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omg I can't believe how everyone reviewed so fast!!! So I was like omg I better start typing =) lol neways big thanks to all who reveiwed!!! and all those who didn't I just hope everyone enjoys my fic!
So here's a special individual thanks to those who did review if I didn't include u Its because I wrote the chapter before u reviewed. So if you want I will include you in the next chapter okay?
So thanks to
Kail-Meg and ravenprincess:I'm so happy that you guys like my fanfic!!! | |
,YaY-Don't worry I'll put some beastboi and raven moments in =) but it won't be till later chapter k? So be patient ^-^) This slight moment in the chappy can be dedicated to you k?
KoolKat101- hey I know what your talking about =) I've always wanted to watch fruit baskets! It looks cute and interesting =)
Writer of the (Not self-voted but voted by other fics) fic ever:: Thanks for reviewing
NNY- thanks for the info I think it's a au too! But I figured I haven't seen any like this yet so I thought it would be fun.
Bri: Oh My God! I am so sry thank you so much for telling me that I wrote that Starfire had purple hair. I really really must b e losing it! JUST TO LET EVERYONE KNOW STARFIRE HAS RED HAIR! NOT PURPLE I AM SO SRY! Thank you so much for telling me.
Well on with the next chapter =)
Chapter 2 *The Tour of the School and everything with in it*
Robin's Prov
"Why me?" I thought as I sat in the rest of class making dirty looks at my Math teacher. I know this is childish, but I couldn't help it. I mean I know I should be happy, I get to show this RED *^-^* haired beauty known as Starfire around. But my coach is going to kill me... I moaned as I hit my head on the desk.
~ Ring Ring ~
"Well at least class is over" I mumbled as I walked toward the door.
"Robin wait up!" said a voice from behind my back.
"What?" I asked in a annoyed voice. "Maybe I can scare her off." I thought
"You're supposed to show me around!" said the girl known as Starfire. For the first time I finally got a good look at her and she was even more beautiful then what he pictured from the school window. But she is also annoying because know I am going to be kicked of the soccer team because of her! Suddenly I formed a big dislike for this girl even though she was beautiful and I didn't even know her.
"Yea... So this is the school and this is stupid math class. Happy? Know can I please leave I need to get to soccer practice." I said sarcastically. But as soon as I said it I immediately wanted to take it back. As I saw small tears form up in her eyes.
"Why don't you like me?" she asked timidly
"Its not that... Its just.."
"That you don't want to take the time to show me around because you have other things to do and you think I am ugly and your to good for me right?" She asked as the tears cleared away and were replaced with a fierce glare of hatred.
"Its not that honestly!" I said putting my hands in front of me. "God is this girl moody" I thought silently.
"Then what is it? Mr. I'm too good for you!" She spat as she pointed a finger into my chest.
I sighed in defeat "Listen, I am sorry, I didn't mean it. Its just I'm in a bad mood and if I don't make soccer practice my coach is going to kill me!"
"Well, maybe you should pay attention in class and you wouldn't be stuck here showing me around, know would you?" She asked bitterly.
"It's not my fault I have better things to do with my life, know if you excuse me I need to get to practice." I said knowing this was mean but my pride was on the line and you know how boys are with there pride right? I mean if word got out that I was a sissy my popularity would be over.
"Hey wait I am not done with you!" Starfire yelled as she ran after Robin.
Starfire's Prov
"What is up with this jerk?" I thought glaring at nothing in particular
"Where did he go" I yelled as everyone around me looked at me like I was crazy. "Sorry!" I said timidly "Nice way to start the year off" I thought.
Then I noticed a girl in black baggy pants and a tight black shirt. With short Purple hair and blue eyes *what color eyes does Raven have?* walk past me.
"Hey excuse me!" I sputtered I was kind of intimidated by this girl. But you would to if you saw her! *sorry Raven fans I am not bashing her don't worry I luv raven to but its just part of the story* She just kept on walking.
"Hey!" I yelled hoping she would hear me this time.
"You've got my attention, what do you want preppy?" She said coldly.
