Never Let Go
Ok, this is my first fanfic. I'm not sure if its good or not, but if it is, I have up to Chapter 9 written already. If I get enough reviews, I'll put them up soon.
Disclaimer: I do not own anything in this story but the plot and Jen.
Chapter 1
"Wow, I can't believe the summer's gone already," said Harry to Ron as
they made their way towards Platform 9 ¾.
"Neither can I, but I can't wait to see everyone again," Ron told Harry.
"Would everyone include a certain Gryffindor prefect with brown hair?" Harry teased Ron, and Ron's ears turned noticeably pink.
"Shut up, Harry," Ron muttered. Everyone knew Ron had a huge crush on Hermione. But what not too many people seemed to realize was that Hermione liked Ron, too. All Harry needed now was to find a plan to make those two realize their feelings for each other. It was going to be tough, with those two always fighting. Harry knew it was their way of flirting, but no one else seemed to pick up on it. "What are you thinking about, Harry?" asked Ron, seeing a mischievous look in Harry's eyes.
"What? Oh. nothing. Hey, who's she?" Harry asked Ron, looking at a girl of about their age looking around. By looking at her stuff, which had a black kitten and countless trunks, one of which had the sleeve of a robe sticking out, Harry figured that they should help her, seeing as she was probably going to Hogwarts. "Oh," Harry thought, "she must be that new exchange student from America. Hey!" Harry said to her, "what are you looking for?" "I'm looking for Platform 9 ¾," she said, turning around. Harry took that moment to take in her appearance: she was tall, with short blonde hair and green eyes. She also had pierced ears, with two earrings in one ear and three in the other.
"Wow, she's pretty," Harry thought to himself.
"Are you that new exchange student from America?" Ron asked.
"Yes, I am. So how do I get to Platform 9 ¾?" she asked them.
"Just follow us," Harry told her. The three of them continued walking. "Ok, now to get to Platform 9 ¾, you can either run at or casually lean into the wall between Platform 9 and Platform 10. Go right for the middle, and you'll be ok," Harry told her. "Ron can go first, and then I'll go through with you, to make sure you've got it. Ok?"
"Yeah, ok," the girl told him, but she looked confused at the running through the wall part. She and Harry then watched Ron go through the wall, with no problems.
"Are you ready?" Harry asked the girl. She nodded. They decided to casually lean into the wall, seeing as it would attract less attention. They arrived at Platform 9 ¾ immediately after they fell through the wall.
"That.wasn't so bad," the girl told Harry and Ron. "My name's Jen," she told them
"I'm Harry, and this is Ron," Harry said. Jen saw a girl with straight brownish blondish hair come up behind them. She held a finger to her lips, and Jen nodded.
"Hi guys!" the girl said.
"Aaugh! Hermione!" the boys yelled at her. "Yeah, my name's Hermione," Hermione told her.
"I'm Jen," she said. Harry and Ron turned around to see their friend.
"Whoa, Hermione." they said in unison. And they had a right to be shocked. Hermione had begun to straighten her hair, and had gotten some blonde highlights put in it. She, as well as Harry and Ron, had grown a few inches taller over the summer, but she had also begun growing in some other * places *, and these changes were very apparent from the Muggle halter top and shorts she was wearing.
"You look." Ron said, filled with awe.
"You two don't look half bad yourselves," she said to the two awestruck boys. All three of them blushed.
"Well if it isn't the famous Potter, with his sidekicks the weasel and the Mudblood." Draco Malfoy had just come by with his two goons Crabbe and Goyle. Harry and Hermione grabbed the back of Ron' robes on instinct. "And who do we have here?" Draco asked, pointing to Jen. "Oh, you must be that new exchange student from America. I'm Draco Malfoy," Draco said.
"My name's Jen," she told him, looking up and down his tall, muscular figure. Draco smirked at this, and Jen looked up, embarrassed. "He's pretty damn sexy, if he didn't smirk all the time," Jen thought to herself.
"Wow, that new student, Jen?, she's pretty. Was she just checking me out now?" Draco asked himself. Harry decided to go onto the train now, to save a compartment for himself and his friends. When he started to go on the train, Ron, Hermione, and Jen followed in his lead. When they had all of their stuff packed away, Jen took her kitten out of its cage. "Oh, you're so cute, my little Lucifer," she murmured sweetly to her kitten. Hermione looked around the compartment, and asked Ron where Ginny was.
"Ginny? She's probably with Colin," Ron told her.
"Colin? Colin Creevey?" Harry asked. "What's she doing with him?"
