: EVIL NINJAS?!

ZatBloke: Your fault. you lied about the comments.

Lil-riter: I only entered them... in some spots!

Zatbloke: This is my great story! R&R! (even though I don't know what that means...)

Lil-Riter: Read & (and) Review, Dope!

Zat Bloke: I knew that! Anyways, people, don't you agree that my version is bettah than her's? (meaning Lil-Riter...)