AN: Thanks everyone for all your reviews so far! But to Selphie Louise who
gave me the constructive criticism: I already wrote out this whole fanfic,
so I won't be able to take in your advice this time. As for what you said,
I didn't want to write out everything that happened at the beginning of KH.
Lots of people don't do that, plus since you already know the story of
Kingdom Hearts, why should I waste time typing every little thing that
happened? And anyways, this is a KH remake, but that doesn't mean that
everything has to be the same as in the game!!! In this fanfic I don't even
go to all the worlds in KH. I'm currently working on this fanfic's sequel,
so I'll take your review into consideration for that one, but as for this
one, you'll have to read it like it is!! I told you before, this was my
first fanfic, so be kind!! I must admit the story is moving kind of fast
and I'm sorry for that. But it does get more into detail and in depth with
characters later on! Please keep reading!
Disclaimer: I don't own Kingdom Hearts. I can own Iqui and Vern since they are OCs (original characters) but that's it!! I can probably own Sora's underwear too (hopefully, and if they're clean). By the way Selphie Louise, don't dis my man Sora!!!!!!
Chapter Two: Meeting a Hottie
"Ugh, where am I? What is this place?" Sora asked himself. It was a strange town, definitely not Destiny Islands.
"Still talking to yourself, eh Sora?"
"Iqui! What happened?"
"I just remember you telling me to stay with you, then I ended up here. Sora, is this a dream?" asked Iqui.
"It can't be. Whenever I had a dream, I always woke up in Destiny Islands after I beat that huge monster, but this time I ended up here."
"There's some shops open. Maybe someone will know what happened!" They walked up to a shop marked 'Accessories'. There they met Cid.
"Hey folks, what can I do for you-oh...it's just a kid." said Cid.
"I'm not a kid, old man! Anyways, I need your help. My sister and I were on our island, and now we ended up here. There are these strange creatures popping up everywhere. I don't know what's going on exactly." explained Sora.
"Well me either kid. I guess you'll just have to find help somewhere else." Sora and Iqui exited the Accessory Shop and decided to just look around.
"Well hello there, I've never seen you here before." A tall man approached them. He didn't look too friendly, and he carried a huge sword.
"Uh, we're lost," said Sora, hesitantly.
"Let me see that Keyblade."
"See the what?" asked Sora.
"The Keyblade, the weapon in your hand, give it to me." the man demanded.
"Oh, this...never!"
"Sora, what are you doing. You're going to get hurt!" warned Iqui.
"Stay back Iqui, he's the only one that's gonna get hurt!" Sora lunged towards the man, but he jumped out of the way. With one slice of the man's sword, Sora was down.
"What'd you do to my brother?!" Iqui screamed.
"Don't worry, just come with me." the man picked up Sora. Iqui had nowhere to go, and Sora did say to stay with him, so she followed the man. He led her to a hotel.
"Finally, Leon! I thought you'd never find him!" said Yuffie.
"You were expecting Sora?" asked Iqui.
"Not exactly. You see, we were looking for the Keyblade master. He is who we were looking for." said Leon. Soon Sora woke up after being knocked out.
"Wha-what's going on?" asked Sora.
"Sora, you are the Keyblade Master. You were chosen to fight off the Heartless." explained Yuffie.
"Heartless?" asked Sora.
"Those creatures you fought off."
"Oh boy, here come some now. Yuffie, take Iqui to Aerith, Sora and I will take care of these guys." said Leon. He whipped out his sword and Sora drew out his Keyblade, and they were ready to fight.
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"Wow, I've never been to a place like this before! It's so...city-like." said Vern. She admired the lights and buildings in Traverse Town.
"Come on, we have no time to waste! We've got to find this Squall guy," said Donald, losing his temper.
"Jeez, gimme a break! I wanna explore this place but at my own leisure." said Vern.
"Suit yourself, but Goofy's comin' with me." Donald looked to see Goofy walking off with Vern. "Goofy! Come back here!"
"Sorry Vern, King's order. I gotta help look for Squall and the Keyblade Master." Goofy trotted back to Donald. "Just be careful, Vern." Vern wandered up some stairs and down a dark path. Blocking her way was a tower of boxes. She used her magic to cast it aside. When the boxes cleared her vision, Vern saw tons of little creatures, and fighting them off was a man and a boy-the boy looking really cute.
"I bet these are the guys we've been looking for," Vern said to herself as she stared at the Keyblade. "If I find them first, Donald'll have to give me more respect!" After the Heartless were gone, Vern ran up to Leon and Sora.
"Um, excuse me? I'm looking for the Keyblade Master and a guy named Squall Leonhart."
"I'm Leon. My name used to be Squall Leonhart, but I changed it."
"And I'm Sora, the Keyblade master."
"Well, hello there." Vern blushed. She had never liked a guy before, especially when she just met him.
