Disclaimer: sorry...but I'm not JKR
A/N: sorry I had no author's note and disclaimer for the last chappie...I kinda forgot 'cause I uploaded it during my lunch period in school. LoL well here's the 3rd chapter hope ya like it!
hpaddictedg – I'm very sorry that you don't like my story, especially since you're my first critic...ever! Well, whatever doesn't destroy me only makes me stronger (Nietzsche). I hope that your criticism will only help me improve this story. Oh, by the way I wouldn't say this has been done, well in a way I guess it has, but I have added things to my character that actually show me. Like the prologue, it's practically true! Anyways lots of fanfic has been done over and over again, though with different perceptions. Though the only way I could ever make this story not so common is to turn it into an original fic, but I can't seem to know how to properly post on originalfiction.net. Sorry for the spacing and stuff, I noticed that too but I don't know how to fix it...(
I'm a Witch!: Chapter 3
"No darling, this isn't a hoax. This is the truth. Your birth parents were of the wizarding world." "Wha-how?" I stuttered. "Because they were born magical. You, too, were born magical. Therefore you are a witch." A pause, and Crystn tried to take in the information. " Tomorrow, we're going downtown to meet your parents, John Llewellyn Breakspear and Marguerite Isabella Llamado– Breakspear, for dinner. But of course, for such a formal event I'm sure you'd want a new dress or outfit?'' "Sure, mummy. Sure.'' I replied meekly "Great. Then since tomorrow is a school holiday we'll be going to northern Virginia. The malls there are just fabulous." It was true. Tomorrow is a teacher workday. At least I get to get a new outfit. But the clothes in the malls there are so expensive. I doubt we'll be able to afford it.
After the talk I had with mum, we went downstairs to join the others for dinner.
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Morning arrived all to soon; Crystn had barely woken up when her mum woke her. "Crystn. Honey. Wake up, we gotta go soon." "Muuum." Crystn whined, "one more hour? Please?" "No!" her mother said sternly, though with a softness in her tone, "if you don't wake up now we won't be able to have a lot of time to choose your outfit. We have to be back here by 4 o'clock. And it's already eight in the morning." "Ok."
By 9:15, they were in the car on their way north. The trip would take 45 minutes to an hour.
Their shopping took them all day. They had finally chosen their outfits by 3:30, a time later than they had planned. Crystn had gotten herself a green Luxe-Raglan sleeve Tee and a pleated white mini. Her mother had gotten a sleeveless knee-high floral dress with a matching button-up sweater. That night they wore their new outfits to their dinner. Crystn added a blue blazer, blue low-heeled shoes and silver hoop earrings.
They drove downtown [A/N: historic downtown. It's one of those places where downtown is really the oldest part of town, and it's the part of town which seems to be really quaint], and soon parked by a large brick building. It was only about 6:15, so the sun hadn't set yet [hey! It's already spring!]. "Crystn, I have already met your parents. They'll meet us in a restaurant nearby. Come on." "is it a wizading kind of place?" "not really, but popular amongst the wizarding folk because the owners are of the wizarding world." "ok"
we turned a corner and soon we reached the restaurant. We went down the stairs and went it. The waitress greeted us with a warm smile. "two? Smoking or non-smoking?" "um... were meeting someone. I expect them to be already here." "the Breakspears?" the waitress asked "yes." "let me lead you to their table then." As we walked toward my birth parents, in this dim-lighted, though homey place. I really wondered what they would be like and what they'd think of me. What they'll say and such. I was very exited, like when one's expecting the worst and the best to happen at the same time.
A/N: sorry I had no author's note and disclaimer for the last chappie...I kinda forgot 'cause I uploaded it during my lunch period in school. LoL well here's the 3rd chapter hope ya like it!
hpaddictedg – I'm very sorry that you don't like my story, especially since you're my first critic...ever! Well, whatever doesn't destroy me only makes me stronger (Nietzsche). I hope that your criticism will only help me improve this story. Oh, by the way I wouldn't say this has been done, well in a way I guess it has, but I have added things to my character that actually show me. Like the prologue, it's practically true! Anyways lots of fanfic has been done over and over again, though with different perceptions. Though the only way I could ever make this story not so common is to turn it into an original fic, but I can't seem to know how to properly post on originalfiction.net. Sorry for the spacing and stuff, I noticed that too but I don't know how to fix it...(
I'm a Witch!: Chapter 3
"No darling, this isn't a hoax. This is the truth. Your birth parents were of the wizarding world." "Wha-how?" I stuttered. "Because they were born magical. You, too, were born magical. Therefore you are a witch." A pause, and Crystn tried to take in the information. " Tomorrow, we're going downtown to meet your parents, John Llewellyn Breakspear and Marguerite Isabella Llamado– Breakspear, for dinner. But of course, for such a formal event I'm sure you'd want a new dress or outfit?'' "Sure, mummy. Sure.'' I replied meekly "Great. Then since tomorrow is a school holiday we'll be going to northern Virginia. The malls there are just fabulous." It was true. Tomorrow is a teacher workday. At least I get to get a new outfit. But the clothes in the malls there are so expensive. I doubt we'll be able to afford it.
After the talk I had with mum, we went downstairs to join the others for dinner.
- - - - - - -
Morning arrived all to soon; Crystn had barely woken up when her mum woke her. "Crystn. Honey. Wake up, we gotta go soon." "Muuum." Crystn whined, "one more hour? Please?" "No!" her mother said sternly, though with a softness in her tone, "if you don't wake up now we won't be able to have a lot of time to choose your outfit. We have to be back here by 4 o'clock. And it's already eight in the morning." "Ok."
By 9:15, they were in the car on their way north. The trip would take 45 minutes to an hour.
Their shopping took them all day. They had finally chosen their outfits by 3:30, a time later than they had planned. Crystn had gotten herself a green Luxe-Raglan sleeve Tee and a pleated white mini. Her mother had gotten a sleeveless knee-high floral dress with a matching button-up sweater. That night they wore their new outfits to their dinner. Crystn added a blue blazer, blue low-heeled shoes and silver hoop earrings.
They drove downtown [A/N: historic downtown. It's one of those places where downtown is really the oldest part of town, and it's the part of town which seems to be really quaint], and soon parked by a large brick building. It was only about 6:15, so the sun hadn't set yet [hey! It's already spring!]. "Crystn, I have already met your parents. They'll meet us in a restaurant nearby. Come on." "is it a wizading kind of place?" "not really, but popular amongst the wizarding folk because the owners are of the wizarding world." "ok"
we turned a corner and soon we reached the restaurant. We went down the stairs and went it. The waitress greeted us with a warm smile. "two? Smoking or non-smoking?" "um... were meeting someone. I expect them to be already here." "the Breakspears?" the waitress asked "yes." "let me lead you to their table then." As we walked toward my birth parents, in this dim-lighted, though homey place. I really wondered what they would be like and what they'd think of me. What they'll say and such. I was very exited, like when one's expecting the worst and the best to happen at the same time.