Thanks to everyone for the reviews. Does the sequel sound good? It's basically takes place right after this story. But, all three daughters will be born in that story. Sapphire, the first will be born in the first 10 or 15 chapters than Jade and Ruby will be born a long time after that. Don't worry, Achilles and Briseis will make love but she is extremely nervous about it because of the boy she did love, that was killed. It's in the previous chapters so look there if you forget. My last chapter was over 2000 words! Soo happy!
To one of the reviewers, they asked if I based Helena on Helen of Troy; I kind of did because I really do think Helen is a slut and the entire reason Achilles died in the movie. Grr! I liked the name Helena so I called her that but I definitely think I like Gabrielle a lot better! Just to tell you, Achilles and Briseis have to hide their relationship from everyone so Gabrielle does suspect something but she doesn't know completely. In the last chapter, you can tell what Briseis wants to name her children after. Um, all I want is for you all to review! I really, really want 100 reviews. It will be my first so please review! If you do review, my chapters will get posted faster and it will keep my interest. But you guys have done great so far.
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Chapter Eight
The dawning sun came through the shades of Achilles room. He hadn't seen Briseis since the night before and he felt extremely guilty for doing what he did. He tossed and turned all night, trying to wipe from his mind the thoughts of Briseis under him, naked and actually giving herself fully to him. He felt like a sex-obsessed guy but it wasn't like that; Briseis was so desirable in his eyes and it became harder and harder each day because he realized how beautiful she became physically and mentally. He had heard Gabrielle and the other girls talking about Briseis while they were out in the gardens. "She's extremely nice; even Sir likes her." Gabrielle said to the other girls and listened as Helena sighed angrily. Helena still believed he had some feelings for her.
He laughed quietly now that he thought about it. He got up from the bed and slipped on his brown shirt, the one he always wore and a loose toga skirt. He flung open the curtains to reveal the sun shining in the horizon. He smiled and sat comfortably while watching it come up. I have to apologize to Briseis for being an ass, Achilles thought to himself as he saw Gabrielle get up and stretch outside. He half smiled at the thought of Briseis, that was only a thought. He heard a knock on the door which drew his thoughts to that and away from Briseis. He stood, stretching his legs slightly and glided over to the door. He unlocked it and it revealed the woman his heart and thoughts concerned. Briseis' hair was done up in a braid and she wore her torn outfit, his dress was gone which made him slightly upset.
She took one look at him, walked in, shut and locked the door. She grabbed his face and brought her face to his in a rough kiss. Achilles, being a man, accepted the kiss graciously and didn't suppress his hands from searching through out her body in a sensual motion. He felt Briseis put her hands in his blonde locks and lazily pulled him closer to her. He pushed her away from the door and onto the bed where her assault continued and his became more powerful as he became more aroused. Briseis pulled away, again, he had prepared himself for it. "I thought I could do this but I can't." She whispered as she separated herself from Achilles and took out the braid in her hair. The brown curls cascaded down her back in a lovely fashion which made Achilles see her beauty shine through her innocence.
"What is so scary about something so natural." Achilles asked as he crept closer to Briseis, the smoothness in his stride could match those of a snake, preying on its victim. As he came closer, she backed up until he had her completely trapped with her back to the door and Achilles, put his arms on either side of her, making it nearly impossible to escape his icy blue eyes that were filled with compassion and utter confusion. Briseis kept her eyes away from his as she answered, "Because I have nothing to offer." She said as she looked down, ashamed at what she had to offer him in the means of her body. Achilles took his hand and brought it to her face and cradled it in his hand. She seemed to be drawn to it as she embraced his hand. "You have everything to offer. I don't know anyone woman in my lifetime that had made me go weak in the knees like you do. You haunt my dreams with your innocence yet sensuality. You're the reason I even went on the trip to Troy, to pick up a worker and I found someone worth more than anything. I pledge allegiance to no one, but you." Achilles said as he kissed her again while holding her tightly.
