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Bitter-sweet Crunch chocolate kisses chapter 3
'Two..two eyes reflecting the moonlight.'Her mind processed as she stood up and stepped forward a bit; preparing her arrow, and continuing to stare to the right focusing her energy to the best of her ability; trying to make out it's figure. She couldnt tell if it was strong or not it seemed to be trying to hide from her because it stopped moving when she looked over but she could tell that maybe.... 'Hmm, it is the same size as a certain hanyou i know.' she thought triumphantly. She said to him as calmly as she could at the moment ;angry that he had frightened her, "Inuyasha you jerk I am not going back with you to be your stupid shard hunter, now,! SIT!"...... But instead of the reasuring splat she heard a sound much worse, silence. Then the figure was suddenly out from the shadows to reveal sudden shimmer of white...
She heard a voice she had been having nightmares about since he had saw him. "kukuku" mocked Naraku from under the baboon pelt, "exspecting someone else? Thats a shame, I have been waiting this moment since the first time I saw you Kagome and you have made it so easy to achieve." Stunned momentarily, until her mind started going into full gear deciding what to do first. Deciding that fighting ultimate evil demons with supernatural power was not her fortake she screamed as loud as she could, "INUYASHA HELP!" "Oh poor Kagome all alone without her precious protector... Stop your screeching he cant hear you," he said while advancing slowly causing kagome to also back away, "He is having more fun than he has ever had with that whore Kikyo and thanks to your blindness his weak hearing will not be able to detect ANY of our sounds, only the ones Kikyo will be making." "Why do you want me I left the shards in my bag?....." 'Does he.....Is he...' Disbelieving she shakily put two and two together. "You have Onigumo's heart; you lust fir kikyo." She said while noticing his ever increasing pace and the lustful look she could see even through the eyeholes of the pelt. "Silence wench, I never wanted the tainted Kikyo that was the weak human Onigumo and kikyo is going to take the shards after she is done with Inuyasha." He said as her back hit the tree's trunk leaving her cornered. "But if I were you I wouldnt be worried about Kikyo and what you think that I,Naraku, want to do to her but what I am going to do to YOU." He said while peeling off his baboon pelt to reveal his rather human looking self. He was dressed in just his normal dark purple pants, showing of his evil but well toned chest. Using his half-demon speed he advanced until he was teetering over her. He lustfully raked in her curves and body with his red eyes, her breathing hard because of fear and the adrenaline still pumping after her run, his chest barely touched hers when he breathed in deeply.
"You don't want that..." she said wuiveringly; barely audible to anyone but a hanyou.
Suddenly he drew his hand up to her chin, using a wanting roughness, allowing it to skim along her smooth and said with a bit of anger in his husky voice. "You know nothing of my needs or wants." His claws pierced the skin barely causing her to shake a bit and close her eyes tightly for a moment, before forcing them to meet his. "Dont worry, I am not going to kill you intentionally unless you fight too much." Again She closed her eyes tightly, wishing she would wake up by the campfire and everything would just go away, as his thumb brushed again over her very exposed and fragile neck. "Damn Damn Damn' she thought 'I am going to get raped by our enemy while that useless wretch Inuyasha lays with Kikyo. I can tell by the look in his eyes he wants me, and i hate the way he looks at my body... I need to stab him with the arrow but how do get him off his guard? There is only one sure fire way. sigh The things people will do to survive.' she thought as she made up her mind. Then she put her plan into action...
As soon as she stopped his mind snapped off her scent and body to the evil concentrated on the corrupted evil smell of the other hanyou on his list, Naraku. He had obviously smelt her as well and had arrived at the scene as soon as she had hidden her weird arrow,'She has lucky timing' he scoffed 'but otherwise she is unfortunate,' he thought. He raised an eyebrow as he felt her alarmingly large power reach out into the surroundings, washing over him in an invisible wave of purity. He saw her look in his direction for a moment her forehead creased in worry then turn to notice the eyes of the poorly hidden Naraku. 'hmm, how did she know what direction we both were in, if it werent for jaken's spell I would be easy for a demon or hanyou to smell out and my massive power a human could even sense easily. Even though he is useless, his spell makes me undetectable to anything but powerful demons to sense. odd. She definitely is human though.'
