Okay I realized that in the last chapter I didn't say what yuske was
gunna do or Kuwabara or Kurama either or Botan, Keiko will be in this
to! So right here bove the fic I will tell ya just k.;)
And thanx a bunches to Slient Dreamer for your info (I now have Hiei's parents name although were not sure bout hi dad) and your review this chapter would have been up sooner but I was procrastinating and also I didn't get your review my email was all jacked up at the time but now its fixed and working just fine. Plz come back soon and review. Also I would like to thank Chihiro for making me hurry up on the update I'm glad u showed interest in my fic thanx a bunches It means a lot to me heehehe now on with the other peeps job and place in this fic and well of course the fic itself!
Ok lets see I'll make Kuwabara a sword maker black smith whatever cause he uses a spirit sword in the anime alot. Plus he is still in love with Yukina big surprise there!
I'll make Yuske a guard at the palace and Ritz older brother (and I know what I'm doing I think) he still gonna go for Keiko don't worry Yu Yu Hakusho fans. He will be a yr older than Ritz and I know I gave Ritz a different last name than Yuske but I'll just change it to Urameshi cause I'm the author and I have that power ok. And ya there all like 16 through 20 yrs old.
Kurama *A/N if I'm spelling his name wrong don't hesitate to tell me thanx*will be Hiei's right hand man and best friend (even though Hiei wont ever admit it out loud) so he will basically go wherever Hiei goes and does whatever Hiei does (cept certain things he wont do go like the bathroom he wont go wit Hiei unless it's a multi thing and he has to go.). He will help Hiei make the decision if he can't do it on his own and needs help.
Ooh I know What Keiko can be she will be like a lady in waiting for Éclair one of her personal servants and friend! She still has a thing for Yuske and also in private she is allowed to call Éclair by her first name and just act all casual round her.
Botan will be a little harder because she can be a servant to either Hiei or Éclair also in later chapters she will be ooc maybe a lot maybe not that's ya'lls decision if its drastic or not. Ah ha I've got it she will be Hiei's servant because it will be perfect for my decision in later chaps which I cant say anymore!
Hiei: 18 Yukina: duh 18 Yuske: 17 Ritz: 16 (turning 17 soon) Éclair: 16 also (turning 17 sooner than Ritz) Kuwabara: 17 Botan: 20
We last saw our evil duo making preparations for the oncoming suitors in Éclair's room *A/N if I didn't mention they're in Éclair's room I'm telling ya now k;)* and our brave Hiei *A/N sighs and looks dreamy* is venturing off into the world to find a suitable mate and ally for his country. Lets start off wit Hiei on his boat ride to.....London, England to meet the princess there hmn lets use the name Elizabeth ya I like it well now Hiei is going to London to meet princess Elizabeth.
The boat ride hadn't been so smooth for our favorite demon prince Hiei it seems he got a little seasick a few days after they left the dock. Hiei couldn't tell if it was do to the fact that they were always bouncing up and down or the fact that he was in a drinking contest the day after they left of course he won he could hold his alcohol better then anyone, but since the sailors were used to the boat conditions and Hiei wasn't really used to it he threw up his dinner a day later! No one knew our young prince was sick because he was so prideful he didn't let any one know cept Kurama and even he found out on accident! "Damn this rocking it's getting on my nerves" Hiei stated " Are we at the fuckin kingdom already?" Kurama cleared his throat used to all the curses his prince used and his attitude problem, " No sir we still have at least another month we do have to travel around Africa or has his highness forgotten that?" He said with a smirk. Hiei was in a bad mood already he didn't need Kurama's antics right now "Damnit Kurama I don't need your smart remarks right now I'm getting impatient I can't train or do anything on this fucking piece of wood!"*A/N I know to many a/n notes but I made Hiei here a little ooc well its cause I keep thinking Vegeta or an attitude like Vegeta because they r a lot alike cept in tude well that's all just thought I'd let u guys know that*Hiei and Kurama argued for a good half hour until it was lunch yeah!
