Ok, this is not so tentative as the Andûnaic version, but a few of these words I have accepted from Quenya for lack of some words in the courpus. Tell me what you think.
Ilcaro Petie
ellen i ciriai, bápen elle bápen
bápen elle i tulie, ni
ellen i gáiai tule
Ai, Ilcaro bá beliariangue mori
Ilcaro na calania!
Sila nin, Ilcaro! Sila nin
cara i mori vanie!
Ilcaro= "all maker" yet another attempt at an equivalent to Ilúvatar. Also I can do nothing but assume the world "i" is "the" through analogy to the other Eldarin languages. Also I use ciriai ("ships") to simbolize a dock. bápen= "no-one, no-thing".