A/N: Well it's everyone's favourite time again........Update time!

But before we get to the reason of why you are all here, (which is to listen to the word of Dave) let's take a few moments and read what I have to say.

I know these little pre-story commentaries are JUST as popular as my post-story commentary. In fact, I actually get email's telling me that reading my pre-story commentary is worth it alone and to actually write more. So here we go...







Author Pre-Chapter Commentary:

I've been so busy the past few weeks I feel like my brain is telling me to stop before I burn out and have an aneurysm. It's been a long time, yeah I know. You can blame my professors who see fit to bombard me with more assignments than I can count. If you were going to ask me to count how many assignments I had to do, using my fingers, I'd have to have about 4 hands in order to count. So keep in mind that this chapter is really awful.

If you would like to support me, please call and harass one of my professors at 416-843-.... nah, she's not worth it. Although I admit it would be funny, not to mention illegal and immoral.

I have midterms coming up really, really, really soon and I personally can't wait because midterms means I'm that much closer to Christmas break. I love Christmas, it's the festive part that makes me feel like a kid again. Christmas time is about getting together with friends and family and just having a great time and celebrating the good things in our world. There's so many thing I love about Christmas.....

Alcohol is only part of it.





Alrighty let's begin the story with a little joke:

Q:What do Jacques Chirac, Napoleon and Rick Solomon have in common?





A: They are 3 people who have been in Paris.

Hahahahahaha, I heard it on Letterman a few nights ago.



Ok let's get on with the story........









Disclaimer: As usual, I own none of the HP characters represented in this story. The characters that I did make up ARE mine but I don't have enough money to copyright them so I guess it can be used by others for profit (HA! Good luck, my original characters are crap!).

Today's disclaimer is brought to you by the letter D, which stands for "Dave, you don't own Harry Potter so get the fu*k over it, dude!"

AND

by the number 19, which is the number of class action suits that will be brought onto me by Warner Bros, Bloomsbury and JKR if I DID say HP was mine.







Chapter 22







"Ron wake up, we're gonna be late for breakfast, it's 8:30."

Ron opened his eyes, blinked several times and before he could get up, Harry did his usual February 2 morning custom. He grabbed all of Ron's blankets and threw them onto his own bed.

"Get up you stupid prat, we're going to be late."

Ron sat up on his bed, rubbed his eyes, stretched his arms and let out a groan.

"Hey Harry, is today the 2nd?" Ron asked.

"Yup, today's the 2nd," said Harry looking at his watch, "Why?"

"No reason, just wanted to make sure that's all," said Ron who brightened up as he looked out the window.

"Well you'd better hurry up if we want to make it down to breakfast. Hermione's gonna tear our heads off if we're late."

Ron took one last glance at the snowy mountains and took a deep breath before he headed into the bathroom to clean up.

Today was the same as usual but he was determined not to let it matter anymore. Last night's experience with Hermione changed his attitude and outlook on time. Instead of allowing circumstances to impose themselves on him, he was going take control of the circumstances.

"Whoa, that was quick, it's 8:35," said Harry.

"Well Harry, we wouldn't want to miss the beginning of a great day now would we?" said Ron in a festive manner.

"Yeah, uh, right. We should go down now since you're ready," said Harry with a look of disorientation on his face.

Ron caught the look Harry had on his face and started chuckling. This made Harry look even more puzzled. Ron soon realized that glooming about his situation wasn't going to help, there was no point on being depressed all the time and he would just have to try and make the best out of it.



"Good morning you two," said Hermione smiling.

"Morning," said Harry and Ron at the same time.

"Listen mate, I've been doing some thinking lately and I think I've got the perfect defensive strategy for the team."

"Really?" Harry asked, "that's great, tell me about it."

"I've got the perfect maneuver. If we position you at--"

"Can we please have one day where we don't start it off by talking about quidditch?" asked Hermione, who looked a bit irritated.

"Uh, I guess so," said Harry shrugging, "I guess Ron and I do talk about it too much."

"I agree," said Ron.

