Wowee Kazowee!!! Who woulda guessed I would get so many reviews on the
first chapter!!!!!! I was only expecting only 2 or 3!!!!! Okay!!! That was
enough proof to me to write more, more, more!!!!! LOL!! I gotta try to
balance 2 stories that seem pretty successful right now!!!! Okay, enough
yapping, lets get reading!!!
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"Emma! Emma, wake up please!" Shalimar cried, trying to wake her best friend who seemed more like a little sister more than ever to wake up. Her feral eyes glowed. She looked at the people all dressed in leather suits surround her. A tear fell down from her eyes. She was walking out with Emma, when somebody had jumped on them, and knocked Emma on the back of the head. This was supposed to be a safe place. Who would be smart enough, and strong enough to get into the Sanctuary it self? They had weapons all pointing at her. She tried to even her breathing, her hair stuck to her face from the water. She glared at them all. "What do you want from us?" She yelled at them, but they didn't answer her. "Answer me!" Shalimar said, seeing them smirk at her. She jumped up, and was about to just ram into one of them when two strong arms gripped her own. She struggled to get free. "Let go you bastards!" Kicking everywhere, and landed hard on something that made whoever yell out painfully as a string of profanity echoed through the halls.
"What a temper, and so feisty." Ashlock said, shaking his body, walking closer to Shalimar. "I've always loved woman who are hard to get." He said, kicking the pathetic looking man on the ground, moaning in pain, holding his spot where the sun definitely wasn't shining. "Get up you bafoon." Ashlock frowned, watching as the man get up slowly, knees shaking, still holding onto his pained spot.
Shalimar grinned, satisfied that she landed where it counted. She was ready to bite Gabriel's hand off is he was going to touch her. "How'd you get in here?" Shalimar said with venom in her voice.
"It's for me to know, and you to find out if you want. I just caught a leak off in the system. You can find anything if you try hard enough." Ashlock smiled, making Shalimar growl. "I don't see why you want to work with Adam when you can be with me." He said, touching her face.
Shalimar flinched away, spitting in his face.
Ashlock smiled, nodding his head, and wiping his face. "That wasn't real nice, but I'm ready to play hard. Right now, I don't exactly want to get all this into my head. I've got the Adam's Sanctuary. I've got hold of Mutant X. What more could I want?" Ashlock said, and smiled at Shalimar. "Put them two away. I've got business to do." Ashlock said before walking off to explore the Sanctuary.
"Let us go, or I'll hafta kick some asses right now!" Shalimar said, glaring at the guy she kicked, making him flinch. She smirked, seeing him cover up his front side so protectively. She stared at him intensely. "Maybe I should kick more than ass."
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"Stop!" Jesse cried out, holding his head. He was on his knees, trying to stop the excruciating pain. It felt like he was ripping apart. It wasn't his body that hurt, it was his head. As fast as it all came, it stopped. He tried to breathe calmly, wondering what was going on. He didn't see it coming. He felt it coming. He felt so exhausted, not even having energy to look up. He held his head with the palm of his hands, eyes closed, trying to clear his mind. There were voices all around him, but he couldn't concentrate on any of them.
"I think he's ready." Ashlock said, brushing his hands on his pants. "His mind should be weak enough to tamper with. Prep him up."
Jesse felt someone grasp his arms, lifting him up. He felt himself get thrown on a chair, and felt his hands, and feet being bound to the chair. He opened his eyes, recognizing the person who bound him instantly. He started to struggle against the ropes, fear showing on his face.
"Jesse Kilmartin." Ashlock said, walking around the chair.
Jesse noticed they were in one of the labs. He was strapped down to a chair, lying on his back on the medical chair. He looked around the room nervously. "What do you want with me?" Jesse asked fearfully. He then fazed, right out of chair, but then that shearing pain was in his head again. He couldn't fight back this time. He was too tired, and exhausted. This time he screamed out the pain, tears falling from his face, and it was gone again, and he was again bound to the chair.
