Chapter 3: Ally and Greg POV and more
I don't own anything except the plot and the lame title of this chapter(the rest of the chapters), but as many others have said I wouldn't mind owning Kevin or Joey . Sorry guys my paragraphs and spaces are messing up. Thanks for the reviews! Please enjoy the continuation of chapter 2 and chapter 3
...............................Ally POV..........................
God I am so bored! Why did my parents drag me to this again? Oh yeah, to "make new friends", whatever. Right then I saw Natalie walking up to some really HOTT(yes 2 'T's) guy. I heard him ask her what her name was so I walked over and told him, along with my name. My REAL name, which I barely ever use, to make me sound more mature.(Since he did look older) Next thing I knew Natalie shot me a really weird look. A look that only I would give. What is up with her? Sometimes I wonder about my sister. Is she really the good girl she looks like on the outside? I wish I knew.
End Ally POV(end completion of chapter.. 2) ...........................................................
Greg POV ...........................................................................
I was psyched to go to this reunion thing with my parents to meet some fellow rockers. My mom made me wear a tie which completely ruins my image, but that's just the way moms are. Finally, when we got to the reunion thing there wasn't anyone that looked worth talking to, until I saw this girl. This girl had brown hair down to her shoulder and brown eyes and was wearing this dress that made her look totally hot.(FYI Natalie was wearing a navy blue satin strapless dress and Ally was wearing a black spaghetti-strap dress) She started to walk toward me so I fixed my hair really quick walked the rest of the way to meet her in the middle. "Hey" she said She seemed sort of shy. Then I said "Hi" and asked her what her name was. She seemed to panic as soon as I asked the question. Then another really good-looking girl walked up and told me what the other girls name was along with hers. This other girl was blonde with blue eyes and had really short hair but the dress had the same effect on the newer girl. Apparently, their names were Alex and Natalie. After Alex told her name along with Natalie's, Natalie got a really weird look on her face. One that sort of said "Revenge is sweet". Maybe I should get to know these girls better........ ........................................................................... End Greg POV ......................................................................
(back to the parents)
"Katie!" Katie heard a familiar voice but couldn't put her finger on who's it was. As she turned toward the voice she saw it was Marta, one of the old back-up singers for the band. "Hey Marta! What's new with you?" Katie was very excited to see her old friend. "Nothing much, just that we will be hearing the pitter-pattering of little feet in the near future." Marta put her hands on her stomach. "Pregnant? Oh Marta that's wonderful!" Katie exclaimed "Who's the father?" Katie hadn't seen Marta's husband. "Well, we sort of just broke up." Marta drew out the sentence as long a she possibly could have. "Oh, I see. Does he know?" Katie chose her words carefully to make sure that she wouldn't hurt Marta's feelings. "No, and I certainly don't plan on telling him." ............................................................................................
What do you think? R&R please! PS I might have guest appearances in the other chapters just FYI!
Swimmerkitti- that's ok, You criticism helped me a lot(at least I think so) and thank you! I hope you like it! lol
Mellowyellow36-yes, "Greg is a little hot Zack"
Scary-Girly- Thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoy "my work"
Nanners-77- thank you for your compliment and I will try to work on everything you said.
I thought I should end this chapter with part of a quote from the best movie ever, "...with a guitar in our hands and rock in our hearts"-Dewey Finn
I don't own anything except the plot and the lame title of this chapter(the rest of the chapters), but as many others have said I wouldn't mind owning Kevin or Joey . Sorry guys my paragraphs and spaces are messing up. Thanks for the reviews! Please enjoy the continuation of chapter 2 and chapter 3
...............................Ally POV..........................
God I am so bored! Why did my parents drag me to this again? Oh yeah, to "make new friends", whatever. Right then I saw Natalie walking up to some really HOTT(yes 2 'T's) guy. I heard him ask her what her name was so I walked over and told him, along with my name. My REAL name, which I barely ever use, to make me sound more mature.(Since he did look older) Next thing I knew Natalie shot me a really weird look. A look that only I would give. What is up with her? Sometimes I wonder about my sister. Is she really the good girl she looks like on the outside? I wish I knew.
End Ally POV(end completion of chapter.. 2) ...........................................................
Greg POV ...........................................................................
I was psyched to go to this reunion thing with my parents to meet some fellow rockers. My mom made me wear a tie which completely ruins my image, but that's just the way moms are. Finally, when we got to the reunion thing there wasn't anyone that looked worth talking to, until I saw this girl. This girl had brown hair down to her shoulder and brown eyes and was wearing this dress that made her look totally hot.(FYI Natalie was wearing a navy blue satin strapless dress and Ally was wearing a black spaghetti-strap dress) She started to walk toward me so I fixed my hair really quick walked the rest of the way to meet her in the middle. "Hey" she said She seemed sort of shy. Then I said "Hi" and asked her what her name was. She seemed to panic as soon as I asked the question. Then another really good-looking girl walked up and told me what the other girls name was along with hers. This other girl was blonde with blue eyes and had really short hair but the dress had the same effect on the newer girl. Apparently, their names were Alex and Natalie. After Alex told her name along with Natalie's, Natalie got a really weird look on her face. One that sort of said "Revenge is sweet". Maybe I should get to know these girls better........ ........................................................................... End Greg POV ......................................................................
(back to the parents)
"Katie!" Katie heard a familiar voice but couldn't put her finger on who's it was. As she turned toward the voice she saw it was Marta, one of the old back-up singers for the band. "Hey Marta! What's new with you?" Katie was very excited to see her old friend. "Nothing much, just that we will be hearing the pitter-pattering of little feet in the near future." Marta put her hands on her stomach. "Pregnant? Oh Marta that's wonderful!" Katie exclaimed "Who's the father?" Katie hadn't seen Marta's husband. "Well, we sort of just broke up." Marta drew out the sentence as long a she possibly could have. "Oh, I see. Does he know?" Katie chose her words carefully to make sure that she wouldn't hurt Marta's feelings. "No, and I certainly don't plan on telling him." ............................................................................................
What do you think? R&R please! PS I might have guest appearances in the other chapters just FYI!
Swimmerkitti- that's ok, You criticism helped me a lot(at least I think so) and thank you! I hope you like it! lol
Mellowyellow36-yes, "Greg is a little hot Zack"
Scary-Girly- Thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoy "my work"
Nanners-77- thank you for your compliment and I will try to work on everything you said.
I thought I should end this chapter with part of a quote from the best movie ever, "...with a guitar in our hands and rock in our hearts"-Dewey Finn