"What did you come here for?" Leon asked impatiently.
"Huh? Oh yah I came with...those guys..." Vern said as she came out of her daze. She pointed to Donald and Goofy as they walked up to her.
"The King said we had to find the Keyblade Master and stick with him." said Donald.
"I guess that means I'm coming, too." Vern said excitedly.
"Me, too," Everyone whipped around to see Iqui.
"Who's she?" Goofy asked.
"Who? Oh her, she's just my sister." Sora said as if Iqui was nothing.
"Aren't you going to introduce me?" Iqui asked.
"You can talk for yourself Iqui, you have a mouth!"
"Oh, Iqui, nice to meet you. I'm Vern, sorceress of the Kingdom. This is Donald the magician, and Goofy the knight."
"Well, this has been nice, but I've got better things to do then chat and have tea and crumpets." Leon grumbled as he went into the hotel to find Aerith and Yuffie.
"Come on, I guess the five of us will be stuck together." said Donald.
"Wait, before we leave, there's just one thing. You never thanked me for finding Sora." Vern said.
"If you didn't find him, we would have anyway!"
"Well you said I couldn't do anything and it would be too dangerous. Well it's not. I'd just like to get a little gratitude for once!" Vern started to cry and ran off to the Third District.
"Man, is she emotional or what?!" Donald said.
"Hey, we can't just leave her here!" Then there was a scream. "Vern! Something's wrong, let's go!" Sora said as they entered the Third District. it was the Guard Armor, a Heartless Boss. Sora fought as hard as he could, while Donald and Vern helped. Goofy protected Iqui from the Guard Armor. After he was destroyed, the five boarded the gummi ship and it flew away.
"You are not going back out there!" Sora said to Iqui.
"Why not? I'm a big girl, I can take care of myself!"
"You sound like another girl I know," Donald said, glancing at Vern.
"Sora's right. You're very young. And you have no way to defend yourself. We need Goofy to help us defeat the Heartless. He might not always be there to protect you." Vern explained.
"I don't care if it's dangerous! I wanna go out there too!!" Iqui whined.
"Man, you're so annoying! I wish Kairi had come here instead of you!" Sora said.
"Kairi? Who's Kairi?" Vern asked.
"She's his...girlfriend!!!"
"No she's not! She's just a...uh...friend." Sora was blushing. Vern could tell it was the same look she had had when she first saw him.
Iqui pressed on. "If she's just a friend, then why didn't you say you wanted to be with Riku?"
"Because Kairi's name popped in my head first, that's all."
"I wonder why!" Iqui said. But Vern did not want to know why. She was glad that Kairi was not there and Iqui was. An annoying sister is way better than a beautiful girl whom your crush likes.
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As I said in my author's note, I already have this fanfic typed and am currently working on the sequel. At times I'll leave you at cliffies (everyone likes those right?) but you won't have to wait long or worry! Please R&R!
Disclaimer: I don't own Kingdom Hearts. I can own Iqui and Vern since they are OCs (original characters) but that's it!! I can probably own Sora's underwear too (hopefully, and if they're clean). By the way Selphie Louise, don't dis my man Sora!!!!!!
Chapter Two: Meeting a Hottie
"Ugh, where am I? What is this place?" Sora asked himself. It was a strange town, definitely not Destiny Islands.
"Still talking to yourself, eh Sora?"
"Iqui! What happened?"
"I just remember you telling me to stay with you, then I ended up here. Sora, is this a dream?" asked Iqui.
"It can't be. Whenever I had a dream, I always woke up in Destiny Islands after I beat that huge monster, but this time I ended up here."
"There's some shops open. Maybe someone will know what happened!" They walked up to a shop marked 'Accessories'. There they met Cid.
"Hey folks, what can I do for you-oh...it's just a kid." said Cid.
"I'm not a kid, old man! Anyways, I need your help. My sister and I were on our island, and now we ended up here. There are these strange creatures popping up everywhere. I don't know what's going on exactly." explained Sora.
"Well me either kid. I guess you'll just have to find help somewhere else." Sora and Iqui exited the Accessory Shop and decided to just look around.
"Well hello there, I've never seen you here before." A tall man approached them. He didn't look too friendly, and he carried a huge sword.
"Uh, we're lost," said Sora, hesitantly.
"Let me see that Keyblade."
"See the what?" asked Sora.
"The Keyblade, the weapon in your hand, give it to me." the man demanded.
"Oh, this...never!"
"Sora, what are you doing. You're going to get hurt!" warned Iqui.
"Stay back Iqui, he's the only one that's gonna get hurt!" Sora lunged towards the man, but he jumped out of the way. With one slice of the man's sword, Sora was down.
"What'd you do to my brother?!" Iqui screamed.
"Don't worry, just come with me." the man picked up Sora. Iqui had nowhere to go, and Sora did say to stay with him, so she followed the man. He led her to a hotel.