"Nuh uh uh Kilmartin." Ashlock said. "I knew you would cause all the trouble. I can't lock you up anywhere, cuz you'll just find a way out. You're too smart, and this isn't going to do well, so let's just say, we'll change your mind about using your smarts for Adam."
Jesse didn't hear a word Ashlock said, because he blacked out from the pain that was coursing through his head.
"I think he's ready." Ashlock said. He sat down next to Jesse, and manipulated and played with his fragile state of mind.
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Brennan got up, holding his head. He groaned, and watched as these people in suits swarmed the area. Brennan got up, conjuring up an electric ball in his hand, and shooting it at as many people as he could, but there were too many of them to fight off. He got grabbed from behind, and pushed to the ground. "What the hell is going on here?" He yelled out in frustration, as one of the men twisted his arm behind his back.
"On the contraire Mr. Mulwry." Ashlock said, walking down the steps to the hanger.
Brennan smirked, shaking his head. "Should have known." He said, still trying to get free.
"I've got you Mulwry, what are you struggling for?" Ashlock asked with a matter of fact tone of voice.
"No ones got me, I've got you." Brennan said, shooting the guy holding him the stomach. He shot a current of electricity at Ashlock, but there was a barrier around him, blocking his shot. Brennan stood his ground. He was hoping everyone else was all right. He was the oldest here, and he had to protect his what he now knows as his family. "Leave us alone Ashlock. You don't know what you're messing with here." Brennan said, glaring at Ashlock.
"No, you don't know WHO you're messing with." Ashlock said, waving his hand towards the door.
Brennan's eyes widened, seeing the blond hair young man that he knows as his little brother. "Jesse!" Brennan said, watching as Jesse walked toward him. He found it strange that Ashlock didn't do anything about it.
"Hit him Kilmartin." Ashlock said with a robotic voice.
Brennan watched as Jesse raised his fist, eyes filled with emptiness, the sparkle missing in his eyes. He'd never seen so much hatred on Jesse's face before. It wasn't just the way he was looking. It was those eyes of his. They were so dark, and empty. It looked like Jesse was in some sort of trance. This wasn't the Jesse he knew. It was just what Jesse looked like, but it seemed like the real Jesse was gone, buried in the hatred.
"Come on Kilmartin. He hates you, everyone does. I'm your only friend. Hit him." Ashlock demanded more forcefully.
"Jesse, no he's lying." Brennan said, watching his little brother get manipulated by that bastard. He saw some glimmer of hope on Jesse's face, but as fast as that came, he was lost. He saw Ashlock blast something out of his head, and it hit Jesse. Next thing he knows, a fist was coming his way. He felt it, but it wasn't as hard as he expected it to be.
"Stop.Bre-" Jesse managed to say before collapsing on to the ground with a thunt, falling unconscious, his body exhausted from what it was put through.
Brennan fell to his knees, crawling to Jesse. "Jess, come on Jess, wake up." He said concerned, slapping Jesse's face lightly. He jerked his head up, glaring at Ashlock. "What the fuck did you do to him?" He yelled out. Anger surged through his body, running through his veins. He hated it when anyone messed with the people he loved so much, and thought of as his family. Jesse was practically his little brother. Nothing was going to happen to any of them as long as his heart was still pumping, blood still ran through his veins, and he was breathing. He felt his blood pulsating through his ear, intensifying his hearing by ten times.