Harry and Hermione both looked at Ron with raised eyebrows.

"What?" he asked.

"Nothing, it's just that I expected you to put up some sort of a fight," said Hermione, her eyes narrowing.

"Nah, for once I think you're right, Hermione. Perhaps Harry and I ARE too invested in quidditch, what would you like to talk about this morning?" said Ron.

"Um, well, how about the massive amount of homework you two have piled up. You've been holding it off for a week now and it's going to cause you two trouble if you don't start soon," said Hermione.

"Hermione, you don't need to keep telling us. We already know the amount of work we have piled up," said Ron.

"Yeah Hermione, don't worry about us we'll get it all done in time, we always do" said Harry following up on what Ron was saying.

"You're in for a big surprise if you think it's gonna be easy. You two are going to have to spend countless hours researching for Binns' paper alone. Not to mention that Transfiguration essay you two still have yet to research, and that's due Monday. I don't think it's a good idea for you to go to Hogsmeade tomorrow."

"I don't have a choice, I have prefect duties in the village tomorrow," said Ron knowing that it'll never happen.

"Well Harry's going to have to stay," said Hermione.

The trio entered the Great Hall, took their seats at the Gryffindor table, and began eating.

"I don't see why I can't go tomorrow," said Harry, "The trip to the village won't be that long."

"Suit yourself Harry but don't say I didn't warn you. You could've stayed behind and used the time to research."

"Relax mate, we won't need to do ANY research. I've got it all figured out," said Ron taking a big bite into a raspberry muffin.

"Oh no, you're not copying off me, not this time. You two will have to do your own--"

"Don't worry Hermione, I don't plan to copy off of you. I don't need to."

"Why? Have you found someone else to sponge off of?" she asked.

"Nope, I've got all the information we need to finish our papers," said Ron.

"What?! That's not possible," said Hermione.

"Ron, we've been practicing everyday for two weeks now. When did you get the time to research all that stuff?" Harry asked.

"Oh, I've had plenty of time on my hands," said Ron with a smile.

"Oh please, you're just trying to trick me into giving you my homework at the last minute," said Hermione.

"No no no, it's not like that at all. I've got all the information we need. It won't take us long to finish all of our homework. In fact, I've got an idea, let's not hold a practice tonight."

"Why not hold the practice?" said Harry.

"Because there's going to be a vicious storm after supper and it won't be fit for us to practice," said Ron.

"How do you know there's going to be a storm?" asked Hermione.

"I can tell, just look," said Ron taking out his wand and making a spiral wave.

The wand shot out a liner mist-like substance which started turning blue and spun counterclockwise.

"See the blue coloured mist spinning in that direction? It means the pressure is dropping rapidly and a storm is coming this way."

"Wow mate, how did you do that?" said Harry who was impressed.

"I don't remember learning that. And how come you never said an incantation?" said Hermione, who too looked impressed.

"It's magic!" said Ron smiling. Harry and Hermione laughed while he waved his hand and dispelled the blue mist.

"Remind me to teach you two later," said Ron.

"Well we'll have to tell Alicia it's not a good idea to practice tonight," said Harry, "what are we going to do instead?"

"Homework--" said Hermione.

"Why don't we hold a DA meeting instead?" said Ron cutting Hermione off.

"That's sounds like a great idea," said Harry who's face brightening up even more, "we haven't had one in weeks."

"Feels like years," said Ron who was the only one in on the inside joke.

"But what about your homework?" asked Hermione.

"Not a problem, Harry and I will finish up all our essays after lessons and then we can have the meeting after supper."

Hermione looked sceptical but Ron knew that the idea of having a DA meeting was too good for her to pass up. It was a Friday and it would've been a good idea to hold it on a Friday night with no lessons the next day to worry about.

"Well, I'll call a meeting for tonight, but I don't think it's a good idea since you two have all that work to--"

"Don't worry Hermione, I told you, Harry and I will be finished before supper."

"I hope you're right mate," said Harry, "we DO have quite a big workload."

"I've got all the notes we need, trust me."