"I uhhh was wondering if you saw a boy with dark black hair go by?" I asked
"Which one? I thought I was wasting my time, I am so out of here, bye preppy." The girl said as she just walked away.
"Well that was helpful" I thought gloomily
"Excuse me, but are you looking for Robin?" Asked a brown haired, blued eyes girl. She had on a pair of flare jeans and a maroon peasant top.
"Why yes! How did you know?" I asked stunned, not expecting some one to just coem up to me and talk to me.
"I figured he would do something like that. I'm in your math class." said the girl as she smiled sweetly.
"O0o" I said blushing at how stupid I could be. How could I not recognize her from this morning.
"Its okay! It's hard to remember everyone's faces. My names Christina and I believe you are Starfire right?" She asked throwing her hand forward.
"Nice to meet you!" I said smiling back and shaking her hand.
"Don't mind that girl you were talking to. That's Raven she's kind of a loner but that's just how she is to everyone. So don't take it personal, the only person who tries to open her up is Danny. But everyone calls him beast boy, don't ask why =)." She said pointing to a boy that was across the hall trying to the girl I met before.
"Oh! So anyways do you know which way Robin went? He was supposed to give me a tour! He is such a spoiled brat someone needs to set him straight!" I yelled
"Your right! ^_^ But forget about him, I'll show you around." Christina said
"Okay!"
"So that's how my friendship with the girl Christina started."
Robin's Prov
"I think I lost her" I thought breathing hard as I ducked around a corner of the school. Which led out to the soccer field.
"Well at least I won't miss practice." I though as I looked around the corner to see Starfire asking Raven if she had seen me. I couldn't help but smile out of all the people she had to ask she had to ask Raven. "Well I don't have to worry about her." I thought as I walked out the school door and onto the soccer field.
2 hours later...
*Starfire's Prov*
"So that's our school!" Christina said with a smile. "Well she sure smiles a lot" I thought.
"I think I am going to have awesome year!" I said smiling. She got me hooked!
"So do you like any sports or are clubs more your style?" She asked
'Well, at my old school I wasn't really involved in anything. What do you do? Maybe we can do something together." I said
"Sure! That would be fun! Well I play tennis and I am in the fashion club and drawing/anime club."
"Tennis? That's were you hit the ball back and forth right?" I said shriveling up my nose.
"*Laughing* Oh no there is so much more to it! You should try it, but then again I don't see you the sports type. How about you go for cheerleading or fashion club with me."
"I think I'll try fashion club. That sounds like fun and you're in it!" "Oh god what time is it? I was having so much fun. I forgot that my mom wants me home for 4 o'clock to baby sit my little brother."
"Oh I think it's 3:55." I said looking down at my purple watch.
"Oh my God I better get going! I am so sorry I have to leave you like this! I'll see you tomorrow okay? How about we meet at the front of the school before classes okay?"
"Okay!" I said waving goodbye as she ran out of the school
"I am so happy that I made a new friend." I thought as I started walking back to my locker to get my things when I heard a cold voice start to talk from behind.
"Well, well, well what do we have here?" said a cold voice
"A new student boss." said another cold, but more timid voice
"No wonder I haven't seen this beauty before." said the first cold voice
I turned around slowly to see.....
*Robins Prov*
"Bye guys!"I yelled as I turned to walk off the soccer field, when I heard a shriek of help.
"Starfire" I mumbled as I took off into a fast sprint into the school.
To be continued...
Authors notes
omg I'm evil =) more of a incentive for you all to review =)
well I got Raven and Beastboy in! N there was a slight hint ^-^ I think I will put them as a couple but its won't be as heavy as the starfire/robin will be. But there will be moments and that's the important part right?
Preview of the next chappy
~ will Robin find starfire in time? N if he does will this patch up there disagreements?
~ Or will starfire save herself? Girls can kick but you know =)
~ Raven is the cold hearted girl but Starfire takes a oath to brake the ice between her and the world and maybe set her up with Danny I mean Beast boy in time for the Dance?
