Ok this is my first Harry Potter fic so be nice and review so I know what
you think.
I know I'm a very bad speller so feel free to correct any that are wrong. I
really want your opinions on the story.
So here it goes.
(OK before this starts I think you should know some things. Harry is in his 6th year at Hogwarts but Sirius didn't die in the last book in fact he was cleared of all charges so he is now a free man. Remus is the DADA teacher again and Sirius is his assistant)
"Shut up Malfoy!"
"Make me Potter!"
"What is going on here?"
Professor Snape strode down the corridor and into the centre of the crowded entrance hall, professors McGonagall and Dumbledore followed behind both looking for the source of the commotion.
"Well, well. Look what we have here. Mr Potter I knew we would find you at the centre of all this fuss. Trying to improve your reputation further or are you just trying to cause trouble."
"Severus. That's enough. Mr Potter could you please explain what is going on here?"
"Malfoy called Hermione a mud blood."
"Is that true Mr Malfoy?"
"I was only telling the truth sir she is a filthy mud blood."
"Mr Malfoy that is enough. Fifty points will be taken from Slytherin. Now if we can all get back to supper.
At this point all of the professors and many of the students were gathered watching the site before them.
Just as Dumbledore turned back towards the doors leading towards the great hall the main doors leading from the outside opened, to reveal three people standing framed by the large solid oak doors.
At that moment the students saw a look on their headmasters face that scared them. Dumbledore looked shocked.
Sirius and Remus pushed their way to the front as well and both with expressions of shock and delight on their faces.
Then after a moment silence one of the females spoke whilst indicating to the two people standing behind her.
"Well, look what I found."
(OK before this starts I think you should know some things. Harry is in his 6th year at Hogwarts but Sirius didn't die in the last book in fact he was cleared of all charges so he is now a free man. Remus is the DADA teacher again and Sirius is his assistant)
"Shut up Malfoy!"
"Make me Potter!"
"What is going on here?"
Professor Snape strode down the corridor and into the centre of the crowded entrance hall, professors McGonagall and Dumbledore followed behind both looking for the source of the commotion.
"Well, well. Look what we have here. Mr Potter I knew we would find you at the centre of all this fuss. Trying to improve your reputation further or are you just trying to cause trouble."
"Severus. That's enough. Mr Potter could you please explain what is going on here?"
"Malfoy called Hermione a mud blood."
"Is that true Mr Malfoy?"
"I was only telling the truth sir she is a filthy mud blood."
"Mr Malfoy that is enough. Fifty points will be taken from Slytherin. Now if we can all get back to supper.
At this point all of the professors and many of the students were gathered watching the site before them.
Just as Dumbledore turned back towards the doors leading towards the great hall the main doors leading from the outside opened, to reveal three people standing framed by the large solid oak doors.
At that moment the students saw a look on their headmasters face that scared them. Dumbledore looked shocked.
Sirius and Remus pushed their way to the front as well and both with expressions of shock and delight on their faces.
Then after a moment silence one of the females spoke whilst indicating to the two people standing behind her.
"Well, look what I found."