Hermione gave a snort and continued eating her eggs.

"You'll see," said Ron winking, "we'll get it done, just wait and see."

Hermione merely laughed and shook her head.



Fifteen minutes later, the Great Hall was beginning to file out which meant lessons were going to begin anytime now.

"C'mon, we'd better get to class before we're late and Snape ruins the day," said Harry as he got up and Ron and Hermione followed.







"Pop test," said Snape as he walked into the Potion's classroom looking as surly as ever. He (again) walked to the front of the class, surveyed it and let out a grunt.

"Today you will be brewing the Cruxtitions potion. If you read your chapter last night as you were told to, then you should know what ingredients are needed to make this complicated potion. I trust that you already know that I will be selecting potions at random and testing them on students, so get into pairs because you have to test your partner's potion. You have half of this class to prepare your potions, then the next half will be used to test them." Snape said his routine speech and continued his pattern of leaving right after giving it.



"Um Ron, where do you think we should start?" Neville asked.

"I'll tell you what, you go get the ox blood, pig tongues, and the frogs while I get the rest of the ingredients," said Ron.

"Oh, okay then, but where will I find the--"

"You'll find everything you need to get in storage room 3. The pig tongues are on the 3rd shelf to the left, the frogs are in a big jar on the top next to the box of ear wax and the ox blood is located on Snape's desk behind the tall beakers," said Ron.

Neville blinked rapidly and looked like he had already forgotten the information Ron had just given him.

"Did you get all of that?" Ron asked cracking a small smile.

"Uh huh, I-I think so, um, I'll just go and get the stuff you asked for," said Neville.

"Great! I'll go get the rest of what we need. Don't worry Neville, you'll do just fine."





"Can you believe the look on Snape's face when he was forced to give Neville full marks?" said Harry as he, Ron and Hermione left the Potion's classroom.

"It was wicked," said Harry enthusiastically, "I thought he was going to explode right in front of you two."

"That was very good back there, Ron. I didn't know you studied that chapter so well," said Hermione.

"Oh well, it was nothing. The potion wasn't really that complicated," said Ron.

"Well you two found it easier than I did. The potion Seamus and I prepared was dreadful," said Harry.

"I've got a feeling you'll have a chance to redeem yourself Harry," said Ron in a knowing way.

"What do you mean?" Harry asked.

"Maybe it'll come up again on another test?" Hermione wondered out loud.

"Well whatever the situation is, I'm sure we'll all get another chance," said Ron with a smirk.



After History of Magic concluded and was done for the day, the trio headed off to the Great Hall once again to have lunch.

"Well, well, if it isn't the weasel. On your way to the Great Hall for lunch?" sneered Malfoy, stopping Ron, Harry and Hermione.

"It's lucky Hogwarts don't--" Malfoy started taunting, but Ron, Harry and Hermione had already walked pass, ignoring him. Ron snuck a look over his shoulder and saw Malfoy wearing a "what just happened?" look.

"Ron, how on earth did you know all that information on the Goblin war?" Harry asked, sitting down and grabbing a bowl of potato salad.

"Which one?" said Ron, his mouth stuffed with apple pie.

"You know, the 1257 War, or something like that," said Harry.

"There was no Goblin War in 1257," said Ron, "unless you're talking about the 1247 War."

"Yeah, yeah whatever. How did you know all that stuff?"

"I read about it," said Ron, who was nonchalant about the matter.

Harry continued to look like something was bothering him but decided not to question Ron's unusual behaviour which occurred in History of Magic.

"You're being unusually quiet Hermione," said Ron.

"I'm just doing some thinking," said Hermione staring into her stew.

"What about?"

"About today's lesson," said Hermione.

"You mean how motor mouth here kept the entire class informed about the Goblin wars?' said Harry snickering and pointing at Ron.

"Ha... Ha," said Ron sarcastically.

"Well, that's part of it," said Hermione warily, "I've just got this strange feeling I've done this before.

Ron dropped his fork and was startled.

"Really?" said Ron, "like some kind of a deja vu feeling?"

