Broken in Half
Fanfics story
Mediator
Continued after Haunted
Suze loves Jesse, she knows that much. But what about Paul? Suze is starting to realize the truth about Jesse and her. She starts to realize that she needs a real boyfriend... but that won't stop her from loving a ghost.
Okay, thanks for all the reviews guys! This is Chapter three – hope you enjoy it!
Chapter Three
Diego, a look of determination in his eye, slowly approached Jesse, who was sleeping all too soundly. But then something happened. Something I never expected to happen. Diego, who had been hunched over Jesse, straightened up, and looked at the windowseat. Wait a minute... I was sitting on the windowseat! ME! OH MY GOD!
"Who the hell are you?!" he cried. He was probably surprised to see me, but I also was not exactly dressed in nineteenth century attire (thank the lord). My ripped jeans and black ribbed tank were not exactly 1800 material. I was worried, not because I was risking my life, but because Diego's cry might wake Jesse. But to my surprise, all Jesse did was stir in the bed. I guess he was a pretty sound sleeper...
Oh, right. I had to reply to Diego... ok...
"Uh... I, uh... well, I...-"but Diego cut me off.
"¡Ah Mi Dios, alguien se ha enterado de nuestro plan! ¡No bueno... ah no, Maria estará FURIOSO! ¿Qué debo hacer yo? Eehh..."
"I'm one of Jess.... Hector's friends. And I was just visiting from... from New York." I replied. Uh oh, was New York an existing state back then? "Because, i... well, I knew about your and Maria's plan. You are SO busted!" I whispered, very happy with myself. It was like on COPS or something. Hehehe. I guess my approach was working pretty affectively, since Diego ran out of the room pretty quickly for a guy with a goatee. I decided it was time to wake up Jesse to bring him back.
I ran over to the bed and shook Jesse, who was a sound sleeper, I had come to find, awake. He wasn't angry with the interruption, just confused. Oh god, he was just as hot when he was drousy than when he was awake!
"Jesse." I whispered to the guy in the bed. "Jesse, come on, its Suze, we're getting out of here! Oh yeah, I just stopped Diego from killing you! How cool?!" I squeeled. But, instead of any passionate embraces, Jesse just looked at me for what seemed like ages. Finally, he found words in his mouth...
"Diego... kill, whom? Nombre de Dios... no, no." He muttered. Then he looked at me again quickly, but this time, he said three words that made my heart feel like it was broken in two. "Who are you?"
"What?" I stuttered. "Jesse, it's me! Suze! Susannah! What's wrong with you! It's Suze!" I couldn't believe this. Paul was right, he didn't remember me. And he wouldn't.
"I'm sorry... I don't seem to recall meeting you... But you say that you have just saved my life." Jesse told me. "thank you." then he smiled. OOOOOOOH my god! He was even hotter than when he was dead. He sat up straight, making me see that he had no shirt on whatsoever, giving me the BEST glimpse I've ever gotten at his abs and chest, which were every bit as buff as it were when he died... which was supposed to have been that night.
I wasn't exactly sure of what he had on on the bottom, but I was willing to stick around and find out, if you know what I mean. But he seemed to have his trousers on, seeing as he got out of bed and stood up.
"My name is Hector de Silva." He said, addressing himself. "But, I don't know why... I seem to feel like I have some kind of, what do you call it, connection with you. Call me Jesse." Then he smiled, and bowed low. God, he must have had the ladies crawling all over him, because I was ready to melt on the spot. I must have lost the use of my legs for a minute or so, since I kind of fell over onto the bed, but jumped back up just as fast. "And what is your name?" he asked me.
"Um, Susannah Simon. But you can call me Suze." I replied. Just as I said my name, something flashed in his eyes, but it was gone it a second. Was this it? I thought, Does he remember? But all Jesse did was smile, and say,
"No, thank you. I like the name Susannah. It reminds me of the song."