Achilles laid her gently on the bed and moved to kiss her when a sharp knock at the door interrupted them. Achilles sighed angrily, when he had finally made her not so nervous, some asshole had to interrupt them. It was still early in the morning, who would be wanting his presence. He stood up from Briseis and directed her to the closet where she hid. Achilles made sure Briseis was away, hiding, when he opened the door. Helena stood in the doorway is a sexy, torn dress that showed off her assets, the ones Achilles didn't find attractive at all. "Good Morning," she said, in a sassy voice as she let herself into the room. "There's a man downstairs and he wants to see you." Helena said as she sat down on the bed and opened her legs wide, but still be courteous. Achilles rolled his eyes and slipped on his robe that hung on a chair.
"Helena," Achilles started, still staring at the brunette sitting on his bed, "I'm leaving which means you are too." He said, irritated, partly because she was so fricken annoying and second, he didn't want her to know Briseis still sat in the closet. She smiled, a sickening one, and waltz out the door and Achilles looked straight at the closet when he shut the door and locked it. Briseis smiled in the dark and opened the door, taking a minute to really look at her surroundings. His bed was messy, the linens ruined from obvious tossing and turning. He never sleeps good. Briseis thought as she laid in the bed, breathing in the scent, his scent, off the pillow. She could hear some of the other plant girls talking outside, the one she could definitely hear was Gabrielle.
Briseis lifted her head quickly, when she heard the lock in the door turn which made her feel sick to her stomach. She bit her lip as she ran quickly to the closet. The door opened and Helena, that wench, walked in. Briseis held her breath as Helena looked around, her brown eyes looked at the paintings of war times and to his bed. "Oh, how I long to spend my nights here. If it wasn't for that btich, Briseis, I would still have a chance. But no, he has to like her more." Helena said vilely as she scraped her nails across Achilles' linens. Briseis moved back in the closet and watched Helena, sadly thinking still, that she had nothing to offer Achilles.
She watched as Helena lay on the bed, the pillow next to the one she had put hers on. "Oh my dreams!" Helena said as she rolled around on the bed, still in her dream state. By then, she had gotten up from the bed and sauntered over to the wall next to the closet door. She glided her fingers along the walls, they were a light hue of tan that seemed to fit his personality correctly. Rough and dangerous but sexy. She heard the closet door creek and Briseis became smaller from fear. She heard the other door open and someone hollered, "HELENA!" Briseis took a deep breath and leaned forward, looking through the creak in the door as Helena walked out and Achilles, stood angered at the door.
"Don't Go Into My Room Without My Permission!" He screeched at her and she stood, still and without emotion. She nodded and Achilles walked into his room and shut it, more like slammed it and locked it. He glided over to the door of the closet and opened, only to see Briseis' face, that was plastered with terror. "She's gone, c'mon." Achilles said, taking her hands in his and leading her to the bed. Briseis looked alarmed at him but settled down when he said only to sleep. She felt comfortable in the bed and let her eyes droop, it was only morning and she was tired. When he knew she was asleep, Achilles slipped his arms under her body and clung her to his bare chest as he listened to her breathign. "I don't know what you're doing to me Briseis. But it's like nothing I've ever known and I love every minute of it." Achilles muttered under his breath as he kissed her cheek. Briseis had heard every word and embraced his hands on her. "I love it too."
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Zeus and Hermes, along with Poseidon and Thetis sat, satisfied while staring down at the well. "I have to admit, Aphrodite has done a wonderful job." Zeus said to Hermes as he sat more comfy state on his cloud. "I don't get how Achilles can wait like that?" Hermes restorted back, both ignored Thetis who said nothing. My son is happy, that's all I ask for…
OMG! Almost 100 reviews! You people are great. Now that I reached my last goal of almost 100, I now want almost 150 which will be no problem for you all! Here's the thank yous for people who reviewed…
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lildevilbabe666... Remember, I want 100! Give me that at least! I'm such a devil for not making Achilles and Briseis make love but I think it's too early. By the fiftheenth chapter, they will make love but that's only if people want it. If they don't, I'll have it be later, but no sooner. Review!
