Four reviews. I'm so happy. I thank you all.
XxXIceFairyXxX: I am also glad Keiko died. The Bitch deserves it.
kikyiou-666: yes I like the whole Yukina thing too. That is why I put it
there. And just because I have some set couples doesn't mean they can't get
drunk.
AngelStarFire Hikarist: thank you for the official opinion I asked for I
like the rejected pjs as well. just wait for chapter three.
Shira-Fire-Youko: I have updated, aren't you glad.
I will be saving my first ten reviews and flames. Both being achievements. But I will reply to flamers as I have replied to everyone else. And you will have a public but chewing. So I suggest you don't. oh and I need help. Give me ideas to attract a muse. So far I just have what AngelStarFire calls 'plot bunnies.' I need a muse to balance it out. So HELP WANTED: IN NEED OF INSANE MUSE!! Spread the news around and tell me of unemployed muses. For all I know word will get around and one will knock me on the head.
On with the story
DARES Jin walked up to the temple. He was pulling a large wagon. (how did he get it up the stairs you ask? Hell if I know. He's Jin the coolest side character, because we all know there are four main ones.) Yusuke had secretly invited him. Which was good, he hadn't gotten a chance to talk to Munchkin (I warned you about slightly AUed pasts) in the tournament. What was under the cloths in the wagon wasn't exactly innocent... "Oi, Jin!" "Urimeshi, good to see ya." "What's in the wagon? And how'd you get it up the stairs?" "I'm a wind master. I c'n make thins float. And I wanted to see if Hiei was still as tolerant as he use ta be. So I brought s'me Dares." "Huh?" he asked confused. "What are dares?" "The most alcoholic drink ever created," said Genki who just walked out. "Officially called Shia's Dares. It kills most demons to have one shot, why did you bring so much?" "It's not that much. It'll get me and Hiei drunk but that's about it." "Hiei drinks Dares? No wonder he hates sake. It won't even get him drunk." "He's funny when he's drunk. But it can be even scarier." "Why?" they asked in unison. "You'll see." "OI!" Kuwabara said bounding up. "Hey Kuwabara! How's it goin'?" "Yukina still hates me," he said pathetically. Genki and Yusuke glanced at each other. "Uh, Kuwabara? We kinda' sorta' invited her." "Maybe I can make up with her!" "Don't count on it." "Hey, what's in the cart?" "Somethin' deadly like," replied Jin irritated. "Huh?" "Come on Kuwabara, lets go inside, I'll explain." Kuwabara and Genki go inside. "So why don't we go inside?" "Will ya help me set up? "What do you need to set up?" "Th' counters," he replied. "Huh?" "How else will we keep score?" "Oh, and Jin?" "Ya?" "Why are you wearing a normal shirt?" "Ya'll see." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~
"I still don't want to go."
Hiei and Kurama were walking up the stairs to the temple. Hiei was already in his pjs despite his complaints. Kurama had a bag with his pajamas inside. Genki had plenty of sleeping bags so they didn't need any.
"That doesn't matter. Consider it another mission. That's basically what it is. You just don't kill anyone."
"That's why I don't to go."
"oh come on it's not that bad."
They get to the top, "Jin's here." This be end of page one. Don't ask me what the line is. I couldn't delete it.
"How can you tell?"
"I smell dares."
"How do you know it's him?"
"He's second most alcohol tolerant being in existence."
"How can you tell?"
"Because I'm third," he replied.
Ooh, da da da da. What is Jin gonna do? Why is Jin wearing a shirt? What's Yukina's reaction gonna be? Why am I asking all these pointless questions? All thes questions (except the last since I don't even know the answer) will be explained in the next chapter.
I will be saving my first ten reviews and flames. Both being achievements. But I will reply to flamers as I have replied to everyone else. And you will have a public but chewing. So I suggest you don't. oh and I need help. Give me ideas to attract a muse. So far I just have what AngelStarFire calls 'plot bunnies.' I need a muse to balance it out. So HELP WANTED: IN NEED OF INSANE MUSE!! Spread the news around and tell me of unemployed muses. For all I know word will get around and one will knock me on the head.
On with the story
DARES Jin walked up to the temple. He was pulling a large wagon. (how did he get it up the stairs you ask? Hell if I know. He's Jin the coolest side character, because we all know there are four main ones.) Yusuke had secretly invited him. Which was good, he hadn't gotten a chance to talk to Munchkin (I warned you about slightly AUed pasts) in the tournament. What was under the cloths in the wagon wasn't exactly innocent... "Oi, Jin!" "Urimeshi, good to see ya." "What's in the wagon? And how'd you get it up the stairs?" "I'm a wind master. I c'n make thins float. And I wanted to see if Hiei was still as tolerant as he use ta be. So I brought s'me Dares." "Huh?" he asked confused. "What are dares?" "The most alcoholic drink ever created," said Genki who just walked out. "Officially called Shia's Dares. It kills most demons to have one shot, why did you bring so much?" "It's not that much. It'll get me and Hiei drunk but that's about it." "Hiei drinks Dares? No wonder he hates sake. It won't even get him drunk." "He's funny when he's drunk. But it can be even scarier." "Why?" they asked in unison. "You'll see." "OI!" Kuwabara said bounding up. "Hey Kuwabara! How's it goin'?" "Yukina still hates me," he said pathetically. Genki and Yusuke glanced at each other. "Uh, Kuwabara? We kinda' sorta' invited her." "Maybe I can make up with her!" "Don't count on it." "Hey, what's in the cart?" "Somethin' deadly like," replied Jin irritated. "Huh?" "Come on Kuwabara, lets go inside, I'll explain." Kuwabara and Genki go inside. "So why don't we go inside?" "Will ya help me set up? "What do you need to set up?" "Th' counters," he replied. "Huh?" "How else will we keep score?" "Oh, and Jin?" "Ya?" "Why are you wearing a normal shirt?" "Ya'll see." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~
"I still don't want to go."
Hiei and Kurama were walking up the stairs to the temple. Hiei was already in his pjs despite his complaints. Kurama had a bag with his pajamas inside. Genki had plenty of sleeping bags so they didn't need any.
"That doesn't matter. Consider it another mission. That's basically what it is. You just don't kill anyone."
"That's why I don't to go."
"oh come on it's not that bad."
They get to the top, "Jin's here." This be end of page one. Don't ask me what the line is. I couldn't delete it.
"How can you tell?"
"I smell dares."
"How do you know it's him?"
"He's second most alcohol tolerant being in existence."
"How can you tell?"
"Because I'm third," he replied.
Ooh, da da da da. What is Jin gonna do? Why is Jin wearing a shirt? What's Yukina's reaction gonna be? Why am I asking all these pointless questions? All thes questions (except the last since I don't even know the answer) will be explained in the next chapter.