Okay so here's my new fic its about hiei ah
I love him he is so hot well to me he is. Okay here's the scup hiei is
the prince of Japan set during the dynasty era so basically a long time
ago. Well anyways hiei is being forced to get married for the sake of
the throne if not it all goes to his little sis yukina and her
betrothed whoever she or her parents pick most likely parents will pick
4 her. It's a race between siblings who will the throne but only the
first one to find a mate and get married that child will get the throne
So hiei is being forced to go to literally hundreds of kingdoms to find a mate. He has to go to the kingdoms to see what kind of shape their in how they do business what's their main export you know the boring but mandatory stuff. He goes to these kingdoms and dismisses every princess and kingdom... until he goes to Egypt.
There the princesses best friend is posing as her because there have been attempted assignations of the princess more than once. So to protect her, her best friend/bodyguard must take her place they've done this more than once but now things are different will love get in the way of their friendship or will it all work out who knows but me.
Now my dear readers the question is will he fall for the beautiful princess or her fiery best friend posing as the princess to protect her. You'll find out all the answers to these questions later!
One more thing I forgot to mention hiei and yukina are 17 and the princess is 16 turning 17 one week before hiei arrives her best friend is already 17
All right for those of u who would like to know a few things about the characters and whatnot it'll all be explained in this bottom paragraph so here it is:
Hiei: well there's not much to say here he'll still be the same hot self so no change cept now his family are the rulers of Japan and he also has to find a mate before the next solar eclipse which should give him plenty of time cept the fact the last solar eclipse was a year ago so now he's 18 has a little less then year to find the perfect mate and to make all the trips harder and longer for him he has to travel to each country and find a mate and also a good ally for his kingdom in time. So romance wont come till later way later.
Yukina: well she's still the same cept she knows hiei is her brother that's the only difference and also she might be a little ooc in some parts so don't mind that. Well if hiei doesn't complete his mission before the appointed time well then she has a chance to get the throne by finding a mate and possibly a good ally but for her its mainly a good ally so its not like Hiei's totally just a little bit different but with her she will get a mate even if the solar eclipse has already passed cause her parents will chose for her. One more little twist to make things interesting yukina and hiei are twins like they were born at the same time look nothing alike just born at the same time.
Ritsuko Nakajima: this girl is the best friend of the princess*A/N her profile is right below* but right now were on Ritsuko they call her Ritz for short weird I know but hey its my character and the names if u recognize them are not mine I took two names one last and one first from two different anime's. Well her profile is this she has blue hair with streaks of red in it and I know I called her a fiery red head earlier well she does have red in her hair so any ways she made the top guard and then became the princesses body guard because not only was she strong and agile she also could act like the princess at the drop of a pin she was that good and so for the princess protection she was her bodyguard she was very trustworthy and loyal to the royal family she can also act pretty child like when not in combat or training but she can be very serious all the time if she wants, (its like Goku from dbz tough but acts child like when not fighting) but like all girl fighters there always is an Achilles heel hers is well not a guy she likes because I read that everywhere and see it everywhere its her little brother I know not very original but eh. He's not her little brother he's her older bro he just acts like a kid a lot so she calls him her little bro.she is very beautiful but since she acts like a guy a lot and has to be dressed in a way that would be easy for her to defend the princess she where's guy clothes and whatever else the guys where and cause its comfortable so you can't tell she if she's pretty, but she is very beautiful. Well to make a long bio short she acts like the princess cept she still has a habit of acting like a tomboy so she makes the princess a little stronger than what she really is, well any ways she starts having feelings for hiei *A/N I mean come on who wouldn't* by the time he has to leave I guess u could say its full blown love but she hides it very well its cause she was always part of the guys never the girls so falling for a guy is a new thing to her. So the question is will Hiei still like her after he finds out she's only a guard not the princess? My guess is probably I dunno yet and it doesn't matter if I am the author I'm just as stumped as u guys are. : p
Éclair Mishima: This is the princess that Hiei is supposed to be interrogating to see if she's good enough but since he thinks she's only a guard and a poor one at that he doesn't show any interest in her. She's smart pretty fun to be around and the only one besides her parents Ritz will listen to and obey she also considered Ritz her best friend cause she really cant hang out with anyone else so she can be very adventurous at times because being locked up in a castle isn't exactly fun so they do let her out at times. She is only human unlike her best friend who is a full dragon demon the only reason she looks human is cause she can turn into a dragon *I put this her cause I really, really love dragons*she acts very girly at times cause she was raised that way she can act spoiled at times because before Ritz came along she always no matter what acted like a brat who would never shut up so Ritz rubbing off on her was a good thing.
