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Rain fell on to the ground as thunder and lightning struck. The residents of Godrics Hollow, were used to this by now, after all it was the raining season. Lily Potter, was your typical girl next door. She had wavy, waist long red hair, and sparkling emerald green eyes. She sighed as she looked through the window. Her husband James Potter, was obviously was still working. He was an auror at the Ministry of Magic. Lily slowly looked up at the clock that said James Potter: Home. Lily then got up from bed wrapped the sheets around her and heard a faint pop in the room. She grinned happily, and waved. James Potter had very untidy black hair, hazel eyes, and was very muscular, but yet skinny. He had glasses that made him look even more of a total hunk. He saw his wife and grinned back. He dropped his bag, an came over and sat down on the bed.
He was greeted by a rather, sloppy wet kiss. Lily put her hands through his hair, and he put his hands on her neck. Neither wanted to end the kiss, but for the lack of oxygen he did. "Hello Lily Flower, how is my beautiful wife doing today?" he asked charmingly. "You still haven't lost the potter charm" said Lily and kissed him again. Before they knew what was happening, they were lost in each others emotions. Lily started to unbutton his shirt, and James did the same. Their shirts were both gone, but they kept on kissing each other, but both suddenly stopped.
They heard a faint pop somewhere. Lily tensed. Then out of nowhere Siruis appeared, making the couple both scream. He was a handsome man, with dark hair, and mesmorizing eyes. "Ohh....Lils and Jamsie are naughty.....ewww!" he said in a mock baby voice. Lily glared at Siruis and so did James. "You know, Siruis, you should consider getting a life." replied Lily still glaring. James gave Siruis a look of I'll-kill-you and Siruis quickly got the point. He disappeared with a faint pop and slowly the potters were once again in the act.
After the act, James was laying down with Lily on his chest, his fingers playing with her hair. Her redheaded hair was so soft, and yet sticky at the same time. James sighed and said, "That was incredible". Lily nodded and looked up. She could lose herself in his arms and eyes. He was so handsome, and seemed perfect. She replied with a loving kiss and said, "Yes it was". The couple started kissing, and yet later fell asleep on top of each other, still listening as the rain fell.
Read and review, or I'll come for you. This was my first fan-fic, so please no flames. I'd consider some helpful tips, from those great writers out there. I'll be updating soon.
Rain fell on to the ground as thunder and lightning struck. The residents of Godrics Hollow, were used to this by now, after all it was the raining season. Lily Potter, was your typical girl next door. She had wavy, waist long red hair, and sparkling emerald green eyes. She sighed as she looked through the window. Her husband James Potter, was obviously was still working. He was an auror at the Ministry of Magic. Lily slowly looked up at the clock that said James Potter: Home. Lily then got up from bed wrapped the sheets around her and heard a faint pop in the room. She grinned happily, and waved. James Potter had very untidy black hair, hazel eyes, and was very muscular, but yet skinny. He had glasses that made him look even more of a total hunk. He saw his wife and grinned back. He dropped his bag, an came over and sat down on the bed.
He was greeted by a rather, sloppy wet kiss. Lily put her hands through his hair, and he put his hands on her neck. Neither wanted to end the kiss, but for the lack of oxygen he did. "Hello Lily Flower, how is my beautiful wife doing today?" he asked charmingly. "You still haven't lost the potter charm" said Lily and kissed him again. Before they knew what was happening, they were lost in each others emotions. Lily started to unbutton his shirt, and James did the same. Their shirts were both gone, but they kept on kissing each other, but both suddenly stopped.
They heard a faint pop somewhere. Lily tensed. Then out of nowhere Siruis appeared, making the couple both scream. He was a handsome man, with dark hair, and mesmorizing eyes. "Ohh....Lils and Jamsie are naughty.....ewww!" he said in a mock baby voice. Lily glared at Siruis and so did James. "You know, Siruis, you should consider getting a life." replied Lily still glaring. James gave Siruis a look of I'll-kill-you and Siruis quickly got the point. He disappeared with a faint pop and slowly the potters were once again in the act.
After the act, James was laying down with Lily on his chest, his fingers playing with her hair. Her redheaded hair was so soft, and yet sticky at the same time. James sighed and said, "That was incredible". Lily nodded and looked up. She could lose herself in his arms and eyes. He was so handsome, and seemed perfect. She replied with a loving kiss and said, "Yes it was". The couple started kissing, and yet later fell asleep on top of each other, still listening as the rain fell.
Read and review, or I'll come for you. This was my first fan-fic, so please no flames. I'd consider some helpful tips, from those great writers out there. I'll be updating soon.