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There is my "Thank You" Speech. Disclaimer: I do not own Code Lyoko, only Angelina and the professor. I got the idea for the beginning from "Minority Report" and I don't own that either. Now you must READ!
Angelina was sitting in a metal chair. She was strapped in and was connected to a machine that measures your heart. There was an odd looking machine that looked like a helmet and strapped into a screen. It covered the top part of her head and her eyes. "Angelina... We're almost ready to connect. Are you?" Angelina was thinking about what had happened today. She had seen a digital world called "Lyoko." She watched as Yumi, Orrick, and Odd saved Aelita and as Aelita shut down the tower and saved the world. "Angelina!" "What? Oh, I'm ready." "Good. Starting... Machine: Future OCC. online. Angelina, what can you see?" The usual swirling darkness lay before her. She quickly looked at the crimes being committed this week. "I see a man... he is going to murder an innocent man for revenge. It is tomorrow at... 5:55 and 6 seconds." The machines placed in her mind the time and day by morphing the brain waves and electronic waves. (A/N I am only going to put a little about this, so you can understand a little. Everything shall become clear in a while) She felt the time. There was screaming in her mind. "Another one at 7:00 sharp. It's in the ally way behind my school. Are you copying the picture?" "Yes" said the professor. The machine printed the picture on the screen that was connected to her mind. After an hour, they had copied all of the crimes that will be committed. "Angelina, do you want to see your own future?" "Yeah, sure" She saw herself in Lyoko, saving Aelita. After that, she saw herself with Odd... What was she doing? They were walking, talking and laughing... 'What are we talking about' thought, Angelina. Unknown to her, there was a dark liquid falling onto her and the machines. She screamed in pain. "Let me enter your mind" A voice in her head said. It was dark and evil. Never, she thought. "I don't want to hurt you"
Yes, you do
"Trust me" I won't! Then she remembered about what had happened prior to this. You're Zana! "Yes, I am. Now let me in!" She screamed in pain. She could not here the Professor telling her that he was going to shut down. The program wasn't responding. "Ha, ha, ha, ha! I have penetrated your 'strong' mind... Your friends' trust shall be their downfall! Sorry for this pain, well actually I'm not, but I have to wipe this memory from your mind completely!" With one last scream, a horrible, mind-piercing, scream-she fainted. When Angelina woke up, she was laying on the floor just befor the metal chair. She kept her eyes shut. She could still feel the pain in her head and just wanted to go to sleep... but then, "Angelina! Angelina! Wake up! Say something!" The Professor said. "Please..." Angelina slowly opened her eyes. "Oh, Angelina! Are you okay?" "Yes, I'm fine," she said, "it's just a headache." "No, it isn't. You were screaming. It's serious! I don't think you should do this anymore!" "No! Please! There's nothing better today! I am getting use to it. There's nothing wrong. I can even get visions without the computer! I had some at school today!" "Very well, very well. Just take a break for the week. We already have the things we need." "Fine" Angelina was very angry. She loved doing this. This was the way she disciplined herself. It was the way she controlled her emotions. "I'll drive you home." She followed, reluctantly. The next day
Angelina walked through the hallway, until suddenly, she collapsed. A voice echoed inside her head.
"This body is mine, now" It said. She slowly lost control.
Yumi and Orrick were walking alone, because Jeremy was working with Aelita and Odd was asleep. "Yumi... umm..." Orrick began. "Want to you uh do umm... to me prom go?"
"What?" Yumi asked
"Do you want to go to prom with me?"
"That's funny 'cause-" They heard a scream. "That sounds like Angelina!" They ran to her dorm. "Angelina!" They screamed. She was lying on the floor. She blinked and got up. Her voice was emotionless. "I am fine." She looked at their faces. "What are you looking at?" Orrick and Yumi looked unsurely at each other. "Do you want to go to the infirmary?" Yumi asked. "No, I am fine" "Are you sure? You were screaming..." Orrick said "Yes, I am sure. I just saw something scary. On no! We are late." "I'll give you my answer later" Yumi whispered to Orrick. "I'll watch Angelina"
All through English class, Angelina stared at her hands. She didn't take notes or seem to listen. "ANGELINA!" The teacher yelled angrily. "What is the answer to the question?" "If there is a direct quote, but the speaker asks a question, the question mark goes outside the quotation mark." She sighed. "Very, well then" "Angelina, why are you acting so weird?" Odd asked at lunch. Angelina was staring at her food, but not eating it. "I'm not acting weird!" "Yes, you are" Jeremy said "No, I'm not. Whatever, I am going to go to the bathroom" She walked alone into the bathroom. Then she stopped dead. "You're pathetic body is almost out of use, my pretty" The voice echoed. "Where am I?" Angelina asked herself. She walked into the lunchroom. She looked at the blank faces of her friends. "What's wrong?" "What do you mean?" They looked at each other. "You weren't your self... You weren't paying attention and you acted as if nothing was wrong when you screamed an ear-shattering scream..." Odd said. "I have no idea what you're talking about" "See, you did it again!" Jeremy said. "We found you in the hallway... you were kind 'a unconscious." Yumi said "When you woke up, you said nothing was wrong" Orrick said "I really don't remember. Come to think about it... all I remember is walking in the Hallway, and then waking up in the bathroom." "Zana" Jeremy whispered, so only Yumi, Odd, and Orrick could hear. They nodded, when she looked away. "Angelina-" She looked toward them "-were you near anything in particular, electronic-like?" "What?" She thought about telling them... "Ihavevisionsandstuff" she said quickly. "Pardon me?" Yumi said. "Nothing-I-I coughed" "That wasn't a cough to me" Odd said. "Let's go to the factory after class..." Jeremy said. "We can't," Yumi said, "because we have to try out for Volleyball-Angelina and I" "I have to try out for soccer," Orrick said. "That's okay, Jeremy and I will handle it" Odd said. The bell rang and they went to class. Okay I am done with this chapter! Review!
There is my "Thank You" Speech. Disclaimer: I do not own Code Lyoko, only Angelina and the professor. I got the idea for the beginning from "Minority Report" and I don't own that either. Now you must READ!
Angelina was sitting in a metal chair. She was strapped in and was connected to a machine that measures your heart. There was an odd looking machine that looked like a helmet and strapped into a screen. It covered the top part of her head and her eyes. "Angelina... We're almost ready to connect. Are you?" Angelina was thinking about what had happened today. She had seen a digital world called "Lyoko." She watched as Yumi, Orrick, and Odd saved Aelita and as Aelita shut down the tower and saved the world. "Angelina!" "What? Oh, I'm ready." "Good. Starting... Machine: Future OCC. online. Angelina, what can you see?" The usual swirling darkness lay before her. She quickly looked at the crimes being committed this week. "I see a man... he is going to murder an innocent man for revenge. It is tomorrow at... 5:55 and 6 seconds." The machines placed in her mind the time and day by morphing the brain waves and electronic waves. (A/N I am only going to put a little about this, so you can understand a little. Everything shall become clear in a while) She felt the time. There was screaming in her mind. "Another one at 7:00 sharp. It's in the ally way behind my school. Are you copying the picture?" "Yes" said the professor. The machine printed the picture on the screen that was connected to her mind. After an hour, they had copied all of the crimes that will be committed. "Angelina, do you want to see your own future?" "Yeah, sure" She saw herself in Lyoko, saving Aelita. After that, she saw herself with Odd... What was she doing? They were walking, talking and laughing... 'What are we talking about' thought, Angelina. Unknown to her, there was a dark liquid falling onto her and the machines. She screamed in pain. "Let me enter your mind" A voice in her head said. It was dark and evil. Never, she thought. "I don't want to hurt you"
Yes, you do
"Trust me" I won't! Then she remembered about what had happened prior to this. You're Zana! "Yes, I am. Now let me in!" She screamed in pain. She could not here the Professor telling her that he was going to shut down. The program wasn't responding. "Ha, ha, ha, ha! I have penetrated your 'strong' mind... Your friends' trust shall be their downfall! Sorry for this pain, well actually I'm not, but I have to wipe this memory from your mind completely!" With one last scream, a horrible, mind-piercing, scream-she fainted. When Angelina woke up, she was laying on the floor just befor the metal chair. She kept her eyes shut. She could still feel the pain in her head and just wanted to go to sleep... but then, "Angelina! Angelina! Wake up! Say something!" The Professor said. "Please..." Angelina slowly opened her eyes. "Oh, Angelina! Are you okay?" "Yes, I'm fine," she said, "it's just a headache." "No, it isn't. You were screaming. It's serious! I don't think you should do this anymore!" "No! Please! There's nothing better today! I am getting use to it. There's nothing wrong. I can even get visions without the computer! I had some at school today!" "Very well, very well. Just take a break for the week. We already have the things we need." "Fine" Angelina was very angry. She loved doing this. This was the way she disciplined herself. It was the way she controlled her emotions. "I'll drive you home." She followed, reluctantly. The next day
Angelina walked through the hallway, until suddenly, she collapsed. A voice echoed inside her head.
"This body is mine, now" It said. She slowly lost control.
Yumi and Orrick were walking alone, because Jeremy was working with Aelita and Odd was asleep. "Yumi... umm..." Orrick began. "Want to you uh do umm... to me prom go?"
"What?" Yumi asked
"Do you want to go to prom with me?"
"That's funny 'cause-" They heard a scream. "That sounds like Angelina!" They ran to her dorm. "Angelina!" They screamed. She was lying on the floor. She blinked and got up. Her voice was emotionless. "I am fine." She looked at their faces. "What are you looking at?" Orrick and Yumi looked unsurely at each other. "Do you want to go to the infirmary?" Yumi asked. "No, I am fine" "Are you sure? You were screaming..." Orrick said "Yes, I am sure. I just saw something scary. On no! We are late." "I'll give you my answer later" Yumi whispered to Orrick. "I'll watch Angelina"
All through English class, Angelina stared at her hands. She didn't take notes or seem to listen. "ANGELINA!" The teacher yelled angrily. "What is the answer to the question?" "If there is a direct quote, but the speaker asks a question, the question mark goes outside the quotation mark." She sighed. "Very, well then" "Angelina, why are you acting so weird?" Odd asked at lunch. Angelina was staring at her food, but not eating it. "I'm not acting weird!" "Yes, you are" Jeremy said "No, I'm not. Whatever, I am going to go to the bathroom" She walked alone into the bathroom. Then she stopped dead. "You're pathetic body is almost out of use, my pretty" The voice echoed. "Where am I?" Angelina asked herself. She walked into the lunchroom. She looked at the blank faces of her friends. "What's wrong?" "What do you mean?" They looked at each other. "You weren't your self... You weren't paying attention and you acted as if nothing was wrong when you screamed an ear-shattering scream..." Odd said. "I have no idea what you're talking about" "See, you did it again!" Jeremy said. "We found you in the hallway... you were kind 'a unconscious." Yumi said "When you woke up, you said nothing was wrong" Orrick said "I really don't remember. Come to think about it... all I remember is walking in the Hallway, and then waking up in the bathroom." "Zana" Jeremy whispered, so only Yumi, Odd, and Orrick could hear. They nodded, when she looked away. "Angelina-" She looked toward them "-were you near anything in particular, electronic-like?" "What?" She thought about telling them... "Ihavevisionsandstuff" she said quickly. "Pardon me?" Yumi said. "Nothing-I-I coughed" "That wasn't a cough to me" Odd said. "Let's go to the factory after class..." Jeremy said. "We can't," Yumi said, "because we have to try out for Volleyball-Angelina and I" "I have to try out for soccer," Orrick said. "That's okay, Jeremy and I will handle it" Odd said. The bell rang and they went to class. Okay I am done with this chapter! Review!