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"Talking"
'Thinking'
Different scene
Chapter 1 Blacked Out
So, your name is Sukumi Ayume your 13 years old and so are all the other genins, okay? Let's begin the story.
You were walking down the road to your school. Sigh "Another boring day at school...Aarrgghh! Why does life have to be so boring!? I'm like stuck in a time warp of boredom!" Just as you were rambling on about how boring your life was you were crossing a street just as a car was coming. But of course you didn't look to see if there was a car passing by or not before you crossed the street. The driver was on the phone having an argument and he wasn't watching either... The next thing you knew...Crash!!
'I wonder if she's okay.' Thought a certain person with blond hair. 'She looks a lot like Ayume.' (Okay I know this is confusing but it will become all clear later in the story.) Slowly your eyes opened. Your vision was blurry at first because a really big orange blob. But it all became clear after a few seconds. "Hey are you okay?" asked a blond kid. 'He looks pretty nice. And around my age too.' You thought about for the next 30 seconds. Then you saw a hand waving in front of your face.
"HELLO!! CAN YOU HEAR ME!! ARE YOU OKAY?" shouted the boy. "Yes I can hear you! I'm fine! Golly! What in the world do you think you're doing? Killing my ears?!" "Oh, sorry you weren't talking for a while so I thought you were deaf." "And how did you figure that out?" "Common sense?" Now that hit you. "Yea...sure good old common sense, what the heck was with that? Have you ever thought of it being "stupid sense"? Huh?" 'She's almost as freaky as Kakashi-sensei was when we did survival training!' Naruto shuddered at that thought. "Well?" you yelled dramatically. (You're crazy I know but you'll become sane later.)
"I'm so so so so sorry! But hey, don't you have any questions? Well then I'm gonna start you off. My name is Uzumaki Naruto." "Oh. Okay. Let's see, questions, questions, questions. Oh yea...There's been something that's been bugging me for a while." "Yea?" asked Naruto curiously. "Do you have anything to eat? My stomach has been killing like forever!" Naruto sweat dropped "Sure you want some ramen?" Your eyes lit up like little light bulbs."RAMEN?! Where?" you went up to Naruto and shook him like a jar of jelly beans."Wheres my RAMEN!!! Give me my RAMEN!!!" "I-i- it's that way" trembled Naruto, pointing towards the kitchen. Off you ran. "RAMEN! Here I come!" Naruto looks at you all funny. "I better go get Kakashi-sensei." said Naruto as he walked into the kitchen.
"Hey Naruto, where do you keep the ramen?" "Hold on just a sec." He went up to a cupboard , opened it and got out one of those instant ramen bowls, went over to the stove and put some water in it. "Here" he said as he handed it to you. "Well I got to go get someone. So bye!" but before you could say anything he ran out the door. "Okay." you said to no one in particular. You decided to go ahead and eat. "Itedakimas!" (I think) and you dug in. Your happy face turned into a big frown, and you spit the ramen right out. "Naruto! You big idiot! Put HOT water in here next time! Auurrghh! This better not be your common sense!
(Naruto's POV)
I was franticly looking for Kakashi-sensei. What if she really is Ayume? Even if old geezer Hokage said she was dead, Ayume wouldn't give up and die that easily. Especially against him. (End)
Suddenly Naruto accidentally bumped into Sasuke, knocking them both down. "Oi! Dobe watch where you're going!" yelled a very annoyed Sasuke. "Sorry Sasuke but I don't have time to bother with you. I think I found Ayume" said Naruto getting up. 'Ayume...' thought Sasuke brushing off what Naruto said. Naruto ran off. "Wait hold on!" called out Sasuke.
"Where are you going?"
"To get Kakashi-sensei."
"You gonna tell him about the girl?"
"Well of course! Baka! "
"Hn. Watch what you say."
Luckily they didn't have to run far. Kakashi was outside a restaurant reading his usual perverted book. "Kakashi-sensei!" Kakashi looked up from his book. He saw Naruto and Sasuke running towards him. "What do you want?" he asked lazily. "I was just getting to the good part." "Tch! Kakashi- sensei is a pervert!" "Naruto told me that he thinks that he's found Ayume." said Sasuke. Kakashi's expression changed for a mere second. "Are you sure?" "Yea! She looks exactly like Ayume. Well maybe a little older but still." "Well what do you think dobe it's been a year ever since the accident." "Did you ask for her name?" asked Kakashi. "Uh... well no." "You didn't even ask her what her name was?" questioned Sasuke. "Well I guess we should be heading for Naruto's place, huh?" When they got to Naruto's apartment they felt a weird sensation on the other side of the door. "Hey, guys do you feel that?" sputtered Naruto. "Yea it felt really weird. Kakashi do you think she in trouble?" "Who knows we'll just have to open the door to find out." replied Kakashi. Naruto's hand trembled on the doorknob as he slowly turned it.
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