Her profile is as follows she has dark auburn hair sparkling black eyes that are full of life, she is not really tall but she's not short either I guess u could say in between for now that's the best I can describe her height, she is spoiled but tries not to act it though but old habits die hard and so when she is pretending to be a soldier its even harder not to act spoiled cause she is the princess after all. She has copper colored skin pretty slender but she does have some meat on her bones.
Her personality is that she can be fun to hang around with when she is not complaining or acting spoiled which isn't that often any more she is smart (cause she has to be) she wants to help her people and is kinda boy-crazy she can be very girly at times ok a lot but she is sweet and her dad is saying that will be end of her cause she has a tendency to take pity a lot so but that's just her she's gonna move Ritz to be her personal guard and right hand man or women whatever well that's how she is.
Hiei's parents: they're tough but the moms the more lenient one at times but has to be tough. The dad is like the slave driver he will lighten up on his little girl but not his son because his son is the one who has to rule the empire. They have to have a loving parent so the mom is that parent the dad too but not as much. They push their kids hard so their kids can surpass them in ruling the empire. I think I'll call em Vera and Tidus the dad is Tidus and the mom is Vera (a/n I got one name from under a plate and one from ffX cool huh?)
And as with every fic there has to be the bad person so I'm gonna make this one two people who never met before at all one from Japan and one from um Russia cause well Japan controls all china which is now Japan not china and some of Europe also some of Asia and really the people don't mind this Japanese government cause it was a lot better than their last government powers. The people don't mind it is because it's a stable government the taxes are so that u get paid fairly no matter how mush the government takes (A/N don't ask me how that's possible it just is and remember this is a fic) besides he's a war mongering king who loves power and so if the people trust him than when he takes over people wont complain bout whatever he changes pretty smart huh?
Ok this bad guy from Japan really hates the emperor cause they were friends but for some reason (A/N reason will come in later chappies) he betrayed him thinking he would get the crown and rule al the empire (A/N this all took place during the warring era of Japan so Japan was conquering and fighting for power at the same time but anyways the rightful heir took the throne and exiled his ex-friend to an island where he later escaped from details about all this will be in later chaps) so he's pretty pissed right now and so anyways the dude from Russia well was a military leader but was found plotting against the Russian ally's which was Japan and Russia got mad and sent him to a slave trader guy dude and so any ways he was sold off killed his boss dude and hid waiting the day he would get his chance and that day comes and he makes the perfect plan but I wont tell till later. In the fic they meet up later on and well work from there but I think I'll make that part of a sequel I don't know yet its what u guys want. Well I think that's all for now so I guess read the fic and tell me what ya think. ON WITH THE FIC
"Father I don't see why I have to such a meaningless task if I was to marry some week human or weak demon I think the should just come to me I don't see why I have to waste my time on them" sneered Hiei. "Listen and listen good boy I told u last night when we were talking." "Humph hardly I believe u were the one doing all the talking last night or should I say commanding." "Look I don't care if I were asking talking commanding whatever you are going to go to these kingdoms I've picked out for u and you are going to research their strengths, main exports, ally's, war history AND ANYTHING ELSE I TELL U TO LOOK UP got that." Yelled an extremely pissed Tidus as Hiei was walking away he said "watch it old man don't wanna crook to soon and give me the throne before I find a mate now do you? I really don't mind if u do though I could care less."
So being Hiei he ran out of the palace and into the woods but before he could make his escape yukina came out of nowhere and stopped him from leaving" where do you think your going BIG BRO THER" stretching it out to emphasis her point that he was older and had to do his meaningless task and she didn't "nothing LITTLE SIS" saying it with sarcasm and emphasizing his point that she was inferior to him.