"Don't you know? They started a Harry Potter fan club!" Ron teased him. "No, actually, they've been going out since like the middle of July. You've just been completely oblivious to everything this summer, mourning over Sirius." Harry gave Ron a deadly glare.
"I'll deal with you later," he muttered, so only Ron could hear him.
"Who's Ginny?" Jen asked.
"My little sister," Ron told her. "She's going to be in her 5th year this year."
"That reminds me," Hermione said. "Jen, how old are you?"
"I'm 16," she told her. "My birthday's in January."
"Great!" Harry said. "That means you're in our year!"
"What's so bad about that Draco Malfoy person?" Jen asked out of the blue.
"Malfoy? That slimy git? What isn't wrong with him?" Ron said loudly. "Why?"
"Uhm.." Jen started.
"It's pretty obvious, Ron," Hermione said. Ron and Harry looked at her in confusion.
"I'm that obvious?" Jen asked.
"Yeah, you pretty much are," Harry said, finally catching on. "I'd stay away from him if I were you. He's a Slytherin, and the worst one you could ever meet."
"No one answered my question yet!" Ron said, exasperated.
"She likes Malfoy, Ron," Hermione said, with a sigh.
"Who likes me?" Draco had just opened the door to their compartment. "Oh," he said, seeing Jen blush. "You do. Isn't your name Jen?" he asked her. Jen nodded. "It's nice to know I already have fans for this year," Draco said, and with a smirk, he shut the door.
"Why that arrogant little ---," Jen started to say. She sighed. "I guess you guys were right." Jen turned to look out the window. "Hmm..," she thought to herself. "Harry's not bad looking at all! And I'm pretty sure he likes me as well. He's not Draco, but then again no one is. I guess I'll have to see where I can take this," she finished with a smile. While she looked out the window, Harry was staring at her, with a dreamy look on his face. Ron caught this, and chuckled.
"What's so funny, Ron?" Hermione asked him. Ron whispered into her ear, and Hermione followed Harry's gaze to Jen. "Now I have some dirt on him for later," Ron thought with an evil grin on his face.
"Wow! Is that Hogwarts?" Jen asked, seeing a huge looming castle in the distance.
"Home sweet home," Harry said, finally coming out of his "trance". A few minutes later, they arrived at the castle. When the four of them had gotten off the train, a giant shadow started moving in their direction. When Jen looked up to see what it was, she screamed.
Ok, this is my first fanfic. I'm not sure if its good or not, but if it is, I have up to Chapter 9 written already. If I get enough reviews, I'll put them up soon.
Disclaimer: I do not own anything in this story but the plot and Jen.
Chapter 1
"Wow, I can't believe the summer's gone already," said Harry to Ron as
they made their way towards Platform 9 ¾.
"Neither can I, but I can't wait to see everyone again," Ron told Harry.
"Would everyone include a certain Gryffindor prefect with brown hair?" Harry teased Ron, and Ron's ears turned noticeably pink.
"Shut up, Harry," Ron muttered. Everyone knew Ron had a huge crush on Hermione. But what not too many people seemed to realize was that Hermione liked Ron, too. All Harry needed now was to find a plan to make those two realize their feelings for each other. It was going to be tough, with those two always fighting. Harry knew it was their way of flirting, but no one else seemed to pick up on it. "What are you thinking about, Harry?" asked Ron, seeing a mischievous look in Harry's eyes.
"What? Oh. nothing. Hey, who's she?" Harry asked Ron, looking at a girl of about their age looking around. By looking at her stuff, which had a black kitten and countless trunks, one of which had the sleeve of a robe sticking out, Harry figured that they should help her, seeing as she was probably going to Hogwarts. "Oh," Harry thought, "she must be that new exchange student from America. Hey!" Harry said to her, "what are you looking for?" "I'm looking for Platform 9 ¾," she said, turning around. Harry took that moment to take in her appearance: she was tall, with short blonde hair and green eyes. She also had pierced ears, with two earrings in one ear and three in the other.
"Wow, she's pretty," Harry thought to himself.
"Are you that new exchange student from America?" Ron asked.
"Yes, I am. So how do I get to Platform 9 ¾?" she asked them.
"Just follow us," Harry told her. The three of them continued walking. "Ok, now to get to Platform 9 ¾, you can either run at or casually lean into the wall between Platform 9 and Platform 10. Go right for the middle, and you'll be ok," Harry told her. "Ron can go first, and then I'll go through with you, to make sure you've got it. Ok?"
"Yeah, ok," the girl told him, but she looked confused at the running through the wall part. She and Harry then watched Ron go through the wall, with no problems.
