A/N: Hey it's me again! So I read all the reviews so far and most of you
liked the story? Although some of you didn't like it I'll continue with the
story because I think the story might have potential.
To tell you the truth I don't know where the story is going. I have no plot; no ending and I don't know the story at all. But I know the characters and I believe they will lead me to where the story should go. I know where I want the characters to go in the story.
Also if you didn't notice the characters are well... a little out of character. I made a few changes to the characters to better match what I would like them to do and be in the story.
So thank you for the reviews and on with the story...
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Chapter 2 The letters – Part one
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Harry stared at the letters a little longer while deciding which one to open first. He decided to open Cho's first. He thought that Hermione's would be good news, it always was! He took the letter from Cho off of the bed and sat down. He folded the letter open and looked over the familiar hand writing he had seen so many times before. He started to read.
Dear Harry, How are you? I haven't seen or heard of you in a long time and thought I'd write to say hi. I hope your summer has been as good as mine so far! I've had the best summer and I... met someone. Can you believe it?
I know this must be awkward for you to hear but I'm really in love with this guy... I hope you don't hate me because of it...
Anyhow I just wanted to congratulate you on being England's new seeker! You must be overjoyed. I don't know if you heard but I'm seeker for the Chudley cannons. They weren't my first choice but mom and dad said it would be best to get out there so another teen could see me... Maybe one day we'll play against each other again!
Well I've got to go. See you Harry Cho
Harry sat there perplexed. Cho had a boy friend. He never thought he'd see the day. On the other hand he also knew it was going to happen one day. He just never thought it would happen this soon. The more he thought of her with another guy the more jealous he became. Till now he thought he was over Cho and in love with Hermione but it turned out he was wrong!
Could it be that he, Harry still had feelings for Cho? Could it be that what he thought he felt for Hermione really just was friendship? And could it be that he now only got jealous because Cho wasn't his but someone else's?
Harry now had so many questions inside of him he thought he was going to explode. He got up from the bed stared back at the letter from Hermione. And walked out of the room. He didn't want to read it anymore. Not now.
Harry opened the front door and stepped outside into the now pitch black night. He walked and walked not really noticing where he was going. His feet guided him once more, like they did in his fifth year, to the park where he often sat.
Harry reached the park and sat on the swing he always sat in. the park as usual was deserted. Harry sat and looked around at the scene in front of him. The dark sky, the lake and of course the park. Harry thought of what he read in Cho's letter and how he felt about her and Hermione. Was it possible that he loved neither of them?
Harry sat and sat and decided to go home. He went straight to bed and fell asleep unaware of what was going on at that very moment in Hermione's home. The terror of what was happening and the fear it all will bring to the life of a young woman and the family she may never know again.
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A/N: what's wrong at Hermione's home? Will she be ok? What will Harry decide to do? Also will Hermione survive?
Review thanks and answers:
Raisinnutbread: hope you like this chapter as well.
Goldfish r yummy: hope you like it!
hawk82 (Billy): hope you still like it.
LiLbRiT23: I don't even know where to start on your review... I know JK didn't say Harry and Hermione are in love and I know Draco is evil but if you would notice my story is only loosely based on JK's story. "Also, every one knows Cho and Harry are over and she would never send him a letter begging for Harry to protest his love for her and then he doesn't. So she gets mad attacks Hermione and she becomes the damsel in distress. And Harry becomes the big HERO!" I don't know if you noticed but that did not happen! Cho did not tell him she's in love with him. She's in love with someone ells.
JWD: I know the line is over used but English is not my first language and not my best subject. Please if you have a way to make a chapter better, feel free to help me.
Starlight Night1: thanks for saying you like the story. I know most people don't like the pairing but in my story Harry and Hermione aren't the same as in the books. I added and took away some of their personality traits I didn't like.
Hope I didn't miss any one! And if I did I'm sorry!
To tell you the truth I don't know where the story is going. I have no plot; no ending and I don't know the story at all. But I know the characters and I believe they will lead me to where the story should go. I know where I want the characters to go in the story.
Also if you didn't notice the characters are well... a little out of character. I made a few changes to the characters to better match what I would like them to do and be in the story.
So thank you for the reviews and on with the story...
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Chapter 2 The letters – Part one
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Harry stared at the letters a little longer while deciding which one to open first. He decided to open Cho's first. He thought that Hermione's would be good news, it always was! He took the letter from Cho off of the bed and sat down. He folded the letter open and looked over the familiar hand writing he had seen so many times before. He started to read.
Dear Harry, How are you? I haven't seen or heard of you in a long time and thought I'd write to say hi. I hope your summer has been as good as mine so far! I've had the best summer and I... met someone. Can you believe it?
I know this must be awkward for you to hear but I'm really in love with this guy... I hope you don't hate me because of it...
Anyhow I just wanted to congratulate you on being England's new seeker! You must be overjoyed. I don't know if you heard but I'm seeker for the Chudley cannons. They weren't my first choice but mom and dad said it would be best to get out there so another teen could see me... Maybe one day we'll play against each other again!
Well I've got to go. See you Harry Cho
Harry sat there perplexed. Cho had a boy friend. He never thought he'd see the day. On the other hand he also knew it was going to happen one day. He just never thought it would happen this soon. The more he thought of her with another guy the more jealous he became. Till now he thought he was over Cho and in love with Hermione but it turned out he was wrong!
Could it be that he, Harry still had feelings for Cho? Could it be that what he thought he felt for Hermione really just was friendship? And could it be that he now only got jealous because Cho wasn't his but someone else's?
Harry now had so many questions inside of him he thought he was going to explode. He got up from the bed stared back at the letter from Hermione. And walked out of the room. He didn't want to read it anymore. Not now.
Harry opened the front door and stepped outside into the now pitch black night. He walked and walked not really noticing where he was going. His feet guided him once more, like they did in his fifth year, to the park where he often sat.
Harry reached the park and sat on the swing he always sat in. the park as usual was deserted. Harry sat and looked around at the scene in front of him. The dark sky, the lake and of course the park. Harry thought of what he read in Cho's letter and how he felt about her and Hermione. Was it possible that he loved neither of them?
Harry sat and sat and decided to go home. He went straight to bed and fell asleep unaware of what was going on at that very moment in Hermione's home. The terror of what was happening and the fear it all will bring to the life of a young woman and the family she may never know again.
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A/N: what's wrong at Hermione's home? Will she be ok? What will Harry decide to do? Also will Hermione survive?
Review thanks and answers:
Raisinnutbread: hope you like this chapter as well.
Goldfish r yummy: hope you like it!
hawk82 (Billy): hope you still like it.
LiLbRiT23: I don't even know where to start on your review... I know JK didn't say Harry and Hermione are in love and I know Draco is evil but if you would notice my story is only loosely based on JK's story. "Also, every one knows Cho and Harry are over and she would never send him a letter begging for Harry to protest his love for her and then he doesn't. So she gets mad attacks Hermione and she becomes the damsel in distress. And Harry becomes the big HERO!" I don't know if you noticed but that did not happen! Cho did not tell him she's in love with him. She's in love with someone ells.
JWD: I know the line is over used but English is not my first language and not my best subject. Please if you have a way to make a chapter better, feel free to help me.
Starlight Night1: thanks for saying you like the story. I know most people don't like the pairing but in my story Harry and Hermione aren't the same as in the books. I added and took away some of their personality traits I didn't like.
Hope I didn't miss any one! And if I did I'm sorry!