Well that is all that I am going to review for the plot so far. So please! Review! They make me happy and inspire me to write =)
till next time,
cherryblossomgirl
omg I can't believe how everyone reviewed so fast!!! So I was like omg I better start typing =) lol neways big thanks to all who reveiwed!!! and all those who didn't I just hope everyone enjoys my fic!
So here's a special individual thanks to those who did review if I didn't include u Its because I wrote the chapter before u reviewed. So if you want I will include you in the next chapter okay?
So thanks to
Kail-Meg and ravenprincess:I'm so happy that you guys like my fanfic!!! | |
,YaY-Don't worry I'll put some beastboi and raven moments in =) but it won't be till later chapter k? So be patient ^-^) This slight moment in the chappy can be dedicated to you k?
KoolKat101- hey I know what your talking about =) I've always wanted to watch fruit baskets! It looks cute and interesting =)
Writer of the (Not self-voted but voted by other fics) fic ever:: Thanks for reviewing
NNY- thanks for the info I think it's a au too! But I figured I haven't seen any like this yet so I thought it would be fun.
Bri: Oh My God! I am so sry thank you so much for telling me that I wrote that Starfire had purple hair. I really really must b e losing it! JUST TO LET EVERYONE KNOW STARFIRE HAS RED HAIR! NOT PURPLE I AM SO SRY! Thank you so much for telling me.
Well on with the next chapter =)
Chapter 2 *The Tour of the School and everything with in it*
Robin's Prov
"Why me?" I thought as I sat in the rest of class making dirty looks at my Math teacher. I know this is childish, but I couldn't help it. I mean I know I should be happy, I get to show this RED *^-^* haired beauty known as Starfire around. But my coach is going to kill me... I moaned as I hit my head on the desk.
~ Ring Ring ~
"Well at least class is over" I mumbled as I walked toward the door.
"Robin wait up!" said a voice from behind my back.
"What?" I asked in a annoyed voice. "Maybe I can scare her off." I thought
"You're supposed to show me around!" said the girl known as Starfire. For the first time I finally got a good look at her and she was even more beautiful then what he pictured from the school window. But she is also annoying because know I am going to be kicked of the soccer team because of her! Suddenly I formed a big dislike for this girl even though she was beautiful and I didn't even know her.
"Yea... So this is the school and this is stupid math class. Happy? Know can I please leave I need to get to soccer practice." I said sarcastically. But as soon as I said it I immediately wanted to take it back. As I saw small tears form up in her eyes.
"Why don't you like me?" she asked timidly
"Its not that... Its just.."
"That you don't want to take the time to show me around because you have other things to do and you think I am ugly and your to good for me right?" She asked as the tears cleared away and were replaced with a fierce glare of hatred.
"Its not that honestly!" I said putting my hands in front of me. "God is this girl moody" I thought silently.
"Then what is it? Mr. I'm too good for you!" She spat as she pointed a finger into my chest.
I sighed in defeat "Listen, I am sorry, I didn't mean it. Its just I'm in a bad mood and if I don't make soccer practice my coach is going to kill me!"
"Well, maybe you should pay attention in class and you wouldn't be stuck here showing me around, know would you?" She asked bitterly.
"It's not my fault I have better things to do with my life, know if you excuse me I need to get to practice." I said knowing this was mean but my pride was on the line and you know how boys are with there pride right? I mean if word got out that I was a sissy my popularity would be over.
"Hey wait I am not done with you!" Starfire yelled as she ran after Robin.
Starfire's Prov
"What is up with this jerk?" I thought glaring at nothing in particular
"Where did he go" I yelled as everyone around me looked at me like I was crazy. "Sorry!" I said timidly "Nice way to start the year off" I thought.
Then I noticed a girl in black baggy pants and a tight black shirt. With short Purple hair and blue eyes *what color eyes does Raven have?* walk past me.
"Hey excuse me!" I sputtered I was kind of intimidated by this girl. But you would to if you saw her! *sorry Raven fans I am not bashing her don't worry I luv raven to but its just part of the story* She just kept on walking.
"Hey!" I yelled hoping she would hear me this time.
"You've got my attention, what do you want preppy?" She said coldly.