"Mm hmm," said Hermione, "oh well, it's nothing, it's gone now."

Hermione shook her head and gave a small laugh.

"So about this DA thing tonight?" said Harry who still looked excited about the idea, "did you let the members know about it yet?"

"Well, yes I did but I'm still not too sure about it, you two should spend the time doing your--"

"Yes, yes Hermione, Harry and I will have it all done by suppertime."

"Well I can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve, you two have a lot to do, not to mention all the research you are going to have to--"

"Hi Ronald," said a dreamy voice behind Ron.

"Oh, hi Luna, what's up?" said Ron.

"I just came over to tell you that I think the DA meeting is a great idea and I can't wait for it tonight," said Luna in her usual dreamy tone.

"We look forward to seeing you there," said Ron.

"I assume your quidditch practice is cancelled, I hear there's going to be bad weather coming," said Luna.

"Yeah, that's why we're having a DA meeting tonight instead," said Harry.

"Well, I'll see you three later tonight, bye," said Luna.

"So what's this I hear about a DA meeting tonight?" said Alicia walking up and sitting next to Harry. She didn't look too pleased.

"I was just coming out of Defence Against the Dark Arts and what do I see? My DA coin telling me that there's a meeting tonight. Now, why are two of my best players holding a DA meeting tonight instead of practicing for the up coming game?" Alicia was definitely not pleased.

"The weather's going to be too bad for practice," said Harry looking uneasy.

"So we've decided it's best to cancel it and have a DA meeting tonight instead," Ron added.

"I see," said Alicia nodding her head, "So you two are captains of the team now?"

"No it's just that--"

"The last time I checked, I WAS STILL CAPTAIN!" Alicia nearly shouted.

"Look, Harry and I are sorry Alicia, but it was a spur of the moment kind of thing. There's going to be a huge storm, trust me," said Ron.

"There had better be because if there isn't one, you two are in big trouble." Alicia got up from the table and marched out of the Great Hall.

"Merlin, what's wrong with her?" asked Harry, "I didn't think it was THAT big of a deal."

"She probably got something stuck up her a--"

"RON!"

"What? She probably does," said Ron shrugging and turning his attention back to his pie.

Ginny came into the Great hall and seated herself next to Harry.

"I just saw Alicia storm out, I guess she's not pleased that you three decided to hold DA tonight," Ginny said smiling.

"Actually she only let me and Ron have it," said Harry.

"Don't worry about it," said Ginny waving it off, "I talked to Andrew and Jack and they're both okay with it. All I have to do now is find Natalie and see if she knows about the DA meeting."



When lunch finished at 1 pm, Ginny left to attend her Transfigurations lesson while Ron, Harry and Hermione had Care of Magical Creatures.

The three left the castle and ventured outside in the cold to travel down to Hagrid's lesson area. On their way to Hagrid's, they were greeted once again by Malfoy, Pansy, Crabbe and Goyle.

"HA. Well if it isn't our hero Potty, his sidekick Welfare-boy and the Mudblood," said Malfoy.

Hermione held onto Ron's cloak but Ron never felt the need to be held back.

"Don't," she said to Ron, while Harry said nothing and just stared at the Slytherin group.

Ron simply ignored Malfoy and turned his attention to Pansy.

"Hi Pansy," said Ron in odd politely suggestive manner.

Malfoy looked confused and Hermione looked stunned.

"Hi," said Pansy who was clearly taken aback. She turned scarlet and started to look nervous. Ron gave her a knowing smile, winked and walked off with Harry and Hermione to Care of Magical Creatures.

"What the hell was that? Is there something wrong with you?" Harry asked.

"Merlin, NO!" Ron laughed off, "I was just messing with their heads, mate?"

"You were just flirting with Pansy Parkinson," Hermione accused.

"No I wasn't, I was just messing with them," said Ron.

"So you don't have a thing for Pansy?" Hermione asked with narrowed eyes.

"Ergh, how could you think such a thing? Ron grimaced.