" Ah ha I caught you red handed you have a boat to catch in 20 min to go to Asia to meet some princess who you'll fall desperately in love with" she was saying this with that sigh voice or whatever she was making fun of him" ah isn't that sweet the baby is trying to act smart nice try little princess better luck next time" " oh just shut up and get ready to leave loser" the last part was under her breath. "What did u say?" "Oh nothing" "ya whatever Yukina. Who died and made u boss?" "No one dad just ordered me to make sure u get ready to leave now go get ready." Reluctantly he went cause she knew she'd snitch just cause she's daddy's little girl.
Now somewhere in the palace in Egypt there was a duo of girls causing trouble and reeking havoc on the palace guards, servants, and anyone else they could find or meet except not pharaoh or his wife cause then they would truly get it. The pharaoh heard about all that was happening in the palace and so he sent a servant to go fetch the girls and bring then to him.
" I'll get you yet you loser" "Don't worry I'm sure we can get one of the elderly women to catch me since they do run faster than you a mere human" which was followed by a lot of laughs. "Very funny haha that was so funny I forgot to laugh." The girls were actually not making fun of each other no they were running in circles around the guards making them very angry the fun part was knowing that the guards couldn't hurt them whatsoever they could only make empty threats.
" So what are u guys gonna do about us huh?" asked the oddly colored hair one. Just as they were about to reply the girls disappeared. "What are we doing."? "Shh I hear someone coming I think a servant" "and so what?" "Well servants are usably to scared t come near us when were playing practical jokes so something must be up" "oh I see. Hey I have an idea the servant may need to tell us something important so before he tells us lets bomb him with the juice they gave us for breakfast I know some is still left over" "great idea this will be so perfect. Wait how many sacks did u make?" " Um lets see twelve I remember it was twelve." "Good this is so perfect ok u stay here and I'll be back" "ok" the odd colored one went flying through the palace and in a matter of seconds was at her destination point. She quickly found and filled up the sacks then she tied them and was on her way back.
"Jeez what took you so long? I think your getting to old for this I should get a new guard cause you are just getting to slow for my taste" ya ya whatever if anything I'm getting faster and how could you replace me huh? How you gonna find a best friend like me anywhere?" " Well I don't know but I'm willing to try" " You've got guts I'm willing to admit that but we better hurry and drop these before the servant leaves don't you think oh ya that's right you don't think" " oh whatever I do so think and you better give me a sack before the servant leaves or I'll blame everything on you ha so there beat that" As the dark haired girl finish saying that a loud splash and who did that was heard followed by howls of laughter. " Hey no fair you started with out me" if I didn't our target would've gotten away" " I suppose your right here give me one of those." fine here take one and hurry k?' "Fine whatever." After that all you heard was splashing, growling, and laughter. The messenger finally was able to tell them that they were to be taken to the king the messenger escorted them there quietly.
There the king let out a small chuckle at what his daughter and her guard did but he quickly retained himself. He looked at the girls and said "Éclair I have a to tell u and Ritz something very important that will change your futures and Egypt's future as well. I am going to start bringing in suitors again except before u interrupt me these suitors will spend time at the palace and with you my dear." " Dad I really don't want suitors again but if I must I must..." "Good dear I'm glad u understand the impor.." " But there is one thing that I don't understand" "oh and what is that?" "What does Ritz have anything to do with this?" " Ah this is where Ritz comes in as you know Egypt has a lot of enemies and some may just disguise themselves as suitors so I want Ritz to switch places with you while they're here so if anything happens Ritz can handle it and you will know if you wish to marry that one please its for your own protection" " fine I'll do it I guess" Éclair said this with a hint of anger in her voice " And Ritz you will do this because its your job do you understand me?" " Yes Sire I will do this for you and the princess" " Good now go we have preparations to finish."
The both nodded bowed and walked out in an awkward silence. " I don't want to do this I hate it I always have to act proper and do stuff I don't wanna do" "Hey what about me I have to be you I have to remember the names the stupid things they like to do and all that other crap I HAVE TO ACT FUCKIN DAINTY and that just aint my style even if I can act like you" " touchy aren't we well I guess that is kinda hard to do but hey at least we have to stay together right I mean isn't that an upside?" " Ya it is and we can still play pranks on people and him wow torturing people that I just met isn't this gonna be exciting oh ya I cant wait" Ritz turns chibi an starts flying around with her dragon wings the room all excited. "This is going to be so much fun I can't wait! When's the first one gonna arrive?" "Probably in about a day or so I think" " Wow this is so cool! Come on we can't waist any time we have preparations to do!" "This is gonna be along day" sighed princess Éclair.