Ritz and Éclair were now busying having fun torturing their first suitor his name was Rodolfo from Spain a real prick! He was tall black hair cut short and a real stick in the mud he couldn't take joke didn't want to do anything fun just talk bout how him and how he would change things when he became Pharaoh like he already got the okay to marry Éclair. "Hey you must stop this right now! I order you to stop this!!!" ordered Rodolfo. "Ya! And who are you to order me around the way only my husband should huh?" asked Éclair or Ritz should I say*A/N ya I know another one! But so u wont get confused if Ritz is pretending to b Éclair then I'm just gonna say Ritz its less confusing that way ok back to the fic* " I am Rodolfo de Salazar your future husband and leader!" stated Rodolfo. "Ha in your dreams Ralphy boy! And we are not going to put down your underwear or mirror I think we will just take these items and do something wit em" Laughed Ritz. "My name is not this 'Ralphy' It is Rodolfo and if u want to get dirty with my underwear then why don't u just get to the treat and get dirty with me. Sexy lil fox!" He stated. "Eww yuck!! Not even if u were the last man on earth u sicko!! I have other plans for your unmentionables unless u want to take their place!!" stated Ritz with sly smile. "Oh but of course my sweet lil demoness anything for you." He stated thinking she meant something else. " HEY, HEY YOU BITHES WHAT THE HELL ARE U DOING!!!! HELP GET ME mmhmmmmh." That was all you heard after they gagged his mouth shut. "Well you said u wanted to take the place of your under pants" said Ritz sounding innocent. Éclair was laughing her head off she was standing on a board next to Rodolfo hanging up his underpants with pictures of him on it. The girls had hung Rodolfo up on one of the poles that the slaves were using to help build a statue that looked like the Pharaoh. The Slaves al got a kick out of seeing him up there with funky underpants. "Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah man he looks so funny just hanging there spinning very slowly around in a circle!!!!!!" laughed Ritz as she looked out of Éclair's window at the little dot known as Rodolfo. "Hahahahahahahahahah what was even funnier was when u put the mustache and girly lips on him then u made his eyebrows a unabrow and really thick that was awesome" stated Éclair. "thanx it's a gift!" She stated "but you know I wonder when the guards will stop laughing and get him down I mean c'mon even the slaves are laughing at him." wondered Ritz " Ah who cares lets go terrorize some servants" " oh ya that would be great!" said Éclair. "Hold it! You guys aren't going anywhere! You should be ashamed of yourself all that guy wants is a bride and he came here looking for that! Stated the new person "Geez Keiko lighten up its just a joke and besides he said he would take the place of his underwear any ways so we did have his permission." Stated Ritz. "Ya but did you tell him what u were gonna do to his underwear hmn? Asked Keiko. "No of course not! Besides he didn't even ask what we were gonna do to the underwear so its his own fault for thinking with his groan instead of his brain! Serves him right." Said Éclair while sticking her tongue out. "Princess you shouldn't be acting or talking that way its unlady like you know that." Said Keiko. "Well Keiko you know u can call me Éclair in private and also of course its unlady like I am a soldier in Egypt's army so of course I have a foul mouth duh!" she said. "You have to give her a point Keiko she does have a point." Said Ritz "and besides the dude was a perverted jerk and wasn't fit to be the next Egypt[1] I mean c'mon think bout it" Said Ritz. While Ritz was telling Keiko that their actions were totally justified by the gods and whatnot the Pharaoh caught wind of their little escapade and sent for them immediately. The two-priest burst into the princess room ordering Éclair and Ritz follow them order of the pharaoh. "What is the meaning of this? Why have the gods punished me so with your ignorance of respect?" contemplated pharaoh."(Clears throat) my daughter you have to act more responsibly u should be like the moon that rises gracefully above the kingdom and watches over the kingdom as it sleeps and punish the wrong doers while they are sleeping for as you and I know we are more in tune with the spirits when we are sleeping. That is how you should act not like the stars that scatter and have no respect for their responsibility's and play all night and day wasting time ad then die out never to be remembered." Stated the pharaoh. "My child one day your mothers crown will be on your head and mine on your husband u must instruct him of our ways and guide him to the afterlife as your mother will me. Now as for your punishment U will play no more tricks and act like a lady the same goes for u too Ritz I will not have you tow destroy the kingdom I worked so hard for! If I hear that you two played one trick on this next suitor I will pick for you Éclair no buts about it and u Ritz will be demoted to a low class soldier is that understood?" He stated. "Yes Sir Pharaoh." The girls said at once. "Dismissed." "Uh Pharaoh may I say something freely?" asked Ritz "yes what is it?" he said. "Well may we test the suitor to see if he is suitable to be the next Egypt and worthy to take your place and marry your daughter and anything else we need to know bout hi truthfully?" she asked. Pharaoh thought about this and he liked the idea but he didn't answer to quickly so they wouldn't guess that he like the idea. "Yes only what's necessary though." He said. Éclair and Ritz walked out of the room as slowly and lady like or soldier like as possible and once they were out the doors they started jumping up and down and screaming they were so happy they could still play tricks on suitors but now they called it test and they could get away with it yes. "Hey why didn't your dad ask about y we did what we did to Ralph?" asked Ritz "Oh he probably just forgot and well He'll ask later trust me I'll just tell him he was disrespecting us mainly u when u were a princess and so we had to teach him a lesson in manners" stated Éclair coolly. "Great! Now on to the next bum I mean suitor," said Reign.
