Alyssium: Of course you know whats going to happen.... your my beta, and a great one at that! It was fun talking to you last night and I hope we can do it again soon. love ya lots!!!!
Courtney11989: Sorry, can't tell who the father is yet....
imogenhm: Thank you.... Slytherin ROCKS!!! Yes, Raine walked out of class, and I probably would have done the same, cuz as we know from the books, Snape is generally easier on his own students the those from other houses...so...
Orlando's Gurl: I know what you mean. I kinda feel bad that they all don't know that * (I guess your astric Faerie likes to jump into my writting as well) is the father. Oh well, they will soon find out, thou. Love ya lots, and I am sorry if you thought that my review for your story was saying that I thought your story was cheesy......I was just trying to say that fluff and stuff is good as long as it don't become chessy (Like : Your father must have been a thief, cuz he sole all the stars from the heavens and put them in your eyes, you know that kinda of shit.) But your story is far from cheesy!!!! I really like it and I feel bad that you think I don't, or would think it cheesy. I am really sorry!!! Please forgive me, and I will fix it in my next review for your story!
Bree Mcgregor: Thank you... I am glad that you like it!
Amarie Helyanwe: To find out the daddy you just have to keep reading, but don't worry, you'll know soon enough! Thank you for reading! and Have fun in Myrtle Beach!!!
ekleenex: Not to worry, there will be quite a bit more interaction between Snape and Raine, cuz after all, they have the whole year together!
Haven Bloodcrow: I haven't said who the father is yet.... so you will just have to keep guessing! Thanks for reading!
Silent Voices17: Yes Raine has an attitude, but wouldn't you if your mum (Who was like your best friend) died and you were forced to go live with a man that didn't even know you existed! Even thou she isn't exactly living with him, she had to leave her entire life and move half way around the world....so .... yea, I'd be just a little upset too. I don't know, maybe that just me. Thanks for Reading and i can't wait to talk to you again on AIM.
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Chapter 6:
Raine walked down the corridor. "Atta Leucar" Raine said and a portion of the wall slid aside. She dumped her bag on the table and went to light a fire. None of her teachers back home ever treated the students like he just had. Raine didn't hold her tongue for anyone, and wasn't about to start now, even if it was a teacher. She was poking at the fire when someone came running into the common room.
"That was bloody brilliant!!!" Kay exclaimed as she approached Raine. "But you are so dead!" Kay laughed as she kneeled on the floor next to her.
"How pissed was he?" Raine asked, still poking at the fire.
"If looks could kill, you'd be 6 feet under right now, pushing up the daisies! He didn't say anything though, after you left."
"Is that a good thing, or a bad thing?" Raine asked as people started filing into the common room.
Everyone was chatting about Raine's blow up at Snape and she tried to avoid making eye contact with any of them as Kay said "We'll soon find out."
Suddenly, the people noticed Raine on the floor, and the room went quite for a moment, then erupted again as people started asking her questions or complimenting her.
Before Raine was able to answer anyone's questions, a loud clapping began. Draco, clapping, pushed his way through the crowd to the front. "Congratulations! I do believe you have stripped Potter's title as being Snape's most hated student."
"Eat me, Draco!" Raine spat. She was still pissed and wasn't up to dealing with his shit, or anyone else's for that matter.
"Maybe later." Draco made a kissing noise as he smirked at her.
"Don't misconstrue the situation and take that as an offer." Raine turned quickly, in a fan of red hair, and headed down to her room.
She sat in her room awhile, trying to calm herself, then grabbed her sketchpad and started drawing.
"You're gaining all sorts of enemies, and rather affectively." Purity said as she walked into the bed chamber.
"I don't care, he pissed me off." Raine said, in a nice but truthful tone.
"Hey, I wish it had been me who told Snape off. You do realize that he is the head of this house?"
"Doesn't make a difference to me. Hermione was just trying to be helpful, he didn't need to snap at her like that."
"How do you know Hermione?" Purity asked as she sat on Raine's bed.
Raine, figuring she wasn't going to go away anytime soon, put her sketchpad down. "I met her on the train and she brought me to see the Headmaster when we arrived. She seems nice."
'You'll wanna avoid the golden-trio."
"The what?"
Purity laughed, "The golden-trio. Its what we call Harry, Ron and Hermione, and unless you want to become the center of the entire Slytherin house's ridicule, Draco in particular, you won't wanna talk to them." Purity said.
