Felicia: I finally updated this! What a miracle, huh? Anyway, if you'd like
to see more of Itachi you can read my fics That's Forbidden which has
Itachi and Gaara basically fighting over Naruto (it's an AU fic too),
Strings Flame, and Developing Feelings (More Uchihacest). Uh, yeah......... I
guess I'll reply to the reviews now.........
(look for the line of ! to know when the replying to reviews is over ;; Sorry they took up so much space!)
gamegirl28: thankies hands you Kit plushie since you left such a nice review
sTaR SNipEr: snatches Itachi and huggles him thankies hands you Naruto wearing a orange mini skirt and dark blue tank top that shows off his stomach
Crimson Fears: Yes, I am continuing this.... And I love uke Sasuke too! huggles uke Sasuke
Kerushi03: glomps you for no real reason Yes, yes, continuing this I am......... and maybe I'll draw a pic for it......... do you think I should? Or maybe I can make you draw a pic for it pokes you with a stick
Lady Adako: I read Forbidden too and I loved it Though I did already have my idea for this fic before that and all. Anyway, you won't see exactly what happens after Itachi kisses Sasuke...... at least not in this chapter anyway.
Spark-gurl: hands you chibi-bunny Hiei thankies for the review
Monophobia: At least someone thinks I kept them in character...... thanks.
Callisto Firestarter: Thanks pets Sasuke also
Nikki3: blinks What now? I think it's just you cause I'm not really sure what you're talking about...... anyway, thanks for the review.
YK: I wanna see more Itachi/Sasuke and Inu/Sess too! Oh and thank you for the review.
WuffieLuver: I'm glad you liked it.. Oh and my yahoo groups were deleted.. So make sure you rejoin them and stuff. The links can be found on my website in the Links section.
Nyrgoalie: You assume wrong, I haven't read the manga where Itachi is in it since I haven't been able to find it. Also, I never exactly said when this fic was set...... And you can assume whatever you want to about how Itachi feels about Sasuke, but that doesn't mean I think the same (obviously). Oh and if you don't like incest, why'd you read this fic? Were you just looking for something to look down on and criticize? Thank you for at least thinking I'm a pretty good writer and I don't really see anything wrong with my plot. I guess I just look at Itachi and Sasuke's relationship in a different light then you. (I've read the manga with Itachi in it since I wrote this, just so you know. I wouldn't of written it any differently most likely though).
Gelfling: I know Sasuke is a bit out of character for normal situations.. but his brother showing up like that isn't exactly normal and all......... Oh and I'm glad you recognized the song lyrics And yes, it will be angsty and stuffs, and knowing me, I'll throw some comedy in somehow too.
Spencerblaze: Cute? Hm.. I guess it was! And you get more then one paragraph too! Hell, you even get more then one chapter!
Emily: sigh yes, out of character, I know, but you have to think about what Sasuke would be like in that kind of situation since it isn't exactly normal and as for Itachi, I only know what I've read about him and such.
Canelle: I love Itachi and Itachi/Sasuke too! And there does need to be more of it!
Waya: I thought your review was a flame for a minute.. anyway, I'm glad I made you like Itachi more! huggles Itachi he's definitely one of my favorite characters.
Wide Eyed-Wacko: I'm glad my fic amused you And here puts up I lUV INCEST banners just for the hell of it
rachiru-rebonu: Yes, I know it was missing closure before, which is why I was planning on continuing it the whole time basically
Joce: I didn't exactly continue it soon.. but I did continue it!
firedraygon97: I have no problems with incest either...... at least fiction wise for the most part anyway..... Uh.. Yeah.. Thank you for the review.
Chiisai Neko: Sasuke's fighting was rather useless...... and that will probably happen some more too...... though I'm not really sure about that yet......
MaidenInTheMoon: She has? blinks I see...... Oh well though, all the nice reviews made me feel better and such.. anyway, thanks for the review.
KyleHeiner: I'm adding more Hope you like it.
Amanda: I'm glad you loved it so much Oh and I'm updating, I'm updating!
KMM Team PADFOOT: Lemon? Hm..... maybe..... just maybe...... I guess you'll just have to wait and see.
