OMG! Thank you soo much Rhiannon for my 100th review! hugs computer because you all gave me the 100 I wanted you all get to have the lemon chapter right now! Yes, I am going to make Briseis give in to Achilles and I hope you all enjoy it. Don't worry, this won't be the only one. You all deserved it! I will do the best I can to make this a good lemon! Just to tell you, this may get graphic, like really graphic, but I'm not sure so I'm putting a strong R on this.
Review people! Review! Oh, for every time you get 50 (or more reviews) there will be a lemon (or whatever you guys decide) in the story. The same goes for the sequel. Thanks again! Oh yeah, this will also be a songfic to the song that I based this story on: It's Gonna Be Love by Mandy Moore. Now, here is…
Chapter Nine
Briseis was exhausted from the days work; she had weeded the flowers and replaced them with roses and the Sapphire flowers that Achilles loves. It was later in the evening when Gabrielle walked into their bedroom to see Briseis writing in a journal. "Briseis, Sir wants to see you. He seems annoyed so keep your thoughts to yourself." Gabrielle warned as she watched Briseis stand and adjust her skirt. She nodded and fixed her hair slightly. Briseis walked out into the hallway and watched as Helena relentlessly annoyed Achilles further and she could tell from his blue eyes rolling to the side and back. He fixed his eyes on her and sighed; "Helena, I have to speak with Briseis, please leave us." Achilles said as he took Briseis' hand.
She sighed as his hand slipped into hers, rough and lovely, it was manly and she loved it. He took her into his bedroom, shut and locked the door. He looked straight at her, his eyes were a seductive shade of blue that sucked her in. "Shall we continue where we left off this morning?" He muttered as he took Briseis' face in his hands, leaned in and kissed her, a gentle one that took her breath away. Her hands went to his neck and brought him closer to he held her up on the door and added pressure to her lips. Achilles pried her mouth open and let his tongue slip in and assault hers. Her hands moved from his neck to his hair, the slightly matted blonde slid through her fingers, silky and smooth.
Achilles broke the kiss and stared into her brown eyes. "Do you want to?" he asked as his hands dropped from her face to her waist, it was small and petite. Briseis thought about it for a second, the pros and cons. She and Achilles would become closer and it would accomplish another step in their relationship. The cons seemed to be ineffective to her when she said that sweet word, "Yes." Achilles smiled and kissed her again when he picked her up by the back of her thighs and she wrapped her legs around his waist. Achilles felt her skirt ride up and on his legs, he felt the soft, satisfying skin of her thighs. "Please, take it slow." Briseis pleaded with him. He looked into her eyes and nodded again and his kisses drifted into the inside of her throat.
He sucked and bit gently which cause Briseis to cry out in ecstasy. Achilles felt in control when she moaned, it made him feel like a real man when he made his lover moan just by his touch. He took her off the door and they kissed the entire, which seemed like never ending journey to the bed. His knees bumped it which made them collapse on it, which in return, Achilles cried out, being so close to something he had wanted for so long, her womanhood. His kisses returned to her lips, biting and sucking again as he slid down the sleeves of Briseis' shirt, creamy skin following. Her skin was a milky white which clashed against his tanned skin. Briseis' fingers ran down his body to the hem of his shirt that he wore. She slipped her cold fingers underneath and pulled the shirt over his head. She looked at the man that was Achilles.
Tanned skin with strong muscles that were formed perfectly. "The art of perfection." Briseis muttered as she let Achilles continue with his ministrations. He had taken the straps of her shirt that were passed her shoulder blades and snapped them (Disclaimer: We all know where that came from) and kissed his way across her upper chest. He was taking this slow like she asked and he slipped off her shirt completely. Her first instinct was to cover herself which she did. Achilles smiled at her innocence. "Don't cover yourself, you're beautiful." he saw as her eyes met his and slowly she began to uncover herself. Her skin was still milky and her stomach was flat. her breasts weren't small but they weren't huge either. A perfect fit for him. He took his hand and cupped her left breast and added pressure causing Briseis to moan at the new feelings that she felt circulating throughout her entire body and ended in her center, where her arousal flooded. His mouth leaned to her right breast and took it in his mouth. His tongue swirled around it and Briseis let out another whimper of approval.