'Lets see how this mysterious women handles herself against a powerful enemy.' He spectated her with foreign interest. 'Avoiding a fight, not like most humans who would either panic and run away giving us demons a rather pleasureable chase or panic and charge to their deaths. She seems rather in control considering her position and human nature.' His rage suddenly flared and his eyes flooded with red tint for second as he grasped Naraku's goals of coming to her. 'Why does this anger me? Probably because I do not agree to mating where the female is human. No there is no other reason. But still should I stop this now? No he has no intentions on taking this quickly(if the bastard knew I was here...) he intends to play with her. Also I am curious on her further actions.WHat next wench?'
He watched as the scent of fear grew stonger around her as Naraku's hand pierced her skin. It took all of his self-control to stop himself from proceeding to kill Naraku. The smell of her blood only helped to aggravate him and make his hands curl into fists piercing himself with his own claws; his eyes taking a deep red, but also the blood made him wish it was him she was fearing, him who had complete control of her, him that.... No he stopped his thoughts there, he just enjoyed the kill, that was all. 'Why do I care at all it is nothing, she is just a human.' But he knew deep down Naraku wasn't going to kill her....yet..... or at least until he got what he wanted.
But what she did next would surprise him to no end... hahahahha you have to wait this next part is great!
Sesshie twitches eyes turn red: got to kill something .......been full three chapters........ Must KILLL Kagome: aww poor baby sesshie gives him a kiss and they start making out AGAIN Xela: alright you two stop it ugh we have a schedule to keep. Dont worry seshie ill have you kill something soon. Sesshie: me kill writer good....draws tokijin me want kagome now! xela: if you kill me now you dont get your lemon.... kagome: ya wait till she writes it then kill her./ xela: KAGOME! your supposed to be the good one! Kagome: Hey he'll be calmed down by then and then u can bribe him with something else.. allright? xela:fine sulks next time i am making myself a bf to beat up his beautiful but. sesshie: leeeeeeeeemooon goood xela: doc ill have watever he's taking Kagome: Fine one cup of pure demon blood comin ur way
QUOTES/CREDITS REMEMBER: HAVE FUN OR IT ISNT WORTH IT. thE GREAT LELOI SAID: YOU KNOW NOTHING OF MY WANTS OR NEEDS.
Bitter-sweet Crunch chocolate kisses chapter 3
'Two..two eyes reflecting the moonlight.'Her mind processed as she stood up and stepped forward a bit; preparing her arrow, and continuing to stare to the right focusing her energy to the best of her ability; trying to make out it's figure. She couldnt tell if it was strong or not it seemed to be trying to hide from her because it stopped moving when she looked over but she could tell that maybe.... 'Hmm, it is the same size as a certain hanyou i know.' she thought triumphantly. She said to him as calmly as she could at the moment ;angry that he had frightened her, "Inuyasha you jerk I am not going back with you to be your stupid shard hunter, now,! SIT!"...... But instead of the reasuring splat she heard a sound much worse, silence. Then the figure was suddenly out from the shadows to reveal sudden shimmer of white...
She heard a voice she had been having nightmares about since he had saw him. "kukuku" mocked Naraku from under the baboon pelt, "exspecting someone else? Thats a shame, I have been waiting this moment since the first time I saw you Kagome and you have made it so easy to achieve." Stunned momentarily, until her mind started going into full gear deciding what to do first. Deciding that fighting ultimate evil demons with supernatural power was not her fortake she screamed as loud as she could, "INUYASHA HELP!" "Oh poor Kagome all alone without her precious protector... Stop your screeching he cant hear you," he said while advancing slowly causing kagome to also back away, "He is having more fun than he has ever had with that whore Kikyo and thanks to your blindness his weak hearing will not be able to detect ANY of our sounds, only the ones Kikyo will be making." "Why do you want me I left the shards in my bag?....." 'Does he.....Is he...' Disbelieving she shakily put two and two together. "You have Onigumo's heart; you lust fir kikyo." She said while noticing his ever increasing pace and the lustful look she could see even through the eyeholes of the pelt. "Silence wench, I never wanted the tainted Kikyo that was the weak human Onigumo and kikyo is going to take the shards after she is done with Inuyasha." He said as her back hit the tree's trunk leaving her cornered. "But if I were you I wouldnt be worried about Kikyo and what you think that I,Naraku, want to do to her but what I am going to do to YOU." He said while peeling off his baboon pelt to reveal his rather human looking self. He was dressed in just his normal dark purple pants, showing of his evil but well toned chest. Using his half-demon speed he advanced until he was teetering over her. He lustfully raked in her curves and body with his red eyes, her breathing hard because of fear and the adrenaline still pumping after her run, his chest barely touched hers when he breathed in deeply.
