Disclaimer: I don't own Harry Potter, or Ron Weasley or any of the other
characters in JK's classic story. If I did own Harry Potter, and then I
wouldn't let any of you have him; I'd keep him for myself and kiss him all
day. He He Hee, I am sooo sad. My point is that unless you want a broken CD
player and a half-melted chocolate bar, don't bother suing me.
Authors Note: This is a kinda re-write of the fifth book, except that there's a new girl there. I hope that you like this. Warning, though, major spoilers.
Chapter 1
The new girl.
A strange looking girl with straight, silver blond hair and shimmering blue eyes was staring out the window with her head on her hand. Around her neck a silver chain hung and, on it, there was a blue teardrop shaped bead. She was going away from home for the first time, without her family. She didn't know why her Father wanted her to go. She was thinking hard when a dark haired boy with glasses and a girl with flame red hair came through the door.
"Oh, I'm sorry, I didn't know anyone was in here," the black haired boy said.
"This compartment is taken" the strange girl said, coldly.
"Oh, well would it be okay if we could..."
"I said, this compartment is taken," she said again, looking at him sternly.
"Right, well..."
"Goodbye" the girl said, standing up and shutting the door in their faces.
She lay down on one row of seats and closed her eyes.
A cool and calm voice in the compartment said aloud "You shouldn't have done that. You could have been great friends."
"Shut up" she said, burying her head in her arms.
Now sleeping, the mysterious girl was still alone, lying on the seats. "Well, well, well, look what we have here." Malfoy said, waking her.
"This compartment is taken," She said, yawning and rubbing her eyes.
"Well, I think that I will make it a rule that I can sit here, and because I'm a prefect I can give you detention if you don't obey the rules" Malfoy said, sitting down.
"Well, I'm new, so I'm not familiar with the rules." she said, pulling out her wand. Malfoy sneered at her and said "Like you said, you're new, so you don't know any magic yet."
"IMPEDIMENTA!" She yelled, pointing her wand at Goyle. Goyle was blasted backwards out the door.
"Well, I think I can do a FEW spells. Now GET OUT." She yelled.
She pushed Malfoy and Crabbe out of the door slammed it shut.
The calm voice reverberated round the compartment once more "You shouldn't have done that, Crystal... it was mean."
"Shut UP" She shouted out in anger.
Sleeping again, Crystal was having a weird dream. There was a boy with flaming red hair. He was fighting with someone she couldn't see. They were arguing over something. Someone.
Once again, her sleep was disturbed by a boy with flaming red hair and green eyes, and a girl with bushy brown hair and brown eyes standing at the door. The boy spoke.
"Hello? Sorry, but have you seen..."
"For the last time, this compartment is TAKEN!"
"No, we were wondering if you saw our friends"
"One has black hair"
"And she is about this tall"
"And he wears glasses"
"has red hair"
"and emerald green eyes"
"Stop, STOP. No, I haven't seen anyone like that." Crystal said, holding her hands over her ears to stop the noise.
"Well, uh, thank-you" the girl said.
"Right, bye"
The girl and boy left, closing the door behind them. Behind the frosted glass, the boy stopped to look into the compartment for a few seconds, before moving on.
Crystal lay back on the seats.
"That was the boy in your dream..."
"So?"
"You did see them. You lied"
"SHUT-UP" She said to the empty compartment, turning over and lying on her back and covering her ears with her hands.
At about one in the afternoon, the witch with the food trolley came by and knocked gently on the door, waking Crystal. "Hello? Would you like anything?" she asked, as Crystal yawned.
"Sorry?" Crystal asked, stifling another yawn.
"Would you like anything to eat, dear?"
"Oh... sure." Crystal said, taking out her money bad, and walking out to the trolley.
She bought allot of chocolate frogs, pumpkin juice and pumpkin pastries.
She started to eat her chocolate frogs, breaking off the leg of one and putting it into her mouth, really wishing now that she had not chased away all of those people.
"Hello?" Ron asked, standing in the doorway.
"This comp... oh, its you." Crystal said, flustering.
"Yeah... uh, I thought you might like some company." Ron said, his ears going red.
