Reviewer, starts with a V (sorry, can't remember and not online right now):
I never said Nala was dead, only that she was falling. But she might be
dead, she might not. I don't know ;-D
WARNING: Adult language is used. Thanks. Not going to change the rating, I gave you a fair warning =D. 3 Review please!
Fetaya looked over at her mother, Mashen. Whenever she looked she could see her mother looking at her, at her stomach, specifically. 'I hate Scar, I hate Scar, I hate Scar!' she thought. The young lioness focused her attention ahead, not at the countless lionesses watching her with worried eyes. She just continued climbing the side of Pride Rock.
"Where are the hyenas?" whispered Simba to his mother. "Shouldn't they be here?" Sarabi glanced over her shoulder quickly.
"Maybe they went back to the elephant graveyard. There's probably more food there then here," she whispered back, glancing over to Fetaya, making sure she was alright. Her eyes were focused ahead, her ears pinned back, maybe to ignore the attention she was getting from some of the lionesses.
"Shush, everyone, get down," hissed Simba, looking at Scar. There was no way to get passed him but to fight. But if he succeeded, he would be deemed King, a title that he didn't want. "I'm going to have to fight," he said lowly.
"Just do what you have to," said Sarabi. She was no longer thinking of him becoming king, only of Nala's well being. Simba crouched low, his body tense and in an almost-like hunting mode. His ears twitched forward, and he could smell Scar, watching him with a careful eye. "Go, go!" she urged.
Simba lept forward with great speed, knocking Scar to the ground. "What? Mufasa!" he cried out, backing up.
"No, Scar, try again," he growled, taking a step forward everyone he
took back.
"I, uh, Siiimmmmbbaa," he hissed, looking out toward the very few hyenas left, the trio included. "I thought you were dead," he said, his voice low. He shot deadly looks toward the hyenas. The lionesses came out onto the ledge, just as Zira came out of the den, newborn Nuka in her mouth. She dropped him on the ground.
"Simba?" she spat. "Scar," she said, abandoning the cub on a rock for a moment as she trotted over to Scar. "You told me he was DEAD," she whispered, looking back at Nuka.
Scar ignored her completely, watching the lionesses appear. "Fetaya, your stomach is larger." He smirked at her, his eyes taunting. Fetaya's face turned angry as she stepped forward beside Simba.
"We want Nala, and we know you have her. Give her to us," Simba said powerfully, his creamy underside still low to the ground, ready to pounce at any second.
"I don't have Nala," he spat back. Simba roared, a warning for him not to lie. Scar turned, ready to go have a visit with Zira.
"Don't turn your back to me!" roared Simba. Scar instantly flashed back quickly to when Mufasa had said that to him. The stupid, ignorant bastard. Didn't even know how much he had hated him until right before he killed him.
Scar stopped, turning his head toward him for a brief moment. "I am king, and I can do as I please," he said, continuing walking. Something in his mind snapped, and he lunged at Scar with all of his weight, knocking him down dangerously close to the edge. He walked over, pressing his paw on his stomach, ready to push him off.
He suddenly stopped, and drew himself back. "Now that I have proved that I could have killed you, I," he couldn't believe he was going to say this, "I now believe I am the king."
"You know what the rules say," Scar said getting up, "that it would be a battle to the DEATH!" Scar lunged and landed squarely on the back and started ripping at him. The lionesses roared in anger as they swarmed to get Scar off. More hyenas appeared, far to many, maybe none had left after all. It was all they could do to hold back the hyenas, so Simba was on his own.
Nala awoke and rolled over onto her stomach. Leaves were stuck to her, and as she pulled them off, realized they were stuck to her fur and her blood. She winced as she tore off the leaves one by one, licking the raw, bloody spots they left behind. On examination, she realized she had landed on rocks. She looked up Pride Rock to see if she could tell where she had fallen. Yes, there it was, and she realized she was lucky to be alive from that great of heights, on top of the rocks. She tenderly licked the spots, and then lifted herself, painfully, up to her paws. She started walking to Rafiki's tree, for help with the pain.
Simba roared loudly as Scar landed on his back, the pain of his claws surged through him. Simba roared again, jumping and bucking so that Scar fell off. Scar fell, and then it was Simba's turn to jump on him, and he did so. He lept, clawing at his back, ripping at his ear. He suddenly tasted blood and spit. Part of Scar's ear. He continued to claw, slashing neat straight rows of marks. Scar flipped over onto his back, and Simba jumped, then leaped on his stomach, biting hard. Scar roared loudly, and flipped him over with his back paws, tossing him into a rock.
The lionesses stopped fighting, as the hyenas did, to watch Simba and Scar. Simba got up hurridly, biting at Scar's neck. "NOOOOO!" cried out Zira, running over to Simba, swiping at him. He backed away from her. "Scar, Scar," she pleaded, nuzzeling him.
"My Queen," he said softly, raising his head. Simba roared at Zira, and she backed away, picking up Nuka. "Simba, have pity on me," he said softly.
"I am," he said strongly. "You're now exiled from the Pride Lands, for LIFE," he roared, as the lionesses joined in. "You and ALL of you followers are BANNED." He directed that toward Zira. "Mom, Sarafina," he said, turning to them, "Go find Nala." He ushered them away. "The rest of you, escort them to the outlands." All the while, he was wondering about Nala.
AN: Yes, they still became outlanders!! But Scar is still alive! Next chapter will be my last chapter, I think. Or second to last. Maybe. Eh. Then I will start a new fan fiction story for the Lion King! If you have an idea for a story, you can include it in a review. I have a couple ideas I might do... but not sure
I wanted to do Sarabi's childhood but about 3 stories are doing that right now so that isn't going to work lol.
