The Sorrows from Within
~* Authors Note*~
Thank you all for choosing my fic for your next reading endeavor. Also thank you all for reading it at all, and letting me know what you think. I know my last couple of chapters I've written were short and left you all hanging wondering what's going to happen. Well here's another chapter to give you a little bit more explanation and I hope it helps and urges you to read on.
I have a announcement to make.... I reached my goal.. YAY!!!!!!!! However now I must make a new goal for myself, so im also telling everyone that my new goal is 150 reviews.... and im at a immense 107 reviews... well please R&R and let me know what you think. I hope ya'll like my story, I've been working on it for a while and I Hope I can finish it and let ya'll know what happens.
~* Review from last chapter*~
" Do you really think that your world needs me?" Hope's soft voice had returned, and her tears dried up.
" Yes, yes I do. I believe that your a key in which will turn the hands of history, and keep the balance of life in steady." Van's gentle voice showed that he was sincere.
The lucid blueness in Hope's eyes faded away, and the blood red eyes that Van was so accustom to seeing had returned.
" I will stay, I don't want any one to die because of me. Plus I want to bring Hitomi back to you." Hope turned around so that her back was towards Van, knowing that this would hit him deep.
" Thank you " Van put his hand on Hope's shoulder.
Just as he did that a blinding white light invaded the darkness and pulled the two tormented souls back into the light.
~* New Chapter*~
Chapter 27: Turn of events
Millerna watched as an old healer stood over the two bodies, shaking old herbs that had the worst smell. The old man walked back and forth uttering an ancient language, most likely an old magical spell to release trapped souls, in a quiet, soft voice. Filters of smoke trailed form the herbs and seem to dance around the two unconscious people. As the old man's utterance faded into the wind... and short gasp came from both paralyzed bodies, and the flutter of eyes could be seen.
Millerna jumped with happiness, and ran to the two people who were feared to be dead.
" Are you two all right?" Millerna asked while taking the pulse of the two souls.
" Yes, I think so, are you all right Hope?" Van turned his eyes to her, seeing that she was in a deep thought.
" Yeah...... yeah im fine." Her voice showed that she wasn't paying attention to the question, and they would have to give her time before they started anything.
~* Dilandau's impatience*~
It had been two days since Dilandau had eaten anything. His patience was lacking and his anger at its highest peak.
' I can't believe the most liked country on all of Geae, doesn't take prisoners, and when they do, they don't feed them. Well as that sluggish guard over there said that the king was tending to that inferior girl that Zibach brought back from the Mystic Moon.' Dilandau's thoughts wondered as he tried to keep his mind off of food.
As He thought, the sound of several foot steps hit his ears,and made the sleeping guard jolt awake. The aroma of food filled the line of empty cells,and a light was seen coming down the stone steps.
Another guard looking man was seen carrying a tray filled with bread, a couple pieces of meat and some water. This guard however was wearing a different uniform than the useless guard that was suppose to be watching over the Zibach general. So Dilandau's thoughts on this was that this guard was of a higher rank than the over paid sack of potatoes that he had grown accustomed to.
" Here's your food, and keep your quiet, it'll get you further in life." the superior officer nagged.
" Yes, yes that is the way a prisoner is suppose to act. Just like a marionette, tied on stings." Dilandau mocked.
" Watch your tongue, you would do good to keep your comments in your mind." The guard yelled and then walked up the stairs.
"You'll see how I can hold my tongue." Dilandau quietly ate his meal, and lied down to sleep.
~*In Zibach*~
" Lord Folken, the dragonslayers are waiting for your orders, they are becoming restless." A messenger spoke to the tall man in the corner.
" well tell them they will have to wait, because i have to think of a plan first. Im not going to be like Dilandau, all hot headed and reckless. So im not going to barge into a country that is well liked all over Geae." Folken sounded irritated, he stayed in the corner staring through the single window in the room.
The messenger left without a word and left Folken alone with his thoughts.
' How could Dilandau do this, he may have single handidly ruined the whole plan, and our chance to rule Geae. ' Folken's anger rose and he raised his fist and plunged it into the deep wooden table beside him.
~* The dragonslayers*~
The small messenger boy knocked on the large wooden door that led to the dragonslayers quarters.
" Enter..." Some one yelled from inside the room...
The small boy walked in a shut the door behind him, his head slanted down to show respect.
" Yes, what does Lord Folken want us to do?" One guy in blue and black armor spoke to the messenger.
" He ordered you to wait until he thinks of a plan, so that you also do not become captured." The boy recited what the tall man had said.
" What does he think he's doing, we cant leave our general in that country, Van will hang him for sure." Miguel replied, obviously angry.
As Miguel's anger rang through the room and the short blonde haired boy snuck out before any of them could notice. ( Hints Hints: pay attention to this boy )
*BIG NOTICE*
I'm having the biggest problem coming up with ideas to lead up to the end... cuz i have the end planned out but I need some extras... so if any of you have some suggestions please... PLEASE let me know.. and I can tie them into the story.....
~* To BE Continued...*~
And don't forget Im going to be making a entrance of a new character soon... so keep reading..... And here's a teaser... the character isn't human......
~* Authors Note*~
Thanz for reading another chapter of my Esca. Fic. I hope you enjoyed this chapter, it was a little more interesting, and I hope that I can write more in the future. Please R&R and help me reach my new goal of 150 reviews. You guys were such a big help of reaching my previous goal and I appreciate it very much.... Thank you all for reading....
