Chapter X: Author's note.
Oh god, I had finally forgotten this story.
Dear 'Me',
Thank you for liking my story! But there are some very large plot holes.
1. The godfather thing.
The reason I that in chapter two it says she's doesn't have a godfather, and in chapter four it says she does, is because I wrote chapter four a long time after chapter two, and had totally forgotten what I wrote. 2. When did she meet Sirius?
She met Sirius in the third year when Harry did. Well, maybe a little while after Harry did.
3. Why is Voldy interested in Kitty?
Because he wants to use her to get to Harry.
4. Why was she in Harry's bed?
I had a story before this that explained that, it was kind of like an intro story, but it was on my dad's laptop and it accidentally got erased.
5. Why is everyone nice and trying to comfort her?
Well think about it, she just learned her father died. This fic takes place a month into the summer, and Harry has been all comforted out, so he went to break the news to Kitty. It isn't that they are more concerned about Harry, it is just that they had their time with him, and now Kitty gets some attention. 6. Thanks for the critics, they were well needed.
Anyways, I'm putting this story under construction, I'll probably have to rewrite most of it. Sorry!
This story made sense to me when I started writing it. I have to go re- read the fifth book now...
Oh! And I'm actually writing a fic about Kitty's mother. I haven't added to it though. Bad me! I've been working on my songs and stuff over at fictionpress. Sorry again.
Oh god, I had finally forgotten this story.
Dear 'Me',
Thank you for liking my story! But there are some very large plot holes.
1. The godfather thing.
The reason I that in chapter two it says she's doesn't have a godfather, and in chapter four it says she does, is because I wrote chapter four a long time after chapter two, and had totally forgotten what I wrote. 2. When did she meet Sirius?
She met Sirius in the third year when Harry did. Well, maybe a little while after Harry did.
3. Why is Voldy interested in Kitty?
Because he wants to use her to get to Harry.
4. Why was she in Harry's bed?
I had a story before this that explained that, it was kind of like an intro story, but it was on my dad's laptop and it accidentally got erased.
5. Why is everyone nice and trying to comfort her?
Well think about it, she just learned her father died. This fic takes place a month into the summer, and Harry has been all comforted out, so he went to break the news to Kitty. It isn't that they are more concerned about Harry, it is just that they had their time with him, and now Kitty gets some attention. 6. Thanks for the critics, they were well needed.
Anyways, I'm putting this story under construction, I'll probably have to rewrite most of it. Sorry!
This story made sense to me when I started writing it. I have to go re- read the fifth book now...
Oh! And I'm actually writing a fic about Kitty's mother. I haven't added to it though. Bad me! I've been working on my songs and stuff over at fictionpress. Sorry again.