"Finally, Leon! I thought you'd never find him!" said Yuffie.
"You were expecting Sora?" asked Iqui.
"Not exactly. You see, we were looking for the Keyblade master. He is who we were looking for." said Leon. Soon Sora woke up after being knocked out.
"Wha-what's going on?" asked Sora.
"Sora, you are the Keyblade Master. You were chosen to fight off the Heartless." explained Yuffie.
"Heartless?" asked Sora.
"Those creatures you fought off."
"Oh boy, here come some now. Yuffie, take Iqui to Aerith, Sora and I will take care of these guys." said Leon. He whipped out his sword and Sora drew out his Keyblade, and they were ready to fight.
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"Wow, I've never been to a place like this before! It's so...city-like." said Vern. She admired the lights and buildings in Traverse Town.
"Come on, we have no time to waste! We've got to find this Squall guy," said Donald, losing his temper.
"Jeez, gimme a break! I wanna explore this place but at my own leisure." said Vern.
"Suit yourself, but Goofy's comin' with me." Donald looked to see Goofy walking off with Vern. "Goofy! Come back here!"
"Sorry Vern, King's order. I gotta help look for Squall and the Keyblade Master." Goofy trotted back to Donald. "Just be careful, Vern." Vern wandered up some stairs and down a dark path. Blocking her way was a tower of boxes. She used her magic to cast it aside. When the boxes cleared her vision, Vern saw tons of little creatures, and fighting them off was a man and a boy-the boy looking really cute.
"I bet these are the guys we've been looking for," Vern said to herself as she stared at the Keyblade. "If I find them first, Donald'll have to give me more respect!" After the Heartless were gone, Vern ran up to Leon and Sora.
"Um, excuse me? I'm looking for the Keyblade Master and a guy named Squall Leonhart."
"I'm Leon. My name used to be Squall Leonhart, but I changed it."
"And I'm Sora, the Keyblade master."
"Well, hello there." Vern blushed. She had never liked a guy before, especially when she just met him.
"What did you come here for?" Leon asked impatiently.
"Huh? Oh yah I came with...those guys..." Vern said as she came out of her daze. She pointed to Donald and Goofy as they walked up to her.
"The King said we had to find the Keyblade Master and stick with him." said Donald.
"I guess that means I'm coming, too." Vern said excitedly.
"Me, too," Everyone whipped around to see Iqui.
"Who's she?" Goofy asked.
"Who? Oh her, she's just my sister." Sora said as if Iqui was nothing.
"Aren't you going to introduce me?" Iqui asked.
"You can talk for yourself Iqui, you have a mouth!"
"Oh, Iqui, nice to meet you. I'm Vern, sorceress of the Kingdom. This is Donald the magician, and Goofy the knight."
"Well, this has been nice, but I've got better things to do then chat and have tea and crumpets." Leon grumbled as he went into the hotel to find Aerith and Yuffie.
"Come on, I guess the five of us will be stuck together." said Donald.
"Wait, before we leave, there's just one thing. You never thanked me for finding Sora." Vern said.
"If you didn't find him, we would have anyway!"
"Well you said I couldn't do anything and it would be too dangerous. Well it's not. I'd just like to get a little gratitude for once!" Vern started to cry and ran off to the Third District.
"Man, is she emotional or what?!" Donald said.
"Hey, we can't just leave her here!" Then there was a scream. "Vern! Something's wrong, let's go!" Sora said as they entered the Third District. it was the Guard Armor, a Heartless Boss. Sora fought as hard as he could, while Donald and Vern helped. Goofy protected Iqui from the Guard Armor. After he was destroyed, the five boarded the gummi ship and it flew away.
"You are not going back out there!" Sora said to Iqui.
"Why not? I'm a big girl, I can take care of myself!"
"You sound like another girl I know," Donald said, glancing at Vern.
"Sora's right. You're very young. And you have no way to defend yourself. We need Goofy to help us defeat the Heartless. He might not always be there to protect you." Vern explained.
"I don't care if it's dangerous! I wanna go out there too!!" Iqui whined.
"Man, you're so annoying! I wish Kairi had come here instead of you!" Sora said.
"Kairi? Who's Kairi?" Vern asked.
"She's his...girlfriend!!!"
"No she's not! She's just a...uh...friend." Sora was blushing. Vern could tell it was the same look she had had when she first saw him.
Iqui pressed on. "If she's just a friend, then why didn't you say you wanted to be with Riku?"
"Because Kairi's name popped in my head first, that's all."
"I wonder why!" Iqui said. But Vern did not want to know why. She was glad that Kairi was not there and Iqui was. An annoying sister is way better than a beautiful girl whom your crush likes.
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As I said in my author's note, I already have this fanfic typed and am currently working on the sequel. At times I'll leave you at cliffies (everyone likes those right?) but you won't have to wait long or worry! Please R&R!