Okay I know that was so incredibly short and I'm sorry but I didn't want to give to much away and well there really was nothing happening with Hiei but next chapter they will have arrived in England and Hiei gets to meet Princess Elizabeth. Yuske comes into the picture so will Botan I think in either this next chapter or in the fourth chapter we will see how Yukina and Kuwabara re doing and a little bit bout them.
PLZ REVIEW AND READ AND CHECK UP ON THE NEXT CHAPPIES I WRITE YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh and don't be afraid to tell me if I'm spelling their names wrong ok thanx Luv u all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I will update as soon as possible I would've update sooner but we had a storm here and the comps were all off for like a day or so oh well no worries. About the [1]thing if u didn't get what Ritz said about him becoming Egypt I'll tell ya when the person whoever they maybe becomes Pharaoh they become the law and night and day and if they call day night and night day then it shall be written as such so basically the Egyptians say that pharaoh is Egypt and is always right he is one with the land and all that and yes I do own "The Prince of Egypt" that is a very good movie by the way well PEACE CHOW LATERZ BYE!!!!!!!!
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And thanx a bunches to Slient Dreamer for your info (I now have Hiei's parents name although were not sure bout hi dad) and your review this chapter would have been up sooner but I was procrastinating and also I didn't get your review my email was all jacked up at the time but now its fixed and working just fine. Plz come back soon and review. Also I would like to thank Chihiro for making me hurry up on the update I'm glad u showed interest in my fic thanx a bunches It means a lot to me heehehe now on with the other peeps job and place in this fic and well of course the fic itself!
Ok lets see I'll make Kuwabara a sword maker black smith whatever cause he uses a spirit sword in the anime alot. Plus he is still in love with Yukina big surprise there!
I'll make Yuske a guard at the palace and Ritz older brother (and I know what I'm doing I think) he still gonna go for Keiko don't worry Yu Yu Hakusho fans. He will be a yr older than Ritz and I know I gave Ritz a different last name than Yuske but I'll just change it to Urameshi cause I'm the author and I have that power ok. And ya there all like 16 through 20 yrs old.
Kurama *A/N if I'm spelling his name wrong don't hesitate to tell me thanx*will be Hiei's right hand man and best friend (even though Hiei wont ever admit it out loud) so he will basically go wherever Hiei goes and does whatever Hiei does (cept certain things he wont do go like the bathroom he wont go wit Hiei unless it's a multi thing and he has to go.). He will help Hiei make the decision if he can't do it on his own and needs help.
Ooh I know What Keiko can be she will be like a lady in waiting for Éclair one of her personal servants and friend! She still has a thing for Yuske and also in private she is allowed to call Éclair by her first name and just act all casual round her.
Botan will be a little harder because she can be a servant to either Hiei or Éclair also in later chapters she will be ooc maybe a lot maybe not that's ya'lls decision if its drastic or not. Ah ha I've got it she will be Hiei's servant because it will be perfect for my decision in later chaps which I cant say anymore!
