This is my first time writing, so please leave a review! I know it sucks!
Chapter 1: The Meeting
Merton: (sneaks up on Tommy) Nice day eh?!
Tommy: (scared) Hey dude. Don't scare me like that again!
Merton: Okay-dokee.
Tommy: So what's up?
Merton: (frowning) Nothing.(looks down) What about you? I was wondering what you were doing Saturday night. Maybe we could go to the Factory and just talk about...gah! (sees a hot girl walk past him?
Tommy: (dazed) Who the hell is she? ( stares at her outfit)
Lori: Hi guys! (walking up to Tommy and Merton)
Merton: (staring at the girl as she's walking to class) Humph...Gah...Huh...nana baga...Huh? (as he sees the girl going into class, he is snapped into attention.)
Tommy: Wasn't she sexy?! (still dazed)
Lori: (steps on Tommy's foot!) Tommy!
Tommy: Ouch! (grabs foot and dances around the hallway)
Kid: (laughing and pointing at Tommy's dancing and soar foot)
Tommy: What did you do that for!?
Lori: Um lets see, you were staring at a new foreign exchange student's butt!
Merton: Really? Now wonder she's so hot!
Lori: You guys are sick!
Tommy: Hey how'd you know? (starts to cough) Are you physic?
Lori: No! But I'm flattered! (taking out mirror and admiring herself)
(Bell rings)
Lori: Well catch ya 'all later! Gotta get to class! Tommy and Merton: Ya! lets go.
(On their way to class...)
Merton: Wasn't she so out of this world? (staring at ceiling lights)
Tommy: Yeah! (also staring at lights)
(A kid bumps into Merton and he snaps out of the girls admiration)
Merton: (pushing Tommy) Oh yah what were you saying about Saturday? Is it a deal? Factory?
Tommy: I wish I could. But can't. I have a date with Samantha Korney!
Merton: Gah! Thee Samantha Korney? The hottest girl from Pleasantville?
Tommy: That's the one!
(Merton and Tommy go into their classroom)
(A girl is seen behind the wall listening to Tommy's and Merton's conversation)
I know it sucked! But it's my first fanfic! And sorry to let you hanging there! I'll start writing my other chapter soon! So keep reading cause I'll reveal the girl! And please please leave a review!!!!!!!!!!!
Chapter 1: The Meeting
Merton: (sneaks up on Tommy) Nice day eh?!
Tommy: (scared) Hey dude. Don't scare me like that again!
Merton: Okay-dokee.
Tommy: So what's up?
Merton: (frowning) Nothing.(looks down) What about you? I was wondering what you were doing Saturday night. Maybe we could go to the Factory and just talk about...gah! (sees a hot girl walk past him?
Tommy: (dazed) Who the hell is she? ( stares at her outfit)
Lori: Hi guys! (walking up to Tommy and Merton)
Merton: (staring at the girl as she's walking to class) Humph...Gah...Huh...nana baga...Huh? (as he sees the girl going into class, he is snapped into attention.)
Tommy: Wasn't she sexy?! (still dazed)
Lori: (steps on Tommy's foot!) Tommy!
Tommy: Ouch! (grabs foot and dances around the hallway)
Kid: (laughing and pointing at Tommy's dancing and soar foot)
Tommy: What did you do that for!?
Lori: Um lets see, you were staring at a new foreign exchange student's butt!
Merton: Really? Now wonder she's so hot!
Lori: You guys are sick!
Tommy: Hey how'd you know? (starts to cough) Are you physic?
Lori: No! But I'm flattered! (taking out mirror and admiring herself)
(Bell rings)
Lori: Well catch ya 'all later! Gotta get to class! Tommy and Merton: Ya! lets go.
(On their way to class...)
Merton: Wasn't she so out of this world? (staring at ceiling lights)
Tommy: Yeah! (also staring at lights)
(A kid bumps into Merton and he snaps out of the girls admiration)
Merton: (pushing Tommy) Oh yah what were you saying about Saturday? Is it a deal? Factory?
Tommy: I wish I could. But can't. I have a date with Samantha Korney!
Merton: Gah! Thee Samantha Korney? The hottest girl from Pleasantville?
Tommy: That's the one!
(Merton and Tommy go into their classroom)
(A girl is seen behind the wall listening to Tommy's and Merton's conversation)
I know it sucked! But it's my first fanfic! And sorry to let you hanging there! I'll start writing my other chapter soon! So keep reading cause I'll reveal the girl! And please please leave a review!!!!!!!!!!!