"Oh, right. Did you find your friends?"
"Yeah." Ron sat down across from her. An uncomfortable silence followed. "So, anyway. Uh... what's your name?" Ron asked after a while.
"Its Crystal. And yours?" Crystal asked.
"Ron" Ron said, his ears redder than ever.
Ron paused, thinking hard for something to say.
"So, where are you from?" He asked, finally.
"Oh, I'm from Galway (sorry to any Irish people if I spelt that wrong) in Ireland."
"Right," Ron said. "Well, I kinda live in the countryside a while from London"
Another uncomfortable silence followed.
"Uh, do you want a chocolate frog?" Crystal asked, breaking the silence.
"Yeah. (He caught it as Crystal threw it at him.) Here, you have no beans." He said, examining the pile of sweets on the chair beside Crystal.
Crystal raised her eyebrow, confused.
"Bertie bots every flavor beans? (Ron dug into his pocket and pulled out a bag) Here" he said, throwing the bag to her.
"Thanks."
There was yet another uncomfortable silence.
Crystal looked down to the card in her hand from the chocolate frog.
"Here." she said, handing him the card. "It's Paracelsus. Its the last one you need for your collection, isn't it?" Crystal said.
"Yeah..." Ron said, puzzled. "How did you..."
"Ron, where were you, were meant to be on our rounds." Hermione said, poking her head inside the door.
"See you later then" Ron said to Crystal.
"Yeah, see you"
Crystal took her owl down from the overhead luggage rack and sat down with its cage on her lap.
"That went quite well, didn't it?" The owl said, in a cool and calm voice. "Yeah," Crystal agreed, letting the owl out of its cage.
"It looks like you will make some friends here, after all," the owl said, smiling and flying up to her shoulder. "That's a surprise."
"Shut up," Crystal said, smiling up at him.
I hope that you like this. It's my first fic, so please be kind. Please R&R. I swear that it'll get better, so be patient. I know that it's confusing, but I will work on that. I kinda suck at spelling, so sorry bout n e mistakes. Criticism is always welcome, it helps me improve. R&R 4 more. But no flames please. Yevon. (For n e 1 who read this b4, this is diomind. I just gotta new e-mail and screen name -)
Authors Note: This is a kinda re-write of the fifth book, except that there's a new girl there. I hope that you like this. Warning, though, major spoilers.
Chapter 1
The new girl.
A strange looking girl with straight, silver blond hair and shimmering blue eyes was staring out the window with her head on her hand. Around her neck a silver chain hung and, on it, there was a blue teardrop shaped bead. She was going away from home for the first time, without her family. She didn't know why her Father wanted her to go. She was thinking hard when a dark haired boy with glasses and a girl with flame red hair came through the door.
"Oh, I'm sorry, I didn't know anyone was in here," the black haired boy said.
"This compartment is taken" the strange girl said, coldly.
"Oh, well would it be okay if we could..."
"I said, this compartment is taken," she said again, looking at him sternly.
"Right, well..."
"Goodbye" the girl said, standing up and shutting the door in their faces.
She lay down on one row of seats and closed her eyes.
A cool and calm voice in the compartment said aloud "You shouldn't have done that. You could have been great friends."
"Shut up" she said, burying her head in her arms.
Now sleeping, the mysterious girl was still alone, lying on the seats. "Well, well, well, look what we have here." Malfoy said, waking her.
"This compartment is taken," She said, yawning and rubbing her eyes.
"Well, I think that I will make it a rule that I can sit here, and because I'm a prefect I can give you detention if you don't obey the rules" Malfoy said, sitting down.
"Well, I'm new, so I'm not familiar with the rules." she said, pulling out her wand. Malfoy sneered at her and said "Like you said, you're new, so you don't know any magic yet."
"IMPEDIMENTA!" She yelled, pointing her wand at Goyle. Goyle was blasted backwards out the door.
"Well, I think I can do a FEW spells. Now GET OUT." She yelled.
She pushed Malfoy and Crabbe out of the door slammed it shut.
The calm voice reverberated round the compartment once more "You shouldn't have done that, Crystal... it was mean."
