Hey this is an authors note, I think there technically not allowed to be
submitted as chapters any longer but o well screw it I will get some
information that's story related, so there is my loop hole
I was originally planning to write a chapter when I opened up this document but honestly I don't think I'm ever going to get to get to the end of this story I truly don't, and figure might as well end it know before I actually interest some people in it, although I know that one person did review and I thank you it meant a lot to know someone was reading this and I apologize though I'm pretty sure you'll be able to live without this story if this even effects you anyway near as dramatic as that, you my friend have problems, and this is coming from the girl with an imaginary friend name Ràuken, anyway it kind of saddens me to stop this story I still like the idea a lot, I had some really great scenes planned out, I just didn't know what I was going to do to get up to that point, I think my big mistake was introducing all of my OC's in a chapter like the previous one, it just made the story very long, though I didn't get around to actually typing them all, I just don't think I have time for this story I've bitten off more then I can chew and this is the one I sadly have to let, I'd like to say one day I'll get around to finishing it though I don't se it happening at least not anytime soon, you never really know
OK, I don't want to leave the view readers I have in a cliff-hanger totally lost in the dark so I'm going to try to explain as best I could what I had planned without boring you, who knows maybe I'll even inspire someone and they'll pick up where I left off
Basically this story is kind of my version of X2 the movie, but with the X- men evolution cast – cuz I like them better, but for those who have the first X-men 1.5 on DVD, you might have watched all the special features where they talked about X2 and I remember I forgot who but he said in the end of the first movie they hinted about what would happen in the second when Magneto and the professor where playing chess and they had a conversation somewhat along the lines of
"And Charles what will happen when the invade that precious school of your"
"If anyone has the nerve to come to our school, I'll feel very sorry for hey unfortunate-"
That's al I really remember what if they invade? I'LL FEEL SORRY FOR THEM AND THE WORD UNFORTUNATE WAS SOMEWHERE IN THE MIX
Damn caps lock, and damn my laziness because I won't re-type it, anyways seeing this led me to form what I thought the second movie would be like, and I thought that they would invade and you know you attack where a group of mutant kids with there ungodly powers dwell, a lot of them, plus that whole home-field advantage, I thought we'd get to see the teens and pre- teens defend them selves and kick secret military ass, while wolverines and the teachers take out the head honcho, I thought that be pretty kool to see, teach them all a lesson
So I came up with this story one major difference from the show and the movie the amount of students residing in the mansion, so I was going to create a bunch of knew characters, some will be more vital and have more pf a background like Shane did and some will just be there much like those two girls in chapter two, some of them I already started introducing like Shane obviously, and after him I was going to introduce Mia the vampire girl, and that Japanese boy that has the overly developed brain, I forgot what I names him, it was a Japanese name meaning wisdom, or bright boy or something like that
Yeah I was going to have others too, like Mystique would have requited two new members for the BoM, like a gay guy (Plasma) that can form himself into a Purple jello like substance and go oozing through and kool junk like that, and an African American girl Trisha (didn't think up name) who can protect an image of herself and other abject out of her body, kind of like an extremely realistic hologram, which make a real good distraction
I was going to have a new girl Vinny (Ripper (derived form rip-tide (ohh I have parenthesis in parenthesis, in parenthesis))) who is one with the forces of water, and turns out to be Pyro's sister who traveled via ocean from Australia
See why this was going to be long-
Anyway I would stick in romance on the side cause that's what the readers want, try o stick with all the original X-men pairing or at least the one that work according to the show you know Jott, Romy, and Tonda, possibly Lancitty though I was think of getting Kitty with the super genius, but let you guys vote on other couples, involving the OC's and all, hey it will get to a point where they believe they have a few seconds left to live, so that should force people to come forth and confess there crushes and such, Though I don't want everyone to get a significant other. Fics like that bug me.
Anyway, though the storyline is bound to change as I went along was going to those kool mutant teenager kicking military ass scenes like I mention – Ex:
The group soldiers ran panting down the hallway until they reached an end of some small little hallway with a door on the left and a door on the right, they split into two groups.
