AN: Hello my peoples! Thanks so much for all your reviews! I may not come
out with another one in a while. It really depends, 'cause the ideas pop
into my head, but sometimes I can't think of anything at all. This next poem might freak you out a little bit. To give you the run down, it's basically just Riku saying that the darkness is his insane asylum. Yes, it's kind of weird, but please review!
Disclaimer: I don't own Kingdom Hearts, though the poem doesn't necessarily
have to be about Riku, it is, so I have to put this disclaimer here
(doesn't it get annoying?!)
Shoutouts:
star's dreams: You should put up another poem! I liked your other one, so
don't stop writing!
arisu reborn: Man, I already luv ya 'cause you're incorportating my poem
with your picture using your OC (was it Koyu?) I can't wait to see it!
hikari: I love you like a sister, too! Ya know, when I was in 7th grade, my
friends and I would always say this to each other: lylas. It's an acronym
for "love you like a sister". I tried looking for your poem on
fictionpress.com and searched for Quietnena but I didn't find anything!
I'll try looking again, 'cause I'm really looking forward to reading it!
Lyphe: Thanks for reviewing. You managed to pick out one of my few poems
that don't rhyme, and I like my rhyming ones better, like this next one!
"Insane Asylum" (Riku talking)
I'm still trying to find,
What I lost-it's my mind.
Every time I look around-walls are white,
Lost my sight.
I can't escape, nowhere to run.
I'm living in an insane asylum.
Purgatory, in disgrace,
I checked myself into this place!
Don't you know that I can't feel?
Do you know that I'm not real?
I can't escape, nowhere to run.
I'm living in an insane asylum.
Wardrobe full of straight jackets,
A permanent resident of darkness.
Forever experiencing shock therapy,
The doctors call me one word: crazy.
I can't escape, nowhere to run.
I'm living in an insane asylum.
out with another one in a while. It really depends, 'cause the ideas pop
into my head, but sometimes I can't think of anything at all. This next poem might freak you out a little bit. To give you the run down, it's basically just Riku saying that the darkness is his insane asylum. Yes, it's kind of weird, but please review!
Disclaimer: I don't own Kingdom Hearts, though the poem doesn't necessarily
have to be about Riku, it is, so I have to put this disclaimer here
(doesn't it get annoying?!)
Shoutouts:
star's dreams: You should put up another poem! I liked your other one, so
don't stop writing!
arisu reborn: Man, I already luv ya 'cause you're incorportating my poem
with your picture using your OC (was it Koyu?) I can't wait to see it!
hikari: I love you like a sister, too! Ya know, when I was in 7th grade, my
friends and I would always say this to each other: lylas. It's an acronym
for "love you like a sister". I tried looking for your poem on
fictionpress.com and searched for Quietnena but I didn't find anything!
I'll try looking again, 'cause I'm really looking forward to reading it!
Lyphe: Thanks for reviewing. You managed to pick out one of my few poems
that don't rhyme, and I like my rhyming ones better, like this next one!
"Insane Asylum" (Riku talking)
I'm still trying to find,
What I lost-it's my mind.
Every time I look around-walls are white,
Lost my sight.
I can't escape, nowhere to run.
I'm living in an insane asylum.
Purgatory, in disgrace,
I checked myself into this place!
Don't you know that I can't feel?
Do you know that I'm not real?
I can't escape, nowhere to run.
I'm living in an insane asylum.
Wardrobe full of straight jackets,
A permanent resident of darkness.
Forever experiencing shock therapy,
The doctors call me one word: crazy.
I can't escape, nowhere to run.
I'm living in an insane asylum.