"Shut UP" She shouted out in anger.
Sleeping again, Crystal was having a weird dream. There was a boy with flaming red hair. He was fighting with someone she couldn't see. They were arguing over something. Someone.
Once again, her sleep was disturbed by a boy with flaming red hair and green eyes, and a girl with bushy brown hair and brown eyes standing at the door. The boy spoke.
"Hello? Sorry, but have you seen..."
"For the last time, this compartment is TAKEN!"
"No, we were wondering if you saw our friends"
"One has black hair"
"And she is about this tall"
"And he wears glasses"
"has red hair"
"and emerald green eyes"
"Stop, STOP. No, I haven't seen anyone like that." Crystal said, holding her hands over her ears to stop the noise.
"Well, uh, thank-you" the girl said.
"Right, bye"
The girl and boy left, closing the door behind them. Behind the frosted glass, the boy stopped to look into the compartment for a few seconds, before moving on.
Crystal lay back on the seats.
"That was the boy in your dream..."
"So?"
"You did see them. You lied"
"SHUT-UP" She said to the empty compartment, turning over and lying on her back and covering her ears with her hands.
At about one in the afternoon, the witch with the food trolley came by and knocked gently on the door, waking Crystal. "Hello? Would you like anything?" she asked, as Crystal yawned.
"Sorry?" Crystal asked, stifling another yawn.
"Would you like anything to eat, dear?"
"Oh... sure." Crystal said, taking out her money bad, and walking out to the trolley.
She bought allot of chocolate frogs, pumpkin juice and pumpkin pastries.
She started to eat her chocolate frogs, breaking off the leg of one and putting it into her mouth, really wishing now that she had not chased away all of those people.
"Hello?" Ron asked, standing in the doorway.
"This comp... oh, its you." Crystal said, flustering.
"Yeah... uh, I thought you might like some company." Ron said, his ears going red.
"Oh, right. Did you find your friends?"
"Yeah." Ron sat down across from her. An uncomfortable silence followed. "So, anyway. Uh... what's your name?" Ron asked after a while.
"Its Crystal. And yours?" Crystal asked.
"Ron" Ron said, his ears redder than ever.
Ron paused, thinking hard for something to say.
"So, where are you from?" He asked, finally.
"Oh, I'm from Galway (sorry to any Irish people if I spelt that wrong) in Ireland."
"Right," Ron said. "Well, I kinda live in the countryside a while from London"
Another uncomfortable silence followed.
"Uh, do you want a chocolate frog?" Crystal asked, breaking the silence.
"Yeah. (He caught it as Crystal threw it at him.) Here, you have no beans." He said, examining the pile of sweets on the chair beside Crystal.
Crystal raised her eyebrow, confused.
"Bertie bots every flavor beans? (Ron dug into his pocket and pulled out a bag) Here" he said, throwing the bag to her.
"Thanks."
There was yet another uncomfortable silence.
Crystal looked down to the card in her hand from the chocolate frog.
"Here." she said, handing him the card. "It's Paracelsus. Its the last one you need for your collection, isn't it?" Crystal said.
"Yeah..." Ron said, puzzled. "How did you..."
"Ron, where were you, were meant to be on our rounds." Hermione said, poking her head inside the door.
"See you later then" Ron said to Crystal.
"Yeah, see you"
Crystal took her owl down from the overhead luggage rack and sat down with its cage on her lap.
"That went quite well, didn't it?" The owl said, in a cool and calm voice. "Yeah," Crystal agreed, letting the owl out of its cage.
"It looks like you will make some friends here, after all," the owl said, smiling and flying up to her shoulder. "That's a surprise."
"Shut up," Crystal said, smiling up at him.
I hope that you like this. It's my first fic, so please be kind. Please R&R. I swear that it'll get better, so be patient. I know that it's confusing, but I will work on that. I kinda suck at spelling, so sorry bout n e mistakes. Criticism is always welcome, it helps me improve. R&R 4 more. But no flames please. Yevon. (For n e 1 who read this b4, this is diomind. I just gotta new e-mail and screen name -)