Arotsu Uchiha: I liked that part too...... Thankies for the review
Yuki-chan2: I'm glad you liked my fic and yes fangirl scream they are two of the most coolest bishies in Naruto..... Gaara too!
Stuntcat: Wheee! I get hearts and smiley faces! I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the compliments. huggles the hearts and smiley faces then tortures random dark characters with them
Uchiha Kin: Lemon? Well.. Maybe... just maybe...
C h i b i O r o c h i m a r u: I'm glad you like the plot Hopefully I won't make the plot end up stupid or anything...
Zenegami: Well.. I'm not really sure how that could have been a songfic if I hadn't of used the whole song... and I portrayed Itachi like that because that's how he needed to be for this fic. And yes, I'm sure it was beta read. It was beta read by sTaR SNiPeR so if you have a problem with how it was beta read, take it up with her.
PinkyLemon: Thanks I'm continuing it! As you can see.
Macchichan: Good reasons for me to continue Thankies.
pingu: Thank you I'm continuing now so don't worry!
kaiswings: I am, sorry it took so long ;;
Chesiere Cat: I am ; no need to beg ;;;
crystal: I will and thanks
Momo-kun-chan: It isn't a one shot, don't worry!
ithilfea: I'm glad you did
Ice Puppet: I am
aNiMePeRfEcT: I know I know ;;
PL: You're getting more, don't worry
Nobody: I didn't mean for anyone to take it as me getting bribed to continue ;; I just never expected so many reviews like this at all and such ;; and I was hoping to buy sometime with that also.. ;;;;
BloodMistress: Another one begs.. ;; Thanks.
Toki Mirage: Eep falls over I'm glad you liked it so much ;;
xXFissshBonesssXx: I don't think any of my stories are really good though.. shrugs And like I said to 'Nobody' I never expect so many reviews, and I was trying to buy myself some time with it because I figured with my laziness it would take me awhile to update.
Super Yam: Longer..? Er.. I only make things as long as I feel is right..
freakshow3227: Thanks -
All the reviewers: There were 53 reviews? I didn't think it'd get so many for this entire fic after it was done faints (sorry, again, I took up so much space with that.. I just felt it was important to thank all of the reviewers since I've made you all wait sooo long ;;)
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Things used in this fic:
"Speech"
'Thoughts'
Chapter Two: Was it a Dream?
A form moved in the darkness of the early night, trying to stand up. The form eventually succeeded, though it had to support it's weight against a near by tree. Dark eyes and hair became visible as a cloud move out from in front of the moon, casting some light on the form.
'What the hell..? Was it...... all a dream?' The form thought then lightly touched his fingertips to his lips. "Why would I dream something like that though?" The form muttered to himself while trying to walk away from the tree.
It became apparent who the form was, once he was out into the open and away from the shadows the trees cast. Sasuke, the form, stumbled slightly at first before falling into a slow pace, heading towards his house.
Almost two hours later, Sasuke arrived at his house, almost falling through the door and barely keep himself up by grabbing onto the doorknob. Sasuke barely made it to his bed before he collapsed onto it, falling asleep almost immediately.
When dawn finally broke, the sunlight threatened to wake the young Uchiha, so he just rolled over, still half asleep and tightly pulled the covers around his body. Sasuke eventually fell back into a light sleep, covered by a thing blanket of heat, which was provided by the sun streaming in through his bedroom window. The dark haired boy slept peacefully until around noon...
... That's when two voices could be heard.
"Why is Sasuke-kun's door left opened like this?" A voice, obviously belonging to a girl, asks.
"Maybe there's a burglar or something inside." Another voice says, this one sounding like it belongs to a boy.
"Don't say such things!" The girl voice yells before the sound of something... or someone getting hit was heard.
"Oww! I was only joking!" The other voice kind of whines out.
"I don't care! It's wrong to even joke about things like that! Sasuke-kun could be hurt or something!"
The argument continues on, reaching a rather loud volume, which causes the young Uchiha in the bedroom to stir slightly. A mumble of something non- understandable is heard before he covers his head with a pillow, trying to fall back into a complete sleep.
