A/N: hey guys! This is yet again one of those poems that came into my head. . Its not really my favorite I think its kinda depressing, but just please tell me what you think!!! Also- I have one more thing to ask: my friends and I are trying out for high school drill team and it is very very competitive. I really want to make it and so does one of my really good friends who has never really done dance before so I was wondering if you could maybe pray for all of the people trying out and if it's His will if let us make the team. Thanks so much I luv u guys to pieces!!! –A
Thank Yous for all those wonderful people whom I am in luv with are at the bottom of this poem!!!! –REVIEW!!!! –A
Your Son Came
A dawn of lies
Setting sun of proud ness
Stream of deceit, shame and hate
Running through a house of un-Godliness
And then Your Son came
Set us straight; made it right
I love Him, he makes me me
I follow Him, day and night
Rushing wind of loath
Threatening shadows in the sky
But then the Son comes out
Christ my Lord, you make me cry
For all that I've done
And all I will do
My only wish now
Is to whole-heartedly follow you
This life still has many flaws
But as you believe
You will belong
B/c he lives in you
And then your son will come
-April 19, 2004
A/N: so whadya think? Like I said, I don't really like this one, but I post it b/c someone out there might need it so that's why I do even though I don't think it's the best.
~ ~ ~ I NEED YOUR HELP: we're doing this thing in English were we have to write a story/poem thingy to send into a publishing company and I really want to do a poem b/c I luv writing them, but I have no idea what to write about. I don't know if anyone has any ideas to give, but I just wanted to send that out into the world:
THANK YOU:::
Bekah- hey baby!!! I luv the way you spell your name btw- thanks so much for reviewing, you have no idea how much it means to me!!! Your poems are great too; I would love to see some of them posted here!!!
Window Girl: hey I luv ur name too- lol im like that sometimes!! Thanks for reviewing my poems!!!
Thanks guys- God bless -A