I'd ask you all to be nice on R&R, but if I really wanted to become some sort of writer I need any constructive criticism I can get.
I didn't know how to begin it, so the beginning is sorta detached, I guess…
(btw, I'm sorry if you hate Tea, but this story somehow came out as a Tea liking story)
Dis: I don't own Yugioh and never will sadly.
The story that has no official title cuz EDL didn't think one up
Tea hated it. All she could do for the past 2 weeks was think about Yugi. This had never happened before: Why now? Just when she was finally able to actually admit her feelings towards him to herself…and now here was the chance to tell him. But not in front of the others…This was one time she didn't want her friends to be with her…
"Come on Tea, say what it is you wanna tell Yugi. We're your friends", said Tristan.
Why can't guys ever take a hint?, Tea thought as she looked at Yugi's inquisitive face.
"It's alright Tea. You can say whatever you want in front of the rest of the gang. We're all friends," Yugi said quietly as he smiled at her.
Tea's eyes closed for a moment, searching for the answer to her hidden embarrassment and then opened them. Lily, she thought. She turned to stare at her. Lily was the only one who knew what she was trying to say and only she could help her.
Lily was already thinking before Tea even looked at her. She knew that the situation for Tea was growing steadily worse and something had to be done…now.
"HEY!," Lily cried in that voice she used before pulling some sort of prank. "Uh," she paused, thinking quickly about what would work. "SERENITY IS OUTSIDE TALKING WITH A BOY!!," she cried out in her best childish voice.
This has to work, Lily thought. the guys will go cuz they're jealous and the girls will go for the gossip.
It worked like a charm…almost. Isis, who didn't really know Serenity, hadn't left.
Tea let out an inward sigh of relief; almost everyone had left. Unfortunately, Isis didn't look like she was going anywhere soon.
Desperate times call for desperate measures thought Lily. "Uh, Isis, did I tell you I'm going out with your brother?" Lily said teasingly, while preparing to run.
"YOU'RE WHAT?!," Isis yelled as she took a few bold steps toward Lily.
Thank you, thought Tea, as Lily got ready to run.
The things I do for friendship, thought Lily. "I can't believe I just said that," she said walking quickly towards the door.
"I can give you 10 minutes tops!," Lily quickly told Tea, running out the door with Isis quick on her heels, "cuz this girl runs FAST!" She finished saying, now out the door.
Tea smiled at her opportunity newly created. Sometimes improvising was the best way out of something. She stared at Yugi, trying to think of how to put the feelings that raced through her nervous heart into words.
Many thanks to Raventhedarkgoddess who corrected this for me.
Sorry it's so short, it's just that I really didn't know how to end it. Any ideas are welcome.
And if you noticed my name EDL sounds familiar it's cuz I'm part of Sugar High Inc.
I didn't know how to begin it, so the beginning is sorta detached, I guess…
(btw, I'm sorry if you hate Tea, but this story somehow came out as a Tea liking story)
Dis: I don't own Yugioh and never will sadly.
The story that has no official title cuz EDL didn't think one up
Tea hated it. All she could do for the past 2 weeks was think about Yugi. This had never happened before: Why now? Just when she was finally able to actually admit her feelings towards him to herself…and now here was the chance to tell him. But not in front of the others…This was one time she didn't want her friends to be with her…
"Come on Tea, say what it is you wanna tell Yugi. We're your friends", said Tristan.
Why can't guys ever take a hint?, Tea thought as she looked at Yugi's inquisitive face.
"It's alright Tea. You can say whatever you want in front of the rest of the gang. We're all friends," Yugi said quietly as he smiled at her.
Tea's eyes closed for a moment, searching for the answer to her hidden embarrassment and then opened them. Lily, she thought. She turned to stare at her. Lily was the only one who knew what she was trying to say and only she could help her.
Lily was already thinking before Tea even looked at her. She knew that the situation for Tea was growing steadily worse and something had to be done…now.
"HEY!," Lily cried in that voice she used before pulling some sort of prank. "Uh," she paused, thinking quickly about what would work. "SERENITY IS OUTSIDE TALKING WITH A BOY!!," she cried out in her best childish voice.
This has to work, Lily thought. the guys will go cuz they're jealous and the girls will go for the gossip.
It worked like a charm…almost. Isis, who didn't really know Serenity, hadn't left.
Tea let out an inward sigh of relief; almost everyone had left. Unfortunately, Isis didn't look like she was going anywhere soon.
Desperate times call for desperate measures thought Lily. "Uh, Isis, did I tell you I'm going out with your brother?" Lily said teasingly, while preparing to run.
"YOU'RE WHAT?!," Isis yelled as she took a few bold steps toward Lily.
Thank you, thought Tea, as Lily got ready to run.
The things I do for friendship, thought Lily. "I can't believe I just said that," she said walking quickly towards the door.
"I can give you 10 minutes tops!," Lily quickly told Tea, running out the door with Isis quick on her heels, "cuz this girl runs FAST!" She finished saying, now out the door.
Tea smiled at her opportunity newly created. Sometimes improvising was the best way out of something. She stared at Yugi, trying to think of how to put the feelings that raced through her nervous heart into words.
Many thanks to Raventhedarkgoddess who corrected this for me.
Sorry it's so short, it's just that I really didn't know how to end it. Any ideas are welcome.
And if you noticed my name EDL sounds familiar it's cuz I'm part of Sugar High Inc.