(Felicia: Just so you all know, the above was written awhile ago... quite awhile ago... at least half of a year. So, if the writing style is different or anything.. I doubt it is though.. that is probably the reason why.)
Unfortunately, sleep escapes the dark haired youth thanks to the insistent arguing of the two. Just as he sat up in bed, grumbling under his breath, the door to his bedroom is opened up and in walks a familiar blonde haired boy and pink haired girl.
"Oh! Sasuke-kun! Were you asleep?" The pink haired girl asks then blinks. "I'm sorry if we woke you up," She says, without waiting for a reply, "But we were really worried about you since you never showed up for today's training"
Sasuke didn't actually register what was said by Sakura, in a slight daze still from not receiving enough sleep. Although he might not have noticed it when the one with pink hair spoke.. when the one with blonde hair just opened his mouth to speak, the Uchiha didn't even let the chance for something to come out of it happen as he picked up his pillow and then threw it at him, nailing him right on the head.
The blonde shinobi reeled back slightly in surprise then steady himself and glared at Sasuke. "What the hell was tha-"Before he could even finish his question, Sakura nailed him over the head.
"Leave Sasuke-kun alone! He's obviously sick or something and needs rest!" She said, sure of herself. Turning her head towards Sasuke, she smiled at him. "I'll drop back by again later tonight to see how you're doing." The female shinobi then proceeded to drag the blonde from the house who voiced his complaints rather loudly the whole way.
This left the Uchiha just starring after the two. Once he had heard the front door shut, he sighed in relief. He then grumbled a bit before sliding off of the bed and going over to where his pillow had landed. As he picked it up, he decided he most likely wouldn't be able to get back to sleep now and decided to go and take a shower. Hopefully, that would help him wake up.
Felicia: First of all.. I know.. that WAS a SUCKY chapter. I am sorry ; I promise to try and do better next time.. and I also promise to try and make it a lot longer also. Now.. Voting time! Should there be a lemon in this fic? And if so, who should it be between? Should it be consensual? Oh, and are there any requests for other pairings?
(Oh, and yes.. I am VERY VERY VERY SORRY that it took me so long to update. I'll try to never let this happen again.. though it still might since I also have to worry about catching up with all of my other fics also).
(look for the line of ! to know when the replying to reviews is over ;; Sorry they took up so much space!)
gamegirl28: thankies hands you Kit plushie since you left such a nice review
sTaR SNipEr: snatches Itachi and huggles him thankies hands you Naruto wearing a orange mini skirt and dark blue tank top that shows off his stomach
Crimson Fears: Yes, I am continuing this.... And I love uke Sasuke too! huggles uke Sasuke
Kerushi03: glomps you for no real reason Yes, yes, continuing this I am......... and maybe I'll draw a pic for it......... do you think I should? Or maybe I can make you draw a pic for it pokes you with a stick
Lady Adako: I read Forbidden too and I loved it Though I did already have my idea for this fic before that and all. Anyway, you won't see exactly what happens after Itachi kisses Sasuke...... at least not in this chapter anyway.
Spark-gurl: hands you chibi-bunny Hiei thankies for the review
Monophobia: At least someone thinks I kept them in character...... thanks.
Callisto Firestarter: Thanks pets Sasuke also
Nikki3: blinks What now? I think it's just you cause I'm not really sure what you're talking about...... anyway, thanks for the review.
YK: I wanna see more Itachi/Sasuke and Inu/Sess too! Oh and thank you for the review.
WuffieLuver: I'm glad you liked it.. Oh and my yahoo groups were deleted.. So make sure you rejoin them and stuff. The links can be found on my website in the Links section.
Nyrgoalie: You assume wrong, I haven't read the manga where Itachi is in it since I haven't been able to find it. Also, I never exactly said when this fic was set...... And you can assume whatever you want to about how Itachi feels about Sasuke, but that doesn't mean I think the same (obviously). Oh and if you don't like incest, why'd you read this fic? Were you just looking for something to look down on and criticize? Thank you for at least thinking I'm a pretty good writer and I don't really see anything wrong with my plot. I guess I just look at Itachi and Sasuke's relationship in a different light then you. (I've read the manga with Itachi in it since I wrote this, just so you know. I wouldn't of written it any differently most likely though).