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To one of the reviewers, they asked if I based Helena on Helen of Troy; I kind of did because I really do think Helen is a slut and the entire reason Achilles died in the movie. Grr! I liked the name Helena so I called her that but I definitely think I like Gabrielle a lot better! Just to tell you, Achilles and Briseis have to hide their relationship from everyone so Gabrielle does suspect something but she doesn't know completely. In the last chapter, you can tell what Briseis wants to name her children after. Um, all I want is for you all to review! I really, really want 100 reviews. It will be my first so please review! If you do review, my chapters will get posted faster and it will keep my interest. But you guys have done great so far.
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Chapter Eight
The dawning sun came through the shades of Achilles room. He hadn't seen Briseis since the night before and he felt extremely guilty for doing what he did. He tossed and turned all night, trying to wipe from his mind the thoughts of Briseis under him, naked and actually giving herself fully to him. He felt like a sex-obsessed guy but it wasn't like that; Briseis was so desirable in his eyes and it became harder and harder each day because he realized how beautiful she became physically and mentally. He had heard Gabrielle and the other girls talking about Briseis while they were out in the gardens. "She's extremely nice; even Sir likes her." Gabrielle said to the other girls and listened as Helena sighed angrily. Helena still believed he had some feelings for her.
He laughed quietly now that he thought about it. He got up from the bed and slipped on his brown shirt, the one he always wore and a loose toga skirt. He flung open the curtains to reveal the sun shining in the horizon. He smiled and sat comfortably while watching it come up. I have to apologize to Briseis for being an ass, Achilles thought to himself as he saw Gabrielle get up and stretch outside. He half smiled at the thought of Briseis, that was only a thought. He heard a knock on the door which drew his thoughts to that and away from Briseis. He stood, stretching his legs slightly and glided over to the door. He unlocked it and it revealed the woman his heart and thoughts concerned. Briseis' hair was done up in a braid and she wore her torn outfit, his dress was gone which made him slightly upset.
She took one look at him, walked in, shut and locked the door. She grabbed his face and brought her face to his in a rough kiss. Achilles, being a man, accepted the kiss graciously and didn't suppress his hands from searching through out her body in a sensual motion. He felt Briseis put her hands in his blonde locks and lazily pulled him closer to her. He pushed her away from the door and onto the bed where her assault continued and his became more powerful as he became more aroused. Briseis pulled away, again, he had prepared himself for it. "I thought I could do this but I can't." She whispered as she separated herself from Achilles and took out the braid in her hair. The brown curls cascaded down her back in a lovely fashion which made Achilles see her beauty shine through her innocence.
"What is so scary about something so natural." Achilles asked as he crept closer to Briseis, the smoothness in his stride could match those of a snake, preying on its victim. As he came closer, she backed up until he had her completely trapped with her back to the door and Achilles, put his arms on either side of her, making it nearly impossible to escape his icy blue eyes that were filled with compassion and utter confusion. Briseis kept her eyes away from his as she answered, "Because I have nothing to offer." She said as she looked down, ashamed at what she had to offer him in the means of her body. Achilles took his hand and brought it to her face and cradled it in his hand. She seemed to be drawn to it as she embraced his hand. "You have everything to offer. I don't know anyone woman in my lifetime that had made me go weak in the knees like you do. You haunt my dreams with your innocence yet sensuality. You're the reason I even went on the trip to Troy, to pick up a worker and I found someone worth more than anything. I pledge allegiance to no one, but you." Achilles said as he kissed her again while holding her tightly.
Achilles laid her gently on the bed and moved to kiss her when a sharp knock at the door interrupted them. Achilles sighed angrily, when he had finally made her not so nervous, some asshole had to interrupt them. It was still early in the morning, who would be wanting his presence. He stood up from Briseis and directed her to the closet where she hid. Achilles made sure Briseis was away, hiding, when he opened the door. Helena stood in the doorway is a sexy, torn dress that showed off her assets, the ones Achilles didn't find attractive at all. "Good Morning," she said, in a sassy voice as she let herself into the room. "There's a man downstairs and he wants to see you." Helena said as she sat down on the bed and opened her legs wide, but still be courteous. Achilles rolled his eyes and slipped on his robe that hung on a chair.