"Mr. Mulwry, I guess your friend is stronger than we thought he was." Ashlock said, waving his hand, as he turned and walked away. "Take them away, I don't have much use for them." Ashlock said, leaving. He stopped where he was, not turning to face them. "And Brennan, you cause any trouble, I won't refrain from hurting your friends, or Adam." He said last, before walking out
Brennan sighed, scowling. He let himself be taken, for now. He felt someone in the back of him push him forward. He held his anger, for Jesse's sake at least, because he was unconscious, and in the hands of those guys in the suits. He walked forward where they pushed him too. They were leading him down the hall to their bedrooms. They were really getting on his nerves, pushing him every few seconds. Jesse was slung over some other man. animal's shoulder. They opened a door, pushing him in, making him land on his knees. He turned backwards, and saw what they were going to do to Jesse. "Don't throw him!" He yelled out, but as he thought, from the smirk on that evil beast's face, Jesse, was tossed hard onto the ground. The door flew closed seconds later, hearing a click. Where had that click come from? The doors weren't locked from outside, were they?
"Bren! Jess!" Emma shouted out, running over to Brennan hugging him.
"Jesse!" Shalimar yelled out shocked, going over to her little brother. "Bren! What happened to him?" Shalimar asked, concerned for the young man that she's been protecting since he was just a kid. She was the one who always comforted him when he felt bad, or sick, and he would do the same.
"I don't know. They did something to his brain, and he. he could control him somehow, but he didn't do anything, cuz Jesse fought it." Brennan said with tears to his eyes. How could he let someone manipulate his little brother like that. ". He fought it, but I don't know what they're planning. They could get us all." Brennan said, looking at the girls. He had a protective arm around Emma.
Shalimar was petting Jesse. "Bren, put him on the bed. He'd be more comfortable when he wakes up." Shalimar said her hand clasped to Jesse's. She wasn't letting him go. She was so worried about him. They have been in a couple scary situations, but this one tops it all.
Brennan hesitated a bit, not wanting to hurt Jesse while picking him up, but he managed to hold him in his arms. Jesse moved a bit, a moan escaping his mouth, bringing Brennan to walk quicker to the bed, and laying him gently down, letting Jesse's head touch the pillow lightly. "Jess, you waking up?" Shalimar asked, squeezing Jesse's hand. She didn't mean to, but she unconsciously pushed Brennan over.
The moaning continued, face contorting in discomfort. Jesse's eyes snapped open, jumping up to a sitting position, but then he regretted it when a shot of pain coursed through his skull. He felt someone envelope him in a hug, and rubbing his back. "Shhhal?" Jesse said tiredly, feeling the arms around him tighten. His voice came out hoarse, and strained.
"Jess, you all right man?" Brennan asked, sitting down on the bed, his arms around Emma in a protective way. Emma and Jesse are his kid brother, and sister. He knows that Shalimar can take care of herself, but he's still protective to her, but more towards his younger friends.
Jesse didn't say anything, but tears were coming quickly to his eyes. He didn't know what was happening, and it scared him. How come his head hurt? How did he get onto Emma's bed? How come they were all in here? How come he had a chunk of memory gone from his head? Everything was so confusing. He buried his face and forehead deeper into Shalimar's shoulder, trying to numb down the throbbing pain that was escalating in his skull. Shalimar was rubbing the back of his head, and it helped a bit, but it didn't stop the stabbing pains rattling his brain.
"Jesse. Jesse!" Shalimar shouted out, trying to revive her little brother, who had seemed to have fallen unconscious. She shook him, getting his face to face hers. His eyes were closed. She laid him back onto the bed, tears in her eyes. "What's happening?" She cried, her head fallen down on Brennan's chest.
"Let me try to help him." Emma looked at Shalimar's eyes, telling her to trust her. She saw the approval from her, knowing Shalimar was very protective of Jesse. Emma put her hands on the sides of Jesse's head, slowly closing her eyes. She breathed in, and out, connecting to Jesse. She was over-whelmed from the emotions, and feelings in his mind. She felt his confusion, fear, pain. there was so much pain. Something was nudging against her mind.
"Get out."
It was so hard to concentrate, when something was trying to force her out of Jesse's mind. What was going on?
"You're not invited."
There was a thickening fog swirling around her. She threw her arms through it, trying to see better. "Jesse." She called out, trying to find him in this mess of thickening fog.