So hiei is being forced to go to literally hundreds of kingdoms to find a mate. He has to go to the kingdoms to see what kind of shape their in how they do business what's their main export you know the boring but mandatory stuff. He goes to these kingdoms and dismisses every princess and kingdom... until he goes to Egypt.
There the princesses best friend is posing as her because there have been attempted assignations of the princess more than once. So to protect her, her best friend/bodyguard must take her place they've done this more than once but now things are different will love get in the way of their friendship or will it all work out who knows but me.
Now my dear readers the question is will he fall for the beautiful princess or her fiery best friend posing as the princess to protect her. You'll find out all the answers to these questions later!
One more thing I forgot to mention hiei and yukina are 17 and the princess is 16 turning 17 one week before hiei arrives her best friend is already 17
All right for those of u who would like to know a few things about the characters and whatnot it'll all be explained in this bottom paragraph so here it is:
Hiei: well there's not much to say here he'll still be the same hot self so no change cept now his family are the rulers of Japan and he also has to find a mate before the next solar eclipse which should give him plenty of time cept the fact the last solar eclipse was a year ago so now he's 18 has a little less then year to find the perfect mate and to make all the trips harder and longer for him he has to travel to each country and find a mate and also a good ally for his kingdom in time. So romance wont come till later way later.
Yukina: well she's still the same cept she knows hiei is her brother that's the only difference and also she might be a little ooc in some parts so don't mind that. Well if hiei doesn't complete his mission before the appointed time well then she has a chance to get the throne by finding a mate and possibly a good ally but for her its mainly a good ally so its not like Hiei's totally just a little bit different but with her she will get a mate even if the solar eclipse has already passed cause her parents will chose for her. One more little twist to make things interesting yukina and hiei are twins like they were born at the same time look nothing alike just born at the same time.
Ritsuko Nakajima: this girl is the best friend of the princess*A/N her profile is right below* but right now were on Ritsuko they call her Ritz for short weird I know but hey its my character and the names if u recognize them are not mine I took two names one last and one first from two different anime's. Well her profile is this she has blue hair with streaks of red in it and I know I called her a fiery red head earlier well she does have red in her hair so any ways she made the top guard and then became the princesses body guard because not only was she strong and agile she also could act like the princess at the drop of a pin she was that good and so for the princess protection she was her bodyguard she was very trustworthy and loyal to the royal family she can also act pretty child like when not in combat or training but she can be very serious all the time if she wants, (its like Goku from dbz tough but acts child like when not fighting) but like all girl fighters there always is an Achilles heel hers is well not a guy she likes because I read that everywhere and see it everywhere its her little brother I know not very original but eh. He's not her little brother he's her older bro he just acts like a kid a lot so she calls him her little bro.she is very beautiful but since she acts like a guy a lot and has to be dressed in a way that would be easy for her to defend the princess she where's guy clothes and whatever else the guys where and cause its comfortable so you can't tell she if she's pretty, but she is very beautiful. Well to make a long bio short she acts like the princess cept she still has a habit of acting like a tomboy so she makes the princess a little stronger than what she really is, well any ways she starts having feelings for hiei *A/N I mean come on who wouldn't* by the time he has to leave I guess u could say its full blown love but she hides it very well its cause she was always part of the guys never the girls so falling for a guy is a new thing to her. So the question is will Hiei still like her after he finds out she's only a guard not the princess? My guess is probably I dunno yet and it doesn't matter if I am the author I'm just as stumped as u guys are. : p
Éclair Mishima: This is the princess that Hiei is supposed to be interrogating to see if she's good enough but since he thinks she's only a guard and a poor one at that he doesn't show any interest in her. She's smart pretty fun to be around and the only one besides her parents Ritz will listen to and obey she also considered Ritz her best friend cause she really cant hang out with anyone else so she can be very adventurous at times because being locked up in a castle isn't exactly fun so they do let her out at times. She is only human unlike her best friend who is a full dragon demon the only reason she looks human is cause she can turn into a dragon *I put this her cause I really, really love dragons*she acts very girly at times cause she was raised that way she can act spoiled at times because before Ritz came along she always no matter what acted like a brat who would never shut up so Ritz rubbing off on her was a good thing.
