Okay here is the first chapter. I decided to call it 'your virtual tour'
because i give you a tour. ok i'll shut up now.
Let's look at the gryffindor commen room. You walk through the portrait hole after saying the password (White Drone) and you see a whole bunch of squasy old armchairs and couches, all posistioned in front of the fireplace, as well as a coffee table.
To the right of that are two tables, where you would usually find students working on homework and such. If you turn all the way around to your right, you see a bulliten board where students might post things such as, 'Help! My Frog is missing!' or 'We'll pay you if you help us' and lies like,'The author of Pumkin Juice for the Teenage Soul is coming to Hogwarts!' Even though there isn't a real author that wrote that book, and whoever wrote the book certainly isn't comeing to Hogwarts.
If you look back ahead of you, you see two staircases, Boy's Dormatory on the right, and Girls on the left. Let's travel into the dorm first. Up the stairs there are nine doors; four on one side and four on the other, with the ninth at the ending wall. The ninth bathroom is the Girls Prefect bathroom, and only the girl prefects and the head Girl are allowed in there, yet several Seventh years brake this rule. The one that No one is allowed in but prefects and Heads is on the entire other side of the castle, and it is a boy's and girls restroom.
The first door, on your left, is the normal girls restroom. Across from that, on your right, is the First year dorm. This is the smallest dorm room, and they get bigger as you move up in years. Next to the restroom is the second years dorm, across from that is the third years, etc. At the top across from the sixth on the right is the seventh years dorm. The biggest dorm there was. Let's enter that door, shall we?
For those of you that didnt understand that arrangment:Girls
................. prefects bath
...............6......................7
...............4......................5
...............2......................3
normal rest.you are here. 1
(sorry about all the periods. i had to put them there for it to work)
Inside you see three windows on a dark red wall, the window in the center larger than the other two. There are five four-poster bed sitting on gold carpet, each bed but one occupied by a person. Of course, i froze time to explain this all to you, so they are not moving.
The bed farthest to the left is occupied by Bell Griffin. Bell Griffin is one of Lily's best friends, yet you didn't meet her in the intro because she was in the hospital with a broken leg. She fell off her broomstick. That leads me to tell you that Bell plays seeker on the Griffindor quidditch team. Bell is a very active and aggressive person, but it only being september and practice hadn't started yet, Bell was being rather Ditzy and happy playing a mock quidditch game with Lily, Lavender, and Finky, ran into a pole, fell off her broom, and ended up in the hospital wing. Bell had reddish brown hair with natural blond hightlights and dark rassberry blue eyes. Her apparall was mostly muggle shirts (Bell was a half- blood, but her parents divorced and her witch mom married a wizard. You tell me what that makes bell) that said funny things on them like,'if you could read this your standing too close,' or 'take a picture it last longer', a pair of cargo pants, and some tennis shoes.
The bed next to Bell was Finky.This bed used to be Lily's, but they traded beds in the deal. There was a window in between Bell's bed and Finky's, but it was no good. As you know, Finky's name really is Irene. She didn't like that name, so now you call her either Finky or Tracy. Tracy was for the people that didn't know her too well and the teachers. Finky had strait blond hair and bright blue eyes. Finky was a really ditzy girl with a wild personality, and had a very short attention span. Finky always said the first thing that came to mind and didn't really pay attention in class. Her apparall was mainly blue, but if it matched she wore it. Her clothes were a bit revealing, but they weren't slutty.
Right in the middle of the room was Lily's bed. Lily was one of the most popular girls in school, with her thick bright red hair and startleing emrald green eyes, not very many people would belive she had flaws, but yes, she does. She just recently got over the habit of chewing her nails, and she is a mudblood. Not that that is anything to be ashamed of, but people just make fun of her for it. Lily was Head Girl, as you know, and also the top of all her classes. Lily dressed with anything that looked good on her-- from punkish to normal to cute in one snap.
Next to Lily was Lavender. Lavender had light brown hair with one silverish blue streak through the front and gray eyes. Lavender was also on the quidditch team, playing keeper. Lavender had a huge talent for quidditch and had even gotten an acceptance letter into the England Quidditch team to play profesionally--and she accepted. Lavender wore really girly clothes that werent in the least bit skanky, but reveiling all the same.
The bed next to Lavender was unoccupied. No one was there.
Now lets go back down the stairs and up the boys dorm. The formation is exactly the same, so lets just go into the seventh year dorm. Again, all but one of the five four poster beds was occupied.
On the far right was Peter Pettegrew aka Wormtail, a social outcast. Peter had blond hair and dark beady eyes, and he greatly resembaled a rat. Peter was fat and stupid, and there isnt much left to say there
Next to Peter was Remus aka Moony. Remus had light brown hair and odd brown eyes. Remus was very smart, getting all A's in all of his classes (exept for divination) and was really cute. Remus was mysterious, but he had a reason. Remus was a werewolf, and if anyone ever found out he would be in big trouble. It was a suprise that Dumbledor still let him in school. The only people that did know were his friends, and they each had become an animaigi to help him survive throughout the year. Peter was a rat, James a stag, and Sirius a big black dog, hence the nicknames.
Next to Remus was James aka Prongs, who occupied the bed by the window. James had messy black hair that he never brushed. Remus warned James that he might get dredlocks if he didn't take better care of his hair. James ignored this comment. James had hazel eyes hidden behind round black glasses. James also played Quidditch and was very talented, as he played Chaser. James was Head boy and right behind Lily in all of their classes.
Next to James was Sirius aka Padfoot, who was like a carbon copy of James with less messy black hair that he actually cared for and dark brown eyes with no glasses. They thought the same, talked the same, yet Sirius was a less smart version of James.
The bed next to Sirius was unoccupied.