Please review! XOXOXOXOXO =D Alyssa =D hehehe
WARNING: Adult language is used. Thanks. Not going to change the rating, I gave you a fair warning =D. 3 Review please!
Fetaya looked over at her mother, Mashen. Whenever she looked she could see her mother looking at her, at her stomach, specifically. 'I hate Scar, I hate Scar, I hate Scar!' she thought. The young lioness focused her attention ahead, not at the countless lionesses watching her with worried eyes. She just continued climbing the side of Pride Rock.
"Where are the hyenas?" whispered Simba to his mother. "Shouldn't they be here?" Sarabi glanced over her shoulder quickly.
"Maybe they went back to the elephant graveyard. There's probably more food there then here," she whispered back, glancing over to Fetaya, making sure she was alright. Her eyes were focused ahead, her ears pinned back, maybe to ignore the attention she was getting from some of the lionesses.
"Shush, everyone, get down," hissed Simba, looking at Scar. There was no way to get passed him but to fight. But if he succeeded, he would be deemed King, a title that he didn't want. "I'm going to have to fight," he said lowly.
"Just do what you have to," said Sarabi. She was no longer thinking of him becoming king, only of Nala's well being. Simba crouched low, his body tense and in an almost-like hunting mode. His ears twitched forward, and he could smell Scar, watching him with a careful eye. "Go, go!" she urged.
Simba lept forward with great speed, knocking Scar to the ground. "What? Mufasa!" he cried out, backing up.
"No, Scar, try again," he growled, taking a step forward everyone he
took back.
"I, uh, Siiimmmmbbaa," he hissed, looking out toward the very few hyenas left, the trio included. "I thought you were dead," he said, his voice low. He shot deadly looks toward the hyenas. The lionesses came out onto the ledge, just as Zira came out of the den, newborn Nuka in her mouth. She dropped him on the ground.
"Simba?" she spat. "Scar," she said, abandoning the cub on a rock for a moment as she trotted over to Scar. "You told me he was DEAD," she whispered, looking back at Nuka.
Scar ignored her completely, watching the lionesses appear. "Fetaya, your stomach is larger." He smirked at her, his eyes taunting. Fetaya's face turned angry as she stepped forward beside Simba.
"We want Nala, and we know you have her. Give her to us," Simba said powerfully, his creamy underside still low to the ground, ready to pounce at any second.
"I don't have Nala," he spat back. Simba roared, a warning for him not to lie. Scar turned, ready to go have a visit with Zira.
"Don't turn your back to me!" roared Simba. Scar instantly flashed back quickly to when Mufasa had said that to him. The stupid, ignorant bastard. Didn't even know how much he had hated him until right before he killed him.
Scar stopped, turning his head toward him for a brief moment. "I am king, and I can do as I please," he said, continuing walking. Something in his mind snapped, and he lunged at Scar with all of his weight, knocking him down dangerously close to the edge. He walked over, pressing his paw on his stomach, ready to push him off.
He suddenly stopped, and drew himself back. "Now that I have proved that I could have killed you, I," he couldn't believe he was going to say this, "I now believe I am the king."
"You know what the rules say," Scar said getting up, "that it would be a battle to the DEATH!" Scar lunged and landed squarely on the back and started ripping at him. The lionesses roared in anger as they swarmed to get Scar off. More hyenas appeared, far to many, maybe none had left after all. It was all they could do to hold back the hyenas, so Simba was on his own.
Nala awoke and rolled over onto her stomach. Leaves were stuck to her, and as she pulled them off, realized they were stuck to her fur and her blood. She winced as she tore off the leaves one by one, licking the raw, bloody spots they left behind. On examination, she realized she had landed on rocks. She looked up Pride Rock to see if she could tell where she had fallen. Yes, there it was, and she realized she was lucky to be alive from that great of heights, on top of the rocks. She tenderly licked the spots, and then lifted herself, painfully, up to her paws. She started walking to Rafiki's tree, for help with the pain.
Simba roared loudly as Scar landed on his back, the pain of his claws surged through him. Simba roared again, jumping and bucking so that Scar fell off. Scar fell, and then it was Simba's turn to jump on him, and he did so. He lept, clawing at his back, ripping at his ear. He suddenly tasted blood and spit. Part of Scar's ear. He continued to claw, slashing neat straight rows of marks. Scar flipped over onto his back, and Simba jumped, then leaped on his stomach, biting hard. Scar roared loudly, and flipped him over with his back paws, tossing him into a rock.
The lionesses stopped fighting, as the hyenas did, to watch Simba and Scar. Simba got up hurridly, biting at Scar's neck. "NOOOOO!" cried out Zira, running over to Simba, swiping at him. He backed away from her. "Scar, Scar," she pleaded, nuzzeling him.
"My Queen," he said softly, raising his head. Simba roared at Zira, and she backed away, picking up Nuka. "Simba, have pity on me," he said softly.
"I am," he said strongly. "You're now exiled from the Pride Lands, for LIFE," he roared, as the lionesses joined in. "You and ALL of you followers are BANNED." He directed that toward Zira. "Mom, Sarafina," he said, turning to them, "Go find Nala." He ushered them away. "The rest of you, escort them to the outlands." All the while, he was wondering about Nala.
AN: Yes, they still became outlanders!! But Scar is still alive! Next chapter will be my last chapter, I think. Or second to last. Maybe. Eh. Then I will start a new fan fiction story for the Lion King! If you have an idea for a story, you can include it in a review. I have a couple ideas I might do... but not sure
I wanted to do Sarabi's childhood but about 3 stories are doing that right now so that isn't going to work lol.
Please review! XOXOXOXOXO =D Alyssa =D hehehe