Hiei: 18 Yukina: duh 18 Yuske: 17 Ritz: 16 (turning 17 soon) Éclair: 16 also (turning 17 sooner than Ritz) Kuwabara: 17 Botan: 20
We last saw our evil duo making preparations for the oncoming suitors in Éclair's room *A/N if I didn't mention they're in Éclair's room I'm telling ya now k;)* and our brave Hiei *A/N sighs and looks dreamy* is venturing off into the world to find a suitable mate and ally for his country. Lets start off wit Hiei on his boat ride to.....London, England to meet the princess there hmn lets use the name Elizabeth ya I like it well now Hiei is going to London to meet princess Elizabeth.
The boat ride hadn't been so smooth for our favorite demon prince Hiei it seems he got a little seasick a few days after they left the dock. Hiei couldn't tell if it was do to the fact that they were always bouncing up and down or the fact that he was in a drinking contest the day after they left of course he won he could hold his alcohol better then anyone, but since the sailors were used to the boat conditions and Hiei wasn't really used to it he threw up his dinner a day later! No one knew our young prince was sick because he was so prideful he didn't let any one know cept Kurama and even he found out on accident! "Damn this rocking it's getting on my nerves" Hiei stated " Are we at the fuckin kingdom already?" Kurama cleared his throat used to all the curses his prince used and his attitude problem, " No sir we still have at least another month we do have to travel around Africa or has his highness forgotten that?" He said with a smirk. Hiei was in a bad mood already he didn't need Kurama's antics right now "Damnit Kurama I don't need your smart remarks right now I'm getting impatient I can't train or do anything on this fucking piece of wood!"*A/N I know to many a/n notes but I made Hiei here a little ooc well its cause I keep thinking Vegeta or an attitude like Vegeta because they r a lot alike cept in tude well that's all just thought I'd let u guys know that*Hiei and Kurama argued for a good half hour until it was lunch yeah!
Ritz and Éclair were now busying having fun torturing their first suitor his name was Rodolfo from Spain a real prick! He was tall black hair cut short and a real stick in the mud he couldn't take joke didn't want to do anything fun just talk bout how him and how he would change things when he became Pharaoh like he already got the okay to marry Éclair. "Hey you must stop this right now! I order you to stop this!!!" ordered Rodolfo. "Ya! And who are you to order me around the way only my husband should huh?" asked Éclair or Ritz should I say*A/N ya I know another one! But so u wont get confused if Ritz is pretending to b Éclair then I'm just gonna say Ritz its less confusing that way ok back to the fic* " I am Rodolfo de Salazar your future husband and leader!" stated Rodolfo. "Ha in your dreams Ralphy boy! And we are not going to put down your underwear or mirror I think we will just take these items and do something wit em" Laughed Ritz. "My name is not this 'Ralphy' It is Rodolfo and if u want to get dirty with my underwear then why don't u just get to the treat and get dirty with me. Sexy lil fox!" He stated. "Eww yuck!! Not even if u were the last man on earth u sicko!! I have other plans for your unmentionables unless u want to take their place!!" stated Ritz with sly smile. "Oh but of course my sweet lil demoness anything for you." He stated thinking she meant something else. " HEY, HEY YOU BITHES WHAT THE HELL ARE U DOING!!!! HELP GET ME mmhmmmmh." That was all you heard after they gagged his mouth shut. "Well you said u wanted to take the place of your under pants" said Ritz sounding innocent. Éclair was laughing her head off she was standing on a board next to Rodolfo hanging up his underpants with pictures of him on it. The girls had hung Rodolfo up on one of the poles that the slaves were using to help build a statue that looked like the Pharaoh. The Slaves al got a kick out of seeing him up there with funky underpants. "Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah man he looks so funny just hanging there spinning very slowly around in a circle!!!!!!" laughed Ritz as she looked out of Éclair's window at the little dot known as Rodolfo. "Hahahahahahahahahah what was even funnier was when u put the mustache and girly lips on him then u made his eyebrows a unabrow and really thick that was awesome" stated Éclair. "thanx it's a gift!" She stated "but you know I wonder when the guards will stop laughing and get him down I mean c'mon even the slaves are laughing at him." wondered Ritz " Ah who cares lets go terrorize some servants" " oh ya that would be great!" said Éclair. "Hold it! You guys aren't going anywhere! You should be ashamed of yourself all that guy wants is a bride and he came here looking for