Me-Well this poem is about Link meeting Dark Link in the water temple.Please review!!!

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Me

Link's P.O.V

I look at him, he looks at me
We look like twins, don't you see?
Except the hair, eyes, and clothes
Without these things nobody knows.

He's my half
Can't you tell?
The darker one than me, myself
Black hair, red eyes, and black tunic
Looks just like me but not really.

I fight to help
He fights to kill
I don't know why
But I can tell

I'll fight all day
Till I get my way
For Hyrule.

Dark Link's P.O.V

He looks like me, look at him
We aren't best friends as you can see
Except the hair, eyes, and clothes
Without these things nobody knows

He's my half
Can you tell?
The lighter one than I, myself
Looks just like me but not really

I fight to kill
He fights to help
I don't know why
But I can tell

I'll fight all day
Until I get my way
For Ganon.

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Me-So.....How was that poem? DL side of the story is like the first one but that's all I can think of. Please review!!!!!!