*This is ridiculous! No one tells me who I can and can't talk to* Raine fumed as she reached over the side of the bed to grab her book bag.
"Shit!!" Raine said.
"What?" Purity asked.
"I left my bag on the table in the common room."
"You want me to go get it?" Purity offered.
"Naw, that's all right. Thanks anyways." Raine crawled off her bed and left the room.
When she reached the top of the stairs, the 6th years were telling the other years about what had happened during Potions, and the story had already become obscured. The pug faced girl, Pansy, was telling a 7th year guy that Raine had actually punched Snape in the face. Raine just laughed it off as she walked past her, towards the table with her book bag. She spotted Draco was sitting on one of the couches, Crabbe and Goyle at his sides. He gave her a malicious, dangerous smile when he seen that she was looking his way.
Suddenly, the wall slid open and Snape came rushing in, his black cloak billowing behind him in his haste. "A weeks worth of detention, Miss Moray, for your outburst, starting tomorrow in my class room at 7:00pm, and not a moment later. Maybe then you'll realize what it means to be a SLYTHERIN." Snape's eyes scanned the room and finally fell on Draco. Raine looked back at Draco, he was smiling as evil as ever, which pissed Raine off even more.
"Aye Aye, Captian..." Raine saluted him, "7 o'clock it 'tis." Raine grabbed her bag off the table. "Is that all, or is there something else you've come to say?" Raine was about to add something else, but decided better of it because there were so many people around.
Snape's face turned hard and he stalked back out of the room. This presence had left a uncomfortable silence in the common room.
"Thats it?! A weeks worth of detention is all you got!" Draco fumed, breaking the silence.
"Shut up, Draco!" Kay said.
Draco stood up and walked right up into her face. "Mind your own business."
Blaise walked up behind his girl and placed a hand on her shoulder. "Watch it, Draco." He warned, tension growing as they stared at each other. *Like to male dogs*, Raine mused, *Sizing each other up before a fight. *
"What else do you do want him to do?" Aleta asked.
"He isn't going to take points, cuz he wants to win the house cup as much as we do..." Melia said.
"You guys have fun discussing this.... I am going to my room." Raine said, for she had no desire to talk anymore, and walked down the stairs. Raine dropped on her bed and began writing a letter to Kat.
Courtney11989: Sorry, can't tell who the father is yet....
imogenhm: Thank you.... Slytherin ROCKS!!! Yes, Raine walked out of class, and I probably would have done the same, cuz as we know from the books, Snape is generally easier on his own students the those from other houses...so...
Orlando's Gurl: I know what you mean. I kinda feel bad that they all don't know that * (I guess your astric Faerie likes to jump into my writting as well) is the father. Oh well, they will soon find out, thou. Love ya lots, and I am sorry if you thought that my review for your story was saying that I thought your story was cheesy......I was just trying to say that fluff and stuff is good as long as it don't become chessy (Like : Your father must have been a thief, cuz he sole all the stars from the heavens and put them in your eyes, you know that kinda of shit.) But your story is far from cheesy!!!! I really like it and I feel bad that you think I don't, or would think it cheesy. I am really sorry!!! Please forgive me, and I will fix it in my next review for your story!
Bree Mcgregor: Thank you... I am glad that you like it!
Amarie Helyanwe: To find out the daddy you just have to keep reading, but don't worry, you'll know soon enough! Thank you for reading! and Have fun in Myrtle Beach!!!
ekleenex: Not to worry, there will be quite a bit more interaction between Snape and Raine, cuz after all, they have the whole year together!
Haven Bloodcrow: I haven't said who the father is yet.... so you will just have to keep guessing! Thanks for reading!
Silent Voices17: Yes Raine has an attitude, but wouldn't you if your mum (Who was like your best friend) died and you were forced to go live with a man that didn't even know you existed! Even thou she isn't exactly living with him, she had to leave her entire life and move half way around the world....so .... yea, I'd be just a little upset too. I don't know, maybe that just me. Thanks for Reading and i can't wait to talk to you again on AIM.
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Chapter 6:
Raine walked down the corridor. "Atta Leucar" Raine said and a portion of the wall slid aside. She dumped her bag on the table and went to light a fire. None of her teachers back home ever treated the students like he just had. Raine didn't hold her tongue for anyone, and wasn't about to start now, even if it was a teacher. She was poking at the fire when someone came running into the common room.