Achilles heard her whimper and smiled; he was taking over her and he loved it. She placed her hand on the back of his head, telling him to add more force in his kisses. She let out a sharp cry as he bit into her. His head lifted from her right breast but his hand kept and kneading her left one.
It's gonna be me baby It's gonna you baby
He gave her another kiss when she began to kiss his way down her body. He gave each of her breasts the attention it deserved and treated her stomach tenderly. He licked slightly when he met her face, it wasn't looking at him but looking to the ceiling and she was moaning. All that was left was her skirt and panties (they had to have had them in the past). He took the ties of her skirt in the front and loosened them and slid them down her hips, past her knees and ankles until it was on the floor. When he had stood, he slipped off his own toga and he stood naked in front of her. Briseis looked at him, surprises but curious at the same time. She had never seen a male sexual organ and she wasn't sure what to make of it. He got back on the bed and crawled to her again and seem to pounce on her and kiss her neck and face again.
Time I've been patient for so long How can I pretend to be so strong? Looking at you baby Feeling it too baby If I'm asking you to hold me tight then it's gonna be all right
Briseis felt his hand go down, past her stomach and her hips and stopped at her center, heat radiating off her. Achilles looked at her smugly, "I make you feel good don't I?" He asked as he kissed her again and slipped his hand into the band of her silk panties. He touched her the way no man had ever done and he was always going to be the man to make her feel this way. She felt his fingers at her opening and prepared herself. She didn't feel pain like everyone said would happen the first time sexual intercourse and fingering happened. He began in a rhythm-attic motion that cause a lot of moans to escape from her mouth. "It's time we get to the real pleasure." Achilles said as he slipped off the panties and she was naked, only for his eyes to see. He growled when he looked at her completely. She was a god in his eyes; perfect and innocent.
[Chorus] It's gonna be Love It's gonna be great It's gonna be more then I can take It's gonna be free It's gonna be real It's gonna change everything I feel It's gonna be sad It's gonna be true It's gonna be me baby It's gonna be you baby It's gonna be...Its gonna be Love
He kissed her one last time as he positioned himself at her opening, her eyes telling him she was bracing for pain. "I'll be gentle." Achilles said as he kissed her nose and pushed himself in, slow, painfully slow. Briseis let out a painful cry and Achilles did everything he could not to move. She was so tight, and warm. Her nails dug into his back which made him grimace in agony but she clung to him and he liked to be needed. The pain hadn't subsided so Achilles moved, very slowly. Briseis let out another cry and he felt guilty. The pain for passion.
Time am I restless or a fool? How can you pretend to be so cruel? Maybe it's me baby Maybe it's true baby Maybe it's everything were dreaming of We waited long enough
Briseis felt her eyes water and they slipped down her cheeks, plump and angry tears as she tried to hide them. Achilles felt them on his back and kissed her neck. "Move" Briseis said as the pain collapsed and passion filled her. Achilles smiled as he felt her walls mold against him and he moved in a rough motion that made Briseis moan like crazy. She rocked her hips against his which had surprised him immensely and made his strokes more powerful.
Its gonna be Love It's gonna be great It's gonna be more then I can take It's gonna be free It's gonna be real It's gonna change everything I feel It's gonna be sad It's gonna be true It's gonna be your the one to do It's gonna be me baby It's gonna be you baby
Briseis clung to him once again, lightly scraping his back where she knew he liked it and moaned again as Achilles strokes became slower but still just as pleasurable. As Achilles regained his strength again, Briseis felt something inside her wanting to let go. She screamed a moan again and felt something slip inside her and the thing that needed to be released, let go and she moaned again Achilles.
