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The Will and The Only Way chocolate kisses chapter four
'Alright now or never.'her mind stated as she gathered whatever courage she had left as his strangely cold and rough hand slowly made it's way down her from her neck to her shoulder ripping her shool shirt and using his clawed thumb to remind her that he could kill her if he wanted to. She opened her eyes slowly and caught Naraku's eyes in hers as she suddenly stepped forward and pushed herself against his body, using one of her hands to cover his creeping hand ceasing it's movement and used her other (more armed) hand to close the gap between them until they were barily apart and keeping a firm grasp on his chin and said in a voice she hoped sounded longing,"Mmm, Naraku." Her lips grazed his as she enunciated each word. Not to her knowing, it was making him want her even more than hoped.
She then moved in, him being still stunned at her words and even more at the sudden boldness, she kissed him firmly as she moved her hand down slowly to form a fist holding the head of the hidden weapon cover his heart.
Suddenly she broke the kiss, pulled back, and ripped his hand off her neck all at the same time. Then gripped the purified now glowing arrow firmly and applied preasure so that it tore through his shirt piercing his chest. She blushed at her own language, but hey she was caught up in her own victory saying triumphantly, "BULSEYE YOU PERVERTED BASTARD GOODBYE..".
'She...she is.....she wants him too.' He thought as she pulled Naraku close to her. 'The whore is betraying all her friends and allies for him. This IS normal for a human. What did I expect? Now I can just take care of them both now that my curiosity is fulfilled.' His hand strayed to his corrupted sword: throbing and begging to be used to kill. 'Wait....her scent, it smells of fear still, why would you fear a lover?'He pondered quikly before his sharp mind concluded an answer,' Ha' ,he had to stop himself from revealing any emotions on his cold mask of uncaring at such a sudden amusement while he took in a familiar scent, 'There is a scent that has never been mistaken for one such as I, deceit. She is rather clever for a human wench ,she threw even I, the great Sesshoumaru, off guard, I did not even suspect trickery, but I am not the one with an arrow towards my chest.'
'Her arrows are truly deadly, even The Great Sesshoumaru would not enjoy being hit with one of them. Not because of her strength, but she has some kind of magic, sorcery she uses on them.'
'There is a problem with your plan human, you treat him as if he were another useless human, but he is a half-demon, with strength, speed, and smell superior to yours.' Something throbbed in the back of his head. He sensed something unholy and evil and after looking at the girl with her arrow piercing Naraku's chest, he sped off as fast as possible not wanting to leave her until it was resolved but deciding it almost was over went in the direction of the well. Seen as only a silent silver flash to the few animals roaming the forest.
Her words were stopped suddenly as a hand grabbed her wrist painfully loosening her grip on the now regular arrow. His other hand snapped the arrow in half with a single swipe, the slight hole in his chest already healed. "But how?"she said completely open and terrified now that she had no weapon or hope of coming out of this somewhat safely.
"kukuku, that stung bitch,but did you actually think I would let you pierce me, you are too weak to do it quikly and properly without a bow. I could smell your trickery and going along with your little plan turned out to be so pleasureble on my part. Your arrow draws power from both your hands and the bow when you shoot it, It only holds half the power when you stab me. But you will be regretting your vital mistakes soon." "Now be a good little girl and stop fighting and their will be a chance I might not kill you when this is over." He said while closing in on her, his hands going on the tree on either side of her head.
"Let me go Naraku! I wont let you do this to me!"She yelled while shaking visibly and pulling back from him,her body leaned fully against the tree. She then ducked and leaned right so he was no longer in front of her and running as hard as possible towards the way she came. "You'll never have me Naraku you Bastard!"she said erging her legs to move faster. He smiled visibly at the thought of the chase, he turned to face her retreating form, which was only a quarter of the way to the exit. He waited for her to get three fourths of the way before he started running, taking all the pleasure he could from the run, his predator instincts flared claws extending. He jumped and landed in front of her, she was running so fast she crashed right into him and hit the grass slightly dazed. Her small body was barely felt against his when she made contact even at her speed.He moved on top of her pinning both her arms above her head with one hand and her legs with his. He tied her wrists securely with a rope he had hidden in his sleeves and stabed the rope deeply in the ground with a viscious looking curved dagger. Completing his task he pulled his chest off hers supporting himself by placing his hands on either side of her head so he could look at her terrified face continueing to pin her legs to the ground. "You know you are beautiful when you are terrified."he said while leaning on one his elbows so he could stroke her face. "Shut up....Get off me... and untie me.... then Ill make your death quicker."she masked her fear while growling loudly; trying to bite his hand. He removed his hand and stabbed her in both of her thighs.
"Silence, Now who is sorry for hurting her master, bitch?" he growled while pulling himself to straddle her. "Urgh why?...Why cant I move my legs?..."she said panicing.
"KuKuKu, that would be the miasma, dont worry lucky for you its just temporary paralyzation." "Now answer me!"he growled while lowering himself slightly so he was in her face. A tear fell from Kagome's face as she turned away from him. 'Will I make it through this?' The dog demon filled her head with another tormenting pierce of the heart. 'Inuyasha......Inuyasha dont you care?'
kukuku kinda dark thoughts huh? This is where i leave you for the whole weekend can you take it? actually if I get a review on friday ill give you another chappy but still it gets better and dont worry he doesnt rape her or kill her or maybe he will youll just have to wait and see.......