"Emma." Jesse called out.
"Jesse." Emma called out again. Trying to find where he was. "Where are you?"
"Help, someone." He called out again, his voice cracking. Emma could just hear he was crying.
"Jesse!" Emma cried out, seeing a cliff. Jesse was hanging off the cliff, just sitting there, hugging his knees to his chest, face on his knees, but it didn't seem that he even noticed her there. She kneeled to the ground, screaming out as sand, and pebbles flew past her, scraping her skin. Blood was dripping from her face. Her eyes were only slits now, trying to see through the blizzard. He was trying to push her away.
"Get out of my head!" Jesse yelled, his body being pushed further closer to the edge by the wind whipping through his body.
"Jesse, I'm trying to-"
"Get out! You made me almost hurt Brennan! I don't want to hurt anybody! Get out!" Jesse yelled out to what seemed like nothing.
"Jess." Emma said, not understanding who Jesse was talking to. It wasn't her. It seemed like he was fighting himself. or someone else. What Brennan said. Someone was still controlling Jesse! She tried getting closer, but that voice in the sky boomed louder.
"You're not invited, he's mine."
A flash of thunder shook the ground she was standing on, making her tumble. "Jesse!" Emma cried out, but that was when what really shook her mind happened. Jesse looked at her, and his eyes. They were so scared, and full of fear, pleading her for help.
"Your not invited."
"Emma!"
"Jesse!" Everything swirled around, and around. and nothing.
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What do you think??? I still this story sucks ass, but my first chapter proved wrong, because you people reviewed! I'm not sure if any romance will be going on like you people want it to, since so many of you suggested, but think it this way. aren't there too many romance stories flying around already??? Isn't Mutant X about family, and action too??? Well I wanna write what pleases people, and I want this to be good, so I'm gonna write for you people, as long as you review. Tell me wut sucks, wut rocks, and what you want! This will be written for the readers, and I'll accommodate anything as long as you ask, and it makes some sense! Okay!! Thanx, and my mailbox is always open. Review or e-mail me at Lgbabyblu@yahoo.com!!! Thanx for reading!!!
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"Emma! Emma, wake up please!" Shalimar cried, trying to wake her best friend who seemed more like a little sister more than ever to wake up. Her feral eyes glowed. She looked at the people all dressed in leather suits surround her. A tear fell down from her eyes. She was walking out with Emma, when somebody had jumped on them, and knocked Emma on the back of the head. This was supposed to be a safe place. Who would be smart enough, and strong enough to get into the Sanctuary it self? They had weapons all pointing at her. She tried to even her breathing, her hair stuck to her face from the water. She glared at them all. "What do you want from us?" She yelled at them, but they didn't answer her. "Answer me!" Shalimar said, seeing them smirk at her. She jumped up, and was about to just ram into one of them when two strong arms gripped her own. She struggled to get free. "Let go you bastards!" Kicking everywhere, and landed hard on something that made whoever yell out painfully as a string of profanity echoed through the halls.
"What a temper, and so feisty." Ashlock said, shaking his body, walking closer to Shalimar. "I've always loved woman who are hard to get." He said, kicking the pathetic looking man on the ground, moaning in pain, holding his spot where the sun definitely wasn't shining. "Get up you bafoon." Ashlock frowned, watching as the man get up slowly, knees shaking, still holding onto his pained spot.
Shalimar grinned, satisfied that she landed where it counted. She was ready to bite Gabriel's hand off is he was going to touch her. "How'd you get in here?" Shalimar said with venom in her voice.
"It's for me to know, and you to find out if you want. I just caught a leak off in the system. You can find anything if you try hard enough." Ashlock smiled, making Shalimar growl. "I don't see why you want to work with Adam when you can be with me." He said, touching her face.
Shalimar flinched away, spitting in his face.
