Cinnamon Buns: Epilogue
I have replies to my reviews today!
JayInfinity- Yeah! First review, always greatful for that! Yes, my dialogue can be confusing to some people. (This is one of my first stories I wrote, for another website) I have to say I like it this way a bit better. If you're wondering how I start and complete a paragraph it's each idea gets a paragraph. Yes. Samara is the girl from the Ring. I wrote this BEFORE the movie came out. Also, please don't kill Jaymii. ;
MoonKitty15- Yes, as you saw in the last chapter, Odette and Darien are sister and brother. I updated!!!!
Goddess of the Shadows- I'm very glad you're looking forward to well, this chapter. Don't worry, I actually have a sequal to the story I'm working on at the moment! Then I'm going to have another one for that. Sound good? I don't get the thing about not liking the description. Do you mean the summary? If you have any suggestion let me know. This is the summary I've been using for the story for over a year on different websites.
It had been a year since Odette had left. Bunny and Darien had just got around to having the date that Odette had played messenger for. "I'm glad we decided to do this on the anniversary of Odette leaving." Bunny said happily, "It just makes it even more special. "She was a really cute kid." Darien said looking up into the sky, "I really wish she had decided to stay with me. "We all wish that she did." Bunny replied.
A waitress came and took their orders. Bunny ordered a double cheeseburger and a coke. Darien ordered a salad, grilled cheese and milk. The waitress left. "Do you know how much that's going to be?" Bunny asked Darien. "I guess around ten dollars with a tip." He replied.
Bunny took out the little golden box. "Give me ten dollars." She commanded. A ten-dollar bill slid out of the slot. "You still use that?" Darien asked. "Of course!" Bunny replied, "It gives me as much money as I'd ever want, plus other things. Do you still have the rose?" "Yeah." Darien replied, "It's in my room. It just floats above my bedside table. I never have to give it water or anything." "That's neat." Bunny said.
"Do you realize that Odette gave us her only possessions?" she asked. "Yes." Darien replied. "Mina and Lita have never taken off those pendants Odette gave them. Ray barely ever uses the great fire anymore, and Amy's on that computer every second of the day!" Darien chuckled. "And you use that box of yours to get money for the arcade." He said. "So what if it's true?" Bunny asked.
There was a flash in the sky and a piece of paper fluttered down towards Darien and Bunny. Darien caught it and read;
Dear Darien and Bunny,
I bet you're wondering why you're hearing from me a year
later. Well I decided that. I should let you know where
I went that day last year and what has happen. I went back
to the Silver Millennium to prevent Beryl and Metalia from
taking over the Earth and destroying the Moon. I tried to
follow you to the Moon after you left to protect Princess
Serenity but Beryl caught me. I'm currently in a Dark
Kingdom dungeon and will probably soon be killed. I just
wanted to let you know that I will die for a good cause and
there is no reason to mourn. I regret that I won't see you
when you two become the ruler of Crystal Tokyo.
Best Wishes,
Odette Rhea
"She's going to die." Darien whispered in a dead voice. "She said not to mourn her." Bunny said in the same dead voice, "We'd better tell the others what's happened in the past." "Later." Darien said, "This was date supposed to be a year ago. We'll remember Odette here." Bunny agreed. "She was a good kid." she said, "A good kid."
Sniff. So sad. ;; Well any way I hoped you liked the story! R&R! Thank you!