"I uhhh was wondering if you saw a boy with dark black hair go by?" I asked
"Which one? I thought I was wasting my time, I am so out of here, bye preppy." The girl said as she just walked away.
"Well that was helpful" I thought gloomily
"Excuse me, but are you looking for Robin?" Asked a brown haired, blued eyes girl. She had on a pair of flare jeans and a maroon peasant top.
"Why yes! How did you know?" I asked stunned, not expecting some one to just coem up to me and talk to me.
"I figured he would do something like that. I'm in your math class." said the girl as she smiled sweetly.
"O0o" I said blushing at how stupid I could be. How could I not recognize her from this morning.
"Its okay! It's hard to remember everyone's faces. My names Christina and I believe you are Starfire right?" She asked throwing her hand forward.
"Nice to meet you!" I said smiling back and shaking her hand.
"Don't mind that girl you were talking to. That's Raven she's kind of a loner but that's just how she is to everyone. So don't take it personal, the only person who tries to open her up is Danny. But everyone calls him beast boy, don't ask why =)." She said pointing to a boy that was across the hall trying to the girl I met before.
"Oh! So anyways do you know which way Robin went? He was supposed to give me a tour! He is such a spoiled brat someone needs to set him straight!" I yelled
"Your right! ^_^ But forget about him, I'll show you around." Christina said
"Okay!"
"So that's how my friendship with the girl Christina started."
Robin's Prov
"I think I lost her" I thought breathing hard as I ducked around a corner of the school. Which led out to the soccer field.
"Well at least I won't miss practice." I though as I looked around the corner to see Starfire asking Raven if she had seen me. I couldn't help but smile out of all the people she had to ask she had to ask Raven. "Well I don't have to worry about her." I thought as I walked out the school door and onto the soccer field.
2 hours later...
*Starfire's Prov*
"So that's our school!" Christina said with a smile. "Well she sure smiles a lot" I thought.
"I think I am going to have awesome year!" I said smiling. She got me hooked!
"So do you like any sports or are clubs more your style?" She asked
'Well, at my old school I wasn't really involved in anything. What do you do? Maybe we can do something together." I said
"Sure! That would be fun! Well I play tennis and I am in the fashion club and drawing/anime club."
"Tennis? That's were you hit the ball back and forth right?" I said shriveling up my nose.
"*Laughing* Oh no there is so much more to it! You should try it, but then again I don't see you the sports type. How about you go for cheerleading or fashion club with me."
"I think I'll try fashion club. That sounds like fun and you're in it!" "Oh god what time is it? I was having so much fun. I forgot that my mom wants me home for 4 o'clock to baby sit my little brother."
"Oh I think it's 3:55." I said looking down at my purple watch.
"Oh my God I better get going! I am so sorry I have to leave you like this! I'll see you tomorrow okay? How about we meet at the front of the school before classes okay?"
"Okay!" I said waving goodbye as she ran out of the school
"I am so happy that I made a new friend." I thought as I started walking back to my locker to get my things when I heard a cold voice start to talk from behind.
"Well, well, well what do we have here?" said a cold voice
"A new student boss." said another cold, but more timid voice
"No wonder I haven't seen this beauty before." said the first cold voice
I turned around slowly to see.....
*Robins Prov*
"Bye guys!"I yelled as I turned to walk off the soccer field, when I heard a shriek of help.
"Starfire" I mumbled as I took off into a fast sprint into the school.
To be continued...
Authors notes
omg I'm evil =) more of a incentive for you all to review =)
well I got Raven and Beastboy in! N there was a slight hint ^-^ I think I will put them as a couple but its won't be as heavy as the starfire/robin will be. But there will be moments and that's the important part right?
Preview of the next chappy
~ will Robin find starfire in time? N if he does will this patch up there disagreements?
~ Or will starfire save herself? Girls can kick but you know =)
~ Raven is the cold hearted girl but Starfire takes a oath to brake the ice between her and the world and maybe set her up with Danny I mean Beast boy in time for the Dance?
Well that is all that I am going to review for the plot so far. So please! Review! They make me happy and inspire me to write =)
till next time,
cherryblossomgirl