"Alrighty then." I said, feeling kind of depressed about the whole "Jesse can't remember me" thing. "um, do you know a place to stay around here? I asked him. But when he didn't answer, I turned around and started for the door. But Jesse's voice stopped me.
"Susannah, may I ask you something?" he wondered. I twirled around pretty fast, and gazed into his eyes.
"Sure..." I whispered. But I think he could hear me, since he said,
"I don't know if you have heard about my ex-fiancee and I, but we are no longer getting married. I wonder if maybe you would like to come back to my family ranch with me... er... visit my sisters and parents, seeing as you have no place to go..." he looked at me with a look that was somewhat pleading. "And, well, we could also get you a dress..." he muttered, looking me up and down, thinking that I didn't hear him. But I did, and it put a huge smile on my face.
"Um, sure." I said, still smiling. "A dress would be great."
"Can you not come visit on my family's ranch then?" Jesse wondered.
"Oh, um... sure, I guess... why not?" But the thing was... I really wanted to see how it was that Jesse lived in the 1800's. And I could work on bringing him back to the present time as a ghost.
"Shall we say, tomorrow then, at dawn?" he asked me.
"Dawn?" I scrunched up my nose.
"Yes, dawn." Jesse replied. "We must get an early start, if you want to be at the ranch by the afternoon. I'll saddle up the horses and wait for you." Jesse smiled one last time at me. "Good night, Susannah." He said in his silky, persuasive voice.
"Good night, Jesse". I squeeled. Oh great, I'm squeeling again. The thing that makes me most attractive... not.
What a minute... HORSES? We're gonna be riding horses?......... oooh no, I'm in for a HUGE culture shock.
Okay everyone, Suze has just met Jesse, only he doesn't remember her, but feels that there is some kind of connections between them, only he doesn't know what. Suze has just been invited to visit Jesse on his family ranch in the fields of Carmel, and She's accepted his offer all too willingly.
Please READ AND REVIEW!
Thanx yall! Rock On!
Fanfics story
Mediator
Continued after Haunted
Suze loves Jesse, she knows that much. But what about Paul? Suze is starting to realize the truth about Jesse and her. She starts to realize that she needs a real boyfriend... but that won't stop her from loving a ghost.
Okay, thanks for all the reviews guys! This is Chapter three – hope you enjoy it!
Chapter Three
Diego, a look of determination in his eye, slowly approached Jesse, who was sleeping all too soundly. But then something happened. Something I never expected to happen. Diego, who had been hunched over Jesse, straightened up, and looked at the windowseat. Wait a minute... I was sitting on the windowseat! ME! OH MY GOD!
"Who the hell are you?!" he cried. He was probably surprised to see me, but I also was not exactly dressed in nineteenth century attire (thank the lord). My ripped jeans and black ribbed tank were not exactly 1800 material. I was worried, not because I was risking my life, but because Diego's cry might wake Jesse. But to my surprise, all Jesse did was stir in the bed. I guess he was a pretty sound sleeper...
Oh, right. I had to reply to Diego... ok...
"Uh... I, uh... well, I...-"but Diego cut me off.
"¡Ah Mi Dios, alguien se ha enterado de nuestro plan! ¡No bueno... ah no, Maria estará FURIOSO! ¿Qué debo hacer yo? Eehh..."
"I'm one of Jess.... Hector's friends. And I was just visiting from... from New York." I replied. Uh oh, was New York an existing state back then? "Because, i... well, I knew about your and Maria's plan. You are SO busted!" I whispered, very happy with myself. It was like on COPS or something. Hehehe. I guess my approach was working pretty affectively, since Diego ran out of the room pretty quickly for a guy with a goatee. I decided it was time to wake up Jesse to bring him back.
I ran over to the bed and shook Jesse, who was a sound sleeper, I had come to find, awake. He wasn't angry with the interruption, just confused. Oh god, he was just as hot when he was drousy than when he was awake!