Gelfling: I know Sasuke is a bit out of character for normal situations.. but his brother showing up like that isn't exactly normal and all......... Oh and I'm glad you recognized the song lyrics And yes, it will be angsty and stuffs, and knowing me, I'll throw some comedy in somehow too.
Spencerblaze: Cute? Hm.. I guess it was! And you get more then one paragraph too! Hell, you even get more then one chapter!
Emily: sigh yes, out of character, I know, but you have to think about what Sasuke would be like in that kind of situation since it isn't exactly normal and as for Itachi, I only know what I've read about him and such.
Canelle: I love Itachi and Itachi/Sasuke too! And there does need to be more of it!
Waya: I thought your review was a flame for a minute.. anyway, I'm glad I made you like Itachi more! huggles Itachi he's definitely one of my favorite characters.
Wide Eyed-Wacko: I'm glad my fic amused you And here puts up I lUV INCEST banners just for the hell of it
rachiru-rebonu: Yes, I know it was missing closure before, which is why I was planning on continuing it the whole time basically
Joce: I didn't exactly continue it soon.. but I did continue it!
firedraygon97: I have no problems with incest either...... at least fiction wise for the most part anyway..... Uh.. Yeah.. Thank you for the review.
Chiisai Neko: Sasuke's fighting was rather useless...... and that will probably happen some more too...... though I'm not really sure about that yet......
MaidenInTheMoon: She has? blinks I see...... Oh well though, all the nice reviews made me feel better and such.. anyway, thanks for the review.
KyleHeiner: I'm adding more Hope you like it.
Amanda: I'm glad you loved it so much Oh and I'm updating, I'm updating!
KMM Team PADFOOT: Lemon? Hm..... maybe..... just maybe...... I guess you'll just have to wait and see.
Arotsu Uchiha: I liked that part too...... Thankies for the review
Yuki-chan2: I'm glad you liked my fic and yes fangirl scream they are two of the most coolest bishies in Naruto..... Gaara too!
Stuntcat: Wheee! I get hearts and smiley faces! I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the compliments. huggles the hearts and smiley faces then tortures random dark characters with them
Uchiha Kin: Lemon? Well.. Maybe... just maybe...
C h i b i O r o c h i m a r u: I'm glad you like the plot Hopefully I won't make the plot end up stupid or anything...
Zenegami: Well.. I'm not really sure how that could have been a songfic if I hadn't of used the whole song... and I portrayed Itachi like that because that's how he needed to be for this fic. And yes, I'm sure it was beta read. It was beta read by sTaR SNiPeR so if you have a problem with how it was beta read, take it up with her.
PinkyLemon: Thanks I'm continuing it! As you can see.
Macchichan: Good reasons for me to continue Thankies.
pingu: Thank you I'm continuing now so don't worry!
kaiswings: I am, sorry it took so long ;;
Chesiere Cat: I am ; no need to beg ;;;
crystal: I will and thanks
Momo-kun-chan: It isn't a one shot, don't worry!
ithilfea: I'm glad you did
Ice Puppet: I am
aNiMePeRfEcT: I know I know ;;
PL: You're getting more, don't worry
Nobody: I didn't mean for anyone to take it as me getting bribed to continue ;; I just never expected so many reviews like this at all and such ;; and I was hoping to buy sometime with that also.. ;;;;
BloodMistress: Another one begs.. ;; Thanks.
Toki Mirage: Eep falls over I'm glad you liked it so much ;;
xXFissshBonesssXx: I don't think any of my stories are really good though.. shrugs And like I said to 'Nobody' I never expect so many reviews, and I was trying to buy myself some time with it because I figured with my laziness it would take me awhile to update.
Super Yam: Longer..? Er.. I only make things as long as I feel is right..
freakshow3227: Thanks -
All the reviewers: There were 53 reviews? I didn't think it'd get so many for this entire fic after it was done faints (sorry, again, I took up so much space with that.. I just felt it was important to thank all of the reviewers since I've made you all wait sooo long ;;)
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Things used in this fic:
"Speech"
'Thoughts'
Chapter Two: Was it a Dream?