"Ok you three take the left, the rest of you guys come with me, we don't know how many they'll be in there, call if you need back-up"
"Roger"
The three soldiers burst into the room on the left only to find a small sandy haired boy no older then twelve standing in the corner of the room
"How is it in there" a static voice was heard protruding form the walkie- talkie
A soldier turned around and replied, "There's only one of them in here no matter what his power is one of us will get him with a tranquilizer"
"Ok this room is empty. We're going to move to the next room-over and out"
'Hey' they soldier felt a nudge from one of his comrades "what?" he asked looking up from his walkie-talkie "Holy -"
The soldier said looking up too find twenty of the sandy haired boy where one just stood
"Let me introduce myself, they all said in unison – I'm multiples"
Yeah that about the shortest segment that can be taken out of context and get the point across of the whole underestimating them and all
Basically despite everything it ends where striker is in the middle of the room with the bomb, like in the prologue but, this time mystique knew and got Rogue possibly assisted by Remy you know to appeal to you Romy loving audiences to go through the ducts an wait directly above his head so they'll be in the circle of protection when it activates Rogue drops down using plasma's powers that she absorbed form him absorbs striker figures out the secret words, and uses mystique power to imitate his voices they're all saved YAY – though I was thinking of letting Kurt try to teleport and get fried anyway so it's not a PERFECT ending, and I am so evil, but I don't think I would have done that cause keep in mind during all this hilarity is ensuing
One more thing I was probably going to have the last chapter be like a breakfast club ending, see if you recall Striker was bleeding to death, well Mia the Vampire, with her connection with blood and all somehow does something to save him or something so he'll have to live knowing that a mutant saved his lived, but I was contemplating this somehow getting televised and they all go one saying how mutants are different and are people just like you like how they can be white, black, blue, old, young, German, Australian, Japanese, female, male, a jock, a pervert, a Goth, a thief, insane, a prep, you see my drift and well that's basically it, know that I have the idea cycling in my head I do want to finish the story, maybe I'll work on it on the side, you know one chapter a year and when I'm 30 and the cartoon is canceled I post the finished product
I'd also like to point out that this entire thing is one sentence, do you see a '.' I don't.
I was originally planning to write a chapter when I opened up this document but honestly I don't think I'm ever going to get to get to the end of this story I truly don't, and figure might as well end it know before I actually interest some people in it, although I know that one person did review and I thank you it meant a lot to know someone was reading this and I apologize though I'm pretty sure you'll be able to live without this story if this even effects you anyway near as dramatic as that, you my friend have problems, and this is coming from the girl with an imaginary friend name Ràuken, anyway it kind of saddens me to stop this story I still like the idea a lot, I had some really great scenes planned out, I just didn't know what I was going to do to get up to that point, I think my big mistake was introducing all of my OC's in a chapter like the previous one, it just made the story very long, though I didn't get around to actually typing them all, I just don't think I have time for this story I've bitten off more then I can chew and this is the one I sadly have to let, I'd like to say one day I'll get around to finishing it though I don't se it happening at least not anytime soon, you never really know
OK, I don't want to leave the view readers I have in a cliff-hanger totally lost in the dark so I'm going to try to explain as best I could what I had planned without boring you, who knows maybe I'll even inspire someone and they'll pick up where I left off
Basically this story is kind of my version of X2 the movie, but with the X- men evolution cast – cuz I like them better, but for those who have the first X-men 1.5 on DVD, you might have watched all the special features where they talked about X2 and I remember I forgot who but he said in the end of the first movie they hinted about what would happen in the second when Magneto and the professor where playing chess and they had a conversation somewhat along the lines of
"And Charles what will happen when the invade that precious school of your"
"If anyone has the nerve to come to our school, I'll feel very sorry for hey unfortunate-"
That's al I really remember what if they invade? I'LL FEEL SORRY FOR THEM AND THE WORD UNFORTUNATE WAS SOMEWHERE IN THE MIX