Her profile is as follows she has dark auburn hair sparkling black eyes that are full of life, she is not really tall but she's not short either I guess u could say in between for now that's the best I can describe her height, she is spoiled but tries not to act it though but old habits die hard and so when she is pretending to be a soldier its even harder not to act spoiled cause she is the princess after all. She has copper colored skin pretty slender but she does have some meat on her bones.
Her personality is that she can be fun to hang around with when she is not complaining or acting spoiled which isn't that often any more she is smart (cause she has to be) she wants to help her people and is kinda boy-crazy she can be very girly at times ok a lot but she is sweet and her dad is saying that will be end of her cause she has a tendency to take pity a lot so but that's just her she's gonna move Ritz to be her personal guard and right hand man or women whatever well that's how she is.
Hiei's parents: they're tough but the moms the more lenient one at times but has to be tough. The dad is like the slave driver he will lighten up on his little girl but not his son because his son is the one who has to rule the empire. They have to have a loving parent so the mom is that parent the dad too but not as much. They push their kids hard so their kids can surpass them in ruling the empire. I think I'll call em Vera and Tidus the dad is Tidus and the mom is Vera (a/n I got one name from under a plate and one from ffX cool huh?)
And as with every fic there has to be the bad person so I'm gonna make this one two people who never met before at all one from Japan and one from um Russia cause well Japan controls all china which is now Japan not china and some of Europe also some of Asia and really the people don't mind this Japanese government cause it was a lot better than their last government powers. The people don't mind it is because it's a stable government the taxes are so that u get paid fairly no matter how mush the government takes (A/N don't ask me how that's possible it just is and remember this is a fic) besides he's a war mongering king who loves power and so if the people trust him than when he takes over people wont complain bout whatever he changes pretty smart huh?
Ok this bad guy from Japan really hates the emperor cause they were friends but for some reason (A/N reason will come in later chappies) he betrayed him thinking he would get the crown and rule al the empire (A/N this all took place during the warring era of Japan so Japan was conquering and fighting for power at the same time but anyways the rightful heir took the throne and exiled his ex-friend to an island where he later escaped from details about all this will be in later chaps) so he's pretty pissed right now and so anyways the dude from Russia well was a military leader but was found plotting against the Russian ally's which was Japan and Russia got mad and sent him to a slave trader guy dude and so any ways he was sold off killed his boss dude and hid waiting the day he would get his chance and that day comes and he makes the perfect plan but I wont tell till later. In the fic they meet up later on and well work from there but I think I'll make that part of a sequel I don't know yet its what u guys want. Well I think that's all for now so I guess read the fic and tell me what ya think. ON WITH THE FIC
"Father I don't see why I have to such a meaningless task if I was to marry some week human or weak demon I think the should just come to me I don't see why I have to waste my time on them" sneered Hiei. "Listen and listen good boy I told u last night when we were talking." "Humph hardly I believe u were the one doing all the talking last night or should I say commanding." "Look I don't care if I were asking talking commanding whatever you are going to go to these kingdoms I've picked out for u and you are going to research their strengths, main exports, ally's, war history AND ANYTHING ELSE I TELL U TO LOOK UP got that." Yelled an extremely pissed Tidus as Hiei was walking away he said "watch it old man don't wanna crook to soon and give me the throne before I find a mate now do you? I really don't mind if u do though I could care less."
So being Hiei he ran out of the palace and into the woods but before he could make his escape yukina came out of nowhere and stopped him from leaving" where do you think your going BIG BRO THER" stretching it out to emphasis her point that he was older and had to do his meaningless task and she didn't "nothing LITTLE SIS" saying it with sarcasm and emphasizing his point that she was inferior to him.
" Ah ha I caught you red handed you have a boat to catch in 20 min to go to Asia to meet some princess who you'll fall desperately in love with" she was saying this with that sigh voice or whatever she was making fun of him" ah isn't that sweet the baby is trying to act smart nice try little princess better luck next time" " oh just shut up and get ready to leave loser" the last part was under her breath. "What did u say?" "Oh nothing" "ya whatever Yukina. Who died and made u boss?" "No one dad just ordered me to make sure u get ready to leave now go get ready." Reluctantly he went cause she knew she'd snitch just cause she's daddy's little girl.
