All I can say is wow! And thank you to everyone who reviewed you guy's
helped me top my record of four reviews in one chapter to nine, and that is
a lot in my Opinion I really, really appreciate it guy's it's nice to know
someone is reading my stuff, and thanks for all your ideas...they helped!
Onto the thank you's
Xjelliepotatoex: Leo I want Piper and Leo back together as well, and your right I also think That all the fast hook ups are just to unbelievable, And hopefully sorting out his life will become more clear this chapter and so forth, thanks for the review!
Charmed Lassie: Thanks for the review and I enjoy writing two parts at once, it keeps me interested lol! Thanks again
X3: I am glad you liked the flashback, I wasn't sure if I did, But I think I'll try and make them a little more detailed, thanks for the review
NoAlias: I'm Glad you think this is a good story I really appreciate it! Thanks for the review
Pink-Charmed-One: Thank you so much for the long review I love those! Thank you for all the ideas they helped a lot! And to answer your question Chris is in the hospital because he just kind of blacked out and they couldn't heal him or anything and they wanted to make sure he was okay, I'll try to clarify that in following chapters Thanks for the review
deranged black kitten of doom: I am glad you like it! ( And yes I am so happy my finals are over, good luck with yours, It's not fair all those people that were like done in may lol Thanks for the review
buffspike: Thank you very much for the review and I also wanna thank you for being a constant reviewer, I really appreciate that!
OrbingPunk: Thanks about the memory sequence, I'm glad you think the way I did it was good because to tell you the truth I didn't know how I was gonna do it al first lol And about your idea for Chris confining in someone, I think I am gonna take you up on that that's a really good idea! Thanks! And thanks for hoping I did good on my finals, I hope I did too lol
sweetsouthernbell07: Yeah I agree it's always intereting when your boy/girl friend is trying to kill you, always got to watch out for those!-
Okay Phew!!! That was so much fun...Thanks again to everyone...now on with the story
Chapter five- keep 'em comming
Future
Chris's head spun from the memory reel that he had just experienced. He thought about everything he had just saw, and released that he must have been remembering some of this old Chris's memories, which he was glad for.
He recalled dating Bianca, but not the break-up and apparently no one trusted her, only he had.
Chris could now feel the warm sun coming down on his head from the window and he realized it was day now. He thought about Bianca more and more until he was rattled out of his thoughts by his brother
"Hey man you finally up?"
Chris turned to see Wyatt walking into the room with two paper cups filled with a steaming liquid
"yeah, What time is it?"
"11, here I brought you some coffee"
"Thanks" Chris thought about weather or not he should tell his brother he didn't remember anything of this life, and only that of his previous. He didn't know if he could trust him or not.
"So the doctors say you can leave today, do you want to go with me to the beach, you know do the things you love to do?" Wyatt replied winking
Chris thought about it for a moment "Wyatt, I have a question."
Wyatt gave Chris a look while sipping his coffee saying to go ahead and ask
"How, did I even get here, In the hospital?"
"Are you kidding? You don't remember?" Wyatt said a little shocked
Chris shook his head with a confused look on his face
"Well you...." Wyatt started
But Chris was slowly being pulled out of his talk with Wyatt his head spinning once again until he was completely still again in another memory of the other Chris's life
He was standing in the manor, he looked around and saw, himself, about the same age as he was now, Wyatt, His mom, his aunt Phoebe, the only people missing was his dad and Aunt Paige. Standing opposite them was Bianca Holding a fire ball in her hand ready to throw it. Regular Chris just stood and watch the memory develop
"Bianca! You don't have to do this, remember what you said, you are only evil if you let it consume you!" The Chris in the memory scram at the fire ball-holding Bianca
"I was Naive Chris, It's who I am you know that! We both know that!" Bianca spat back at him throwing a fireball at Piper who in turn put her hands up to freeze it, only nothing happened it went straight for her and hit her in the shoulder and she went flying back only to hit the wall behind her
"PIPER!" phoebe yelled turning to help her sister only to be hit by a fireball in the back falling unconscious to the floor
Chris and Wyatt were the only ones left standing. Wyatt turned cautiously to heal his mother and aunt but Bianca noticed
"Don't you even attempt to heal them Wyatt, I'll blast you into the next room!" Bianca said to the boys with a satisfied tone in her voice
"You could try" Wyatt said a bit sarcastically as he turned toward his mother and aunt
Bianca formed an energy ball and threw it at Wyatt who easily had his blue shield form around him, causing the ball the disincarnate
Wyatt looked at Chris and half whispered to him "where is Dad and Aunt Paige?"
Chris shrugged and turned to face Bianca, I determined look on his face.
"Bianca, I thought we were going to be together, what happened to that?"
Bianca let out a laugh "Chris you never actually thought we could be together, I am not one of you"
"One of me!" Chris said Disgusted "I thought you said that didn't matter!"
"Haven't you been able to tell from this fun little fiasco that I was lying!" Bianca laughed
"Chris just forget about her! And help me, they aren't healing" Wyatt said Turing away from his dying mother
"There not?" Chris Replied turning his back to face his brother
Future Chris could tell it was a mistake when he saw himself turn away, because just as he did Bianca conjured up a huge fireball and trusted right at him causing him to double over in Pain. And before Chris could see the rest he was being pulled out of the memory with the nauseating feeling.
