The Sorrows from Within
~New chapter~
Authors note:
Thanz to the people who reviewed my last chapter, its getting me one step closer to my main goal. I hope that the last chapter was a little more interesting, and a little more eventful than before. But please R&R and let me know what you think, and help me get one more step closer to my goal of 100 hundred reviews.
~* review from last chapter*~
" Well your physical features tell me that your still pretty young, but your eyes hold a deep past within them. The darkness of the center says that your soul has been around the circle of life more than once." Robins words touched Hope's heart unlike anything before.
" You can tell that all by looking at my eyes?" Hope wondered how he could have thought about this.
" Yes, its been taught through each of the generations of my family, to read the eyes of strangers." Robin showed a little pigment in his cheeks.
" That's really neat, do you think you can teach me a little bit about it, it would be a experience I would cherish in this world forever." Hope said sincerely to the boy, now knowing that he was older than her.
" Maybe, im not sure I would have to clear it up with my family first, it is a family trait." Robin was unsure, he wanted to tell her so much but he knew he could not, it would give him away.
~* On with the chapter*~
Chapter 18: troubles that keep coming back.
Hope and Robin had no idea of the combat that was happening in the castle all that they were concerning themselves were learning about each other. As they talked they became good friends and very close for how long they knew each other. As Robin was telling her the past of Geae hope looked over her body, she was wearing all black, but unlike her last outfit this one wasn't ripped or torn. But then she looked at her arms and legs, seeing how badly she was still hurt. The small wounds on her arms and legs were almost gone, and she was glad for that. On the other hand, she could still feel the the wound on her shoulder and the wounds on her stomach were still there and she should still be careful not to open them again.
As Hope had lost concentration on Robin and the task at had she had lost control of her newfound power and the grass had lit on fire. She didn't even notice, as she sat there surrounded by the ring of fiery death. She looked up and seen Robins face, but it didn't look like the concerned Robin she knew before, his face held a enjoyment, and pleasure out of the fire that slowly closed in on her. Hope had no idea what was going on, he had been such a nice guy and now he shows a desire for her death. Her oxygen was running out and she just couldn't keep her eyes off of Robin, but as she stared she heard plenty of voices, but no bodies to go with them.
" HOPE!!!!" She heard a formilliar voice, and then it came to mind that it was Robin, but when she was looking at him his mouth didn't move.
Then a mystical, soft voice descended upon her ears.
" Hope, do not be afraid of the blaze, it will not hurt you. You are the controller of this power and as such you will not be harmed. However be warned, any living thing that strikes your fingertips without you having that control, they will undergo the pain and suffering that you once did." following the message, a light breeze blew from behind Hope and the fire extinguished.
After the fire went out Hope felt a slight tingle on her eyes, and then she realized, she just had a vision. A vision to tell her things that she would not figure out among the people and things she was around now.
She opened her eyes, all she could see was the slowly passing clouds and the single flower that dangled over her face. Hope sat up and the first thing she noticed was the black ring that circled her, the ring of death.
Hope had remembered something from her family's spiritual teachings. That the snowflake was a guide and showed guidance. The rain showed great sorrow or remembrance, the fire showed great anger to come, and the black ring shows eternal fate, and infinite pain.
The ring didn't make sense to her, she had suffered all her life and now the spirits are telling her she will have pain strung through her life until her last breath escapes her lips.
As she sat there she caught a glimmer of color pass the corner of her eye, and she turned. All she seen was about 5 people running towards her in panic. But only a couple of them looked formilliar to her. One was the young king of Fanelia, the other was the knight that held no trust within her, One was the boy robin that was only moments ago haunting her beneath closed eyes, the others she did not recognize.
As the five reached her, she had gotten up and brushed herself off. To there amazement she had begun to stretch every muscle she had to make sure it was intact.
" Hope, what happened?" Van asked, tracing the black ash ring with his cold brown eyes.