"Jesse." I whispered to the guy in the bed. "Jesse, come on, its Suze, we're getting out of here! Oh yeah, I just stopped Diego from killing you! How cool?!" I squeeled. But, instead of any passionate embraces, Jesse just looked at me for what seemed like ages. Finally, he found words in his mouth...
"Diego... kill, whom? Nombre de Dios... no, no." He muttered. Then he looked at me again quickly, but this time, he said three words that made my heart feel like it was broken in two. "Who are you?"
"What?" I stuttered. "Jesse, it's me! Suze! Susannah! What's wrong with you! It's Suze!" I couldn't believe this. Paul was right, he didn't remember me. And he wouldn't.
"I'm sorry... I don't seem to recall meeting you... But you say that you have just saved my life." Jesse told me. "thank you." then he smiled. OOOOOOOH my god! He was even hotter than when he was dead. He sat up straight, making me see that he had no shirt on whatsoever, giving me the BEST glimpse I've ever gotten at his abs and chest, which were every bit as buff as it were when he died... which was supposed to have been that night.
I wasn't exactly sure of what he had on on the bottom, but I was willing to stick around and find out, if you know what I mean. But he seemed to have his trousers on, seeing as he got out of bed and stood up.
"My name is Hector de Silva." He said, addressing himself. "But, I don't know why... I seem to feel like I have some kind of, what do you call it, connection with you. Call me Jesse." Then he smiled, and bowed low. God, he must have had the ladies crawling all over him, because I was ready to melt on the spot. I must have lost the use of my legs for a minute or so, since I kind of fell over onto the bed, but jumped back up just as fast. "And what is your name?" he asked me.
"Um, Susannah Simon. But you can call me Suze." I replied. Just as I said my name, something flashed in his eyes, but it was gone it a second. Was this it? I thought, Does he remember? But all Jesse did was smile, and say,
"No, thank you. I like the name Susannah. It reminds me of the song."
"Alrighty then." I said, feeling kind of depressed about the whole "Jesse can't remember me" thing. "um, do you know a place to stay around here? I asked him. But when he didn't answer, I turned around and started for the door. But Jesse's voice stopped me.
"Susannah, may I ask you something?" he wondered. I twirled around pretty fast, and gazed into his eyes.
"Sure..." I whispered. But I think he could hear me, since he said,
"I don't know if you have heard about my ex-fiancee and I, but we are no longer getting married. I wonder if maybe you would like to come back to my family ranch with me... er... visit my sisters and parents, seeing as you have no place to go..." he looked at me with a look that was somewhat pleading. "And, well, we could also get you a dress..." he muttered, looking me up and down, thinking that I didn't hear him. But I did, and it put a huge smile on my face.
"Um, sure." I said, still smiling. "A dress would be great."
"Can you not come visit on my family's ranch then?" Jesse wondered.
"Oh, um... sure, I guess... why not?" But the thing was... I really wanted to see how it was that Jesse lived in the 1800's. And I could work on bringing him back to the present time as a ghost.
"Shall we say, tomorrow then, at dawn?" he asked me.
"Dawn?" I scrunched up my nose.
"Yes, dawn." Jesse replied. "We must get an early start, if you want to be at the ranch by the afternoon. I'll saddle up the horses and wait for you." Jesse smiled one last time at me. "Good night, Susannah." He said in his silky, persuasive voice.
"Good night, Jesse". I squeeled. Oh great, I'm squeeling again. The thing that makes me most attractive... not.
What a minute... HORSES? We're gonna be riding horses?......... oooh no, I'm in for a HUGE culture shock.
Okay everyone, Suze has just met Jesse, only he doesn't remember her, but feels that there is some kind of connections between them, only he doesn't know what. Suze has just been invited to visit Jesse on his family ranch in the fields of Carmel, and She's accepted his offer all too willingly.
Please READ AND REVIEW!
Thanx yall! Rock On!