Now somewhere in the palace in Egypt there was a duo of girls causing trouble and reeking havoc on the palace guards, servants, and anyone else they could find or meet except not pharaoh or his wife cause then they would truly get it. The pharaoh heard about all that was happening in the palace and so he sent a servant to go fetch the girls and bring then to him.
" I'll get you yet you loser" "Don't worry I'm sure we can get one of the elderly women to catch me since they do run faster than you a mere human" which was followed by a lot of laughs. "Very funny haha that was so funny I forgot to laugh." The girls were actually not making fun of each other no they were running in circles around the guards making them very angry the fun part was knowing that the guards couldn't hurt them whatsoever they could only make empty threats.
" So what are u guys gonna do about us huh?" asked the oddly colored hair one. Just as they were about to reply the girls disappeared. "What are we doing."? "Shh I hear someone coming I think a servant" "and so what?" "Well servants are usably to scared t come near us when were playing practical jokes so something must be up" "oh I see. Hey I have an idea the servant may need to tell us something important so before he tells us lets bomb him with the juice they gave us for breakfast I know some is still left over" "great idea this will be so perfect. Wait how many sacks did u make?" " Um lets see twelve I remember it was twelve." "Good this is so perfect ok u stay here and I'll be back" "ok" the odd colored one went flying through the palace and in a matter of seconds was at her destination point. She quickly found and filled up the sacks then she tied them and was on her way back.
"Jeez what took you so long? I think your getting to old for this I should get a new guard cause you are just getting to slow for my taste" ya ya whatever if anything I'm getting faster and how could you replace me huh? How you gonna find a best friend like me anywhere?" " Well I don't know but I'm willing to try" " You've got guts I'm willing to admit that but we better hurry and drop these before the servant leaves don't you think oh ya that's right you don't think" " oh whatever I do so think and you better give me a sack before the servant leaves or I'll blame everything on you ha so there beat that" As the dark haired girl finish saying that a loud splash and who did that was heard followed by howls of laughter. " Hey no fair you started with out me" if I didn't our target would've gotten away" " I suppose your right here give me one of those." fine here take one and hurry k?' "Fine whatever." After that all you heard was splashing, growling, and laughter. The messenger finally was able to tell them that they were to be taken to the king the messenger escorted them there quietly.
There the king let out a small chuckle at what his daughter and her guard did but he quickly retained himself. He looked at the girls and said "Éclair I have a to tell u and Ritz something very important that will change your futures and Egypt's future as well. I am going to start bringing in suitors again except before u interrupt me these suitors will spend time at the palace and with you my dear." " Dad I really don't want suitors again but if I must I must..." "Good dear I'm glad u understand the impor.." " But there is one thing that I don't understand" "oh and what is that?" "What does Ritz have anything to do with this?" " Ah this is where Ritz comes in as you know Egypt has a lot of enemies and some may just disguise themselves as suitors so I want Ritz to switch places with you while they're here so if anything happens Ritz can handle it and you will know if you wish to marry that one please its for your own protection" " fine I'll do it I guess" Éclair said this with a hint of anger in her voice " And Ritz you will do this because its your job do you understand me?" " Yes Sire I will do this for you and the princess" " Good now go we have preparations to finish."
The both nodded bowed and walked out in an awkward silence. " I don't want to do this I hate it I always have to act proper and do stuff I don't wanna do" "Hey what about me I have to be you I have to remember the names the stupid things they like to do and all that other crap I HAVE TO ACT FUCKIN DAINTY and that just aint my style even if I can act like you" " touchy aren't we well I guess that is kinda hard to do but hey at least we have to stay together right I mean isn't that an upside?" " Ya it is and we can still play pranks on people and him wow torturing people that I just met isn't this gonna be exciting oh ya I cant wait" Ritz turns chibi an starts flying around with her dragon wings the room all excited. "This is going to be so much fun I can't wait! When's the first one gonna arrive?" "Probably in about a day or so I think" " Wow this is so cool! Come on we can't waist any time we have preparations to do!" "This is gonna be along day" sighed princess Éclair.