" Im not sure, one minute im sitting here talking to Robin and then the next minute im surrounded by fire." Hope whispered softly, trying to cover up the fact that she started the fire.
Before any one could say anything Hope was getting hit with anything vision, but this time instead of it telling the future to her, it was telling what had already happened
She seen the small battle that had just commenced, it was against Dilandau and Van. Hope couldn't see what was happening with the blonde knight, but at that moment she didn't care. The fought and fought and at one point it looked like Dilandau was going to win. However The blonde knight took a cheap shot and knocked Dilandau unconscious. They dragged the silver hair general down to the rarely used dungeon and locked him up until they knew what to do with him.
~* Van's view of hope*~
Just after Hope had shared her side of the story with them everything went quiet. Van turned and seen Hopes body fall limp to the ground, but as Van stepped forward towards the frail girl the ring that once was just ash caught a flame and an instant barrier was between the group and the lone broken girl.
" Go get some water, and hurry, before the fire gets to close to her" Van yelled. As he did this Allen observed his friend. And he seen the concern in the young kings eyes that once matched the concern for a young maiden from the mystic moon.
~* Back with Hope*~
She just stood there and watched the king and the knight stare at the general like he was some guinea pig that was there to entertain. Then there was a yelling voice coming from the hall ways above and it caught their attention. The young Robin slid down the remainder of the stone stairs and looked dead into the kings eyes.
" There's something wrong with Hope M'lord," Robin now showed the distress, and concern that she had not seen in her vision.
After she seen Robin her thoughts started to fuse together, she didn't know what to think, in her vision Robin was a blood craving lunatic, but in this vision of the past he was a caring, gentle youth.
She just didn't know what to believe any more..................
To be continued...................
Authors note:
I hope that this chapter was semi-interesting. I tried to make it have a little bit more of a twist so that the story has a little bit more to fall back on.. Please R&R and let me know what you think and if there's anything you think I should add, or anything i should clear up... Please help me hit my goal of 100 reviews. Thanz..
later days
~New chapter~
Authors note:
Thanz to the people who reviewed my last chapter, its getting me one step closer to my main goal. I hope that the last chapter was a little more interesting, and a little more eventful than before. But please R&R and let me know what you think, and help me get one more step closer to my goal of 100 hundred reviews.
~* review from last chapter*~
" Well your physical features tell me that your still pretty young, but your eyes hold a deep past within them. The darkness of the center says that your soul has been around the circle of life more than once." Robins words touched Hope's heart unlike anything before.
" You can tell that all by looking at my eyes?" Hope wondered how he could have thought about this.
" Yes, its been taught through each of the generations of my family, to read the eyes of strangers." Robin showed a little pigment in his cheeks.
" That's really neat, do you think you can teach me a little bit about it, it would be a experience I would cherish in this world forever." Hope said sincerely to the boy, now knowing that he was older than her.
" Maybe, im not sure I would have to clear it up with my family first, it is a family trait." Robin was unsure, he wanted to tell her so much but he knew he could not, it would give him away.
~* On with the chapter*~
Chapter 18: troubles that keep coming back.
Hope and Robin had no idea of the combat that was happening in the castle all that they were concerning themselves were learning about each other. As they talked they became good friends and very close for how long they knew each other. As Robin was telling her the past of Geae hope looked over her body, she was wearing all black, but unlike her last outfit this one wasn't ripped or torn. But then she looked at her arms and legs, seeing how badly she was still hurt. The small wounds on her arms and legs were almost gone, and she was glad for that. On the other hand, she could still feel the the wound on her shoulder and the wounds on her stomach were still there and she should still be careful not to open them again.
As Hope had lost concentration on Robin and the task at had she had lost control of her newfound power and the grass had lit on fire. She didn't even notice, as she sat there surrounded by the ring of fiery death. She looked up and seen Robins face, but it didn't look like the concerned Robin she knew before, his face held a enjoyment, and pleasure out of the fire that slowly closed in on her. Hope had no idea what was going on, he had been such a nice guy and now he shows a desire for her death. Her oxygen was running out and she just couldn't keep her eyes off of Robin, but as she stared she heard plenty of voices, but no bodies to go with them.
