Author's Note- you guys are killing me...I ONLY need 5 more reviews!! I
want to write the sequel as much as I'm hoping u want to read it! Come on,
this is my only KH fic, and I want to leave it with a good ending. So to
help u, and give you one last chance, I've decided to write a sneak peak
for the sequel. Maybe this will give you the extra push...
The wind played with a seventeen year old girl's auburn hair as she slowly approached the young man. Wisps of silver hair ruffled over ad over as a crashing sea.
She gulped as she thought about what she had to say and do to him. "Riku?" she barely chocked out.
He turned, and instead of the smile that usually greeted her, upon his handsome face was a cold stare. He wasn't exactly looking at her, but his eyes were on her. It was like he was staring right through her. Not even noticing her...
Just how Sora felt. God, no wonder he didn't return her feelings, she was awful.
She took a deep breath and let her thoughts return to the task at hand. "Ok, Riku. I have something to say but first I would like to say you are a great friend-"
"Yeah, yeah, Kairi. I think we need to stop this relationship. We're done." He said interrupting her. She was hit with a swift hard blow. Her eyes were wide, sure she was just about to say the same thing – except slightly gentler – but cutting off a relationship hurt.
"Uh, yeah ok. I understand." She smiled at him, glad it was over and he wasn't hurt. Actually, he seemed to not even notice her...AT ALL. "So, are we still friends?"
"Yeah, sure, whatever." Now his eyes were interested, but not in her, someone behind her. She turned and looked behind her to find...Rikku and Sora?! But he was looking at Rikku and then staring coldly at Sora when ever her giggles sounded because of him.
WHAT THE HELL WAS GOING ON, ON THIS DAMN ISLAND?!?!
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"Why are their people popping up all over the island?" A voice echoed through the spacious cave. A chill rain through her spine as the cloaked figure slowly stepped forward.
"They are returning." The shadowed figure responded simply.
"To where?" The young girl asked, her teeth now chattering.
"Their rightful home. Their birthplace. When the portal of Kingdom Hearts was opened several other ports were opened. Sending doors from worlds connecting to other worlds. Several people were destined to be removed and sent to a different world, whatever their reason. Now that the doors are closing, the worlds are being cleaned of all the ones who don't belong there." The cloaked figure spoke more than he had ever spoken before. But still Kairi couldn't quite grasp the concept of what he was trying to explain.
"Everyone's...returning. So that also means not only are people going to be popping up, some are going to be...disappearing. Who all wasn't born on Destiny Island? I'll miss them." She began talking to herself more than him.
Through the darkness of his robe Kairi could see his eyes now sparkling with a glint. Kairi stood their looking straight into his eyes when all of a sudden it hit her. "Wait! That means...
...............................................................
I felt powerful again, like everything was in my control. It used to scare me, the feeling; but now it excited me, thrilled me.
"I've done it before, and I'll do it again." I growled and they all launched at me at once. I swung my weapon and thrashed through the shadows of darkness till they were all gone. I turned to look for my price; the girl I loved, only to find her at the mercy of the creatures that held her.
"No!!" I yelled, then gritted my teeth. "Give her back! I won't let you take her!" I ran forward, my keyblade raised in a striking pose above my head.
"Stop! Give her to me my minions, she shall not be harmed." A cloaked figure appeared from the darkness that surrounded them. I stared confused looking at the figure. Why didn't he want to hurt her?
"Oh, your are even more like your mother when you sleep." He carefully took her form as my eyes widened. How does this guy know the girl he loved mother?!
Author's Note- Hopefully that will be enough to get ya'll up to 20. . Ok, neways I hope you didn't get too much info from this. But I hope it got u intrigued. Enjoy. R&R!! Please and Thank you!
Editing Note- This doesn't have much editing either. XD. 6/9/04
The wind played with a seventeen year old girl's auburn hair as she slowly approached the young man. Wisps of silver hair ruffled over ad over as a crashing sea.
She gulped as she thought about what she had to say and do to him. "Riku?" she barely chocked out.
He turned, and instead of the smile that usually greeted her, upon his handsome face was a cold stare. He wasn't exactly looking at her, but his eyes were on her. It was like he was staring right through her. Not even noticing her...
Just how Sora felt. God, no wonder he didn't return her feelings, she was awful.
She took a deep breath and let her thoughts return to the task at hand. "Ok, Riku. I have something to say but first I would like to say you are a great friend-"
"Yeah, yeah, Kairi. I think we need to stop this relationship. We're done." He said interrupting her. She was hit with a swift hard blow. Her eyes were wide, sure she was just about to say the same thing – except slightly gentler – but cutting off a relationship hurt.
"Uh, yeah ok. I understand." She smiled at him, glad it was over and he wasn't hurt. Actually, he seemed to not even notice her...AT ALL. "So, are we still friends?"
"Yeah, sure, whatever." Now his eyes were interested, but not in her, someone behind her. She turned and looked behind her to find...Rikku and Sora?! But he was looking at Rikku and then staring coldly at Sora when ever her giggles sounded because of him.
WHAT THE HELL WAS GOING ON, ON THIS DAMN ISLAND?!?!
.......................................................
"Why are their people popping up all over the island?" A voice echoed through the spacious cave. A chill rain through her spine as the cloaked figure slowly stepped forward.
"They are returning." The shadowed figure responded simply.
"To where?" The young girl asked, her teeth now chattering.
"Their rightful home. Their birthplace. When the portal of Kingdom Hearts was opened several other ports were opened. Sending doors from worlds connecting to other worlds. Several people were destined to be removed and sent to a different world, whatever their reason. Now that the doors are closing, the worlds are being cleaned of all the ones who don't belong there." The cloaked figure spoke more than he had ever spoken before. But still Kairi couldn't quite grasp the concept of what he was trying to explain.
"Everyone's...returning. So that also means not only are people going to be popping up, some are going to be...disappearing. Who all wasn't born on Destiny Island? I'll miss them." She began talking to herself more than him.
Through the darkness of his robe Kairi could see his eyes now sparkling with a glint. Kairi stood their looking straight into his eyes when all of a sudden it hit her. "Wait! That means...
...............................................................
I felt powerful again, like everything was in my control. It used to scare me, the feeling; but now it excited me, thrilled me.
"I've done it before, and I'll do it again." I growled and they all launched at me at once. I swung my weapon and thrashed through the shadows of darkness till they were all gone. I turned to look for my price; the girl I loved, only to find her at the mercy of the creatures that held her.
"No!!" I yelled, then gritted my teeth. "Give her back! I won't let you take her!" I ran forward, my keyblade raised in a striking pose above my head.
"Stop! Give her to me my minions, she shall not be harmed." A cloaked figure appeared from the darkness that surrounded them. I stared confused looking at the figure. Why didn't he want to hurt her?
"Oh, your are even more like your mother when you sleep." He carefully took her form as my eyes widened. How does this guy know the girl he loved mother?!
Author's Note- Hopefully that will be enough to get ya'll up to 20. . Ok, neways I hope you didn't get too much info from this. But I hope it got u intrigued. Enjoy. R&R!! Please and Thank you!
Editing Note- This doesn't have much editing either. XD. 6/9/04