"Are you ready?" Harry asked the girl. She nodded. They decided to casually lean into the wall, seeing as it would attract less attention. They arrived at Platform 9 ¾ immediately after they fell through the wall.
"That.wasn't so bad," the girl told Harry and Ron. "My name's Jen," she told them
"I'm Harry, and this is Ron," Harry said. Jen saw a girl with straight brownish blondish hair come up behind them. She held a finger to her lips, and Jen nodded.
"Hi guys!" the girl said.
"Aaugh! Hermione!" the boys yelled at her. "Yeah, my name's Hermione," Hermione told her.
"I'm Jen," she said. Harry and Ron turned around to see their friend.
"Whoa, Hermione." they said in unison. And they had a right to be shocked. Hermione had begun to straighten her hair, and had gotten some blonde highlights put in it. She, as well as Harry and Ron, had grown a few inches taller over the summer, but she had also begun growing in some other * places *, and these changes were very apparent from the Muggle halter top and shorts she was wearing.
"You look." Ron said, filled with awe.
"You two don't look half bad yourselves," she said to the two awestruck boys. All three of them blushed.
"Well if it isn't the famous Potter, with his sidekicks the weasel and the Mudblood." Draco Malfoy had just come by with his two goons Crabbe and Goyle. Harry and Hermione grabbed the back of Ron' robes on instinct. "And who do we have here?" Draco asked, pointing to Jen. "Oh, you must be that new exchange student from America. I'm Draco Malfoy," Draco said.
"My name's Jen," she told him, looking up and down his tall, muscular figure. Draco smirked at this, and Jen looked up, embarrassed. "He's pretty damn sexy, if he didn't smirk all the time," Jen thought to herself.
"Wow, that new student, Jen?, she's pretty. Was she just checking me out now?" Draco asked himself. Harry decided to go onto the train now, to save a compartment for himself and his friends. When he started to go on the train, Ron, Hermione, and Jen followed in his lead. When they had all of their stuff packed away, Jen took her kitten out of its cage. "Oh, you're so cute, my little Lucifer," she murmured sweetly to her kitten. Hermione looked around the compartment, and asked Ron where Ginny was.
"Ginny? She's probably with Colin," Ron told her.
"Colin? Colin Creevey?" Harry asked. "What's she doing with him?"
"Don't you know? They started a Harry Potter fan club!" Ron teased him. "No, actually, they've been going out since like the middle of July. You've just been completely oblivious to everything this summer, mourning over Sirius." Harry gave Ron a deadly glare.
"I'll deal with you later," he muttered, so only Ron could hear him.
"Who's Ginny?" Jen asked.
"My little sister," Ron told her. "She's going to be in her 5th year this year."
"That reminds me," Hermione said. "Jen, how old are you?"
"I'm 16," she told her. "My birthday's in January."
"Great!" Harry said. "That means you're in our year!"
"What's so bad about that Draco Malfoy person?" Jen asked out of the blue.
"Malfoy? That slimy git? What isn't wrong with him?" Ron said loudly. "Why?"
"Uhm.." Jen started.
"It's pretty obvious, Ron," Hermione said. Ron and Harry looked at her in confusion.
"I'm that obvious?" Jen asked.
"Yeah, you pretty much are," Harry said, finally catching on. "I'd stay away from him if I were you. He's a Slytherin, and the worst one you could ever meet."
"No one answered my question yet!" Ron said, exasperated.
"She likes Malfoy, Ron," Hermione said, with a sigh.
"Who likes me?" Draco had just opened the door to their compartment. "Oh," he said, seeing Jen blush. "You do. Isn't your name Jen?" he asked her. Jen nodded. "It's nice to know I already have fans for this year," Draco said, and with a smirk, he shut the door.
"Why that arrogant little ---," Jen started to say. She sighed. "I guess you guys were right." Jen turned to look out the window. "Hmm..," she thought to herself. "Harry's not bad looking at all! And I'm pretty sure he likes me as well. He's not Draco, but then again no one is. I guess I'll have to see where I can take this," she finished with a smile. While she looked out the window, Harry was staring at her, with a dreamy look on his face. Ron caught this, and chuckled.
"What's so funny, Ron?" Hermione asked him. Ron whispered into her ear, and Hermione followed Harry's gaze to Jen. "Now I have some dirt on him for later," Ron thought with an evil grin on his face.
"Wow! Is that Hogwarts?" Jen asked, seeing a huge looming castle in the distance.
"Home sweet home," Harry said, finally coming out of his "trance". A few minutes later, they arrived at the castle. When the four of them had gotten off the train, a giant shadow started moving in their direction. When Jen looked up to see what it was, she screamed.