Backup singers] The sooner you let two hearts beat together The sooner you know this love is forever
[Mandy] It's gonna be love
[Backup Singers] Love needs time now or never
[Mandy] Its gonna be love
[Backup Singers] You really got to believe [Both] it's gonna be strong enough
Achilles fell against her and let out a huge sigh on her neck. He felt Briseis' hands go to his hair and kiss his head. He turned to his side, letting himself slide out of her and looked to the ceiling but kept his arm under her. After a minute or so, he turned back and looked into the brown eyes he loved so. She smiled at him and moved closer and Achilles put his arm on hers and brought her closer. His thoughts muttered, Tell her you love her. You know you want too, he snapped out of his thoughts when she kissed him on the lips.
"I have to tell you something Briseis." Achilles said urgently as he brought her closer to him and let her head rest on his chest and listen to his heart race. "I've never told any one, not even my mother this but I--I--I love you." his heart stopped as he wondered what her response was. He spent a lot of time with her and he loved everything about her.
Briseis smiled against his chest. She kissed it and lifted her messy head to look into his anxious eyes, "I love you too," She said, clearly and thoughtfully. Achilles smiled and kissed her, roughly but lovingly. They made love again, it was better than the first.
[Chorus] Its gonna be Love It's gonna be great It's gonna be more then I can take It's gonna be free It's gonna be real It's gonna change everything I feel It's gonna be sad It's gonna be true It's gonna be your the one to do It's gonna be hard It's gonna be tough It's gonna be more then just enough It's gonna be LOVE
It's gonna be Love
It's gonna be sad It's gonna be true It's gonna be me baby It's gonna be you baby
It's gonna be me baby It's gonna be you
It's gonna be real
It's gonna be love
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Up in the heavens, the gods watched as their relationship unfolded to become something deeper, something to last a lifetime. "I pick so good." Aphrodite said smugly as she watched the couple snuggle in the well. Thetis rolled her eyes but thought happily as she watched her son smile. He was happier than she had ever seen him in all her years. And she liked to see that…
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How was the lemon? Was it worth the wait? I thought the song would be a nice touch. Please review!
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Review people! Review! Oh, for every time you get 50 (or more reviews) there will be a lemon (or whatever you guys decide) in the story. The same goes for the sequel. Thanks again! Oh yeah, this will also be a songfic to the song that I based this story on: It's Gonna Be Love by Mandy Moore. Now, here is…
Chapter Nine
Briseis was exhausted from the days work; she had weeded the flowers and replaced them with roses and the Sapphire flowers that Achilles loves. It was later in the evening when Gabrielle walked into their bedroom to see Briseis writing in a journal. "Briseis, Sir wants to see you. He seems annoyed so keep your thoughts to yourself." Gabrielle warned as she watched Briseis stand and adjust her skirt. She nodded and fixed her hair slightly. Briseis walked out into the hallway and watched as Helena relentlessly annoyed Achilles further and she could tell from his blue eyes rolling to the side and back. He fixed his eyes on her and sighed; "Helena, I have to speak with Briseis, please leave us." Achilles said as he took Briseis' hand.
She sighed as his hand slipped into hers, rough and lovely, it was manly and she loved it. He took her into his bedroom, shut and locked the door. He looked straight at her, his eyes were a seductive shade of blue that sucked her in. "Shall we continue where we left off this morning?" He muttered as he took Briseis' face in his hands, leaned in and kissed her, a gentle one that took her breath away. Her hands went to his neck and brought him closer to he held her up on the door and added pressure to her lips. Achilles pried her mouth open and let his tongue slip in and assault hers. Her hands moved from his neck to his hair, the slightly matted blonde slid through her fingers, silky and smooth.
