Reviewer Date Chapter Type
lolo313 2004-06-13 5 Signed
Wow this was an interesting story. Why did ulrick have to die? well
write more fanfics.
Phantom 1 2004-05-30 5 Signed
I tried to tell myself that this was a tragedy story, and nothing
good happens in a tragedy story. But no, I had to get my hopes up.
Boy, did I feel stupid. I'm still trying to digest the fact that
going back in time wouldn't bring him back. I mean time goes
backwards so everything goes in reverse which means that blood goes
back in the body, veins and skin closes up and knife reverses its
direction. But hey, it's your story, not mine. Excuse me while I go
kick myself for failing to see the obvious.
sirhcnotilih 2004-05-29 5 Anonymou
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very sad,man.(starts crying)
Phantom 1 2004-05-29 4 Signed
So wait, was it a robot, or was it Sissy? I'm confused. But you
know, something's not right. Going back in the past undoes the
things that are done. Things are done in reverse which means that
the opposite of dying is re-living. I fail to see the logic... in
what I am saying. Oh well. Good chapter though.
Mr.Evil 2004-05-29 4 Anonymou
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good ending cnt wait for the next one
nobody 2004-05-29 4 Anonymou
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very very good but i was confused with ur author note in the
begining what would scare people off?
nobody 2004-05-29 3 Anonymou
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great but in the first chapter u said math too many times but it
was realy good bravo bravo bravo
nobody 2004-05-29 2 Anonymou
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super again i liked how u took time to discibe the inside of the
tower bravo bravo
nobody 2004-05-29 1 Anonymou
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od=odd
realy good i like how u took time to say to every one and trancfer
to every one bravo
Carly 2004-05-29 1 Anonymou
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it was great!! keep going
Phantom 1 2004-05-29 3 Signed
Whoa! Now that was completely out of left field! Still... a robot,
huh? Xana? Or something else? You've definitely captured my
attention. I can't wait for your next chapter. The dialogue was a
little rough (especially with Ulrich's bad mood) but other than
that, it was perfect.
Scarred Wolf 2004-05-29 3 Signed
... You... killed him... (Clear throat) Well! That uh, was not what
I was exspecting, I'll give you that.-; But it was still good. I
was just a little surprised you'd kill Ulrich. Most people like to
kill Odd or Aelita.(Shrugs) You go all out, okay? That was a nice
twist.
Scarred Wolf 2004-05-29 2 Signed
That was the best chapter yet! I can't wait to see what happenes
next!
supaman190 2004-05-28 3 Anonymou
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I really liked that fanfic so keep with the chapters. One thing
bothers me. Did Sissy kill Ulrich with a hitman, or robot,or was it
X.A.N.A? Oh well, but I really liked that story, all three
chapters!
Storm Sword 2004-05-28 2 Signed
it was sort of good. I like it. not bad for your first story.
lolo313 2004-06-13 5 Signed Wow this was an interesting story. Why did ulrick have to die? well write more fanfics.
Answer: Ulrich died because no one else makes him die so I decided to be original.
Phantom 1 2004-05-30 5 Signed I tried to tell myself that this was a tragedy story, and nothing good happens in a tragedy story. But no, I had to get my hopes up. Boy, did I feel stupid. I'm still trying to digest the fact that going back in time wouldn't bring him back. I mean time goes backwards so everything goes in reverse which means that blood goes back in the body, veins and skin closes up and knife reverses its direction. But hey, it's your story, not mine. Excuse me while I go kick myself for failing to see the obvious.
Answer: If you've ever watched the show, they say that you can't bring back the dead by going back in time like that.
sirhcnotilih 2004-05-29 5 Anonymou s very sad,man.(starts crying)
Answer: None.
Phantom 1 2004-05-29 4 Signed So wait, was it a robot, or was it Sissy? I'm confused. But you know, something's not right. Going back in the past undoes the things that are done. Things are done in reverse which means that the opposite of dying is re-living. I fail to see the logic... in what I am saying. Oh well. Good chapter though.
Answer: It was a robot lead by Sissy. Answer to second question is above.
Mr.Evil 2004-05-29 4 Anonymou s good ending cnt wait for the next one
Answer: None
nobody 2004-05-29 4 Anonymou s very very good but i was confused with ur author note in the begining what would scare people off?
Answer: Some people are fans of Ulrich so they might have gotten "scared" away by him dying. nobody 2004-05-29 3 Anonymou s great but in the first chapter u said math too many times but it was realy good bravo bravo bravo
Answer: Sorry about the math thing.
nobody 2004-05-29 2 Anonymou s super again i liked how u took time to discibe the inside of the tower bravo bravo
Answer: I describe the inside of the tower because it makes my story look longer.
nobody 2004-05-29 1 Anonymou s od=odd realy good i like how u took time to say to every one and trancfer to every one bravo
Answer: I changed Od=Odd. As said above, it makes my story look longer.