Damn caps lock, and damn my laziness because I won't re-type it, anyways seeing this led me to form what I thought the second movie would be like, and I thought that they would invade and you know you attack where a group of mutant kids with there ungodly powers dwell, a lot of them, plus that whole home-field advantage, I thought we'd get to see the teens and pre- teens defend them selves and kick secret military ass, while wolverines and the teachers take out the head honcho, I thought that be pretty kool to see, teach them all a lesson
So I came up with this story one major difference from the show and the movie the amount of students residing in the mansion, so I was going to create a bunch of knew characters, some will be more vital and have more pf a background like Shane did and some will just be there much like those two girls in chapter two, some of them I already started introducing like Shane obviously, and after him I was going to introduce Mia the vampire girl, and that Japanese boy that has the overly developed brain, I forgot what I names him, it was a Japanese name meaning wisdom, or bright boy or something like that
Yeah I was going to have others too, like Mystique would have requited two new members for the BoM, like a gay guy (Plasma) that can form himself into a Purple jello like substance and go oozing through and kool junk like that, and an African American girl Trisha (didn't think up name) who can protect an image of herself and other abject out of her body, kind of like an extremely realistic hologram, which make a real good distraction
I was going to have a new girl Vinny (Ripper (derived form rip-tide (ohh I have parenthesis in parenthesis, in parenthesis))) who is one with the forces of water, and turns out to be Pyro's sister who traveled via ocean from Australia
See why this was going to be long-
Anyway I would stick in romance on the side cause that's what the readers want, try o stick with all the original X-men pairing or at least the one that work according to the show you know Jott, Romy, and Tonda, possibly Lancitty though I was think of getting Kitty with the super genius, but let you guys vote on other couples, involving the OC's and all, hey it will get to a point where they believe they have a few seconds left to live, so that should force people to come forth and confess there crushes and such, Though I don't want everyone to get a significant other. Fics like that bug me.
Anyway, though the storyline is bound to change as I went along was going to those kool mutant teenager kicking military ass scenes like I mention – Ex:
The group soldiers ran panting down the hallway until they reached an end of some small little hallway with a door on the left and a door on the right, they split into two groups.
"Ok you three take the left, the rest of you guys come with me, we don't know how many they'll be in there, call if you need back-up"
"Roger"
The three soldiers burst into the room on the left only to find a small sandy haired boy no older then twelve standing in the corner of the room
"How is it in there" a static voice was heard protruding form the walkie- talkie
A soldier turned around and replied, "There's only one of them in here no matter what his power is one of us will get him with a tranquilizer"
"Ok this room is empty. We're going to move to the next room-over and out"
'Hey' they soldier felt a nudge from one of his comrades "what?" he asked looking up from his walkie-talkie "Holy -"
The soldier said looking up too find twenty of the sandy haired boy where one just stood
"Let me introduce myself, they all said in unison – I'm multiples"
Yeah that about the shortest segment that can be taken out of context and get the point across of the whole underestimating them and all
Basically despite everything it ends where striker is in the middle of the room with the bomb, like in the prologue but, this time mystique knew and got Rogue possibly assisted by Remy you know to appeal to you Romy loving audiences to go through the ducts an wait directly above his head so they'll be in the circle of protection when it activates Rogue drops down using plasma's powers that she absorbed form him absorbs striker figures out the secret words, and uses mystique power to imitate his voices they're all saved YAY – though I was thinking of letting Kurt try to teleport and get fried anyway so it's not a PERFECT ending, and I am so evil, but I don't think I would have done that cause keep in mind during all this hilarity is ensuing
One more thing I was probably going to have the last chapter be like a breakfast club ending, see if you recall Striker was bleeding to death, well Mia the Vampire, with her connection with blood and all somehow does something to save him or something so he'll have to live knowing that a mutant saved his lived, but I was contemplating this somehow getting televised and they all go one saying how mutants are different and are people just like you like how they can be white, black, blue, old, young, German, Australian, Japanese, female, male, a jock, a pervert, a Goth, a thief, insane, a prep, you see my drift and well that's basically it, know that I have the idea cycling in my head I do want to finish the story, maybe I'll work on it on the side, you know one chapter a year and when I'm 30 and the cartoon is canceled I post the finished product
I'd also like to point out that this entire thing is one sentence, do you see a '.' I don't.