Sakura-Hiwatari: - This is my first Outsider piece…so it's pretty bad but meh.
I got a 4- on it from my teacher. Our class was reading it together and we each had to
do a rap, essay, poem or draw out 10 main parts of the story… but I didn't do this poem
by myself I would like to say Thank-you to Michele for helping me and that you're a great
person and a great friend. Let's begin the poem.
The Outsiders
Ponyboy got hit,
He threw a fit
Ponyboy ran away with Johnny to the park
Bob only had one mark,
after Johnny killed him
The lights became dim.
They went to Dally,
Who was as cold as an alley.
He gave them guns and money,
he wasn't being funny.
They went up a hill to search
There they found a church.
Dally took Ponyboy and Johnny to Diary Queen,
They got very lean.
They got back to the church,
that was made of birch.
It was on fire with kids inside it,
The people who were concerned had a fit.
Johnny and Ponyboy saved the brats,
there was not a single rat.
When they came home there was a rumble
Johnny was in the hospital, all he could do is mumble
Johnny soon then died
The nurse had lied.
She said that he would be 'alright'
Dally ran away, with all his might.
Dally robbed a store.
He won't do that anymore,
Because he got shot and died
All Ponyboy could do was cried.
Ponyboy and his brothers got in to a fight
While it was still light
Ponyboy got insane
But not from a game
Ponyboy got better
When he read Johnny's letter
Sakura-Hiwatari - Meh, the poem was ok. Even though some parts got nothing to do
with the story but I had to get something to rhyme with it. --;;.
Out of five star I rate "The Outsiders" 4.5.
I got addicted to it so much I even got a copy of it ;;.
Tell me what you think of it in the review -! Thanks for reading XD.
I got a 4- on it from my teacher. Our class was reading it together and we each had to
do a rap, essay, poem or draw out 10 main parts of the story… but I didn't do this poem
by myself I would like to say Thank-you to Michele for helping me and that you're a great
person and a great friend. Let's begin the poem.
The Outsiders
Ponyboy got hit,
He threw a fit
Ponyboy ran away with Johnny to the park
Bob only had one mark,
after Johnny killed him
The lights became dim.
They went to Dally,
Who was as cold as an alley.
He gave them guns and money,
he wasn't being funny.
They went up a hill to search
There they found a church.
Dally took Ponyboy and Johnny to Diary Queen,
They got very lean.
They got back to the church,
that was made of birch.
It was on fire with kids inside it,
The people who were concerned had a fit.
Johnny and Ponyboy saved the brats,
there was not a single rat.
When they came home there was a rumble
Johnny was in the hospital, all he could do is mumble
Johnny soon then died
The nurse had lied.
She said that he would be 'alright'
Dally ran away, with all his might.
Dally robbed a store.
He won't do that anymore,
Because he got shot and died
All Ponyboy could do was cried.
Ponyboy and his brothers got in to a fight
While it was still light
Ponyboy got insane
But not from a game
Ponyboy got better
When he read Johnny's letter
Sakura-Hiwatari - Meh, the poem was ok. Even though some parts got nothing to do
with the story but I had to get something to rhyme with it. --;;.
Out of five star I rate "The Outsiders" 4.5.
I got addicted to it so much I even got a copy of it ;;.
Tell me what you think of it in the review -! Thanks for reading XD.