Later days
~* Authors Note*~
Thank you all for choosing my fic for your next reading endeavor. Also thank you all for reading it at all, and letting me know what you think. I know my last couple of chapters I've written were short and left you all hanging wondering what's going to happen. Well here's another chapter to give you a little bit more explanation and I hope it helps and urges you to read on.
I have a announcement to make.... I reached my goal.. YAY!!!!!!!! However now I must make a new goal for myself, so im also telling everyone that my new goal is 150 reviews.... and im at a immense 107 reviews... well please R&R and let me know what you think. I hope ya'll like my story, I've been working on it for a while and I Hope I can finish it and let ya'll know what happens.
~* Review from last chapter*~
" Do you really think that your world needs me?" Hope's soft voice had returned, and her tears dried up.
" Yes, yes I do. I believe that your a key in which will turn the hands of history, and keep the balance of life in steady." Van's gentle voice showed that he was sincere.
The lucid blueness in Hope's eyes faded away, and the blood red eyes that Van was so accustom to seeing had returned.
" I will stay, I don't want any one to die because of me. Plus I want to bring Hitomi back to you." Hope turned around so that her back was towards Van, knowing that this would hit him deep.
" Thank you " Van put his hand on Hope's shoulder.
Just as he did that a blinding white light invaded the darkness and pulled the two tormented souls back into the light.
~* New Chapter*~
Chapter 27: Turn of events
Millerna watched as an old healer stood over the two bodies, shaking old herbs that had the worst smell. The old man walked back and forth uttering an ancient language, most likely an old magical spell to release trapped souls, in a quiet, soft voice. Filters of smoke trailed form the herbs and seem to dance around the two unconscious people. As the old man's utterance faded into the wind... and short gasp came from both paralyzed bodies, and the flutter of eyes could be seen.
Millerna jumped with happiness, and ran to the two people who were feared to be dead.
" Are you two all right?" Millerna asked while taking the pulse of the two souls.
" Yes, I think so, are you all right Hope?" Van turned his eyes to her, seeing that she was in a deep thought.
" Yeah...... yeah im fine." Her voice showed that she wasn't paying attention to the question, and they would have to give her time before they started anything.
~* Dilandau's impatience*~
It had been two days since Dilandau had eaten anything. His patience was lacking and his anger at its highest peak.
' I can't believe the most liked country on all of Geae, doesn't take prisoners, and when they do, they don't feed them. Well as that sluggish guard over there said that the king was tending to that inferior girl that Zibach brought back from the Mystic Moon.' Dilandau's thoughts wondered as he tried to keep his mind off of food.
As He thought, the sound of several foot steps hit his ears,and made the sleeping guard jolt awake. The aroma of food filled the line of empty cells,and a light was seen coming down the stone steps.
Another guard looking man was seen carrying a tray filled with bread, a couple pieces of meat and some water. This guard however was wearing a different uniform than the useless guard that was suppose to be watching over the Zibach general. So Dilandau's thoughts on this was that this guard was of a higher rank than the over paid sack of potatoes that he had grown accustomed to.
" Here's your food, and keep your quiet, it'll get you further in life." the superior officer nagged.
" Yes, yes that is the way a prisoner is suppose to act. Just like a marionette, tied on stings." Dilandau mocked.
" Watch your tongue, you would do good to keep your comments in your mind." The guard yelled and then walked up the stairs.
"You'll see how I can hold my tongue." Dilandau quietly ate his meal, and lied down to sleep.
~*In Zibach*~
" Lord Folken, the dragonslayers are waiting for your orders, they are becoming restless." A messenger spoke to the tall man in the corner.
" well tell them they will have to wait, because i have to think of a plan first. Im not going to be like Dilandau, all hot headed and reckless. So im not going to barge into a country that is well liked all over Geae." Folken sounded irritated, he stayed in the corner staring through the single window in the room.
The messenger left without a word and left Folken alone with his thoughts.
' How could Dilandau do this, he may have single handidly ruined the whole plan, and our chance to rule Geae. ' Folken's anger rose and he raised his fist and plunged it into the deep wooden table beside him.
~* The dragonslayers*~
The small messenger boy knocked on the large wooden door that led to the dragonslayers quarters.
" Enter..." Some one yelled from inside the room...
The small boy walked in a shut the door behind him, his head slanted down to show respect.
" Yes, what does Lord Folken want us to do?" One guy in blue and black armor spoke to the messenger.
" He ordered you to wait until he thinks of a plan, so that you also do not become captured." The boy recited what the tall man had said.
" What does he think he's doing, we cant leave our general in that country, Van will hang him for sure." Miguel replied, obviously angry.
As Miguel's anger rang through the room and the short blonde haired boy snuck out before any of them could notice. ( Hints Hints: pay attention to this boy )
*BIG NOTICE*
I'm having the biggest problem coming up with ideas to lead up to the end... cuz i have the end planned out but I need some extras... so if any of you have some suggestions please... PLEASE let me know.. and I can tie them into the story.....
~* To BE Continued...*~
And don't forget Im going to be making a entrance of a new character soon... so keep reading..... And here's a teaser... the character isn't human......
~* Authors Note*~
Thanz for reading another chapter of my Esca. Fic. I hope you enjoyed this chapter, it was a little more interesting, and I hope that I can write more in the future. Please R&R and help me reach my new goal of 150 reviews. You guys were such a big help of reaching my previous goal and I appreciate it very much.... Thank you all for reading....
Later days