Well I'm back. Thanks to Amop and iwantSK for reviewing my story and hope
others will review it as well. I have decided to allow flams as I need to
know what I am doing wrong.
Disclaimer: I do NOT own Yugioh but I did make up Mark and Patrick and some of their decks. So you're not going to sue.
Chapter 2: the Making of New Friends
(Sorry I made a mistake M.S 2 has: Blue Eyes White Dragon in attack mode (3 cards in hand). On with the story)
M.S 1: "Well it looks like we have the upper hand as your teammate does not have any monsters. So I will start by flipping my face down Dark Cat with a white tail and activate his effect! Return Patrick's face down card and I will return my Cat. Now I summon Harpie's Brother (1800/600) and attack Mark directly."
Patrick: I use Waboku to defend him.
M.S 2: "But now my Blue Eyes White Dragon can attack him directly causing him 3000 points of damage."
M.S 1: I end
Mark: "It's my turn now. Draw. Ok I set one card face down (komouri dragon) and activate Wave-Motion Cannon".
M.S 2: "What in gods name is that?" he said pointing to the slowly charging cannon?
Mark: "You will just have to find out won't you? I end"
M.S 2: "My turn and I draw. Blue Eyes White Dragon attack his face down card now." The large dragon powered up a charge from its mouth and unleashed it at Mark's face down card. By this time there were many spectators watching their duel.
Mark: No big loss
M.S. 2: "End"
Patrick: "Draw." Hum... Magic retrieval he thought to himself. "Watch this move. First I activate Rageki destroying your side of the field." Patrick said pointing to M.S 2 "now I'll activate Magic Retrieval. By discarding one card from my hand I can bring back a card from my graveyard. Now I activate the card I just got from my graveyard Rageki on you." He said point to M.S 1 "so both of your fields are empty. Now I play Pot of greed allowing me to draw two cards. Yes" he said as he looked at his cards. "I play this card, Hand of last resort (I don't know if that's exactly how to say/spell but o well) which allows everyone to draw six cards. Then I activate Sentry of the ages which allows me to discard cards from my hand and pick a certain card from my deck. However for every card I discard I have to pay 500 life points so I discard 5 cards to draw 5 cards I want. Now I summon Maho Vailo and activate the five cards I drew. Scapegoat, United we stand, Twin Sword of Flashing Light- Trice, and Mage Power (Maho Vailo 1550/1000 (forgot defense points) 4500 from United we Stand 0 from Trice because of Maho Vailo's affect, plus 2500 from Mage power = 7500 1550 = 9050 and can attack twice because of the effect of Trice)
M.S 1: "What????"
M.S 2: "No Way!!!"
Patrick: Yes so now my super powered up Maho Vailo attack both their life points directly!!
After Patrick declared the attack the large spell caster launched a large energy beam at both M.S 1 and M.S 2
(M.S 1: 0 LP M.S 2: 0 LP Patrick: 5500 LP Mark: 8000 LP)
Suddenly M.S 1 and M.S 2 said to Mark and Patrick "that was a well fought duel but as our agreement here are our decks
Mark: "Thanks"
Suddenly there was a flash of smoke and they were gone.
Mark: "That was some duel..."
Patrick: "Yeah very intense."
Mark: "Hey look over there" he said pointing to two girls. "Isn't that Hillary Moto and Alysha Wheeler?"
Patrick: "Oh yeah it is." Patrick and Mark walked up to the two girls and before they could talk Hillary said "that was some duel."
Mark: "Uh... thanks"
Alysha: "well I'll see you in the tournament then?"
Patrick: "Yeah I guess you will"
Alysha: well we'll see you later in the finals then won't we?
Mark: "Um. Sure I guess,"
Suddenly the intercom buzzed and said "We will be there in five minutes. Repeat Five minutes please get ready to get to Duelist Island.
Well that's it for now. R&R please.
Atriux
Disclaimer: I do NOT own Yugioh but I did make up Mark and Patrick and some of their decks. So you're not going to sue.
Chapter 2: the Making of New Friends
(Sorry I made a mistake M.S 2 has: Blue Eyes White Dragon in attack mode (3 cards in hand). On with the story)
M.S 1: "Well it looks like we have the upper hand as your teammate does not have any monsters. So I will start by flipping my face down Dark Cat with a white tail and activate his effect! Return Patrick's face down card and I will return my Cat. Now I summon Harpie's Brother (1800/600) and attack Mark directly."
Patrick: I use Waboku to defend him.
M.S 2: "But now my Blue Eyes White Dragon can attack him directly causing him 3000 points of damage."
M.S 1: I end
Mark: "It's my turn now. Draw. Ok I set one card face down (komouri dragon) and activate Wave-Motion Cannon".
M.S 2: "What in gods name is that?" he said pointing to the slowly charging cannon?
Mark: "You will just have to find out won't you? I end"
M.S 2: "My turn and I draw. Blue Eyes White Dragon attack his face down card now." The large dragon powered up a charge from its mouth and unleashed it at Mark's face down card. By this time there were many spectators watching their duel.
Mark: No big loss
M.S. 2: "End"
Patrick: "Draw." Hum... Magic retrieval he thought to himself. "Watch this move. First I activate Rageki destroying your side of the field." Patrick said pointing to M.S 2 "now I'll activate Magic Retrieval. By discarding one card from my hand I can bring back a card from my graveyard. Now I activate the card I just got from my graveyard Rageki on you." He said point to M.S 1 "so both of your fields are empty. Now I play Pot of greed allowing me to draw two cards. Yes" he said as he looked at his cards. "I play this card, Hand of last resort (I don't know if that's exactly how to say/spell but o well) which allows everyone to draw six cards. Then I activate Sentry of the ages which allows me to discard cards from my hand and pick a certain card from my deck. However for every card I discard I have to pay 500 life points so I discard 5 cards to draw 5 cards I want. Now I summon Maho Vailo and activate the five cards I drew. Scapegoat, United we stand, Twin Sword of Flashing Light- Trice, and Mage Power (Maho Vailo 1550/1000 (forgot defense points) 4500 from United we Stand 0 from Trice because of Maho Vailo's affect, plus 2500 from Mage power = 7500 1550 = 9050 and can attack twice because of the effect of Trice)
M.S 1: "What????"
M.S 2: "No Way!!!"
Patrick: Yes so now my super powered up Maho Vailo attack both their life points directly!!
After Patrick declared the attack the large spell caster launched a large energy beam at both M.S 1 and M.S 2
(M.S 1: 0 LP M.S 2: 0 LP Patrick: 5500 LP Mark: 8000 LP)
Suddenly M.S 1 and M.S 2 said to Mark and Patrick "that was a well fought duel but as our agreement here are our decks
Mark: "Thanks"
Suddenly there was a flash of smoke and they were gone.
Mark: "That was some duel..."
Patrick: "Yeah very intense."
Mark: "Hey look over there" he said pointing to two girls. "Isn't that Hillary Moto and Alysha Wheeler?"
Patrick: "Oh yeah it is." Patrick and Mark walked up to the two girls and before they could talk Hillary said "that was some duel."
Mark: "Uh... thanks"
Alysha: "well I'll see you in the tournament then?"
Patrick: "Yeah I guess you will"
Alysha: well we'll see you later in the finals then won't we?
Mark: "Um. Sure I guess,"
Suddenly the intercom buzzed and said "We will be there in five minutes. Repeat Five minutes please get ready to get to Duelist Island.
Well that's it for now. R&R please.
Atriux