Achilles broke the kiss and stared into her brown eyes. "Do you want to?" he asked as his hands dropped from her face to her waist, it was small and petite. Briseis thought about it for a second, the pros and cons. She and Achilles would become closer and it would accomplish another step in their relationship. The cons seemed to be ineffective to her when she said that sweet word, "Yes." Achilles smiled and kissed her again when he picked her up by the back of her thighs and she wrapped her legs around his waist. Achilles felt her skirt ride up and on his legs, he felt the soft, satisfying skin of her thighs. "Please, take it slow." Briseis pleaded with him. He looked into her eyes and nodded again and his kisses drifted into the inside of her throat.
He sucked and bit gently which cause Briseis to cry out in ecstasy. Achilles felt in control when she moaned, it made him feel like a real man when he made his lover moan just by his touch. He took her off the door and they kissed the entire, which seemed like never ending journey to the bed. His knees bumped it which made them collapse on it, which in return, Achilles cried out, being so close to something he had wanted for so long, her womanhood. His kisses returned to her lips, biting and sucking again as he slid down the sleeves of Briseis' shirt, creamy skin following. Her skin was a milky white which clashed against his tanned skin. Briseis' fingers ran down his body to the hem of his shirt that he wore. She slipped her cold fingers underneath and pulled the shirt over his head. She looked at the man that was Achilles.
Tanned skin with strong muscles that were formed perfectly. "The art of perfection." Briseis muttered as she let Achilles continue with his ministrations. He had taken the straps of her shirt that were passed her shoulder blades and snapped them (Disclaimer: We all know where that came from) and kissed his way across her upper chest. He was taking this slow like she asked and he slipped off her shirt completely. Her first instinct was to cover herself which she did. Achilles smiled at her innocence. "Don't cover yourself, you're beautiful." he saw as her eyes met his and slowly she began to uncover herself. Her skin was still milky and her stomach was flat. her breasts weren't small but they weren't huge either. A perfect fit for him. He took his hand and cupped her left breast and added pressure causing Briseis to moan at the new feelings that she felt circulating throughout her entire body and ended in her center, where her arousal flooded. His mouth leaned to her right breast and took it in his mouth. His tongue swirled around it and Briseis let out another whimper of approval.
Achilles heard her whimper and smiled; he was taking over her and he loved it. She placed her hand on the back of his head, telling him to add more force in his kisses. She let out a sharp cry as he bit into her. His head lifted from her right breast but his hand kept and kneading her left one.
It's gonna be me baby It's gonna you baby
He gave her another kiss when she began to kiss his way down her body. He gave each of her breasts the attention it deserved and treated her stomach tenderly. He licked slightly when he met her face, it wasn't looking at him but looking to the ceiling and she was moaning. All that was left was her skirt and panties (they had to have had them in the past). He took the ties of her skirt in the front and loosened them and slid them down her hips, past her knees and ankles until it was on the floor. When he had stood, he slipped off his own toga and he stood naked in front of her. Briseis looked at him, surprises but curious at the same time. She had never seen a male sexual organ and she wasn't sure what to make of it. He got back on the bed and crawled to her again and seem to pounce on her and kiss her neck and face again.
Time I've been patient for so long How can I pretend to be so strong? Looking at you baby Feeling it too baby If I'm asking you to hold me tight then it's gonna be all right
Briseis felt his hand go down, past her stomach and her hips and stopped at her center, heat radiating off her. Achilles looked at her smugly, "I make you feel good don't I?" He asked as he kissed her again and slipped his hand into the band of her silk panties. He touched her the way no man had ever done and he was always going to be the man to make her feel this way. She felt his fingers at her opening and prepared herself. She didn't feel pain like everyone said would happen the first time sexual intercourse and fingering happened. He began in a rhythm-attic motion that cause a lot of moans to escape from her mouth. "It's time we get to the real pleasure." Achilles said as he slipped off the panties and she was naked, only for his eyes to see. He growled when he looked at her completely. She was a god in his eyes; perfect and innocent.
