A/N: This is the alternate scene. You can pick this one or the other one…which ever you think fits Raven better…I personally think this one does, but I also like the other one too, so whatever…Hope you enjoy this. I have also written a YuYu Hakusho story that is almost done. Look for "My Last Breath" sometime in the hopefully near future…It'll be my first finished story ever…wow…
Also, I'm working on chapter 13.…it's getting there…I wanted to write one long chapter for all you who like this story, and I'm at a point where I could post, but it would be short and what I wanted to be all in chapter 13 would be split into 2 or 3 chapters…but on the good side of that, you would get something new to read…which do you want? I'm ok either way…
Thanx for the reviews!
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I've warned you enough.
You see these zoids?
This is what's going to
be left of you, Van,
and Alisi too if you
still refuse to back
off.
"Punk!" Raven growled as he stood up, his back to the others. "Here's what I think of you…" The sound of a zipper was heard and a small stream of liquid flowed down the metal. Fiona turned her back to the boy as did Van. Reese continued to stare off into space seeming to be in a trance as Raven zipped his pants back up.
"Let's go." Van said again as he put an arm around Fiona's shoulders and lead her away from the wreck.
Raven turned and bent down to be at eye level with Reese. She looked kinda like she was going to cry. He reached out and lifted her chin up so she was looking at him. He stroked her check softly with his thumb.
"Come on. That jerk's not going to do anything. You really think he can be me and Van? Let's get going." He said standing up and offering Reese a hand. She took it and he pulled her to her feet. They all got in there zoids and started back on their way to the capital.
Raven reached up and turned off the com link to the liger.
"You alright?" he asked Reese with out turning around.
"Yeah. I wish I had a zoid though…"she said with a sigh.
"We'll get you one in Gigolos." he told her.
Reese sat back in her seat and gave another sigh. Raven reached down and grabbed something from under his seat which he tossed back onto the zoidian's lap.
"Pick one." he said.
Reese looked at the small circular pouch on her lap and unzipped it. Inside where some CDs. She searched through them and pick one. A blank white one caught her eye.
"What's this?" she asked.
"What's what?" he said turning to see.
"This white one. It doesn't have a label." she handed it to him.
"I don't remember this." he said looking at the CD. He stuck it in the player.
There was some static then a clear voice was heard. One that was all too familiar.
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A/N: I know that was super short, but I'm currently grounded, so I'm writing a lot. Also, that was too good of a place to stop. I know you hate cliffhangers…so do I, but hey, it's a way for me to get you to come back.
5 reviews and the next chapter will be posted.
~Midnight-Ice~
Also, I'm working on chapter 13.…it's getting there…I wanted to write one long chapter for all you who like this story, and I'm at a point where I could post, but it would be short and what I wanted to be all in chapter 13 would be split into 2 or 3 chapters…but on the good side of that, you would get something new to read…which do you want? I'm ok either way…
Thanx for the reviews!
******
I've warned you enough.
You see these zoids?
This is what's going to
be left of you, Van,
and Alisi too if you
still refuse to back
off.
"Punk!" Raven growled as he stood up, his back to the others. "Here's what I think of you…" The sound of a zipper was heard and a small stream of liquid flowed down the metal. Fiona turned her back to the boy as did Van. Reese continued to stare off into space seeming to be in a trance as Raven zipped his pants back up.
"Let's go." Van said again as he put an arm around Fiona's shoulders and lead her away from the wreck.
Raven turned and bent down to be at eye level with Reese. She looked kinda like she was going to cry. He reached out and lifted her chin up so she was looking at him. He stroked her check softly with his thumb.
"Come on. That jerk's not going to do anything. You really think he can be me and Van? Let's get going." He said standing up and offering Reese a hand. She took it and he pulled her to her feet. They all got in there zoids and started back on their way to the capital.
Raven reached up and turned off the com link to the liger.
"You alright?" he asked Reese with out turning around.
"Yeah. I wish I had a zoid though…"she said with a sigh.
"We'll get you one in Gigolos." he told her.
Reese sat back in her seat and gave another sigh. Raven reached down and grabbed something from under his seat which he tossed back onto the zoidian's lap.
"Pick one." he said.
Reese looked at the small circular pouch on her lap and unzipped it. Inside where some CDs. She searched through them and pick one. A blank white one caught her eye.
"What's this?" she asked.
"What's what?" he said turning to see.
"This white one. It doesn't have a label." she handed it to him.
"I don't remember this." he said looking at the CD. He stuck it in the player.
There was some static then a clear voice was heard. One that was all too familiar.
******
A/N: I know that was super short, but I'm currently grounded, so I'm writing a lot. Also, that was too good of a place to stop. I know you hate cliffhangers…so do I, but hey, it's a way for me to get you to come back.
5 reviews and the next chapter will be posted.
~Midnight-Ice~