"You don't want that..." she said wuiveringly; barely audible to anyone but a hanyou.
Suddenly he drew his hand up to her chin, using a wanting roughness, allowing it to skim along her smooth and said with a bit of anger in his husky voice. "You know nothing of my needs or wants." His claws pierced the skin barely causing her to shake a bit and close her eyes tightly for a moment, before forcing them to meet his. "Dont worry, I am not going to kill you intentionally unless you fight too much." Again She closed her eyes tightly, wishing she would wake up by the campfire and everything would just go away, as his thumb brushed again over her very exposed and fragile neck. "Damn Damn Damn' she thought 'I am going to get raped by our enemy while that useless wretch Inuyasha lays with Kikyo. I can tell by the look in his eyes he wants me, and i hate the way he looks at my body... I need to stab him with the arrow but how do get him off his guard? There is only one sure fire way. sigh The things people will do to survive.' she thought as she made up her mind. Then she put her plan into action...
As soon as she stopped his mind snapped off her scent and body to the evil concentrated on the corrupted evil smell of the other hanyou on his list, Naraku. He had obviously smelt her as well and had arrived at the scene as soon as she had hidden her weird arrow,'She has lucky timing' he scoffed 'but otherwise she is unfortunate,' he thought. He raised an eyebrow as he felt her alarmingly large power reach out into the surroundings, washing over him in an invisible wave of purity. He saw her look in his direction for a moment her forehead creased in worry then turn to notice the eyes of the poorly hidden Naraku. 'hmm, how did she know what direction we both were in, if it werent for jaken's spell I would be easy for a demon or hanyou to smell out and my massive power a human could even sense easily. Even though he is useless, his spell makes me undetectable to anything but powerful demons to sense. odd. She definitely is human though.'
'Lets see how this mysterious women handles herself against a powerful enemy.' He spectated her with foreign interest. 'Avoiding a fight, not like most humans who would either panic and run away giving us demons a rather pleasureable chase or panic and charge to their deaths. She seems rather in control considering her position and human nature.' His rage suddenly flared and his eyes flooded with red tint for second as he grasped Naraku's goals of coming to her. 'Why does this anger me? Probably because I do not agree to mating where the female is human. No there is no other reason. But still should I stop this now? No he has no intentions on taking this quickly(if the bastard knew I was here...) he intends to play with her. Also I am curious on her further actions.WHat next wench?'
He watched as the scent of fear grew stonger around her as Naraku's hand pierced her skin. It took all of his self-control to stop himself from proceeding to kill Naraku. The smell of her blood only helped to aggravate him and make his hands curl into fists piercing himself with his own claws; his eyes taking a deep red, but also the blood made him wish it was him she was fearing, him who had complete control of her, him that.... No he stopped his thoughts there, he just enjoyed the kill, that was all. 'Why do I care at all it is nothing, she is just a human.' But he knew deep down Naraku wasn't going to kill her....yet..... or at least until he got what he wanted.
But what she did next would surprise him to no end... hahahahha you have to wait this next part is great!
Sesshie twitches eyes turn red: got to kill something .......been full three chapters........ Must KILLL Kagome: aww poor baby sesshie gives him a kiss and they start making out AGAIN Xela: alright you two stop it ugh we have a schedule to keep. Dont worry seshie ill have you kill something soon. Sesshie: me kill writer good....draws tokijin me want kagome now! xela: if you kill me now you dont get your lemon.... kagome: ya wait till she writes it then kill her./ xela: KAGOME! your supposed to be the good one! Kagome: Hey he'll be calmed down by then and then u can bribe him with something else.. allright? xela:fine sulks next time i am making myself a bf to beat up his beautiful but. sesshie: leeeeeeeeemooon goood xela: doc ill have watever he's taking Kagome: Fine one cup of pure demon blood comin ur way
QUOTES/CREDITS REMEMBER: HAVE FUN OR IT ISNT WORTH IT. thE GREAT LELOI SAID: YOU KNOW NOTHING OF MY WANTS OR NEEDS.