A form moved in the darkness of the early night, trying to stand up. The form eventually succeeded, though it had to support it's weight against a near by tree. Dark eyes and hair became visible as a cloud move out from in front of the moon, casting some light on the form.
'What the hell..? Was it...... all a dream?' The form thought then lightly touched his fingertips to his lips. "Why would I dream something like that though?" The form muttered to himself while trying to walk away from the tree.
It became apparent who the form was, once he was out into the open and away from the shadows the trees cast. Sasuke, the form, stumbled slightly at first before falling into a slow pace, heading towards his house.
Almost two hours later, Sasuke arrived at his house, almost falling through the door and barely keep himself up by grabbing onto the doorknob. Sasuke barely made it to his bed before he collapsed onto it, falling asleep almost immediately.
When dawn finally broke, the sunlight threatened to wake the young Uchiha, so he just rolled over, still half asleep and tightly pulled the covers around his body. Sasuke eventually fell back into a light sleep, covered by a thing blanket of heat, which was provided by the sun streaming in through his bedroom window. The dark haired boy slept peacefully until around noon...
... That's when two voices could be heard.
"Why is Sasuke-kun's door left opened like this?" A voice, obviously belonging to a girl, asks.
"Maybe there's a burglar or something inside." Another voice says, this one sounding like it belongs to a boy.
"Don't say such things!" The girl voice yells before the sound of something... or someone getting hit was heard.
"Oww! I was only joking!" The other voice kind of whines out.
"I don't care! It's wrong to even joke about things like that! Sasuke-kun could be hurt or something!"
The argument continues on, reaching a rather loud volume, which causes the young Uchiha in the bedroom to stir slightly. A mumble of something non- understandable is heard before he covers his head with a pillow, trying to fall back into a complete sleep.
(Felicia: Just so you all know, the above was written awhile ago... quite awhile ago... at least half of a year. So, if the writing style is different or anything.. I doubt it is though.. that is probably the reason why.)
Unfortunately, sleep escapes the dark haired youth thanks to the insistent arguing of the two. Just as he sat up in bed, grumbling under his breath, the door to his bedroom is opened up and in walks a familiar blonde haired boy and pink haired girl.
"Oh! Sasuke-kun! Were you asleep?" The pink haired girl asks then blinks. "I'm sorry if we woke you up," She says, without waiting for a reply, "But we were really worried about you since you never showed up for today's training"
Sasuke didn't actually register what was said by Sakura, in a slight daze still from not receiving enough sleep. Although he might not have noticed it when the one with pink hair spoke.. when the one with blonde hair just opened his mouth to speak, the Uchiha didn't even let the chance for something to come out of it happen as he picked up his pillow and then threw it at him, nailing him right on the head.
The blonde shinobi reeled back slightly in surprise then steady himself and glared at Sasuke. "What the hell was tha-"Before he could even finish his question, Sakura nailed him over the head.
"Leave Sasuke-kun alone! He's obviously sick or something and needs rest!" She said, sure of herself. Turning her head towards Sasuke, she smiled at him. "I'll drop back by again later tonight to see how you're doing." The female shinobi then proceeded to drag the blonde from the house who voiced his complaints rather loudly the whole way.
This left the Uchiha just starring after the two. Once he had heard the front door shut, he sighed in relief. He then grumbled a bit before sliding off of the bed and going over to where his pillow had landed. As he picked it up, he decided he most likely wouldn't be able to get back to sleep now and decided to go and take a shower. Hopefully, that would help him wake up.
Felicia: First of all.. I know.. that WAS a SUCKY chapter. I am sorry ; I promise to try and do better next time.. and I also promise to try and make it a lot longer also. Now.. Voting time! Should there be a lemon in this fic? And if so, who should it be between? Should it be consensual? Oh, and are there any requests for other pairings?
(Oh, and yes.. I am VERY VERY VERY SORRY that it took me so long to update. I'll try to never let this happen again.. though it still might since I also have to worry about catching up with all of my other fics also).