" HOPE!!!!" She heard a formilliar voice, and then it came to mind that it was Robin, but when she was looking at him his mouth didn't move.
Then a mystical, soft voice descended upon her ears.
" Hope, do not be afraid of the blaze, it will not hurt you. You are the controller of this power and as such you will not be harmed. However be warned, any living thing that strikes your fingertips without you having that control, they will undergo the pain and suffering that you once did." following the message, a light breeze blew from behind Hope and the fire extinguished.
After the fire went out Hope felt a slight tingle on her eyes, and then she realized, she just had a vision. A vision to tell her things that she would not figure out among the people and things she was around now.
She opened her eyes, all she could see was the slowly passing clouds and the single flower that dangled over her face. Hope sat up and the first thing she noticed was the black ring that circled her, the ring of death.
Hope had remembered something from her family's spiritual teachings. That the snowflake was a guide and showed guidance. The rain showed great sorrow or remembrance, the fire showed great anger to come, and the black ring shows eternal fate, and infinite pain.
The ring didn't make sense to her, she had suffered all her life and now the spirits are telling her she will have pain strung through her life until her last breath escapes her lips.
As she sat there she caught a glimmer of color pass the corner of her eye, and she turned. All she seen was about 5 people running towards her in panic. But only a couple of them looked formilliar to her. One was the young king of Fanelia, the other was the knight that held no trust within her, One was the boy robin that was only moments ago haunting her beneath closed eyes, the others she did not recognize.
As the five reached her, she had gotten up and brushed herself off. To there amazement she had begun to stretch every muscle she had to make sure it was intact.
" Hope, what happened?" Van asked, tracing the black ash ring with his cold brown eyes.
" Im not sure, one minute im sitting here talking to Robin and then the next minute im surrounded by fire." Hope whispered softly, trying to cover up the fact that she started the fire.
Before any one could say anything Hope was getting hit with anything vision, but this time instead of it telling the future to her, it was telling what had already happened
She seen the small battle that had just commenced, it was against Dilandau and Van. Hope couldn't see what was happening with the blonde knight, but at that moment she didn't care. The fought and fought and at one point it looked like Dilandau was going to win. However The blonde knight took a cheap shot and knocked Dilandau unconscious. They dragged the silver hair general down to the rarely used dungeon and locked him up until they knew what to do with him.
~* Van's view of hope*~
Just after Hope had shared her side of the story with them everything went quiet. Van turned and seen Hopes body fall limp to the ground, but as Van stepped forward towards the frail girl the ring that once was just ash caught a flame and an instant barrier was between the group and the lone broken girl.
" Go get some water, and hurry, before the fire gets to close to her" Van yelled. As he did this Allen observed his friend. And he seen the concern in the young kings eyes that once matched the concern for a young maiden from the mystic moon.
~* Back with Hope*~
She just stood there and watched the king and the knight stare at the general like he was some guinea pig that was there to entertain. Then there was a yelling voice coming from the hall ways above and it caught their attention. The young Robin slid down the remainder of the stone stairs and looked dead into the kings eyes.
" There's something wrong with Hope M'lord," Robin now showed the distress, and concern that she had not seen in her vision.
After she seen Robin her thoughts started to fuse together, she didn't know what to think, in her vision Robin was a blood craving lunatic, but in this vision of the past he was a caring, gentle youth.
She just didn't know what to believe any more..................
To be continued...................
Authors note:
I hope that this chapter was semi-interesting. I tried to make it have a little bit more of a twist so that the story has a little bit more to fall back on.. Please R&R and let me know what you think and if there's anything you think I should add, or anything i should clear up... Please help me hit my goal of 100 reviews. Thanz..
later days