The Will and The Only Way chocolate kisses chapter four
'Alright now or never.'her mind stated as she gathered whatever courage she had left as his strangely cold and rough hand slowly made it's way down her from her neck to her shoulder ripping her shool shirt and using his clawed thumb to remind her that he could kill her if he wanted to. She opened her eyes slowly and caught Naraku's eyes in hers as she suddenly stepped forward and pushed herself against his body, using one of her hands to cover his creeping hand ceasing it's movement and used her other (more armed) hand to close the gap between them until they were barily apart and keeping a firm grasp on his chin and said in a voice she hoped sounded longing,"Mmm, Naraku." Her lips grazed his as she enunciated each word. Not to her knowing, it was making him want her even more than hoped.
She then moved in, him being still stunned at her words and even more at the sudden boldness, she kissed him firmly as she moved her hand down slowly to form a fist holding the head of the hidden weapon cover his heart.
Suddenly she broke the kiss, pulled back, and ripped his hand off her neck all at the same time. Then gripped the purified now glowing arrow firmly and applied preasure so that it tore through his shirt piercing his chest. She blushed at her own language, but hey she was caught up in her own victory saying triumphantly, "BULSEYE YOU PERVERTED BASTARD GOODBYE..".
'She...she is.....she wants him too.' He thought as she pulled Naraku close to her. 'The whore is betraying all her friends and allies for him. This IS normal for a human. What did I expect? Now I can just take care of them both now that my curiosity is fulfilled.' His hand strayed to his corrupted sword: throbing and begging to be used to kill. 'Wait....her scent, it smells of fear still, why would you fear a lover?'He pondered quikly before his sharp mind concluded an answer,' Ha' ,he had to stop himself from revealing any emotions on his cold mask of uncaring at such a sudden amusement while he took in a familiar scent, 'There is a scent that has never been mistaken for one such as I, deceit. She is rather clever for a human wench ,she threw even I, the great Sesshoumaru, off guard, I did not even suspect trickery, but I am not the one with an arrow towards my chest.'
'Her arrows are truly deadly, even The Great Sesshoumaru would not enjoy being hit with one of them. Not because of her strength, but she has some kind of magic, sorcery she uses on them.'
'There is a problem with your plan human, you treat him as if he were another useless human, but he is a half-demon, with strength, speed, and smell superior to yours.' Something throbbed in the back of his head. He sensed something unholy and evil and after looking at the girl with her arrow piercing Naraku's chest, he sped off as fast as possible not wanting to leave her until it was resolved but deciding it almost was over went in the direction of the well. Seen as only a silent silver flash to the few animals roaming the forest.
Her words were stopped suddenly as a hand grabbed her wrist painfully loosening her grip on the now regular arrow. His other hand snapped the arrow in half with a single swipe, the slight hole in his chest already healed. "But how?"she said completely open and terrified now that she had no weapon or hope of coming out of this somewhat safely.
"kukuku, that stung bitch,but did you actually think I would let you pierce me, you are too weak to do it quikly and properly without a bow. I could smell your trickery and going along with your little plan turned out to be so pleasureble on my part. Your arrow draws power from both your hands and the bow when you shoot it, It only holds half the power when you stab me. But you will be regretting your vital mistakes soon." "Now be a good little girl and stop fighting and their will be a chance I might not kill you when this is over." He said while closing in on her, his hands going on the tree on either side of her head.
"Let me go Naraku! I wont let you do this to me!"She yelled while shaking visibly and pulling back from him,her body leaned fully against the tree. She then ducked and leaned right so he was no longer in front of her and running as hard as possible towards the way she came. "You'll never have me Naraku you Bastard!"she said erging her legs to move faster. He smiled visibly at the thought of the chase, he turned to face her retreating form, which was only a quarter of the way to the exit. He waited for her to get three fourths of the way before he started running, taking all the pleasure he could from the run, his predator instincts flared claws extending. He jumped and landed in front of her, she was running so fast she crashed right into him and hit the grass slightly dazed. Her small body was barely felt against his when she made contact even at her speed.He moved on top of her pinning both her arms above her head with one hand and her legs with his. He tied her wrists securely with a rope he had hidden in his sleeves and stabed the rope deeply in the ground with a viscious looking curved dagger. Completing his task he pulled his chest off hers supporting himself by placing his hands on either side of her head so he could look at her terrified face continueing to pin her legs to the ground. "You know you are beautiful when you are terrified."he said while leaning on one his elbows so he could stroke her face. "Shut up....Get off me... and untie me.... then Ill make your death quicker."she masked her fear while growling loudly; trying to bite his hand. He removed his hand and stabbed her in both of her thighs.
"Silence, Now who is sorry for hurting her master, bitch?" he growled while pulling himself to straddle her. "Urgh why?...Why cant I move my legs?..."she said panicing.
"KuKuKu, that would be the miasma, dont worry lucky for you its just temporary paralyzation." "Now answer me!"he growled while lowering himself slightly so he was in her face. A tear fell from Kagome's face as she turned away from him. 'Will I make it through this?' The dog demon filled her head with another tormenting pierce of the heart. 'Inuyasha......Inuyasha dont you care?'
kukuku kinda dark thoughts huh? This is where i leave you for the whole weekend can you take it? actually if I get a review on friday ill give you another chappy but still it gets better and dont worry he doesnt rape her or kill her or maybe he will youll just have to wait and see.......