Hey kids!!! Wow- thank u so much for all of the reviews- they mean so much to me, so i'm going to say my thank yous before we have another poem and stuff!!! So here we go:
-anOinteDeVa826- thanks so much!!! Your advice mean a whole lot to me- other people have been saying that too. . I hope this poem is deep enough for you- let me know if its not!!! ;)
-GloScribner- Oh!! I feel v. v. honored now!!! I think that true love is my fav too!!!
-guitar-gurl- thanks- again, really I luv when u review baby!!!
-bekah- good guess hunny! Thanks for reviewing!!!
Kisses to all of yall
A/n: okay- I wrote this poem last night when I was going through my little. . er . .moods- lets just say. I was very mad, mostly at everything, but I somehow felt that God was with me, and I usually never felt that way. He was there, holding me back, I know it was Him. So yah- i'm going out of town tomorrow- so hopefully some peace and quiet I will be able to write some more!!! Thanks kiddies!!!
Oh- and my last poem the guessing one yah? It was temptation, that's my red ribbon- good guess though bekah . . .
So yah: here we go- I haven't even named this one yet. . hmmm . . .
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I've fallen hard
I'm crying now
I'm on my knees
Not knowing what to do
My world is dark
With no true light
I feel so alone
But I know you're here
I feel your hand
Stopping mine
From doing things
I know I'm going to regret
I breathe your peace
Soothing mine
Helping me to remember
That you're always here for me
I can taste your grace
The one that saved me
Wrapping your arms around mine
I know that I will always be loved
They killed you,
Beated and hated you
All so that I can now
Rest my tears on your shoulders
My world is still dark
But I can feel the hope
Swimming around me
Letting me breath
Now a flame is lighted
Red from the blood you gave
Thanks for being here for me
You are my Father
My daddy
My King
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Well- it's kind of different- no rhyming and stuff- but please please please let me know what you think!!! Thanks guys!! And oh- I have one more favor- my grandfather has gotten very sick lately, and I know that the reason we're going to see him tomorrow is because it may be the last time. Would you please pray for him, and my family??? Thank you so much- and if you have any prayer requests- please let me know so that I can pray for you too!!! Thanks guys!!!!
Always -A