Ashlock smiled, nodding his head, and wiping his face. "That wasn't real nice, but I'm ready to play hard. Right now, I don't exactly want to get all this into my head. I've got the Adam's Sanctuary. I've got hold of Mutant X. What more could I want?" Ashlock said, and smiled at Shalimar. "Put them two away. I've got business to do." Ashlock said before walking off to explore the Sanctuary.
"Let us go, or I'll hafta kick some asses right now!" Shalimar said, glaring at the guy she kicked, making him flinch. She smirked, seeing him cover up his front side so protectively. She stared at him intensely. "Maybe I should kick more than ass."
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"Stop!" Jesse cried out, holding his head. He was on his knees, trying to stop the excruciating pain. It felt like he was ripping apart. It wasn't his body that hurt, it was his head. As fast as it all came, it stopped. He tried to breathe calmly, wondering what was going on. He didn't see it coming. He felt it coming. He felt so exhausted, not even having energy to look up. He held his head with the palm of his hands, eyes closed, trying to clear his mind. There were voices all around him, but he couldn't concentrate on any of them.
"I think he's ready." Ashlock said, brushing his hands on his pants. "His mind should be weak enough to tamper with. Prep him up."
Jesse felt someone grasp his arms, lifting him up. He felt himself get thrown on a chair, and felt his hands, and feet being bound to the chair. He opened his eyes, recognizing the person who bound him instantly. He started to struggle against the ropes, fear showing on his face.
"Jesse Kilmartin." Ashlock said, walking around the chair.
Jesse noticed they were in one of the labs. He was strapped down to a chair, lying on his back on the medical chair. He looked around the room nervously. "What do you want with me?" Jesse asked fearfully. He then fazed, right out of chair, but then that shearing pain was in his head again. He couldn't fight back this time. He was too tired, and exhausted. This time he screamed out the pain, tears falling from his face, and it was gone again, and he was again bound to the chair.
"Nuh uh uh Kilmartin." Ashlock said. "I knew you would cause all the trouble. I can't lock you up anywhere, cuz you'll just find a way out. You're too smart, and this isn't going to do well, so let's just say, we'll change your mind about using your smarts for Adam."
Jesse didn't hear a word Ashlock said, because he blacked out from the pain that was coursing through his head.
"I think he's ready." Ashlock said. He sat down next to Jesse, and manipulated and played with his fragile state of mind.
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Brennan got up, holding his head. He groaned, and watched as these people in suits swarmed the area. Brennan got up, conjuring up an electric ball in his hand, and shooting it at as many people as he could, but there were too many of them to fight off. He got grabbed from behind, and pushed to the ground. "What the hell is going on here?" He yelled out in frustration, as one of the men twisted his arm behind his back.
"On the contraire Mr. Mulwry." Ashlock said, walking down the steps to the hanger.
Brennan smirked, shaking his head. "Should have known." He said, still trying to get free.
"I've got you Mulwry, what are you struggling for?" Ashlock asked with a matter of fact tone of voice.
"No ones got me, I've got you." Brennan said, shooting the guy holding him the stomach. He shot a current of electricity at Ashlock, but there was a barrier around him, blocking his shot. Brennan stood his ground. He was hoping everyone else was all right. He was the oldest here, and he had to protect his what he now knows as his family. "Leave us alone Ashlock. You don't know what you're messing with here." Brennan said, glaring at Ashlock.
"No, you don't know WHO you're messing with." Ashlock said, waving his hand towards the door.
Brennan's eyes widened, seeing the blond hair young man that he knows as his little brother. "Jesse!" Brennan said, watching as Jesse walked toward him. He found it strange that Ashlock didn't do anything about it.
"Hit him Kilmartin." Ashlock said with a robotic voice.
Brennan watched as Jesse raised his fist, eyes filled with emptiness, the sparkle missing in his eyes. He'd never seen so much hatred on Jesse's face before. It wasn't just the way he was looking. It was those eyes of his. They were so dark, and empty. It looked like Jesse was in some sort of trance. This wasn't the Jesse he knew. It was just what Jesse looked like, but it seemed like the real Jesse was gone, buried in the hatred.
