My second sotry! WOO HOO!!!!!!!!!! Please R&R. Hope you like it.
Here it is...
"Hilary can you tell me who started Pearl Harbor?" Hilary sits in her desk twirling her wavy, brown hair, wearing white closed toe pumps, dark blue jeans, a light pink tank top, and a black purse sitting beside her. She pauses for a moment, "Japan." Mr. Church, her World History teacher, says, "Yes, that's correct." As soon as he says this the bell rings. Hilary slowly gathers up her books thinking about her fifteenth birthday party next month. She already gave out all the invitations except one. Jakes. She pauses for a moment before heading out the door. She thinks how badly she would like to break up with Kyle for Jake. Reality sets back in and she heads into the depths of the crowded hallway towards Geometry. Hilary walks rapidly through the crowded hallway hoping not to bump into Jake. As luck would have it Jake taps her on the shoulder and in a girly way says, "Guess who." Hilary knows who it is but plays along. "Hmm, is it Rachel?" In the same girl voice Jake says, "No try again." Hilary, giggling now, says, "Maybe it's Jake?" Hilary smiles and turns around, "I knew it was you all along Jake." Jake laughs at this and says, "So how's my best friend doing today?" "I'm doing fine Jake. By the way I have something for you." Jakes stomach starts to do flip flops thinking maybe she's going to give him a note asking him out. Once again reality sets back in. "What is it Hil?" "An invitation to my birthday party next month." Jake smiles, "Great! I'll try my hardest to be there." On the inside Jake's a little disappointed, but he knows he can't come between Hilary and Kyle. Kyle would kick his ass. Jake also thinks he'll never have a chance with Hilary. "Well, you have to RSVP by January 19 so we can get things together." Jake wants to tell Hilary right now how he badly wants her to go out with him, but he holds back, "Look Hilary I got to get to class see you at lunch." Hilary's a little disappointed but shrugs it off and says, "Okay, I'll see you at lunch." As Jake walks off Hilary heads to Geometry.
Here it is...
"Hilary can you tell me who started Pearl Harbor?" Hilary sits in her desk twirling her wavy, brown hair, wearing white closed toe pumps, dark blue jeans, a light pink tank top, and a black purse sitting beside her. She pauses for a moment, "Japan." Mr. Church, her World History teacher, says, "Yes, that's correct." As soon as he says this the bell rings. Hilary slowly gathers up her books thinking about her fifteenth birthday party next month. She already gave out all the invitations except one. Jakes. She pauses for a moment before heading out the door. She thinks how badly she would like to break up with Kyle for Jake. Reality sets back in and she heads into the depths of the crowded hallway towards Geometry. Hilary walks rapidly through the crowded hallway hoping not to bump into Jake. As luck would have it Jake taps her on the shoulder and in a girly way says, "Guess who." Hilary knows who it is but plays along. "Hmm, is it Rachel?" In the same girl voice Jake says, "No try again." Hilary, giggling now, says, "Maybe it's Jake?" Hilary smiles and turns around, "I knew it was you all along Jake." Jake laughs at this and says, "So how's my best friend doing today?" "I'm doing fine Jake. By the way I have something for you." Jakes stomach starts to do flip flops thinking maybe she's going to give him a note asking him out. Once again reality sets back in. "What is it Hil?" "An invitation to my birthday party next month." Jake smiles, "Great! I'll try my hardest to be there." On the inside Jake's a little disappointed, but he knows he can't come between Hilary and Kyle. Kyle would kick his ass. Jake also thinks he'll never have a chance with Hilary. "Well, you have to RSVP by January 19 so we can get things together." Jake wants to tell Hilary right now how he badly wants her to go out with him, but he holds back, "Look Hilary I got to get to class see you at lunch." Hilary's a little disappointed but shrugs it off and says, "Okay, I'll see you at lunch." As Jake walks off Hilary heads to Geometry.