"That was bloody brilliant!!!" Kay exclaimed as she approached Raine. "But you are so dead!" Kay laughed as she kneeled on the floor next to her.
"How pissed was he?" Raine asked, still poking at the fire.
"If looks could kill, you'd be 6 feet under right now, pushing up the daisies! He didn't say anything though, after you left."
"Is that a good thing, or a bad thing?" Raine asked as people started filing into the common room.
Everyone was chatting about Raine's blow up at Snape and she tried to avoid making eye contact with any of them as Kay said "We'll soon find out."
Suddenly, the people noticed Raine on the floor, and the room went quite for a moment, then erupted again as people started asking her questions or complimenting her.
Before Raine was able to answer anyone's questions, a loud clapping began. Draco, clapping, pushed his way through the crowd to the front. "Congratulations! I do believe you have stripped Potter's title as being Snape's most hated student."
"Eat me, Draco!" Raine spat. She was still pissed and wasn't up to dealing with his shit, or anyone else's for that matter.
"Maybe later." Draco made a kissing noise as he smirked at her.
"Don't misconstrue the situation and take that as an offer." Raine turned quickly, in a fan of red hair, and headed down to her room.
She sat in her room awhile, trying to calm herself, then grabbed her sketchpad and started drawing.
"You're gaining all sorts of enemies, and rather affectively." Purity said as she walked into the bed chamber.
"I don't care, he pissed me off." Raine said, in a nice but truthful tone.
"Hey, I wish it had been me who told Snape off. You do realize that he is the head of this house?"
"Doesn't make a difference to me. Hermione was just trying to be helpful, he didn't need to snap at her like that."
"How do you know Hermione?" Purity asked as she sat on Raine's bed.
Raine, figuring she wasn't going to go away anytime soon, put her sketchpad down. "I met her on the train and she brought me to see the Headmaster when we arrived. She seems nice."
'You'll wanna avoid the golden-trio."
"The what?"
Purity laughed, "The golden-trio. Its what we call Harry, Ron and Hermione, and unless you want to become the center of the entire Slytherin house's ridicule, Draco in particular, you won't wanna talk to them." Purity said.
*This is ridiculous! No one tells me who I can and can't talk to* Raine fumed as she reached over the side of the bed to grab her book bag.
"Shit!!" Raine said.
"What?" Purity asked.
"I left my bag on the table in the common room."
"You want me to go get it?" Purity offered.
"Naw, that's all right. Thanks anyways." Raine crawled off her bed and left the room.
When she reached the top of the stairs, the 6th years were telling the other years about what had happened during Potions, and the story had already become obscured. The pug faced girl, Pansy, was telling a 7th year guy that Raine had actually punched Snape in the face. Raine just laughed it off as she walked past her, towards the table with her book bag. She spotted Draco was sitting on one of the couches, Crabbe and Goyle at his sides. He gave her a malicious, dangerous smile when he seen that she was looking his way.
Suddenly, the wall slid open and Snape came rushing in, his black cloak billowing behind him in his haste. "A weeks worth of detention, Miss Moray, for your outburst, starting tomorrow in my class room at 7:00pm, and not a moment later. Maybe then you'll realize what it means to be a SLYTHERIN." Snape's eyes scanned the room and finally fell on Draco. Raine looked back at Draco, he was smiling as evil as ever, which pissed Raine off even more.
"Aye Aye, Captian..." Raine saluted him, "7 o'clock it 'tis." Raine grabbed her bag off the table. "Is that all, or is there something else you've come to say?" Raine was about to add something else, but decided better of it because there were so many people around.
Snape's face turned hard and he stalked back out of the room. This presence had left a uncomfortable silence in the common room.
"Thats it?! A weeks worth of detention is all you got!" Draco fumed, breaking the silence.
"Shut up, Draco!" Kay said.
Draco stood up and walked right up into her face. "Mind your own business."
Blaise walked up behind his girl and placed a hand on her shoulder. "Watch it, Draco." He warned, tension growing as they stared at each other. *Like to male dogs*, Raine mused, *Sizing each other up before a fight. *
"What else do you do want him to do?" Aleta asked.
"He isn't going to take points, cuz he wants to win the house cup as much as we do..." Melia said.
"You guys have fun discussing this.... I am going to my room." Raine said, for she had no desire to talk anymore, and walked down the stairs. Raine dropped on her bed and began writing a letter to Kat.