Now lets go back downstairs. Your tour is over. Go home now.
Let's look at the gryffindor commen room. You walk through the portrait hole after saying the password (White Drone) and you see a whole bunch of squasy old armchairs and couches, all posistioned in front of the fireplace, as well as a coffee table.
To the right of that are two tables, where you would usually find students working on homework and such. If you turn all the way around to your right, you see a bulliten board where students might post things such as, 'Help! My Frog is missing!' or 'We'll pay you if you help us' and lies like,'The author of Pumkin Juice for the Teenage Soul is coming to Hogwarts!' Even though there isn't a real author that wrote that book, and whoever wrote the book certainly isn't comeing to Hogwarts.
If you look back ahead of you, you see two staircases, Boy's Dormatory on the right, and Girls on the left. Let's travel into the dorm first. Up the stairs there are nine doors; four on one side and four on the other, with the ninth at the ending wall. The ninth bathroom is the Girls Prefect bathroom, and only the girl prefects and the head Girl are allowed in there, yet several Seventh years brake this rule. The one that No one is allowed in but prefects and Heads is on the entire other side of the castle, and it is a boy's and girls restroom.
The first door, on your left, is the normal girls restroom. Across from that, on your right, is the First year dorm. This is the smallest dorm room, and they get bigger as you move up in years. Next to the restroom is the second years dorm, across from that is the third years, etc. At the top across from the sixth on the right is the seventh years dorm. The biggest dorm there was. Let's enter that door, shall we?
For those of you that didnt understand that arrangment:Girls
................. prefects bath
...............6......................7
...............4......................5
...............2......................3
normal rest.you are here. 1
(sorry about all the periods. i had to put them there for it to work)
Inside you see three windows on a dark red wall, the window in the center larger than the other two. There are five four-poster bed sitting on gold carpet, each bed but one occupied by a person. Of course, i froze time to explain this all to you, so they are not moving.
The bed farthest to the left is occupied by Bell Griffin. Bell Griffin is one of Lily's best friends, yet you didn't meet her in the intro because she was in the hospital with a broken leg. She fell off her broomstick. That leads me to tell you that Bell plays seeker on the Griffindor quidditch team. Bell is a very active and aggressive person, but it only being september and practice hadn't started yet, Bell was being rather Ditzy and happy playing a mock quidditch game with Lily, Lavender, and Finky, ran into a pole, fell off her broom, and ended up in the hospital wing. Bell had reddish brown hair with natural blond hightlights and dark rassberry blue eyes. Her apparall was mostly muggle shirts (Bell was a half- blood, but her parents divorced and her witch mom married a wizard. You tell me what that makes bell) that said funny things on them like,'if you could read this your standing too close,' or 'take a picture it last longer', a pair of cargo pants, and some tennis shoes.
The bed next to Bell was Finky.This bed used to be Lily's, but they traded beds in the deal. There was a window in between Bell's bed and Finky's, but it was no good. As you know, Finky's name really is Irene. She didn't like that name, so now you call her either Finky or Tracy. Tracy was for the people that didn't know her too well and the teachers. Finky had strait blond hair and bright blue eyes. Finky was a really ditzy girl with a wild personality, and had a very short attention span. Finky always said the first thing that came to mind and didn't really pay attention in class. Her apparall was mainly blue, but if it matched she wore it. Her clothes were a bit revealing, but they weren't slutty.
Right in the middle of the room was Lily's bed. Lily was one of the most popular girls in school, with her thick bright red hair and startleing emrald green eyes, not very many people would belive she had flaws, but yes, she does. She just recently got over the habit of chewing her nails, and she is a mudblood. Not that that is anything to be ashamed of, but people just make fun of her for it. Lily was Head Girl, as you know, and also the top of all her classes. Lily dressed with anything that looked good on her-- from punkish to normal to cute in one snap.
Next to Lily was Lavender. Lavender had light brown hair with one silverish blue streak through the front and gray eyes. Lavender was also on the quidditch team, playing keeper. Lavender had a huge talent for quidditch and had even gotten an acceptance letter into the England Quidditch team to play profesionally--and she accepted. Lavender wore really girly clothes that werent in the least bit skanky, but reveiling all the same.
The bed next to Lavender was unoccupied. No one was there.
Now lets go back down the stairs and up the boys dorm. The formation is exactly the same, so lets just go into the seventh year dorm. Again, all but one of the five four poster beds was occupied.
On the far right was Peter Pettegrew aka Wormtail, a social outcast. Peter had blond hair and dark beady eyes, and he greatly resembaled a rat. Peter was fat and stupid, and there isnt much left to say there
Next to Peter was Remus aka Moony. Remus had light brown hair and odd brown eyes. Remus was very smart, getting all A's in all of his classes (exept for divination) and was really cute. Remus was mysterious, but he had a reason. Remus was a werewolf, and if anyone ever found out he would be in big trouble. It was a suprise that Dumbledor still let him in school. The only people that did know were his friends, and they each had become an animaigi to help him survive throughout the year. Peter was a rat, James a stag, and Sirius a big black dog, hence the nicknames.
Next to Remus was James aka Prongs, who occupied the bed by the window. James had messy black hair that he never brushed. Remus warned James that he might get dredlocks if he didn't take better care of his hair. James ignored this comment. James had hazel eyes hidden behind round black glasses. James also played Quidditch and was very talented, as he played Chaser. James was Head boy and right behind Lily in all of their classes.
Next to James was Sirius aka Padfoot, who was like a carbon copy of James with less messy black hair that he actually cared for and dark brown eyes with no glasses. They thought the same, talked the same, yet Sirius was a less smart version of James.
The bed next to Sirius was unoccupied.
Now lets go back downstairs. Your tour is over. Go home now.