"Come on Kilmartin. He hates you, everyone does. I'm your only friend. Hit him." Ashlock demanded more forcefully.
"Jesse, no he's lying." Brennan said, watching his little brother get manipulated by that bastard. He saw some glimmer of hope on Jesse's face, but as fast as that came, he was lost. He saw Ashlock blast something out of his head, and it hit Jesse. Next thing he knows, a fist was coming his way. He felt it, but it wasn't as hard as he expected it to be.
"Stop.Bre-" Jesse managed to say before collapsing on to the ground with a thunt, falling unconscious, his body exhausted from what it was put through.
Brennan fell to his knees, crawling to Jesse. "Jess, come on Jess, wake up." He said concerned, slapping Jesse's face lightly. He jerked his head up, glaring at Ashlock. "What the fuck did you do to him?" He yelled out. Anger surged through his body, running through his veins. He hated it when anyone messed with the people he loved so much, and thought of as his family. Jesse was practically his little brother. Nothing was going to happen to any of them as long as his heart was still pumping, blood still ran through his veins, and he was breathing. He felt his blood pulsating through his ear, intensifying his hearing by ten times.
"Mr. Mulwry, I guess your friend is stronger than we thought he was." Ashlock said, waving his hand, as he turned and walked away. "Take them away, I don't have much use for them." Ashlock said, leaving. He stopped where he was, not turning to face them. "And Brennan, you cause any trouble, I won't refrain from hurting your friends, or Adam." He said last, before walking out
Brennan sighed, scowling. He let himself be taken, for now. He felt someone in the back of him push him forward. He held his anger, for Jesse's sake at least, because he was unconscious, and in the hands of those guys in the suits. He walked forward where they pushed him too. They were leading him down the hall to their bedrooms. They were really getting on his nerves, pushing him every few seconds. Jesse was slung over some other man. animal's shoulder. They opened a door, pushing him in, making him land on his knees. He turned backwards, and saw what they were going to do to Jesse. "Don't throw him!" He yelled out, but as he thought, from the smirk on that evil beast's face, Jesse, was tossed hard onto the ground. The door flew closed seconds later, hearing a click. Where had that click come from? The doors weren't locked from outside, were they?
"Bren! Jess!" Emma shouted out, running over to Brennan hugging him.
"Jesse!" Shalimar yelled out shocked, going over to her little brother. "Bren! What happened to him?" Shalimar asked, concerned for the young man that she's been protecting since he was just a kid. She was the one who always comforted him when he felt bad, or sick, and he would do the same.
"I don't know. They did something to his brain, and he. he could control him somehow, but he didn't do anything, cuz Jesse fought it." Brennan said with tears to his eyes. How could he let someone manipulate his little brother like that. ". He fought it, but I don't know what they're planning. They could get us all." Brennan said, looking at the girls. He had a protective arm around Emma.
Shalimar was petting Jesse. "Bren, put him on the bed. He'd be more comfortable when he wakes up." Shalimar said her hand clasped to Jesse's. She wasn't letting him go. She was so worried about him. They have been in a couple scary situations, but this one tops it all.
Brennan hesitated a bit, not wanting to hurt Jesse while picking him up, but he managed to hold him in his arms. Jesse moved a bit, a moan escaping his mouth, bringing Brennan to walk quicker to the bed, and laying him gently down, letting Jesse's head touch the pillow lightly. "Jess, you waking up?" Shalimar asked, squeezing Jesse's hand. She didn't mean to, but she unconsciously pushed Brennan over.
The moaning continued, face contorting in discomfort. Jesse's eyes snapped open, jumping up to a sitting position, but then he regretted it when a shot of pain coursed through his skull. He felt someone envelope him in a hug, and rubbing his back. "Shhhal?" Jesse said tiredly, feeling the arms around him tighten. His voice came out hoarse, and strained.