"Helena," Achilles started, still staring at the brunette sitting on his bed, "I'm leaving which means you are too." He said, irritated, partly because she was so fricken annoying and second, he didn't want her to know Briseis still sat in the closet. She smiled, a sickening one, and waltz out the door and Achilles looked straight at the closet when he shut the door and locked it. Briseis smiled in the dark and opened the door, taking a minute to really look at her surroundings. His bed was messy, the linens ruined from obvious tossing and turning. He never sleeps good. Briseis thought as she laid in the bed, breathing in the scent, his scent, off the pillow. She could hear some of the other plant girls talking outside, the one she could definitely hear was Gabrielle.
Briseis lifted her head quickly, when she heard the lock in the door turn which made her feel sick to her stomach. She bit her lip as she ran quickly to the closet. The door opened and Helena, that wench, walked in. Briseis held her breath as Helena looked around, her brown eyes looked at the paintings of war times and to his bed. "Oh, how I long to spend my nights here. If it wasn't for that btich, Briseis, I would still have a chance. But no, he has to like her more." Helena said vilely as she scraped her nails across Achilles' linens. Briseis moved back in the closet and watched Helena, sadly thinking still, that she had nothing to offer Achilles.
She watched as Helena lay on the bed, the pillow next to the one she had put hers on. "Oh my dreams!" Helena said as she rolled around on the bed, still in her dream state. By then, she had gotten up from the bed and sauntered over to the wall next to the closet door. She glided her fingers along the walls, they were a light hue of tan that seemed to fit his personality correctly. Rough and dangerous but sexy. She heard the closet door creek and Briseis became smaller from fear. She heard the other door open and someone hollered, "HELENA!" Briseis took a deep breath and leaned forward, looking through the creak in the door as Helena walked out and Achilles, stood angered at the door.
"Don't Go Into My Room Without My Permission!" He screeched at her and she stood, still and without emotion. She nodded and Achilles walked into his room and shut it, more like slammed it and locked it. He glided over to the door of the closet and opened, only to see Briseis' face, that was plastered with terror. "She's gone, c'mon." Achilles said, taking her hands in his and leading her to the bed. Briseis looked alarmed at him but settled down when he said only to sleep. She felt comfortable in the bed and let her eyes droop, it was only morning and she was tired. When he knew she was asleep, Achilles slipped his arms under her body and clung her to his bare chest as he listened to her breathign. "I don't know what you're doing to me Briseis. But it's like nothing I've ever known and I love every minute of it." Achilles muttered under his breath as he kissed her cheek. Briseis had heard every word and embraced his hands on her. "I love it too."
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Zeus and Hermes, along with Poseidon and Thetis sat, satisfied while staring down at the well. "I have to admit, Aphrodite has done a wonderful job." Zeus said to Hermes as he sat more comfy state on his cloud. "I don't get how Achilles can wait like that?" Hermes restorted back, both ignored Thetis who said nothing. My son is happy, that's all I ask for…
OMG! Almost 100 reviews! You people are great. Now that I reached my last goal of almost 100, I now want almost 150 which will be no problem for you all! Here's the thank yous for people who reviewed…
grand admiral chelli
IrisKitsune
amy
Lily
Delia
Rhiannnon's Dream
madskillzpro
feenian
Nequi
Achilles-Lover
Mrs.M
soccerbaby
Lady Bulma Ishtar
dr3amlvr
Beechiki
len
Via
alexus
-and-
lildevilbabe666... Remember, I want 100! Give me that at least! I'm such a devil for not making Achilles and Briseis make love but I think it's too early. By the fiftheenth chapter, they will make love but that's only if people want it. If they don't, I'll have it be later, but no sooner. Review!
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