Carly 2004-05-29 1 Anonymou s it was great!! keep going
Answer: None
Phantom 1 2004-05-29 3 Signed Whoa! Now that was completely out of left field! Still... a robot, huh? Xana? Or something else? You've definitely captured my attention. I can't wait for your next chapter. The dialogue was a little rough (especially with Ulrich's bad mood) but other than that, it was perfect.
Answer: The robot was a creation of Xana and it was my first story so...
Scarred Wolf 2004-05-29 3 Signed ... You... killed him... (Clear throat) Well! That uh, was not what I was exspecting, I'll give you that.-; But it was still good. I was just a little surprised you'd kill Ulrich. Most people like to kill Odd or Aelita.(Shrugs) You go all out, okay? That was a nice twist.
Answer: As said before, it gave me originality.
Scarred Wolf 2004-05-29 2 Signed That was the best chapter yet! I can't wait to see what happenes next!
Answer: None
supaman190 2004-05-28 3 Anonymou s I really liked that fanfic so keep with the chapters. One thing bothers me. Did Sissy kill Ulrich with a hitman, or robot,or was it X.A.N.A? Oh well, but I really liked that story, all three chapters!
Answer: Xana made that robot to kill Ulrich and Sissy helped.
Storm Sword 2004-05-28 2 Signed it was sort of good. I like it. not bad for your first story.
Answer: Thank you.
lolo313 2004-06-13 5 Signed Wow this was an interesting story. Why did ulrick have to die? well write more fanfics.
Answer: Ulrich died because no one else makes him die so I decided to be original.
Phantom 1 2004-05-30 5 Signed I tried to tell myself that this was a tragedy story, and nothing good happens in a tragedy story. But no, I had to get my hopes up. Boy, did I feel stupid. I'm still trying to digest the fact that going back in time wouldn't bring him back. I mean time goes backwards so everything goes in reverse which means that blood goes back in the body, veins and skin closes up and knife reverses its direction. But hey, it's your story, not mine. Excuse me while I go kick myself for failing to see the obvious.
Answer: If you've ever watched the show, they say that you can't bring back the dead by going back in time like that.
sirhcnotilih 2004-05-29 5 Anonymou s very sad,man.(starts crying)
Answer: None.
Phantom 1 2004-05-29 4 Signed So wait, was it a robot, or was it Sissy? I'm confused. But you know, something's not right. Going back in the past undoes the things that are done. Things are done in reverse which means that the opposite of dying is re-living. I fail to see the logic... in what I am saying. Oh well. Good chapter though.
Answer: It was a robot lead by Sissy. Answer to second question is above.
Mr.Evil 2004-05-29 4 Anonymou s good ending cnt wait for the next one
Answer: None
nobody 2004-05-29 4 Anonymou s very very good but i was confused with ur author note in the begining what would scare people off?
Answer: Some people are fans of Ulrich so they might have gotten "scared" away by him dying. nobody 2004-05-29 3 Anonymou s great but in the first chapter u said math too many times but it was realy good bravo bravo bravo
Answer: Sorry about the math thing.
nobody 2004-05-29 2 Anonymou s super again i liked how u took time to discibe the inside of the tower bravo bravo
Answer: I describe the inside of the tower because it makes my story look longer.
nobody 2004-05-29 1 Anonymou s od=odd realy good i like how u took time to say to every one and trancfer to every one bravo
Answer: I changed Od=Odd. As said above, it makes my story look longer.
Carly 2004-05-29 1 Anonymou s it was great!! keep going
Answer: None
Phantom 1 2004-05-29 3 Signed Whoa! Now that was completely out of left field! Still... a robot, huh? Xana? Or something else? You've definitely captured my attention. I can't wait for your next chapter. The dialogue was a little rough (especially with Ulrich's bad mood) but other than that, it was perfect.
Answer: The robot was a creation of Xana and it was my first story so...
Scarred Wolf 2004-05-29 3 Signed ... You... killed him... (Clear throat) Well! That uh, was not what I was exspecting, I'll give you that.-; But it was still good. I was just a little surprised you'd kill Ulrich. Most people like to kill Odd or Aelita.(Shrugs) You go all out, okay? That was a nice twist.
Answer: As said before, it gave me originality.
Scarred Wolf 2004-05-29 2 Signed That was the best chapter yet! I can't wait to see what happenes next!
Answer: None
supaman190 2004-05-28 3 Anonymou s I really liked that fanfic so keep with the chapters. One thing bothers me. Did Sissy kill Ulrich with a hitman, or robot,or was it X.A.N.A? Oh well, but I really liked that story, all three chapters!
Answer: Xana made that robot to kill Ulrich and Sissy helped.
Storm Sword 2004-05-28 2 Signed it was sort of good. I like it. not bad for your first story.
Answer: Thank you.