Xjelliepotatoex: Leo I want Piper and Leo back together as well, and your right I also think That all the fast hook ups are just to unbelievable, And hopefully sorting out his life will become more clear this chapter and so forth, thanks for the review!
Charmed Lassie: Thanks for the review and I enjoy writing two parts at once, it keeps me interested lol! Thanks again
X3: I am glad you liked the flashback, I wasn't sure if I did, But I think I'll try and make them a little more detailed, thanks for the review
NoAlias: I'm Glad you think this is a good story I really appreciate it! Thanks for the review
Pink-Charmed-One: Thank you so much for the long review I love those! Thank you for all the ideas they helped a lot! And to answer your question Chris is in the hospital because he just kind of blacked out and they couldn't heal him or anything and they wanted to make sure he was okay, I'll try to clarify that in following chapters Thanks for the review
deranged black kitten of doom: I am glad you like it! ( And yes I am so happy my finals are over, good luck with yours, It's not fair all those people that were like done in may lol Thanks for the review
buffspike: Thank you very much for the review and I also wanna thank you for being a constant reviewer, I really appreciate that!
OrbingPunk: Thanks about the memory sequence, I'm glad you think the way I did it was good because to tell you the truth I didn't know how I was gonna do it al first lol And about your idea for Chris confining in someone, I think I am gonna take you up on that that's a really good idea! Thanks! And thanks for hoping I did good on my finals, I hope I did too lol
sweetsouthernbell07: Yeah I agree it's always intereting when your boy/girl friend is trying to kill you, always got to watch out for those!-
Okay Phew!!! That was so much fun...Thanks again to everyone...now on with the story
Chapter five- keep 'em comming
Future
Chris's head spun from the memory reel that he had just experienced. He thought about everything he had just saw, and released that he must have been remembering some of this old Chris's memories, which he was glad for.
He recalled dating Bianca, but not the break-up and apparently no one trusted her, only he had.
Chris could now feel the warm sun coming down on his head from the window and he realized it was day now. He thought about Bianca more and more until he was rattled out of his thoughts by his brother
"Hey man you finally up?"
Chris turned to see Wyatt walking into the room with two paper cups filled with a steaming liquid
"yeah, What time is it?"
"11, here I brought you some coffee"
"Thanks" Chris thought about weather or not he should tell his brother he didn't remember anything of this life, and only that of his previous. He didn't know if he could trust him or not.
"So the doctors say you can leave today, do you want to go with me to the beach, you know do the things you love to do?" Wyatt replied winking
Chris thought about it for a moment "Wyatt, I have a question."
Wyatt gave Chris a look while sipping his coffee saying to go ahead and ask
"How, did I even get here, In the hospital?"
"Are you kidding? You don't remember?" Wyatt said a little shocked
Chris shook his head with a confused look on his face
"Well you...." Wyatt started
But Chris was slowly being pulled out of his talk with Wyatt his head spinning once again until he was completely still again in another memory of the other Chris's life
He was standing in the manor, he looked around and saw, himself, about the same age as he was now, Wyatt, His mom, his aunt Phoebe, the only people missing was his dad and Aunt Paige. Standing opposite them was Bianca Holding a fire ball in her hand ready to throw it. Regular Chris just stood and watch the memory develop
"Bianca! You don't have to do this, remember what you said, you are only evil if you let it consume you!" The Chris in the memory scram at the fire ball-holding Bianca
"I was Naive Chris, It's who I am you know that! We both know that!" Bianca spat back at him throwing a fireball at Piper who in turn put her hands up to freeze it, only nothing happened it went straight for her and hit her in the shoulder and she went flying back only to hit the wall behind her
"PIPER!" phoebe yelled turning to help her sister only to be hit by a fireball in the back falling unconscious to the floor
Chris and Wyatt were the only ones left standing. Wyatt turned cautiously to heal his mother and aunt but Bianca noticed
"Don't you even attempt to heal them Wyatt, I'll blast you into the next room!" Bianca said to the boys with a satisfied tone in her voice
"You could try" Wyatt said a bit sarcastically as he turned toward his mother and aunt
Bianca formed an energy ball and threw it at Wyatt who easily had his blue shield form around him, causing the ball the disincarnate
Wyatt looked at Chris and half whispered to him "where is Dad and Aunt Paige?"
Chris shrugged and turned to face Bianca, I determined look on his face.
"Bianca, I thought we were going to be together, what happened to that?"
Bianca let out a laugh "Chris you never actually thought we could be together, I am not one of you"
"One of me!" Chris said Disgusted "I thought you said that didn't matter!"
"Haven't you been able to tell from this fun little fiasco that I was lying!" Bianca laughed
"Chris just forget about her! And help me, they aren't healing" Wyatt said Turing away from his dying mother
"There not?" Chris Replied turning his back to face his brother
Future Chris could tell it was a mistake when he saw himself turn away, because just as he did Bianca conjured up a huge fireball and trusted right at him causing him to double over in Pain. And before Chris could see the rest he was being pulled out of the memory with the nauseating feeling.