[Chorus] It's gonna be Love It's gonna be great It's gonna be more then I can take It's gonna be free It's gonna be real It's gonna change everything I feel It's gonna be sad It's gonna be true It's gonna be me baby It's gonna be you baby It's gonna be...Its gonna be Love
He kissed her one last time as he positioned himself at her opening, her eyes telling him she was bracing for pain. "I'll be gentle." Achilles said as he kissed her nose and pushed himself in, slow, painfully slow. Briseis let out a painful cry and Achilles did everything he could not to move. She was so tight, and warm. Her nails dug into his back which made him grimace in agony but she clung to him and he liked to be needed. The pain hadn't subsided so Achilles moved, very slowly. Briseis let out another cry and he felt guilty. The pain for passion.
Time am I restless or a fool? How can you pretend to be so cruel? Maybe it's me baby Maybe it's true baby Maybe it's everything were dreaming of We waited long enough
Briseis felt her eyes water and they slipped down her cheeks, plump and angry tears as she tried to hide them. Achilles felt them on his back and kissed her neck. "Move" Briseis said as the pain collapsed and passion filled her. Achilles smiled as he felt her walls mold against him and he moved in a rough motion that made Briseis moan like crazy. She rocked her hips against his which had surprised him immensely and made his strokes more powerful.
Its gonna be Love It's gonna be great It's gonna be more then I can take It's gonna be free It's gonna be real It's gonna change everything I feel It's gonna be sad It's gonna be true It's gonna be your the one to do It's gonna be me baby It's gonna be you baby
Briseis clung to him once again, lightly scraping his back where she knew he liked it and moaned again as Achilles strokes became slower but still just as pleasurable. As Achilles regained his strength again, Briseis felt something inside her wanting to let go. She screamed a moan again and felt something slip inside her and the thing that needed to be released, let go and she moaned again Achilles.
Backup singers] The sooner you let two hearts beat together The sooner you know this love is forever
[Mandy] It's gonna be love
[Backup Singers] Love needs time now or never
[Mandy] Its gonna be love
[Backup Singers] You really got to believe [Both] it's gonna be strong enough
Achilles fell against her and let out a huge sigh on her neck. He felt Briseis' hands go to his hair and kiss his head. He turned to his side, letting himself slide out of her and looked to the ceiling but kept his arm under her. After a minute or so, he turned back and looked into the brown eyes he loved so. She smiled at him and moved closer and Achilles put his arm on hers and brought her closer. His thoughts muttered, Tell her you love her. You know you want too, he snapped out of his thoughts when she kissed him on the lips.
"I have to tell you something Briseis." Achilles said urgently as he brought her closer to him and let her head rest on his chest and listen to his heart race. "I've never told any one, not even my mother this but I--I--I love you." his heart stopped as he wondered what her response was. He spent a lot of time with her and he loved everything about her.
Briseis smiled against his chest. She kissed it and lifted her messy head to look into his anxious eyes, "I love you too," She said, clearly and thoughtfully. Achilles smiled and kissed her, roughly but lovingly. They made love again, it was better than the first.
[Chorus] Its gonna be Love It's gonna be great It's gonna be more then I can take It's gonna be free It's gonna be real It's gonna change everything I feel It's gonna be sad It's gonna be true It's gonna be your the one to do It's gonna be hard It's gonna be tough It's gonna be more then just enough It's gonna be LOVE
It's gonna be Love
It's gonna be sad It's gonna be true It's gonna be me baby It's gonna be you baby
It's gonna be me baby It's gonna be you
It's gonna be real
It's gonna be love
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Up in the heavens, the gods watched as their relationship unfolded to become something deeper, something to last a lifetime. "I pick so good." Aphrodite said smugly as she watched the couple snuggle in the well. Thetis rolled her eyes but thought happily as she watched her son smile. He was happier than she had ever seen him in all her years. And she liked to see that…
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How was the lemon? Was it worth the wait? I thought the song would be a nice touch. Please review!
: A N G E L: