~May 6th 2003~
Disclaimer:
I am not affiliated with JKR and do not take credit for her brilliant work.
These stories are based on her characters, setting, and ideas. I would like to
thank the webmasters of Harry Potter Lexicon and the authors to "Ultimate
Unofficial Guide to the Mysteries of Harry Potter" for much needed reference.
Also,
Johnny Poo and Kaihn Aelathali should be recognized and appreciated for buffing
and polishing my rough drafts. Thanks a million!
~*Phaedra
Note*~
Okay,
I lost my third book so if I fail to mention a particular event that could
affect my story, you know why. Now, I am only using references from webpages.
Enjoy the second chapter. Had a hard time writing it. Mostly character building
but it has a rather nice ending.
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~*The Long Hall*~
By: Phaedra
Beta: Johnny Poo & Kaihn Aelathali
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The
stars sparkled brightly in the midnight sky over the roofs of
Islington, London. Later
that morning, Cho would be riding the Hogwarts Express. Ever the high achiever, she had spent every
day since her trip to Diagon Alley reviewing her school books preparing herself
for the semester. Or rather, she had
been studying between daydreams of Oliver, and unexpectedly, Cedric. At the moment, she stood on the balcony
gazing at the dark sky. Cho gazed up at
the stars every night, but she never studied them, only lost herself in thought
and awe. 'Amazing' she thought. The dark
sky dusted with specs of diamond can mesmerize the most practical mind. It is
unusual for Cho to dream and have her head in the clouds, but since Diagon
Alley, she experienced and new caliber of emotion. Anxious, yet tired, she
headed inside to sleep.
She
turned to her mirror. 'Who am I kidding?' she thought. 'Oliver is a SEVENTH year. . . three years older than me! He must think I'm just
a little girl.'
Cho
shook her head in disagreement; her heart was hoping the mirror was speaking
the truth. She just couldn't figure out who 'he' was. That night, Cho had great difficulty finding
sleep. She could only toss and turn for hours until her eyelids got heavy and
she could stay awake no more.
The
next morning, Cho woke up well before her alarm. She was too excited to stay
asleep. The clear sky she had seen the
night before was now covered with clouds. A short time later, properly groomed
and everything Cho needed for her school year packed, the Chang family headed
to Kings Cross Station. It was 10:30 when they arrived on
Platform 9 and ¾. For once, the Changs
were on time. Cho said her goodbyes to
her parents, boarded the Hogwart's Express, and seated herself in an empty
compartment. Jenna followed a few moments later.
"You'll
never guess!" said Jenna.
"What?"
asked Cho eagerly, her curiosity piqued.
"I'm
sure you know that Eliza has a huge crush on Roger? Well, in attempt to win him
over she tried poison him!"
"Poison?
Not surprising coming from Eliza." Said Cho. Since Cho's first year, she had
been bullied by Eliza. In a fit of jealousy, Eliza turned Cho's hair and
fingernails green.
"Anyway, she offered Roger a sip from her
water bottle. But, Roger knows better than to take offers from someone like
Eliza. After all, that makes him a Ravenclaw," she continued. "He refused the
bottle, but the bottle was snatched by very thirsty Nott. He chugged the entire
thing. I am assuming the water was concentrated with Fermethyl, a liquid that
taken in large quantities will reduce one's judgment. Symptoms showed up
immediately; his voice is slurred and can't keep his hands of Eliza. He is
saying she is the Amazon Goddess! He won't leave her alone. Imagine, Nott your
faithful worshiper." She giggled. "That poor Amazon Goddess," Jenna teased.
"That's a shame," added Cho, "Fermethyl can
make you really sick. Surely Nott would have noticed the water wasn't pure."
"With how thick he can be? Fermethyl is very potent and its taste and
smell are completely neutral! Very few
people can tell until it's too late! But it is a fabulous spirit!" said Jenna.
"You seem to be an expert on Fermethyl,
Jenna," inquired Cho with a raised eyebrow.
"Tee-hee. You have
no idea!"
Marietta entered the compartment and
joined their friends.
"What
happened to Nott?" asked Marietta.
Marietta was an optimistic girl, same
year as Cho. Her positive attitude drove herself and others to succeed. She was dating Joey, Cedric's friend from
Hufflepuff, which is how Cho and Cedric met and became good friends. As Jenna retold her story, Cho looked at the
compartment door. Once the train started moving at a constant speed, Cho rose
from her chair and strolled down the long hall. She walked past open
compartments filled with student of all years and houses. She wasn't looking
for anything or anyone in particular, though she wouldn't have minded running
into a certain someone. At the end of
the hall she stopped in front of a closed compartment door, 'Prefects
Only.' Too young for prefect, Cho turned
around and headed back to her compartment.
"Cho!" The door opened, with Cedric's head
peeking into the hall.
"Oh, uh, sorry Cedric, I was just wandering,"
said Cho flustered. Cedric smiled.
"I was just going to wander around myself.
Would you care to come with me?" Cho nodded, smiling, and followed Cedric.
"Shopping went well I assume."
"Yes." She sighed. He turned and looked down
at her and saw her eyes staring at the floor. "What's wrong?"
"Oh," she looked up, "Nothing, I'm just really
tired. I didn't get much sleep last night."
"I see, rather unlike you. I've always known
you to be a morning person."
She
yawned, and managed a faint giggle. "The summer holidays are meant for sleep. I
was just beginning to get my sleep schedule back to normal."
"Liar.
You've studied these past few days, haven't you?" he smirked. Cho flushed.
"Well . . ." at that moment she was grabbed by
the elbow and pulled roughly into a nearby compartment.
"So sorry Cedric, Ravenclaw Quidditch
business!" Roger said and shut the compartment door.
"Sit, Cho. Sorry to be rude, but I didn't have
much luck finding you before the train left, I was . . . sidetracked."
The
other Quidditch players suppressed a laugh.
"Shush!" he ordered his teammates.
Roger
grabbed rolls of parchment from his carry-on bag and spread them on the center
table.
"I have spent the whole summer devising
Quidditch plays. This year is going to be a very hard year. First game:
Hufflepuff. Cho, pay attention! The Seeker is the only player we have to worry
about. Compared to Cedric, the other players are amateurs. But, doesn't mean
the rest of you can slack!" he turned to the parchment labeled 'Hufflepuff vs.
Ravenclaw' and started scribbling. "If you three," looking at his burly
Chasers, "can score enough goals before the Seekers catch the snitch, it
wouldn't matter who catches the snitch first. Besides, we need to score as many
points as we can. Cho, please look over these plays. I have done some
researching on Seeker moves and thought you can find these useful."
Cho
graciously accepted the parchments but couldn't help wondering why Roger
doubted her performance. The first match would not be for three months, yet Cho
already felt like she was in a championship game.
After
hours of lecturing about Quidditch plays, Cho said good-bye to the team and
headed back to her original compartment.
She found two more of her closest friends, Heidi and Amy in the
compartment. Cho had been friends with
Heidi and Amy since before Hogwarts.
"Thought you fell off the train," joked Heidi,
giving Cho a hug.
"Missed you at Diagon Alley," Cho replied.
"We're smart, Cho," said Amy with a hug. "We
finished our shopping three weeks ago."
"Well, the rush was fun," said Cho, "I got to
see a lot of the students I missed over the holidays."
"I'm a bit nervous about this year though,"
said Marietta, "I heard the first three
years are cake compared to the fourth and
beyond."
"The hat wouldn't sort us in Ravenclaw if we couldn't handle the pressure," boasted Jenna.
Cho
looked around the room and beamed at her friends. Jenna was the most fun person
in the group, and she held a deep level of pride. She was very friendly and was therefore
constantly surrounded by people she loved. Heidi was a giggly
girl and a bit absent-minded. No one would ever guess she was in Ravenclaw
after speaking with her for five minutes.
However, the Sorting Hat knew why she should be placed in Ravenclaw; she
was excellent in Potions and Arithmancy.
Amy was Cho's best friend and was truly one of a kind. Despite her
sarcastic and often pessimistic attitude, she was fun-loving and was a loyal
friend. Completely content with her company, Cho grabbed a blanket and pillow
from the top shelf and took a nap in the corner next to the window..
~*~*~*
Meanwhile,
Cedric sat quietly by the window in the Prefects compartment located down the
long hall. The storm was intensifying and sky grew darker. He ran his fingers
through the back of his neck and shifted his eyes to the boy in front of him.
The boy had dark features, tanned skin, dark shoulder-length hair, and cold
black eyes. His attention was focused on a leather covered notebook in which he
wrote.
"Hi, I'm Cedric. This would be my first year
as prefect."
There
was a long pause.
"Bravo, would you like a medal?" he
sarcastically replied without taking his eyes off the book.
"Uh. . ." stammered Cedric.
With
a loud sigh, the boy shut his book and held out his hand, "Drew Thornborough,
Slytherin sixth year."
"Nice to meet you," Cedric shook his hand
"Hufflepuff."
Cedric
hesitated, "So . . . what made you accept the Prefect job?"
"You
see, Cedric," Drew said, the heavy distaste stressed in every syllable of
Cedric's name, "Being a prefect allows me to indulge my less-than-humane
tendencies every once in a while without causing enough trouble to get myself
locked up. Let me guess. You took the job to prove to the world that you are
noble . . . honest . . . hardworking?"
Cedric
looked at him with a raised eyebrow, "Well, yes, as a matter of fact. And to
have my own room." Cedric grinned.
Drew
snickered to himself. He was feeling rather pleasant today and did not feel
like mocking the last comment. Instead he smirked at the pretty boy and turned
back to his notebook. Accepting a failed attempt to make a new friend, Cedric
excused himself and headed down the long hall. A few compartments down he saw
his Hufflepuff friends and joined them.
"Well, well. Look who stepped down from Mt. Olympus and come to mingle with the
mortals," joked Mark.
"Sorry guys, thought
I'd get better acquainted with my fellow prefects."
"Well, good to have you back down to earth,
bro." said Dan, sixth year Hufflepuff Keeper. Most of Cedric's best comrades
were Quidditch players, though they all earned their spot.
"So, my faithful mortals," said Cedric, "are
we ready for a great year of Quidditch?"
"If our Seeker can keep his eyes focused on
the snitch. Especially during the Ravenclaw match," said Brian, fifth year
Beater.
"What are you talking about? Cho? Nah, we're
just friends, Brian."
"Cho?" asked Brian, "Who said anything about
Cho?" Cedric's face went fierce red. "Ravenclaw's got chasers the size of
Godzilla. A bludger would seem like a fly to them."
"Ah, well," Cedric flustered, "Don't
underestimate the girl! Roger wouldn't pick her for looks."
"A girl! Exactly! She'll be a pushover," boasted Brian.
"Now, now, Brian," said Joey, "Let's not upset
the captain. He has a crush on the girl."
"No way!" said Brian with a sly grin.
"MMMMYeah," said
Mark stuffing his face with chocolate frogs. "Bro's been gushing over her since
last spring."
Cedric
only got redder. He stood up.
"NO, NO, NO!!" he barked. His denials only set
off fits of laughter among his friends.
"Cho and I are just friends. Just friends. I don't want to do anything
to ruin that."
"So you
do fancy her! You just admit it." said Dan.
"Shush, we're being loud. Besides, could you
blame me?" Cedric finally admitted.
At
this point, his friends beamed with hoots and hollers. The noise echoed down
the hall and into Cho's compartment. She woke up. The shouting intensified.
"What the darn?" Heidi said and opened the
door and poke his head out in the hall. The other
girls followed suit.
"Sounds like the Hufflepuff gang," said Jenna,
"I'll go say something to them."
Jenna
hurried out the compartment and walked into Cedric's.
"JENNA!" they heard as the boys screamed their
welcomes.
"She's just looking for a reason to flirt!"
said Marietta, "I'm going to see Joey."
Marietta followed after Jenna into
the Hufflepuff's compartment.
"I want to go too!" Amy and Heidi said in
unison.
They
both ran to the overcrowded compartment.
"Um . . . Excuse me, Cho," Cedric said
standing by the open compartment door. "Uh, may I speak with you for a moment?"
"Of course, have a seat. What's on your mind,
Cedric?" said Cho.
"Well, Jenna said that we were making a bit of
noise and woke you up . . . um. . . I just wanted to apologize. I know how
tired you must have been."
"Oh!" Cho giggled. "Is that all? You didn't
have to apologize. I overslept anyway. . ."
"Still!"
he interrupted. "It was rude. I shou . . . we should
have been more considerate."
He
got up and sat beside Cho. He looked deep in her eyes. 'Just ask her,'
he thought to himself. Her eyes were mesmerizing and captivating, leaving him
at a loss for words. His heart was beating terribly fast. He couldn't breath.
Gazing deeper in her eyes, he leaned in closer. Their lips were centimeters
away, and she hadn't backed away at all. He sighed.
"Listen," he pulled up and looked away, "I
would like you to scrimmage with me, practice Snitch Seeking. That is, if you
want to," he looked back at her. Looking back in her eyes, he felt as if air
was being sucked out of his lungs.
"Oh," she blinked, "That would be great.
Unless, you're out to steal my moves." she smirked. Cedric laughed.
"Only Cho Chang can possess those bewitching
moves." He kissed her on the cheek and whispered a goodbye.
Walking
down the long hall, his lips still tingling, Cedric thought to himself. 'I
kissed her cheek! What on earth possessed me to do such a thing? She must think
I'm a big doofus.'
Back
at the compartment Cho placed a hand on the spot where Cedric kissed her. 'He's
never done anything like that before' she thought to herself. 'He seems
to be very friendly lately.'
The rest of the girls were several meters down the hall and headed back to their
compartment as the train was arriving at Hogwarts.
"Should we tell Cho?" asked Jenna, "I'm not
sure if I can keep a secret like this."
"Hmm. She would like to know. It's so cute!
She has a someone crushing on her. . .and a sweet
someone too. I'm so jealous! However, I
think it would be better if she figured it out on her own," said Amy. "These
things have a way of sorting themselves out if they were meant to be. Besides,
leave it a surprise."
"What if it scares her?" asked Marietta, "People do get traumatized.
Read it in Muggle Studies."
"Hey girls!" Cho stuck her head into the hall.
"Have fun with the jocks?"
"Wouldn't you like to know," snapped Heidi.
The
girls settled into the compartment and waited for the train to arrive to Hogwarts.
The remainder of the ride was mostly silent.
~*~*~*
Following
the sorting ceremony at Hogwarts, everyone feasted on a fine meal at their
respective tables with their new members. Cho was only half listening to the
new members. She turned around and saw Cedric from the Hufflepuff table. He
looked at her and smiled, she returned the smile. Behind Cedric, on the
Gryffindor table was Oliver who was looking at Cho. Cho suddenly felt her face
flare, and she turned around before Oliver could notice. Cedric and Oliver both smiled to themselves,
very amused, and very hopeful.
After
dinner, the Ravenclaws headed up three flights of stairs, left around the
statue of Isis, and down one half flight to
the common room. Cho was lagging towards the end of the lines, studying the
paintings as she walked. The rest of her house was at the bottom of the final
flight of stairs when Cho lagged around the statue. When Cho reached the stairs
she attempted to make the first step down before a stranger grabbed her on the
waist.
"Hold
on," said a husky voice.
Cho
looked up and saw the boy she had been thinking about all week. He had his eyes
fixed on the staircase; they started to move. Jenna looked up at Cho before the
stairs blocked her view. Oliver waited for the Gryffindors to pass by before
turning to Cho. His hazel eyes fixed on her deep brown eyes that twinkled from
a nearby torch. She tried to breathe a deep sigh but found herself unable to
relax.