that! Stated the new person "Geez Keiko lighten up its just a joke and besides he said he would take the place of his underwear any ways so we did have his permission." Stated Ritz. "Ya but did you tell him what u were gonna do to his underwear hmn? Asked Keiko. "No of course not! Besides he didn't even ask what we were gonna do to the underwear so its his own fault for thinking with his groan instead of his brain! Serves him right." Said Éclair while sticking her tongue out. "Princess you shouldn't be acting or talking that way its unlady like you know that." Said Keiko. "Well Keiko you know u can call me Éclair in private and also of course its unlady like I am a soldier in Egypt's army so of course I have a foul mouth duh!" she said. "You have to give her a point Keiko she does have a point." Said Ritz "and besides the dude was a perverted jerk and wasn't fit to be the next Egypt[1] I mean c'mon think bout it" Said Ritz. While Ritz was telling Keiko that their actions were totally justified by the gods and whatnot the Pharaoh caught wind of their little escapade and sent for them immediately. The two-priest burst into the princess room ordering Éclair and Ritz follow them order of the pharaoh. "What is the meaning of this? Why have the gods punished me so with your ignorance of respect?" contemplated pharaoh."(Clears throat) my daughter you have to act more responsibly u should be like the moon that rises gracefully above the kingdom and watches over the kingdom as it sleeps and punish the wrong doers while they are sleeping for as you and I know we are more in tune with the spirits when we are sleeping. That is how you should act not like the stars that scatter and have no respect for their responsibility's and play all night and day wasting time ad then die out never to be remembered." Stated the pharaoh. "My child one day your mothers crown will be on your head and mine on your husband u must instruct him of our ways and guide him to the afterlife as your mother will me. Now as for your punishment U will play no more tricks and act like a lady the same goes for u too Ritz I will not have you tow destroy the kingdom I worked so hard for! If I hear that you two played one trick on this next suitor I will pick for you Éclair no buts about it and u Ritz will be demoted to a low class soldier is that understood?" He stated. "Yes Sir Pharaoh." The girls said at once. "Dismissed." "Uh Pharaoh may I say something freely?" asked Ritz "yes what is it?" he said. "Well may we test the suitor to see if he is suitable to be the next Egypt and worthy to take your place and marry your daughter and anything else we need to know bout hi truthfully?" she asked. Pharaoh thought about this and he liked the idea but he didn't answer to quickly so they wouldn't guess that he like the idea. "Yes only what's necessary though." He said. Éclair and Ritz walked out of the room as slowly and lady like or soldier like as possible and once they were out the doors they started jumping up and down and screaming they were so happy they could still play tricks on suitors but now they called it test and they could get away with it yes. "Hey why didn't your dad ask about y we did what we did to Ralph?" asked Ritz "Oh he probably just forgot and well He'll ask later trust me I'll just tell him he was disrespecting us mainly u when u were a princess and so we had to teach him a lesson in manners" stated Éclair coolly. "Great! Now on to the next bum I mean suitor," said Reign.
Okay I know that was so incredibly short and I'm sorry but I didn't want to give to much away and well there really was nothing happening with Hiei but next chapter they will have arrived in England and Hiei gets to meet Princess Elizabeth. Yuske comes into the picture so will Botan I think in either this next chapter or in the fourth chapter we will see how Yukina and Kuwabara re doing and a little bit bout them.
PLZ REVIEW AND READ AND CHECK UP ON THE NEXT CHAPPIES I WRITE YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh and don't be afraid to tell me if I'm spelling their names wrong ok thanx Luv u all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I will update as soon as possible I would've update sooner but we had a storm here and the comps were all off for like a day or so oh well no worries. About the [1]thing if u didn't get what Ritz said about him becoming Egypt I'll tell ya when the person whoever they maybe becomes Pharaoh they become the law and night and day and if they call day night and night day then it shall be written as such so basically the Egyptians say that pharaoh is Egypt and is always right he is one with the land and all that and yes I do own "The Prince of Egypt" that is a very good movie by the way well PEACE CHOW LATERZ BYE!!!!!!!!
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