Guy Troubles
By: Sweet Bliss
(A/N: One of my reviewers sent me a review which I plan to explain/answer in the best possible way. Now as writers we tend to use Ocs. Am I right? If so, as writers we will explain their purpose at some point if not the beginning. As you said I did not use Japanese names and that I should got to a search engine. While some of this may be true the other is uncalled for. I did not use Japanese names but there is a reason for everything. What was uncalled for is that by saying I have no cannon knowledge and that I need to go to a search engine is saying that I am not a superior being. And saying my characters are probable Mary Sues is very rude. 'Cause you never know. I can guarantee you that all of my characters are real people but for their privacy some of it has changed. You could be right. But until you know the whole picture and can see all your questions answered magically before your very own eyes you should keep it to yourself. Just chill and I'll get there. As writers we should accept the fact that nothing is perfect and nobody is the same. Also as writers we should learn to understand this is fiction and that it might not be exact and that fan fiction is something that is not true and that you have to be a fan of it to know what your doing. All of your questions will be answered as long as you keep reading. With that said here is chapter 2.)
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Chapter Two
Dana sat on the window seat of her room. She sighed watching the moon's reflection ripple in the water as the wind gently blew. Dana knew that she would have to move once more and leave friends again. It was a thing that always happened. Her dad had passed away a few years before and her mom was just trying to help by making money so they could live in a house by the lake or just about anywhere. Dana tried her best to hide her pain but sometimes your best just isn't enough. Sometimes she could hide it a long time, but every once in a while she would break down. 'Some things you hold dearly will always remain with you if you let your feelings go'.
Her dad's words had helped her for some time but she just felt fragile. Her heart felt like it would break at any moment. But just when she's about to give up her friends would plague her mind. Their voices would comfort her. Or when she was lonely her mom would hold her like a child and set her mind to ease. Dana smiled when she thought of Amber and Zoe. Both of them had been nice enough to tell their feelings for Takuya, in Zoe's case, and Koji, in Amber's case. She thought they would be perfect for each other. Then her mind when back to the subject of Josh. Josh was different from the others. She had never seen a guy like this before. She had a lot of guy friends in America (Look A Question Answered) but none like Josh. She thought about her friends boyfriends when she lived in her old house. All of them were similar but not like Josh. Josh had a strong presence with the way he looked to all she knew about him. The saddest thing that Amber and Zoe had said was that his mother and brother died when she gave birth. When Dana asked if he ever broke down when he told them. All they did was shake their heads. Dana thought about it. Josh and her were the same in a way. Then she shook her thoughts away. She knew that she hadn't known him long enough to like him or have feelings for him. She sighed inwardly again. She better stay from them. Dana just couldn't stand to be hurt again. It had happened to many times before. With her best friends in America all the way till now. She dug around in her box of things. She pulled out a picture of her and two other girls. One had brown hair the other orange. 'Kalee and Brandi why can't you be here right now' Dana thought. True she had talked to them on the phone and she did talk on the computer. They had told her to be herself and to hold her head up high and that they wished her the best of luck. She sighed pulling back her covers and getting into bed. She carefully stroked the frame and then placed it on the desk beside her bed. She laid back and drifted off to sleep.
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Sweet Bliss: OK that's all for chapter 2. R&R please!!!! Kind of angsty huh?
By: Sweet Bliss
(A/N: One of my reviewers sent me a review which I plan to explain/answer in the best possible way. Now as writers we tend to use Ocs. Am I right? If so, as writers we will explain their purpose at some point if not the beginning. As you said I did not use Japanese names and that I should got to a search engine. While some of this may be true the other is uncalled for. I did not use Japanese names but there is a reason for everything. What was uncalled for is that by saying I have no cannon knowledge and that I need to go to a search engine is saying that I am not a superior being. And saying my characters are probable Mary Sues is very rude. 'Cause you never know. I can guarantee you that all of my characters are real people but for their privacy some of it has changed. You could be right. But until you know the whole picture and can see all your questions answered magically before your very own eyes you should keep it to yourself. Just chill and I'll get there. As writers we should accept the fact that nothing is perfect and nobody is the same. Also as writers we should learn to understand this is fiction and that it might not be exact and that fan fiction is something that is not true and that you have to be a fan of it to know what your doing. All of your questions will be answered as long as you keep reading. With that said here is chapter 2.)
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Chapter Two
Dana sat on the window seat of her room. She sighed watching the moon's reflection ripple in the water as the wind gently blew. Dana knew that she would have to move once more and leave friends again. It was a thing that always happened. Her dad had passed away a few years before and her mom was just trying to help by making money so they could live in a house by the lake or just about anywhere. Dana tried her best to hide her pain but sometimes your best just isn't enough. Sometimes she could hide it a long time, but every once in a while she would break down. 'Some things you hold dearly will always remain with you if you let your feelings go'.
Her dad's words had helped her for some time but she just felt fragile. Her heart felt like it would break at any moment. But just when she's about to give up her friends would plague her mind. Their voices would comfort her. Or when she was lonely her mom would hold her like a child and set her mind to ease. Dana smiled when she thought of Amber and Zoe. Both of them had been nice enough to tell their feelings for Takuya, in Zoe's case, and Koji, in Amber's case. She thought they would be perfect for each other. Then her mind when back to the subject of Josh. Josh was different from the others. She had never seen a guy like this before. She had a lot of guy friends in America (Look A Question Answered) but none like Josh. She thought about her friends boyfriends when she lived in her old house. All of them were similar but not like Josh. Josh had a strong presence with the way he looked to all she knew about him. The saddest thing that Amber and Zoe had said was that his mother and brother died when she gave birth. When Dana asked if he ever broke down when he told them. All they did was shake their heads. Dana thought about it. Josh and her were the same in a way. Then she shook her thoughts away. She knew that she hadn't known him long enough to like him or have feelings for him. She sighed inwardly again. She better stay from them. Dana just couldn't stand to be hurt again. It had happened to many times before. With her best friends in America all the way till now. She dug around in her box of things. She pulled out a picture of her and two other girls. One had brown hair the other orange. 'Kalee and Brandi why can't you be here right now' Dana thought. True she had talked to them on the phone and she did talk on the computer. They had told her to be herself and to hold her head up high and that they wished her the best of luck. She sighed pulling back her covers and getting into bed. She carefully stroked the frame and then placed it on the desk beside her bed. She laid back and drifted off to sleep.
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Sweet Bliss: OK that's all for chapter 2. R&R please!!!! Kind of angsty huh?