"Lo you three, ready ter get dis lesson started?" asked Hagrid beaming.

"Sorry we were late Hagrid," Harry responded.

"Oh it's alright 'arry. Besides I jus got ere late meself," said Hagrid.

Hagrid turned around and faced the rest of the class "Well now, today we're goin to start the study of a new magical creature."



An hour later, Care of Magical Creatures was finished, the lesson had gone without any harm, and Herbology was the last lesson left for the day.

When they arrived at Green house 3, Ernie Macmillan and Justin Finch-Fletchley greeted the trio and their table and began chatting.

"Hiya guys, how was Care of Magical Creatures?" asked Ernie.

"Interesting is one way to put it," said Hermione.

"Interesting? It was just a normal cat, there was nothing special about it," said Harry.

"Hagrid DID say that those creatures were fairly vicious when in their transformed state," Hermione added.

"Wish we could have seen that," said Harry.

"Uh, no you don't," said Ron, "trust me, you do not want to see them in their other form."

"So, I got the signal, DA's on tonight right?" asked Justin.

"Yup, 8pm tonight, the usual place," said Harry.

"Great, can't wait, we'll see you three there then. Bye," said Justin.



The final bell rang for the day thus ending lessons and starting the weekend, or so that's what it meant for the rest of the students at Hogwarts. For Ron it was just business as usual, there wasn't a weekend to look forward to, there wasn't even a new day to look forward to. This was something Ron was beginning to, and had no choice but to fully accept.

"Oh I can't wait to see this," said Hermione crawling through the portrait hole and entering the Gryffindor common room.

"Can't wait to see what?" Ron asked as he set his back pack down and took a seat on the arm chair.

"To see how you two are going to finish all of your homework just in time for supper. You've been boasting about it all day," said Hermione.

"We'll get it all finished," said Ron stretching his arms.

"Shouldn't you get to the library?"

"In a minute Hermione, I'm beat. It's been a long day," said Harry.

"Yeah, a real long one," said Ron yawning.

"Hi you three," said Ginny coming through the portrait hole.

"Well, I have nothing else better to do, so I think I'll patrol the halls," said Hermione eagerly. "Ginny, would you like to keep me company?"

"Sure! I don't have anything else better to do," said Ginny.

"Have fun you two," said Hermione and she and Ginny left.



"Well let's go," said Harry.

"Where?" Ron asked.

"To the library, we gotta get some books."

"No we don't," said Ron.

Harry groaned as he took out some parchment and a quill. "Hermione's right. We can't do all this in just two hours."

"Don't worry mate, I already told you, I have everything under control," said Ron.

"How?" asked Harry, "you don't even have any books from the library. How are we going to do all this work?"

"Just copy down everything I say," said Ron getting his quill and parchment ready.

"Huh?"

"We don't need any books, I've looked it up already." said Ron.

"Yeah but--"

"Get ready I'm starting," said Ron.

"But..."

"There are many ways to brew a Confidence Potion. The best solution is to follow six important procedures I have observed while brewing--"

That's how it went for the next two hours. Ron recited everything they needed to put onto paper and Harry followed without question. Soon, other Gryffindor's from their year joined in as well. Neville, Dean, Seamus, Lavender, Parvati and lots others seated themselves and began working out everything Ron was saying. Ron did the talking and the rest just copied. They copied everything word for word, but they would have to reword everything later or risk being caught cheating. No one seemed to question whether Ron was correct about what he was saying, perhaps it was because the answers Ron were giving sounded better than the answers any of them could come up with.

After the two hours had passed by, Harry and Ron completed not only their Potions essay, but everything they had set out to do as well; just as Ron said they would. Ron and Harry weren't the only ones to finish everything as well, everyone who joined in were also finished all their work.



"Why weren't you two at the library?" Hermione asked as she and Ginny entered the common room.

"We came by a few times but Madam Pince said that she hadn't seen you two at the library at all," said Ginny.

"Well that's because Ron here, is a genius," said Harry patting Ron on the back.

"Genius? My brother a genius?"

"Yup, as it turns out Hermione, you were wrong about Ron and me not being able to finish everything. See? It's all finished," said Harry holding up all his assignments.

"But how did you finish it all without--"

"I told you Hermione, I didn't need to do any research, I did it already before today." Which for Ron was technically true.

"And you just memorized it all?" Hermione asked incredulously.

"Well yeah, he did," said Harry shrugging, "weird huh?"

"Let me see that," said Hermione. She grabbed some parchments from Ron's hand and looked over them.

"I can't believe it," she said astounded.

"What?" Ginny asked.

"The answers in this assignment look like it's all correct," said Hermione.

She looked over a few more assignments and her jaw dropped. Ron and Harry had indeed finished all of their homework in two hours. The work wasn't sloppy either, some of Ron's answers were actually brilliant.

"I'm speechless," said Hermione in awe. "You two actually finished all of your work in two hours. Work that took myself three nights to finish."

"I'm hungry," said Ron, "Who's ready for some supper?"

"I am," said Ginny who jumped out of her chair, "I'm starving, let's go."

"Um, I'll be down in a minute," said Hermione, "I just want to look over some of the answers you have here if you don't mind, Ron.

"No not at all, I'll stay and wait. Harry and Ginny and go on without us," said Ron.

"Great, let's go Harry," said Ginny practically dragging Harry out of the portrait hole. Ron and Hermione were completely alone in the common room now.



"So, see anything interesting? You're welcome to copy off my work if you wish," Ron joked.

"This is actually very well done, Ron," said Hermione scanning Ron's Transfiguration essay. "I had no idea this particular method can be used here."

"Yeah I can see why you would think so, but if you look here this method is actually very conventional," said Ron pointing to his diagram.

"This is beyond NEWT's, Ron. When did you learn this?"

"Oh, I've read it in a few advanced transfiguration books," said Ron modestly, "Just as a hobby you know, too much time on my hands."

"Too much time on your hands? That's a good one, Ron."

"This is incredible," Hermione breathed. She had a look of admiration in her eye.

"It's nothing really," said Ron nervously and who was starting to feel a little hot around the collar.

"This isn't nothing Ron, I'm really proud of you,"

"Er, thanks,"

There was a moment where Ron and Hermione just stood staring at each other as though they were hoping the other to make a move.

"So, you've actually been doing some reading?" Hermione asked with a little smile, "I thought you said reading was a waste of time."

"Nah, it's not so bad once you get used to it. There's actually a lot of cool stuff in some books."

"I take it then that you'll sit down and finally read Hogwarts: a History?"

"I'll read anything BUT that," Ron laughed off and Hermione did the same.

There was that moment again where the two just stared at each other. Ron was more nervous now than he had ever felt before.

Slowly their heads began to move closer and closer until-- "Hey! You two coming down to supper or what?"

The two immediately jerked their heads back and looked at who had interrupted them.

It was Ginny. Of all the times, Ginny had to pick this one to show up, and it was at the worst possible moment.

"Yeah, uh, we-we're ready, um, let's go," said Ron, a little uneasy. His hands were shaking in his pockets.

"Yeah, I'm starving," said Hermione who was breathing a little faster than normal. "Uh, yes, okay then," said Hermione looking as though supper wasn't really what she had in mind.

"What's with you two?" Ginny asked.

"Nothing!" Ron and Hermione said together.

"Okay, okay, just wondering, no need to bite my head off," said Ginny looking suspicious.



"What kept you two so long?" Harry asked Ron and Hermione as they took their seats.

"Yeah, what were you two doing before I came up?" asked Ginny.

"Um, Hermione was just looking over our homework," Ron explained.

"Mm hmm," Hermione nodded quickly. "Everything looks good, yes, really, really, good."

"Are you okay?" Harry asked.

"Yes I'm fine," Hermione huffed, "what's with all the questions?"

"I'm just wondering that's all, you two seem a little jumpy," said Harry a little taken aback.

"There's really nothing to wonder about, Harry" Ron jumped in hoping to smooth over the anxiety,

"Hermione and I just got into a little dispute, that's all," he lied.

"Oh," Harry said knowingly. "It figures. I should have known you two had another argument. What was it about this time?"

"It's nothing, minor stuff, it's over now."

"Good, I don't want you two sniping at each other during the meeting," said Harry.

"Speaking of the meeting, how many do you think will show up?" Ron asked.

"I'd imagine it'll be the same as last time," said Hermione finally calming down.

"Hermione and I ran into Justin earlier this afternoon while you two were doing your homework, and he said that he expects a lot to show up this evening," said Ginny.

"Justin?" Ron inquired and looked at Hermione, "What else did he have to say?"

"Not too much," said Hermione turning a little red. Ron was not fooled for a second.

"I'll bet the topic of Hogsmeade came up," said Ron.

"So?" said Hermione who seemed a little uncomfortable.

"I'm just saying is all," said Ron smiling at his ability to make Hermione feel uneasy.



At half past six, Ron, Harry, Hermione and Ginny left the Gryffindor common room and headed for the Room of Requirement. Located on the seventh floor, opposite the tapestry of Barnabas the Barmy being clubbed by trolls, the Room of Requirement was the holding place of all DA meetings. The Room of Requirement wasn't just a place for DA, it was also a place Ron would often visit to find sanctuary whenever he was feeling low.

The Room of Requirement was truly a room that held everything a person needed. It was also a dwelling in which Ron spent many, many countless hours of his endless time alone practicing different spells, jinxes, curses and reading anything that mildly interested him. He literally spent years in that room.

Even though there were things Ron could do in one February 2 that ended up being erased the very next day, there was one thing that couldn't be undone. Ron was very surprised to discover that it was conceivable for his magical abilities to improve beyond it's initial level. He could still retain skills that he learned in previous experiments and also have the ability to grow further in his capabilities.



If there was one thing Ron was grateful for, it was the fact that he still had the power to develop and most importantly, learn.





















Author Post-Chapter Commentary:

Well that's it for chapter 22. It was epic to say the least; not because of the excitement of it, but because of the length. I'm going to be honest, I can't say I had a great time writing it. It's not because I have a lack of interest, it's because of university, DAMN university! On top of the colossal amount of assignments I had to do, there's also all the studying I have to put focus on. This amount of stress caused by school is starting to affect my already pitiful writing ability. I felt that this chapter was a little crappy for my taste, but it could have been a lot worst. Midterms/Finals can be a bitch, and an unforgiving one at that; I will be so happy when they are over and done with. In fact, I plan to get totally drunk on the day I finish my last exam, it'll be good times ahead.

I have decided to do something a little unique, creative, bold, and daring, well maybe not quite bold and daring but it IS unique. I haven't seen it done before, anywhere. And if it HAS been done, a lot before, well then I'm stealing the idea now. :-)

I've noticed that some writers write stories that take an awful long time to update thus leaving its faithful (and frustrated) readers wondering if the next update will happen in their lifetime. Personally I never really like that approach and have always been turned off by it. I can understand that there can numerous reasons for not updating sooner, hell, I have about a dozen or more right now. The point is, when authors leave a good story hanging, they should at least tell them they are not going to update it, no reason(s) HAS to be given, but it should be known that the story is not continuing. This goes for authors who take ungodly amounts of time to update, I feel they should at least acknowledge the fact that they are taking some time and let the reader know before hand.

I think authors should treat their readers the way authors would like to be treated; so, that's what I'm going to do.

From now on I'm going to use my author's bio regularly to let my faithful readers know the progress of the next chapter. I think it's very fair to the readers who take the time to read my work and then review it afterwards. So check the bio every once in a while and see the progress.

That about does it for the commentary, thanks to everyone who reviewed the last chapter. I really appreciate all the great reviews and I think it's magnificent that you people actually take the time to comment.

Don't forget to visit my bio regularly and check the progress of an upcoming chapter.







In fact, right after you review, go and take a look. If it's not there yet, check back to it later.













Take care