"Uh . . . Can I talk with you . . . would you
walk with me?" he asked with a strong Scottish accent.
"Um . . ." Cho thought about her father's
advice.
"Well,
if you don't want to, I understand." he replied shifting his Gryffindor robes.
"No," Cho answered without thinking, "Not for
long though. It's past curfew."
Oliver
led Cho outside to the cloisters. It was still
raining outside but they were protected by the cloister roof. He stole several
glances of her as they walked. He stopped walking, and turned Cho towards
him. Cho looked up at his eyes. The dying
torches dimmed the lighting in the cloisters while the gushes of wind ruffled
Oliver's sandy hair. They both were lost in each other's gaze for a moment
before he regained the courage to speak.
"I
wanted to speak with you alone. Thought it would be best here."
Cho
looked up at him eager to hear what he had to say.
"I noticed you in the halls last spring and
again in Diagon Alley, and I wanted to find. . ." he started.
"Excuse
me!" called a distant voice. "Why aren't you in your dormitories?" the stranger
approached the couple "It is past curfew and I would not like to punish. . ."
it was Cedric.
He
looked from Oliver to Cho and then back to Oliver with a raised brow. The dim
light to his left was strong enough to illuminate his Prefect badge.
"Sorry, Diggory," Oliver pleaded. "We were
just talking," he added with an irritated tone. Cedric glared at him with a
cold stern look.
"Five
points from Gryffindor!" he turned to Cho, "And five from Ravenclaw." Cho took
a deep breath and looked at her feet. "Oliver I trust you can find the
Gryffindor common room without help? I will escort Cho to the staircase."
His
tone was cold making the once chilly wind now feels like a blast of fire.
Cedric placed his right arm on Cho's right shoulder and led her past Oliver.
She was too embarrassed to turn around and catch one last glance. Oliver on the
other hand watched her leave until she was out of sight. Once Oliver was no
longer visible, Cedric removed his hand from her shoulder but continued to look
forward without saying a word. He stopped at the bottom of the staircase and
asked her to do the same. He held out his wand and performed a paging charm to
contact Penelope Clearwater, Ravenclaw's Prefect. He informed her that Cho was
left behind and was not present to hear the new password to gain entrance to
the common room. He had still maintained his Hufflepuff honesty, without
getting Cho into further trouble. After he finished the conversation he turned
to Cho.
"I hate to sound like the parent in this situation," he said softly, "but it is
storming outside and the Dementors are lurking the grounds. I. . . I didn't
want you to get to close to one."
She
looked up and nodded at him.
"I'm sorry. I'll be careful. Bye," she
whispered and hurried up the three flights.
She
rushed around the statue and down the stairs to the portrait hole to her common
room. Moments later the Knight statue shifted to open the port hole, but she
did not find Penelope on the other side as expected. 'She must have told the
knight to expect me.' She rushed through the common room and up the stairs
to her dorm room. Cho opened the door softly in attempt to not wake her
roommates. They appeared to be asleep. She performed her night-time duties and
tiptoed to her bed. She looked at the other beds in the room making sure she
hadn't woken anyone before she climbed into her own bed. She closed the curtains and covered herself
in the blankets. She tossed and turned for hours. She couldn't help thinking
about the today's events. She wondered why Cedric kissed her on the cheek. She
wondered what Oliver was going to tell her. She wondered if she upset Cedric
tonight. 'This is going to be an interesting year,' were here last
thoughts before sleep overcame her.
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~*Phaedra
Note*~
WOW!
This chapter turned to be harder to write than I thought it would. Definitely
suffered serious writers block on this one…twice! I liked how this chapter
turned out. I intended to be mostly of character building, but added a bit of
the love triangle. Scandal! There were times where I didn't know where I was
going with this story. But, after many hours of pondering, I have a clear idea
of what will happen next!
Excited to post more.