"Jess, you all right man?" Brennan asked, sitting down on the bed, his arms around Emma in a protective way. Emma and Jesse are his kid brother, and sister. He knows that Shalimar can take care of herself, but he's still protective to her, but more towards his younger friends.
Jesse didn't say anything, but tears were coming quickly to his eyes. He didn't know what was happening, and it scared him. How come his head hurt? How did he get onto Emma's bed? How come they were all in here? How come he had a chunk of memory gone from his head? Everything was so confusing. He buried his face and forehead deeper into Shalimar's shoulder, trying to numb down the throbbing pain that was escalating in his skull. Shalimar was rubbing the back of his head, and it helped a bit, but it didn't stop the stabbing pains rattling his brain.
"Jesse. Jesse!" Shalimar shouted out, trying to revive her little brother, who had seemed to have fallen unconscious. She shook him, getting his face to face hers. His eyes were closed. She laid him back onto the bed, tears in her eyes. "What's happening?" She cried, her head fallen down on Brennan's chest.
"Let me try to help him." Emma looked at Shalimar's eyes, telling her to trust her. She saw the approval from her, knowing Shalimar was very protective of Jesse. Emma put her hands on the sides of Jesse's head, slowly closing her eyes. She breathed in, and out, connecting to Jesse. She was over-whelmed from the emotions, and feelings in his mind. She felt his confusion, fear, pain. there was so much pain. Something was nudging against her mind.
"Get out."
It was so hard to concentrate, when something was trying to force her out of Jesse's mind. What was going on?
"You're not invited."
There was a thickening fog swirling around her. She threw her arms through it, trying to see better. "Jesse." She called out, trying to find him in this mess of thickening fog.
"Emma." Jesse called out.
"Jesse." Emma called out again. Trying to find where he was. "Where are you?"
"Help, someone." He called out again, his voice cracking. Emma could just hear he was crying.
"Jesse!" Emma cried out, seeing a cliff. Jesse was hanging off the cliff, just sitting there, hugging his knees to his chest, face on his knees, but it didn't seem that he even noticed her there. She kneeled to the ground, screaming out as sand, and pebbles flew past her, scraping her skin. Blood was dripping from her face. Her eyes were only slits now, trying to see through the blizzard. He was trying to push her away.
"Get out of my head!" Jesse yelled, his body being pushed further closer to the edge by the wind whipping through his body.
"Jesse, I'm trying to-"
"Get out! You made me almost hurt Brennan! I don't want to hurt anybody! Get out!" Jesse yelled out to what seemed like nothing.
"Jess." Emma said, not understanding who Jesse was talking to. It wasn't her. It seemed like he was fighting himself. or someone else. What Brennan said. Someone was still controlling Jesse! She tried getting closer, but that voice in the sky boomed louder.
"You're not invited, he's mine."
A flash of thunder shook the ground she was standing on, making her tumble. "Jesse!" Emma cried out, but that was when what really shook her mind happened. Jesse looked at her, and his eyes. They were so scared, and full of fear, pleading her for help.
"Your not invited."
"Emma!"
"Jesse!" Everything swirled around, and around. and nothing.
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What do you think??? I still this story sucks ass, but my first chapter proved wrong, because you people reviewed! I'm not sure if any romance will be going on like you people want it to, since so many of you suggested, but think it this way. aren't there too many romance stories flying around already??? Isn't Mutant X about family, and action too??? Well I wanna write what pleases people, and I want this to be good, so I'm gonna write for you people, as long as you review. Tell me wut sucks, wut rocks, and what you want! This will be written for the readers, and I'll accommodate anything as long as you ask, and it makes some sense! Okay!! Thanx, and my mailbox is always open. Review or e-mail me at Lgbabyblu@yahoo.com!!! Thanx for reading!!!